Chapter 1
Warning I have not seen the Star-Girl show, so I'm just going from the flow.
Blue Vally is a little known town, however it is home to a super team called "THE JUSTICE SOCIETY!"
The members are, Star-Girl, Dr Midnight (Golden Age Charles Mcnighter) WildCat (Female Version) and Hour-Man!
They also have two new recruits Fire-Storm and Blue Beetle (Jamie)!
One day the team where fighting their most terrifying threat, ugly Kid Poison Ivy from Suicide Squad Kill the JL!
She was using her vines to attack the Society, for Star-Girl called her ugly.
"I am actually beautiful, you clearly don't know what you are talking about!"
"You just really don't look it." Star-Girl says.
Dr Midnight throws his moon blades (Not ripping off Moon Knight) slicing the vines.
Hour-Man grabs a live tree and throws it at Ivy.
WildCat meanwhile slices many live plants.
While Fire-Storm and Beetle take out smaller live plants.
Star-Girl manages to get close enough to Ivy and wacks her with the staff, thanks to her team distancing Poison Ivy.
With Poison Ivy defeated, the team put her into a better jail, the Justice League prison.
Afterward the team return to their base, however Star-Girl sees a meteor flying through the sky, and towards a city!
Star-Girl quickly flys over to stop it.
She uses her staff to redirect the meteor towards a forest to not harm anyone.
Then heads over to check it out.
She looks around and sees nothing much of interest.
"Good work on stopping the meteor." Firestorm says.
"Thank you." Star-Girl says as she turns around and talks to her friend.
Suddenly some black goo comes out of the rock and sees Star Girl and her body.
It seems very interested in her and follows her as she walks over to her home.
She arrives and heads inside, with the goo following her.
Courtney takes off her outfit, and dose not feel like putting on pajamas, so she goes to bed in her underwear.
She lays down and thinks about her love life or the lack their of.
"Man, who do I like? Hour-Man is strong and has a kind heart, Charles Mcnighter is super smart, Fire-Storm is kinda young for me. Not Wild-Cat. She is nice but I'm straight." Courtney thinks to herself.
She dozes off to sleep with her stalker sneaking in.
The symbiote crawls onto her bed and looks at her suit and gets an idea of what it wants to copy.
"Ahh... yesss..." thought the inky-black being, obviously deriving some sort of pleasure... and inexplicably perhaps even SUSTENANCE... from what it was doing.
Within seconds of covering her foot and interacting with the girl like it had, the symbiote began to look a lot more vibrant, taking on a much more voluminous and alive look to it then it had when it had arrived. With a still hunger-induced fervor, the being then began to send it's material to Courtney's other foot, covering it too in a similar boot.
"Need more... need all...!" it's thoughts raced. It had had a "taste" of what the teen girl could offer it, and now it intended to satiate itself fully by mingling with her completely. It's desire almost palpable, the symbiote began to cover the sleeping teenager in earnest, issuing it's material all over.
First, it began to expand it's material from both her already covered feet... creating multiple tendrils that writhed their way up and around her legs towards her big round buttocks. Then, it began to send parts of it's substance, wrapping around Courtney's sexily curvacious hips, midsection and stomach and endowing some areas. A large white star appear on the chest of the "suit".
Rising from the areas of her stomach and waist it had covered, the Symbiote next flowed up Courtney's frontside and coated her breasts with it's material. "Larger then human male... To feed offspring..." the alien thought, obviously recognizing the natural "use" a woman's breasts had. "Breasts... feel gooood...I lovve themmm."
The symbiote descended itself upon Courtney's arms and hands next. As it wrapped around her arms in various places, it's skin-tight material wonderfully showed Courtney's' long and slender female biceps. It had then entwined and covered her hands, it's substance oozing and wrapping around the teen girls' fingers similar to how it had done her toes. Within seconds of it covering them, they had taken on a much more claw-like appearance with the nail-tips themselves becoming quite formidably sharp.
The symbiote oozes over to Courtney's face and makes a black copy of her Stargirl mask.
Once it was done, the symbiote grips tighter on Stargirl's body, making the black Stargirl costume seem like a second skin on Courtney's body. The symbiote "falls" asleep as it's recovering it's strength from everything it went through recently and celebrating it's bonding with a perfect host (body) after so long without one. It awaits for the morning for its host to wake up and to begin it's plan it has for the planet's inhabitants and Courtney Whitmore. The Stargirl.
And their you have it, the first chapter rewritten!
Also She Venom Lover, yes I copyed some of your review for the bonding, I figure you would do a better job then I could, so yea.
Hope you don't get mad, but yes, hope you all enjoyed this rewrite.