Quick note, yes I read your review Hank-Saw, and I do hope I can improve the fight scenes.
Thanks for the feed back.
Chapter 5
"What do you mean I get captured, and by Dragon King, he is back?" Wild-Cat asks concerned.
"Oh my I'm sensing something! I sense a way Wild-Cat can be saved." Hour-Man says acting like Shawn Spencer from Psych.
"I see a bed, no a sleep, a sleep, over! YES A WOMAN SLEEP OVER! To where Wild-Cat can be safe!" Hour-Man says.
"Your telling us the way to keep her safe is to have a sleep over?!" Star-Girl asks very confused.
"Did I ever let you down?" Hour-man asks rhetorically.
"Well, there was that one time-" Blue beetle says.
"Shut up." Hour-man interrupts.
"Well, who are we going to invite?" Wild-Cat asks asks.
"Oh! We can have the fast girl!" Venom says.
"Jessie Quick? That makes sense. Lets invite Jessie Quick! And Wonder-Girl as well!" Star-Girl says.
"That could work, lets do it, me, Courtney, Jessie, and Wonder-Girl." Cat says.
"Hey could we join?" Robbie asks.
"NO!" All the girls say.
Courtney calls up Jessie and Wonder-Girl and asks them if they would like to have a sleep over at Charlie's house.
They agree to and prepare for it.
They all head over to Mcnighter's mansion and have some girl talk.
"Umm, Courtney, why are you still wearing your super suit?" Jessie asks while she and everyone else are in their underwear.
Star-Girl is the only one not in her underwear and instead in her black suit.
"Oh you know, just in case a villain comes and tries to attack us, I can attack them." Courtney says not wanting to tell Venom is literary stuck to her.
"Good call, dose Charles have any chocolate in his fridge?" Venom says in her mind.
"Oh my god what did I say about the chocolate!?" Courtney yells out loud.
With her friends looking at her with the most confusion.
"What, where you yelling at?" Wonder asks.
"Umm, person on the phone. They keep offering me chocolate."
"You are acting more crazy then Dr Fate." Jessie says.
"Whatever, we should get some sleep." Star says.
"Alright, good night." Jessie says as they lay down.
"WHAT!? THAT'S IT!? No gossip or anything? You did'nt even tell them you like Captain Thunder." Venom says.
"I don't have to, plus this is to find Dragon King for he is wanting to capture her." Courtney explains.
"Oh whatever." Venom says as she rests.
Later about an hour later Courtney hears something on the windows.
She gets up and holds her staff in defense.
Suddenly the glass shatters and landing in front of the girls is...
"IS THAT SPIDER-MAN!?" Venom yells.
"What?" Star-Girl asks as she attack the intruder.
The intruder shoots red webs from his wrists and also wears a dark purple and black suit.
"That is Black Spider, not Spider-Man, that is a stupid name." Courtney says as she blocks one of his web balls with her staff.
She uses her staff and throws a chair at Spider, hitting him.
Suddenly Jessie quickly gets into her suit with Wild-Cat and Wonder-Girl following suit.
Black Spider fires some webs and sticks Wild-Cat to a wall.
However Jessie kicks him out the window and continue their fight outside.
Spider shoots his webs, and hits Jessie's legs causing her not run or walk.
Star-Girl jumps outside and wacks him with the staff.
Black Spider grabs the staff and kicks her in the face.
However she gets back up and punches Black Spider with her Venom strength, knocking him down.
"Why are you here!?" Star-Girl asks very mad.
"HAHAH! To capture The Wild-Cat of course! However it seems like she had assistants." Black Spider says very calm and chill.
"WHY!?" Courtney asks.
"Because the Dragon King, ordered me to." Spider says with no care.
"Where is he?"
"I will show you all, he is right here." Black says as he pulls up a address to Dragon King's lair.
"Why are you telling me all of this?"
"Because I hate the Dragon King, the only reason I took the job was for the pay, other then that, he is a sick twisted man, experiments on humans, yikes."
"Well, you are going to prison, while we save our friend."
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