Just to let you know, this is my first ever fic so feel free to critique it and give me some tips and pointers on how I can become better. Or just tell me that it's trash and I need to stop writing immediately, whatever works for you.
cross-posted onto AO3 only, any other website ain't me.
"Red Eyes and Bite Marks"
Inside of the Okoshi inn on the edge of a small civilian village in the vast land of fire a thick shoji door was forcefully opened as four rogue shinobi burst through the open space with no regard for anyone else in the large inn looking to find silence on this peaceful day.
"Karin, place the futon on the ground so jugo doesn't have to keep carrying sasuke on his back." Suigetsu spoke while searching the bathroom of their large suite.
"…Okay." Karin says after taking her time to debate whether or not she should shout at him for giving her a task that sounded too close to an order for her liking as she silently picked up the rolled up futon that was laying on the ground next to her feet at the door and spread it out neatly in the middle of the room right in front of the open balcony that was letting the blazing warmth of the sun and cool air of the wind in at the same time.
"Jugo lay him down." Karin tells the giant man still standing in front of the opened door of their room holding their leader up on his back, the man in question looked around the room scanning it with his dark eyes lazily.
As Jugo quietly walks through the room and gently places Sasuke on the laid-out futon and walks to stand shoulder to shoulder with Karin in the middle of the room who was still staring at sasuke. Karin still thought it was confusing how the giant man could take out an entire village of people and then 30 seconds later oh so gently place another human being down so carefully with not a hair out of place, jugo truly was a polarizing figure to try and figure out, so she learned to not question It at this point.
"Me and Jugo are going to scout out the rest of this village and make sure we're safe to stay here for the rest of the day, and to see if we can try and "persuade" the young lady downstairs to get us two another room, cause this room definitely isn't big enough for four people." Suigetsu says after coming out of the bathroom.
As Suigetsu and Jugo start to walk out of the room Karin calls out "Why do you two get your own room?" as she crosses her arms in annoyance. "Because you're the only medic here and Sasuke is the only one here hurt, plus I thought you would be happy to share a room with Sasuke all alone" Suigetsu replies with a wide smirk showing off his sharp teeth.
"Sh-sh-shut up!" Karin screams at Suigetsu who just chuckles in response. Although Suigetsu's words did stay in her brain as multiple images of raunchy and perverted things popped into her mind as her cheeks lightly blushed from her wayward thoughts. "As if." She turns her nose up at the assumption. "I wouldn't be caught dead doing anything like that with any of you." she says as she points her finger at Jugo and Suigetsu and then finally Sasuke who looks to be out cold from exhaustion.
"Well… Don't scare her too bad, she almost fainted just at the sight of sasuke's bruised and bloodied body, I suspect they don't get much shinobi action around these parts." to which Suigetsu only lazily waves his hand in the air as a response to her warning as he and Jugo finally leave the room with jugo shutting the door behind him quietly, leaving the two other members of team Hebi alone in the room cloaked in total silence.
Karin looked back at sasuke's immobile body still resting on the futon and sighed, she took her grey cloak and shinobi sandals off and placed them by the door and slowly made her way towards his left side to check his chakra flow. She still can't believe he went up against an Akatsuki member and won. She knew he was strong, strong enough to kill Orochimaru-sama in battle but sometimes his strength still surprises her, especially when sensing for enemy chakra sources and feeling his large suffocating chakra right next to her, so dangerous and cool. It's amazing really.
"What's amazing?" Sasuke asks quickly opening his eyes and turning his head towards Karin, his voice slicing through the constant hum of the outside world that was leaking in through their always opened balcony.
"Huh?" she responds, taken aback by his sudden question.
"You said it's amazing…what's amazing?" he asks again closing his eyes which were struggling to stay open ever since he laid down, he didn't realise how exhausted he truly was.
"Oh…that. Sorry I didn't mean to wake you I was just talking to myself about your large chakra source." she says with a blush on her cheeks, she could have sworn she didn't say that out loud… How embarrassing.
"You think my chakra is amazing?" Sasuke replies with a smirk, in all his days he doesn't remember every being complimented on his large chakra reserves, usually people praise his ninjutsu or sword skills or in the case of most women he's come across, his looks.
"I mean, who wouldn't? especially at your age being so powerful and strong, it takes dedication to get to a point where you kill S-level shinobi for fun, you're a marvel." She remarked, her noticeable blush still adorning her cheeks.
"I think most people would use a different word to describe me." He replied lowly turning his head to look at the ceiling, he didn't think he was a marvel, the furthest thing from it actually.
"Yeah, I'm not most people." She quipped. The truth ringing in both of their ears for different reasons as she shakes her head slightly and sighs to herself.
"Clearly." He quipped back, his response making Karin's head shoot up to find the Uchiha already gazing into her eyes through her red glasses, her blush now covering her neck and ears. No matter what she couldn't look away from his striking eyes, but this time there was something about them that looked different compared to the other times he's looked at her, something extra that wasn't there earlier today.
"I-I need you to sit up so I can patch up your cuts and wrap your bruised ribs in bandages." She spits out, suddenly nervous at the strange look sasuke was giving her.
Sasuke paused for a moment before fulfilling her request, although seeing how he was struggling to get up under his own strength Karin quickly bent down to help pull him up into a sitting position making sure to gently grab the sides of his chest through his torn up white shirt that still has his dried blood on it, it was mixed in with the dry dirt from the forest floor. When he got into a sitting position she looked at his eyes expecting to find his own eyes still looking back at her only to find them staring at both of her hands that were still on his chest, she selfishly lets her hands linger a second longer than necessary as she starts to take his shirt off and finally throws it to the other side of the room.
She took her grey satchel off of her waist and opened it up to take out her gauze and bandages and started to patch up sasuke to her best ability without trying to pass out at the close proximity of her and a bare chested Sasuke while simultaneously moving her hands all over his pale flesh, while all sasuke can think about is how good her hands feel all over his chest, ribs, back and head. He didn't know if it was just the feeling of her hands on his body or the fact he hasn't had someone touch him so intimately like this since his mother died or the fact he was just a normal hormonal 16 year old who also has certain lustful urges but he couldn't help but feel his dick start to harden in his pants, thankfully the blanket was thick enough to cover it so Karin couldn't see his noticeable arousal from where she was wrapping up the near side of his chest.
"How come you're so talkative suddenly?" she asked after finishing up her crude medical work on him by wrapping the top of his forehead in bandages. She didn't mind the fact he was talking now, in fact she found it a welcomed change of pace from the constant silence and one-word responses, but she was curious at what provoked it.
"When you almost die at the hands of another person it mentally changes you." he shrugged. "It puts a new perspective on the way you see life and the people in it." He looks past her glasses to stare at her eyes again. He never really noticed how sexy that shade of red was, if he were to guess it looked half a shade lighter than his own sharingan. "The fact you haven't changed your voice to that fake high pitch voice that you and the rest of my fan girls usually have helps as well." To which Karin sputters and points a finger close to Sasuke's face.
"I don't do that." She argues back. "You must be imagining it, seems like you took more of a beating than I thought." she finishes with a cross of her arms as she looks away to the always opened window, which sasuke responds with a roll of his eyes that Karin didn't see.
Sasuke took his hand and placed it on her arm, "my left foot needs wrapped up as well, move the blanket so you can see it better." Sasuke felt his dick twitch again when she looked back at him and then towards his lower half.
Karin's arm felt on fire the moment Sasuke touched it along with the goosebumps she felt all over her skin, she blamed the draft coming in for that even if she knew that wasn't the real cause of it. She shuffled over to the corner of the futon so she could be as close to his left foot as possible and grabbed the covers and yanked it off the Uchiha's body in one fell swoop and threw it close the main door of the room. Now… her sole purpose was to look at and bandage his foot but when she lifted the covers she saw something else that caught her attention first.
Namely Sasuke's cock that was straining against his trousers.
She let out an audible gasp at the sight of it, she was so shocked that she should have looked away the moment she saw it but for some reason she couldn't take her eyes off it. She didn't know how long she was staring; it could have been minutes, hours or days before she moved her head to the sound of a chuckle that came from the other person in the room, the Uchiha lifted himself up slightly to be able to rest his bodyweight on his forearms instead of lying flat on his back, the new and improved view of everything the main reason as to why he did it.
He lifted his left arm and grabbed Karin's right hand and placed it on his knee and took his hand away and relaxed on his forearms once again, a silent confirmation of his consent if she chose to take it further, all she had to do was move her hand up towards his waist or down towards his ankle and he would have his answer, although Sasuke had a feeling he already knew which way her hand would move.
Karin looked at the Uchiha to find his eyes still focused on her hand that was on his knee, she took a deep breath and started to inch her hand up towards the waistband of the Uchiha's navy blue bottoms. She felt her thighs clench together when her hand finally made it to his waistband and suddenly she moved her other hand to his waist and used her hands to unite his purple belt that was wrapped tightly around the Uchiha, she got it free and threw the belt and blue cloth covering his lower half next to her grey cloak and sandals right beside the door and quickly hooked her fingers into his trousers and dragged them down his thighs, she saw his black cotton boxers first, and noticed a very faint wet spot where the head of Sasuke's cock was. Then she noticed his pale white legs that met her eyes as she dragged his bottoms to below his kneecaps and stopped, looking up to find Sasuke staring at her intently with a lustful fire burning clear as day in his eyes.
They spoke to each other without saying a single word. Karin nodded her head and hooked her fingers into the waistband of his boxers and shucked them down his thighs and left them to sit just above his knees and was met face to face with something that she thought she would never see in her entire life, at least that's what she assumed from all of their earlier interactions when both of them were alone together, she didn't think he found her attractive in any way but clearly she was wrong, for today at least.
If she were to guess, Sasuke's cock had to be about 7 inches long and 5.5 inches thick, not that she had something to measure it with but the way it kept looking at her like one of his snakes that he would sometimes summon made her feel uneasy, his circumcised head was bright red like his sharingan and leaking constant small drops of pre-cum. The base of his cock was covered in curly black pubes, with his balls looking so big and full just aching for any type of pleasurable release. She had never gone this far with a boy, the furthest she ever went was feeling someone up through their clothes while making out. Not that sasuke knew that. He's probably done this 100 times already, he was under Orochimaru-sama's watch for three years after all, who knew how many whores he's had warm his bed.
"Touch it." Sasuke cut through the silence in the room. He gulped down the spit that was stuck in his throat, eagerly waiting to see her reaction; just needing any stimulation at this point.
"Shut up. I know what to do." She snarled at him and gripped him at the base of his penis, sasuke smirked at her reaction. Was it because he knew she was lying or was he just amused by her response? she didn't know.
She stroked his penis up and down with her right hand in a soft fluid motion and the moment she started she wiped that smirk off his face, his lips forming an O shape at the pleasure going through his body, his eyebrows furrowing in pleasure at her hand movements, she's read her fair share of smut books like Icha Icha paradise and what not so she's not fully incompetent when it comes to more intimate matters, but it's a whole different animal actually doing it compared to just reading about it.
She brought her left hand up to join her other hand after about 30 seconds of stroking his cock with one hand in an up and down motion from the base to the tip. Her other hand grabbed the part of his cock her right hand wasn't covering and in turn made the prideful Uchiha groan out in pleasure at the sensation of having both of Karin's hands on his dick.
She kept stroking his cock, her hands becoming more and more slick as the head of Sasuke's cock continued to release more and more beads of pre-cum which helped to naturally lube his cock more and more, it almost made his cock slip out of her hands when she went a little too high when stroking him.
"Grip it harder." he requested while biting his lip trying his best to not let his moans and groans out although it was futile as soon as she did what was asked, he groaned loudly at the hard grip she had on his cock as she re-doubled her efforts to try and stroke him closer and closer to the edge of orgasm, seeing the look of concentration on her face as both of her soft and smaller hands were gripping his larger cock almost made sasuke cum right then and there.
Karin suddenly stopped stroking his cock making sasuke pause and bite his bottom lip, not wanting to whine at the abrupt stoppage, Uchiha's don't whine being his thought process. Karin let go of his cock and moved to lay on her stomach in between his spread-out legs, giving herself a better view and a better angle to work with, her panties feeling incredibly moist when she moved to get into a better position. Her blush reaching down to her chest now, half at the realisation she was already wet and he hasn't even touched her once and half because she was looking at his massive cock twitch so close to her face. The tip a dark red and she swore she could see his large cock throb and become bigger for a split second before returning to its normal size.
She took a deep breath in, now being able to smell the sweat, ash, oil and a distinctly earthy scent radiating from Sasuke's body, and now being able to smell the musky scent from his cock that was only a few inches from her face, she had to fight back the moan that was building in the back of her throat and desperate to come out.
Karin grabbed the base and middle of his shaft again with both of her hands, the Uchiha's cock was rock hard and pulsating but she didn't move her hands and continue, a look of pure concentration on her face again that Sasuke found very intriguing. A second later she snapped out of her comatose like state and looked at Sasuke for a split second and then she looked down at the monster in her hands and slowly lowered her head to give the tip of his cock an experimental lick with her tongue.
The moans of the soon to be avenger of the Uchiha clan filled the room and soon spilled out into the busy streets making passersby look at the open balcony of the inn that faced the street and many of them blushing and covering the ears of their children when their brains figured out the origin of the sound.
Karin felt herself becoming more and more wet at the reaction Sasuke was giving her from one firm swipe of her tongue, she was able to taste his salty and slightly bitter pre-cum on her taste buds, the taste shooting straight to her brain. She found herself not minding the flavour at all as she continued to shyly lick the tip of his cock as Sasuke continued to moan in pleasure.
She ran her tongue over the slit of his penis and the Uchiha threw his head back in pleasure. Never feeling anything quite like this before, he had experimented with masturbation over the years when he was particularly horny or really backed up, but it never became a regular thing for him.
She went from licking his tip to exploring the right side of his cock with her tongue, then with a long lick she dragged her tongue along the underside of his cock brushing over a protruding vein that stretched the entire length of his cock and finally reached the left side of his shaft, Karin was torturing him with the pleasure her tongue was giving him. The Uchiha knew he wanted no needed more. He felt this primal urge deep in his gut, the urge to fuck this teasing red head senseless. if he didn't almost die half an hour ago he would have already switched their positions and would have already ripped her shorts and panties off to finally satisfy the overwhelming amount of lust he felt inside of him.
Sadly, life doesn't always turn out as you want it. Instead the Uchiha was at the mercy of his fiery team Hebi companion while he could barely move outside of holding his upper body up by his forearms.
"Fuck" the Uchiha cursed, his eyes half closed from the pleasure shooting through his cock and travelling throughout the rest of his body.
Karin was lost in her own little world, the only thing that mattered right now was her tongue on Sasuke's cock. Not the fact that they were supposed to be looking for information about Itachi Uchiha's whereabouts or worried about the fact that the rest of their team could walk in at any point and find her head in between their leader's legs. The thought of being walked in on and caught in this position was making her more and more wet. Her brain was on auto pilot just doing what felt right and not overthinking and second guessing herself.
She stopped her ministrations and gripped his cock and then pointed it towards herself and took a deep breath before finally lowering her mouth onto the tip of his penis, taking it in her warm and wet mouth before fully closing her mouth around the head of his cock.
Sasuke threw his head back and moaned out in pleasure, the feeling of being inside her mouth driving him crazy, his eyes closed at the sensation running through his entire body as she continued to suck on the tip of his dick.
Karin was clearly a novice when it came to giving blowjobs but neither of them knew any better so as far as the two people in this inn room were concerned it was the best thing either of them have ever experienced so far in their short lives, Sasuke especially.
The Uchiha continued to moan and groan as she kept on sucking, bobbing her head up and down on a third of his cock before trying to take more of it into her mouth, the feeling of his dick going deeper and deeper down her throat as she tried to deep throat all of it in one go was indescribable.
The red head managed to take about 4 inches down her throat making sasuke moan at the feeling before her gag reflex kicked in and she started to choke and gag around the Uchiha's thick cock, she quickly threw her head back and Sasuke's cock slipped out of her mouth before she started to cough harshly for a couple of seconds before finally getting her breath back. The base of Sasuke's cock still firmly in Karin's two-handed grasp as she took a minute to collect herself.
She started to stroke his cock with her hands once again after getting her bearings back, her hands working his cock faster and smoother than before thanks to the top half of Sasuke's cock that was glistening from the healthy amount of saliva and pre-cum that was mixed in together while his cock was half buried in Karin's tight throat.
She switched to pleasuring him with one hand as she pushed her glasses back in place on the bridge of her nose, Holding the base of his dick once again she put the tip of his cock back in her mouth and moaned loudly at the taste and smell that attacked her senses. It was somehow better than the first time she did it.
The moan from Karin ripped Sasuke out of his trance like state that kept his eyes shut and head pointed to the ceiling. The Uchiha craned his neck back down to face Karin, finally opening his eyes for the first time in what felt like forever to the both of them and revealing his three tomoe sharingan in all its glory.
Blood red connecting with crimson as they stared into each other's eyes, Karin in an almost hypnotised like state took his cock deep into her mouth again while keeping her eyes locked onto the most beautiful set of eyes she has ever seen, managing to get about 4.5 inches down her throat this time before her gag reflex started acting up and she started choking and coughing around his long cock. She eased up on his length to focus on his head and used her long and wet tongue to tease the underside of his tip and constantly lick and probe at his frenulum hoping to draw out more and more moans from the sexy Uchiha. She silently thanked kabuto in her head for bringing her so many medical textbooks and scrolls over the years.
The feeling made the Uchiha close his eyes for a split second as he felt his balls tighten more and more as well as sensing the pleasurable knot that had been growing at a steady pace inside his abdomen was very close to snapping as he continued to burn the image and memory of his red headed teammate sucking his dick into his brain forever, to never be forgotten about until the day he passed.
"Again…try again, take all of my cock in your throat." He ordered her, his voice sounding extremely ragged to Karins ears but she still followed the order almost immediately. She tried to fit all of him in her warm and wet mouth once again and still only managed to reach about the same place as her previous attempt, the saliva from her lips forming a shiny wet ring halfway down his cock along with the rest of it covered in spit except the base, it was all too much for the young Uchiha.
"I'm gonna cum, I'm gonna cum Karin." Sasuke spoke in a desperate manner, his pleasure overwhelming him. He half expected her to take his cock out of her mouth but instead she kept the top half of his cock inside her throat, not even rearing her head back a little to calm her gag reflex. She placed her left hand that was not around his cock on his right thigh, grabbing and squeezing his flesh which only helped to heighten his arousal even more so.
Their eyes met and Karin suddenly pushed her throat down the length of his shaft inching closer to the base of his cock than ever before, she could feel his cock twitch once, twice and three times in her mouth before finally exploding down her throat, ropes and ropes of thick cum shooting down her oesophagus as Karin felt her eyes flutter at the feeling of his hot and sticky cum shooting straight down her throat, the feeling was becoming too much for her to handle so she dragged her head off his length until only his tip was left in her mouth, the final few ropes filled her mouth before he was finally spent.
Sasuke watched the entire scene unfold in front of his eyes, his mouth agape in pleasure while his sharingan burned all of it to his eternal memory. The Uchiha collapsed and fell onto the futon, the last bit of strength he had leaving his arms as his sharingan left him at the same time, his pitch-black eyes returning.
Karin let his cock slide out of her mouth. It flopped onto his stomach, the wet slapping sound ringing around the room when skin met skin. Karin's mouth filled to the brim with his cum, she ran her tongue along the inside of her mouth, getting used to the texture and taste of it before gulping it down.
Karin rose from in between his legs to kneel, the thigh she was holding onto now a striking red contrast on his fair skin. She could feel that her panties were now soaked through, still extremely horny after giving Sasuke a handjob and blowjob. She collected herself before turning her eyes to the lone Uchiha who had fallen asleep sometime after she let go of his thick cock.
"Tch men. You're all the same!" She shouted and pointed at Sasuke, the rage in her voice would have made the Uchiha quake in his boots if he were awake to hear it. Karin got up and angrily stomped towards the door and quickly put her sandals and cloak back on and was about to leave the room when she looked back at the unconscious boy and sighed deeply. Her head still swimming in anger at the feeling of being left high and dry she walked back to the Uchiha and pulled his boxers and pants up to cover his cock and balls, not wanting the rest of their team to walk in and see him in that sort of position, she would rather avoid the headache inducing questions that would come along with it. She threw the thick blanket over the sleeping Uchiha's body and exhaled harshly.
"You're lucky I kinda like you. A lesser person would have left you in that sorry ass state." she says crossing her arms over her bust. She walked across the room to leave and opened the door, the need to go shopping for medical supplies occupying her mind along with vulgar images of what just happened. The need for a new pair of panties on her mind also as she slid the thick shoji door shut behind her.
whenever I try to write I always end up writing more than I expect tbh with you, I thought this was gonna be like 2k-2.5k words, ended up being almost 5k in total lmao.
I have a few little ideas floating around in my brain for a sequel and maybe a third chapter. but I honestly wouldn't count on it because I'm a massive procrastinator and this fic alone took me from the middle of 2023 to 2 days ago... yeah. Don't get your hopes up. but who knows maybe this is where I turn over a new leaf.
Been in my R&B bag this past month but the standouts I've been listening to are 'Keyisha Cole – I Should Have Cheated', 'Ashanti – Rain on Me' and 'Mario – How do I Breathe' you should absolutely be listening to these bangers if you don't know any of them or haven't in a while. This has no correlation to the story I just wanted to let you know. have a good day