Decided to revise the story, especially since it had a super spicy ending that may have been too much. Now its fixed...


He couldn't turn his gaze away, not after he saw her in front of him.

His eyes grew wide, his heart melting into butterflies that flew around in his ribcage, and he started to see sparkles as he looked into the almost-heavenly face of this woman, this Octoling girl. She was so... irresistible.

The Turf War champion's mind was flooded with emotions, he didn't know what to think. But still, this was love at first sight.

"Oh my gosh..." KBG4 said, approaching the blue-haired Octoling, "Y-You are the most gorgeous squid/octopus girl I've ever met here."

No sooner than he'd said that, he mentally slapped himself. That didn't sound right, he'd just met her and he was calling her gorgeous. The Inklings around him, including Mario, looked a little surprise, even Kitten-Chan was surprised. Neither of them knew what to think, but then...

"Th-Thank you, sir..." Kitten-Chan said, "You're really cute..."

KBG4 would never forget this day, this moment when he found love, and forget he didn't.

A finger pressed the pause button, the video froze, before the scene would change. KBG4 looked at his phone, looking at the video that adapted the events. He put away his phone with a smile, sitting upon the edge of the building with Kitten-Chan by his side.

It had been a long while since his first visit to this city, since that amazing Turf War and that meeting.

After returning home from Inkopolis, he never thought he'd be seeing her again. But then, one day, she'd come to the castle while visiting the Mushroom Kingdom and they met again at last.

KBG4 got her number, they would talk occasionally. Then, one day, they finally confessed their feelings for one another that had been growing since the day they met. A few days later, after that first kiss, they had their first date. It was just a simple walk by the pier, a simple boat ride, no drama. And that date sealed the deal.

Today, he and Kitten-Chan were just having a day out. They'd partaken in a Turf War together, of course, and beaten the Blue Grooves, then they had coffee and ice cream.

Now, they were on Moray Tower, taking in the view together.

"You look very happy..."

He looked at her, she held his hand and smiled, smiling as though she could read his mind. Of course she'd seen him playing the video, playing the scene where they met, they'd come a long way since that almost awkward first meeting.

"I'm just happy to have you, Kitten-Chan..." KBG4 said, "No ocean will keep us apart, no border between countries ever will. I knew from the day we met that this was meant to happen. Who could have ever predicted the idea that a human man and an octopus woman would be a great couple? I guess we defy all the expectations of this world..."

"There's nothing wrong with there being an Octo-human couple..." Kitten-Chan leaned her head against KBG4's neck, "Nobody said there was, but you can never tell the future. It doesn't matter what we look like as long as we're able to co-exist in peace. As long as have each other, no matter what happens. I'm happy with you, you like me, that makes us happy."

"Kitten-Chan..." KBG4 held the Octoling girl's hand, "Thank you."

"And you are welcome, I'm here to stay and fight by your side when you need it."

"And I'll protect you from harm, no matter the odds against us."

Kitten-Chan leaned closer to KBG4, her arms folding around his shoulders as she looked into his blue eyes with such a cute and dreamy face that the YouTuber/human Turf War shooter couldn't resist.

He turned away from the edge and the horizon, turning to face her, he gently placed his soft gloved hands upon her sides and held the Octo-girl closer. They stood up, melting into each other's loving embrace and locking eyes. Kitten-Chan kissed KBG4 on the nose, he smiled, then he leaned in to kiss her.

Their hearts merged into one, beating in unison, their eyes closed and boyfriend and girlfriend melted into a deep and passionate kiss with enough love to span an eternity. They longed to have each other's happiness, to be with one another forever, no matter what...

Thunder rumbled in the distance and the two looked up, clouds rolled across the sky, dark-gray clouds. The sunlight vanished, the clouds obscuring the world's source of solar energy.

"Damn..." KBG4 groaned, "I forgot it was supposed to rain today."

Kitten-Chan hugged him sweetly, "Our date may be ruined, sweetie, but we have an umbrella and each other. We'll make the best of it as best we can."

They left Moray Tower as the clouds loomed, KBG4 walked through the streets of Inkopolis with Kitten-Chan holding his arm gently. All around them, Inklings and Octolings who were minding their own business had started to go indoors, many of them closed up shop with curtains covering their currently on sale items.

Lightning flashed and KBG4 felt a drop fall on his sleeve, followed by another on his nose. Kitten-Chan giggled as she too felt a drop on her nose. She looked at her human boyfriend with a smile and nodded, knowing they didn't have to worry about it too much.

With an understanding smile, knowing what to do, KBG4 reached into his pocket and pulled out a bar with a crank and some folded up fabric. He twisted the crank and the umbrella was raised over KBG4 and his girlfriend's head, just as the rain fell. They heard the drops fall, caught by the umbrella, and saw the rain pouring around them.

"Does this make you think of something sweet and romantic?" KBG4 asked.

Kitten Chan leaned closer to him, "Yes, it does, my love."

She pulled him into a kiss and, with one hand on his umbrella, the YouTuber shared a kiss with Kitten-Chan, who pulled out a Splat-brella and raised it. They made out for a brief period, shielded by their umbrellas with nobody batting an eye at the two figures covering themselves with multiple umbrellas as they stood in the street corner.

As the rain came down around them, the couple broke the kiss and nodded before setting off through the rainy streets, walking through the puddles and the downpour, holding hands in a gentle manner and arm-in-arm.

'Wow, never thought this would be happening.' KBG4 thought, 'Especially during a date. Thank goodness Mario's not here, I don't need that guy singing some annoying song about rain.'

He and Kitten-Chan walked down 72117 Inkto Avenue, passing by a pair of Salmonids as they played in a puddle without worry as one laughed and hummed the Calamari Inkantation. Despite the coldness of the rain, some creatures took advantage of it to have fun.

That was alright, most people preferred to stay dry and warm.

Both KBG4 and Kitten-Chan moved along, their umbrellas shielding them. A short time later, they'd their destination on 618 Calitide Street; Kitten-Chan's house.

Right on cue, the downpour of the rain seemed to intensify and lightning flashed in the cloudy sky. The two of them walked over the threshold, heading up the front porch, and Kitten-Chan brought out her key. She inserted it into the lock and turned it, then turned the knob.

With a small squeak, the door opened and the couple stepped onto a warm white mat and cleaned the bottoms of their rain-drenched shoes on it before shutting the door behind them. KBG4 removed his shoes, wanting to let them dry, Kitten-Chan did the same. Her feet looked... cute.

'Darn it, man. Don't obsess over feet.' KBG4 yelled at himself mentally.

The couple set aside their umbrellas in the nearest umbrella rack, then they sat down on the sofa in the living room, relaxing together with KBG4 clasping Kitten-Chan's hand as she rubbed her cheek gently.

"You know..." Kitten-Chan said, "This isn't too bad. Rain pouring, us stuck indoors with nothing else to do. I hear its very romantic."

Listening to his girlfriend, KBG4 chuckled. "I've read plenty of stories about couples enjoying themselves indoors on very rainy days, Kitten-Chan, and, come to think of it, not many people do that very often. I guess this is one of those occasions..."

Kitten-Chan giggled.

"Oh, yes, KBG4..." She said in a sweet whisper, "This is one of those times."

She pulled KBG4 closer to her and lay back on the side of the sofa with KBG4 leaning atop her, the Octoling pulled him into a deep, intense kiss and KBG4 gently gripped her curved, womanly hips and kissed her back as well.

Thunder boomed outside as Kitten-Chan tickled his mustache and KBG4 fiddled with her tentacles, making out all the way. They switched with Kitten-Chan laying atop KBG4 and the latter laying down on the side of the sofa in Kitten-Chan's place, the Octoling playfully licked the YouTuber's nose and he kissed her on the neck, making her giggle.

Gently, they dipped in, kissing more deeply than ever. Kitten-Chan pressed herself upon KBG4's stature and his hands folded around her shoulders and holding her closer in a gentle manner. Feeling the love burn, they started to French-kiss, exchanging their tongues playfully and swirling them around in their passionate kissing before locking lips again.

The two of them kissed on, then they broke it apart and pulled away, snapping into reality to breathe. Kitten-Chan lay upon KBG4's shoulder, resting in his arms with a smile and she giggled when her gloved boyfriend ruffled her tentacled hair in a kind manner. More thunder rumbled outside, they heard the rain pouring down the roof, pouring through the gutters.

"You know how to make someone smile with so much cuteness." KBG4 said.

"And just seeing you makes my heart feel warm inside." Kitten-Chan said.

"I guess this day didn't turn out so bad, after all."

"No, we made it count and we had fun." The Octoling nuzzled her nose against KBG4's nose, then she kissed him tenderly once more and the YouTuber embraced Kitten-Chan with all of the endlessly-burning tenderness in his loving heart while the rain continued to fall...

The End