Hey everyone,

Side Note: I have updated my Bell of the Darkness story as well.

I have left Chapter 3-5 as is. I just don't want to edit that one too much.

Chapters that have been revised Chapter 4: Sibling Exploration, Chapter 5: Sudden Storm, Chapter 6: Meeting the Villagers, Chapter 7: Reports from Orario, Chapter 8: Meeting Outsiders, & Chapter 9 Meeting Outsiders- Aftermath.

Special Note: Chapter 8: Meeting Outsiders & Chapter 9 Meeting Outsiders- Aftermath were combined into Chapter 8: Meeting Outsiders.

So A Light Amidst The Darkness will appear 1 full chapter shorter from now on.

I am working on the last few chapters now and should have them done soon. I have also started on a new chapter as well.

Before i continue my revisions. I need feedback for the chapter Encroaching Darkness.

How did I do? Was it too violent?