Hello readers and welcome to my new chapter. So, I received a lot of support for a harem to happen, with some mentioning specific girls. So Mukuro, Sayaka, Kyoko, Aoi, Celeste, and, eventually, Junko, will be having a crush on the luckster. The last one won't be having one of him yet, but will in the future. I got a few ideas for those two before that happens.
The rest of the girls, Sakura and Toko, won't have a crush on the luckster, since there isn't anything that says that they might like him. And since one of you suggested Chihiro, please remember that he's actually a boy. Not a girl.
So, this chapter will be longer than the previous ones. I hope you enjoy it.
Disclaimer: I do not own Danganronpa.
Chapter 03: Watching the Prologue: Welcome to Despair Part 3
The first person he went to was Kiyotaka Ishimaru. "I'm Kiyotaka Ishimaru, and I believe in bold simplicity! Let's work together on our educational crusade!" Kiyotaka introduced himself.
"Dude, your future self does realize that the situation they're in isn't a regular thing for school, right?" Leon asked. Taka chuckled sheepishly.
'So that's Ishimaru.' Makoto thought. 'From what I heard about him on the forums, he went to a famous private school and won top honors every year. He's basically a flawless honor student and he's also known for the work he's done for the community's Public Moral Committee.'
"So, you looked up all of us Makoto?" Sayaka asked.
Makoto nodded. "Everyone except Kyoko, which I couldn't find any info on." Makoto stated. "I wanted to know more about my future classmates."
'They say he respects rules above all else, earning him the title of the Ultimate Moral Compass.' Makoto concluded his thoughts.
Taka nodded. "I see you got your information from an accurate source."
"Several, actually." Makoto corrected. That surprised the others a bit. "Like I said, I wanted to know more about my future classmates, and I know that some sources won't be as accurate."
Hina cooed at that. "Aww, that's sweet of you Makoto." Makoto blushed and smiled bashfully at this while Mukuro, Sayaka, and Kyoko nodded in agreement.
"Anyways, you can call me Taka." Kiyotaka continued. "You said your name is Makoto Naegi, right?" He questioned. Makoto nodded. Taka then put on a big smile. "That's a good name, a strong name! You should thank your parents for giving you such an excellent name!"
"If it's such a strong name, why is he such a herbivore man?" Junko remarked cheerfully.
Makoto sighed. "Must you keep calling me that Junko?"
"Yes. Cause that's what you are, herbivore man."
Makoto sighed again, but didn't say anything else.
Taka seemed to get fired up again. "And to keep that name from losing value, you must devote yourself every single day! Life is worth putting every ounce of effort into it, right? Right!"
Makoto couldn't help but think this: 'This guy is….kinda annoying.'
"Huh?!" Taka exclaimed, his passionate demeanor gone in a flash. Makoto winced while a few laughed or chuckled. "I was being….annoying?"
Makoto gave him an apologetic smile. "Sorry Taka. I wasn't used to how enthusiastic you usually are. I'm used it now."
"Something tells me you're going to say sorry to several people." Celestia commented. Makoto gulped at this.
After talking to Taka, Makoto went to the next person. Toko Fukawa. "N-Not that you'll remember my n-name, but I-I'm Toko….Toko Fukawa."
'Toko Fukawa. The Ultimate Writing Prodigy.' Makoto thought. 'Yeah, she wrote a novel when she was ten that got everyone talking and launched her literary career. Then two years later, she released "So Lingers the Ocean", a love story said to be her masterpiece.
'The book was such a hit with women that fisherman quickly shot up to the top of every "Hottest Men" poll.' Makoto continued his thoughts. 'Despite her age, she's won countless literary prizes and all her books are instant best sellers.'
"Her books really are amazing." Sayaka gushed. "I tried 'So Lingers the Ocean' and I instantly loved it."
Toko couldn't help but get a small beam of pride. But that smile fell when Leon spoke up. "Makes me wonder how someone so gloomy and depressing could make popular love stories? Not to mention a big mean streak on her."
She sent a nervous glare at Leon. "I-If you want m-mean, I'll show y-you mean you r-rockstar wannabe."
Leon sighed. "See what I tell you? A big mean streak."
'Which is why she's come to be known as the Ultimate Writing Prodigy. What else could you call such a young and talented author?'
Toko smiled a little. Despite it not being a compliment from her master, it felt….nice to be complimented on her abilities by one of her friends.
Yes, she considers Makoto and at least some of her classmates friends. She just doesn't want to admit it, like Byakuya.
'But I figured she would be the lovey-dovey type, with her masterpiece being a romance novel and all….'
"She probably is, but it's buried beneath all that gloominess and nastiness." Hiro sighed, the words causing Toko's smile to fade into a glare.
"Sh-Shut up, i-diotic f-fortune teller!"
"Hey! Don't be so hostile!" Hiro cried out.
The two were silent for a moment, merely observing each other. Finally, Toko spoke. "Wh-What? It's not polite to stare, you know." Toko stated nervously. Then suddenly, she started getting defensive. "Stop staring at me like I'm some filthy creature!"
That startled Makoto a bit. "F-Filthy creature? No, I just thought-"
"I know what you just thought….!" Toko interrupted. "You just thought you've never seen such an ugly woman. You just thought it was sooo funny….!"
"N-No, that's not what I was thinking at all…." Makoto protested.
But Toko refused to listen. "Don't bother trying to l-lie to me!" She exclaimed. "I know it's true. Otherwise, you….I just know you can't stand looking at me!" Her attitude then turned gloomy. "Wh-Whatever, I don't really care. I'm used it…."
"What the hell kind of mess up childhood did you have that made you like that?" Mondo questioned.
Toko didn't answer that, preferring not to answer. Makoto and Byakuya, meanwhile, shivered. They were one of the few that knows about Toko's past, the latter unwillingly. To say it was disturbing would be an understatement.
'Wow, talk about an inferiority complex.' Makoto thought. 'I was waaay off about what a successful author would be like….'
Toko couldn't argue with the inferiority complex comment. She admits that, she does have something like that. It's the main reason to why she's so attracted to master, who has a big superiority complex.
Hoping for a more friendly conversation, he moved on to Sayaka Maizono. "Hi, I'm Sayaka Maizono. I look forward to getting to know you." Sayaka greeted cheerfully.
'The way she moves is positively mesmerizing. And that pleasant scent I can't quite place….' Makoto thought. 'Sayaka Maizono.'
Makoto blushed madly at that thought being revealed. Sayaka blushed as well, but giggled. "That's really sweet of you Makoto." She gave him a kiss on the cheek, causing him to blush even more.
Leon and Hifumi gave him looks of envy while Kyoko, Celestia, Mukuro, and Hina to narrowed their eyes at Sayaka or gave her annoyed glances. It's no secret to Class 78th that Sayaka has a crush on Makoto. Not only that, but Kyoko, Celestia, Mukuro, and Hina had feelings for the boy as well.
That caused Makoto to be the envy of many guys, especially the fans of the Ultimate Pop Sensation.
'When I saw her name in that thread online, frankly I was pretty surprised.'
"Huh? Why were you surprised?" Sayaka asked him.
"You'll see." Was his answer.
An image of Sayaka and her group singing is then shown. 'She's in a pop group famous across the entire country. In fact, she's their lead singer. As the Ultimate Pop Sensation, she's in high demand to appear on TV and in magazines everywhere. But actually, that's not the only reason I was so surprised to find out she'd be going to this school.'
'I'm sure she doesn't remember, but….' The image disappeared and was replaced back with Sayaka and Makoto talking to one another. 'Well, never mind.'
Sayaka hummed to herself. "Are you talking about when we were in middle school together?"
Makoto nodded. "It surprisde me that we were gonna be in the same class again." Makoto admitted. Sayaka 'ahhed' and nodded.
'No matter how you slice it, she's really beautiful. Almost like a doll or something….'
Again, Makoto blushed in embarrassment due to his thoughts being revealed to everyone. It didn't help when the others laughed at his embarrassment or when Leon commented on it. "Really? Comparing her to a doll?" Leon questioned. "Real smooth man."
"How am I supposed to know people were going to see my thoughts?" Makoto protested.
Sayaka then spoke up. "And it's smoother than your pick up lines Leon." The singer shot back at the baseball player. "You didn't forget the slaps you've gotten from other girls at Hope's Peak, didn't you?" Leon flushed.
"Sh-Shut up."
"I'm not a doll, you know. I'm alive!" Sayaka suddenly said, startling Makoto.
"Huh?" Makoto let out. "Did you hear me?!"
"I'm psychic." Sayaka said with a serious face.
"...Huh?" It was the only sound Makoto could make.
Sayaka smiled again. "Kidding! I just have really good intuition." She stated.
Makoto sighed, but smiled in amusement. "You always love to say that."
"Of course. The looks on people's faces are funny!" Sayaka replied.
'She's a sharp one….' Makoto had to admit, he was impressed.
Sayaka giggled. "Why thank you Makoto." Sayaka thanked the luckster, her sweet smile on point.
Sayaka spoke up once again. "Hey, by any chance….?"
"Yes?" Makoto wondered what's on Sayaka's mind.
A look of realization entered on Sayaka's face. "...Yeah, it must be. I'm sure of it. Hey Makoto, did-"
'I still can't believe she remembers me.' Makoto thought in wonder. He never thought the Ultimate Pop Sensation would remember someone like him.
Unfortunately, Taka cut in. "Jeez, you guys! How long do you plan on to waste our valuable time with this ridiculous back-and-forth?!" He exclaimed loudly. "Self-introductions are for introducing yourself, not bumbling through a bunch of idle chit-chat!"
Several jumped at this. "I guess we should've have expected that coming." Celestia stated.
That startled the two of them. "Y-You're right. S-Sorry. Just got carried away, I guess…." Sayaka apologized. "Sorry Makoto. We can talk about this later." With that, the singer moved away to introduce herself to others.
Meanwhile, Makoto thought about Sayaka's words. 'It sounded like Sayaka really had something she wanted to say. But it's not like we'll never see each other again. Like she said, we can talk later.'
Sayaka giggled. "You have good intuition as well." Sayaka complimented. Makoto blushed.
"Not as good as yours." Makoto complimented back. "I mean, I know I'm like an open book, but the accuracy of your intuition is amazing." Sayaka blushed and looked away.
"Thank you Makoto. That's nice of you to say."
He then moved to the next person to talk to. Leon Kuwata. "Yo! The name's Leon Kuwata! What's up?" Leon greeted.
That surprised Makoto a bit. 'I recognize that name.' Makoto realized. An image of Leon, in a professional baseball uniform and an intense look, playing baseball. 'He played for the national high school champs as their cleanup hitter. The Ultimate Baseball Star….'
Leon groaned. "I wish I could burn that picture." Leon stated. "How did somebody get that anyway?"
"Maybe you could ask Mahiru, from the 77th class." Chihiro suggested. "She is the Ultimate Photographer, so she should know."
Leon nodded. "I'll go do that after all of this."
'And that superb athletic specimen is….' Makoto thought. Then the image switched back to Makoto and Leon talking. "You? Seriously?!" Makoto blurted out.
That caused the others to laugh while Leon sulked. "Was it really that surprising?" Leon asked him.
Makoto chuckled sheepishly. "Sorry man. I guess I shouldn't judge a book by its cover."
That startled Leon a bit. "Huh? What's wrong?" Leon asked.
"N-Nothing, I'm just….surprised." Makoto explained himself. "I figured with you being the Ultimate Baseball Star and all…."
"What, were you expecting some kid with a shaved head?" Leon questioned with a bit of annoyance.
"Shaved head?" Makoto shook his head. "No, I was just expecting more of a, you know, sporty-looking traditional baseball player type. That's how you looked when I found that article and picture of you online."
"You have to admit, the difference between that picture and your regular appearance is remarkably different." Celestia stated.
Leon huffed. "It's not like I wanted to dress like that, you know. That's just part of playing in the national championship."
That shocked Leon. "What?! Aw man, you found that picture of me playing baseball? Seriously?! I hate that picture!" He crossed his arms and huffed. "This is not cool. This is so not cool. Seriously, I'm like, mega embarrassed right now."
The baseball player then explained himself. "I didn't have a choice, okay? Shaving your head like that is part of national championship regulations!" He then pointed his thumb at his hair. "But now I refuse to cut my hair. And I'm not gonna dye it back to normal either!"
"Heck yeah!" Leo pumped his fist. "There's no way I'm gonna cut this bad puppy off!" Makoto shook his head at his best friend's antics.
"Can I be honest with you for a second?" When Makoto nodded, Leon spoke again. "I don't like baseball. Like, at all. Never gone to a single practice."
"So, honest huh?" Makoto questioned, sending a look to Leon.
Leon chuckled sheepishly. "Okay, so the part about not liking baseball is a bit of a lie. The only part I didn't like about it was cutting my hair off."
Makoto's eyes widened at this. 'He's never practiced, and yet he was still his team's star player?' Makoto thought in disbelief. 'He must be some kind of prodigy….'
"I still wonder how someone so lazy can be so good." Sayaka muttered. While she held no grudge against Leon, she's still a bit miffed that someone as lazy as him could earn his skills and position so easily, compared to where she had to work hard to get her spot.
Makoto helped her out in getting most of that resentment out, but there are times where she can get annoyed by it.
"And as soon as I got accepted here, I quit baseball for good! I have my own dream for the future!" Leon declared.
Makoto looked at him, confused. "A dream….for the future?"
Leon grinned. "My only path in life is getting into music! You can feel that star-quality aura I have, right?" He rhetorically asked. "I'm gonna be a singer, so all I need is a songwriter and someone on a guitar, and we're all set! This new version of me that's chasing after my dream is like….super cool to the max!"
Some sighed while others rolled their eyes. "And how's that been working for ya?" Mondo asked him dryly.
Leon blushed and looked away. "Um, not so well." Leon chuckled sheepishly. "Someone else got the title for Ultimate Musician already."
"It's a good thing you only did it just to get a girl." Hina stated with an eye roll.
"And that we got you back into professional baseball again." Byakuya spoke in. Leon groaned.
"Yeah, yeah. Twist the wound, would ya?"
'I can't believe what I'm hearing.' Makoto thought incredulously. 'I never imagined that I'd hear something like that from a baseball all-star….'
"Are we that different from what people expect?" Chihiro questioned.
Makoto explained. "For some of you, yes. Remember that most people are only seeing specific things like what you guys excel at, so we normal people tend to paint a different picture from what is actually true. Though I'll admit, some stories are more crazy than others."
Shaking his head, Makoto moved on to another classmate. Hifumi Yamada. "I….am Hifumi Yamada. But if you want to call me by my nickname, 'The Alpha and the Omega' I don't mind!" Hifumi stated.
Leon shook his head. "Dude, no one is going to call you that. Only you do."
Hifumi slumped. "I know…."
"By the way, how much do you know about the world of 2D art?" Hifumi asked.
"World of….2D?" Makoto hesitantly said.
Hifumi then started to get pumped up and smiled. "Well, in that world, I am well known and supremely regarded as the Ultimate Fanfic Creator. I once sold 10,000 copies of one of my fan comics at a school festival. The event has passed into legend." He stated proudly. "Some of them didn't get it, of course, saying I 'tainted' the event. How stupid can you be?!"
"That is tainting the event!" Taka exclaimed, standing up. He pointed at Hifumi. "You can't just sell stuff like that during a school festival! It's a school festival!"
Hifumi quickly stood up, ready to defend his position. "The 10,000 copies I sold says otherwise!" Hifumi stated. "And it didn't taint the school! It made it even better!"
"Why you-"
"Both of you, stop it." Kyoko interrupted. She knew this argument was going to be a long one, and she's not going to have it here. The cold tone in her voice made the two stiffen. "This is not the time for a long pointless argument. Understand?"
"Y-Yes ma'am." The two said, quickly sitting back down. Kyoko is one of the girls you don't want on your bad side.
'That's too bad about them, but selling 10,000 copies like that is definitely pretty remarkable.' Makoto thought.
Hifumi continued. "The words of such idiots means nothing to me. I am like Van Gogh-utterly unappreciated in my time. I am a soldier, serving day and night to destroy all mindless preconceptions of fanfiction. I'm sure if you were to observe my work, Mr. Naegi, you would comprehend its greatness immediately. For my work is filled with the deepest meaning…."
Toki scoffed. "G-Greatness? D-Deepest meaning? D-Don't make me laugh. T-They're are j-just pictures with d-dialogue. N-No deep meaning in t-those."
"I call blasphemy in that!" Hifumi declared. The two glared at one another, causing the others to sigh.
The rivalry between those two will never end.
"What….what kind of meaning?" Makoto hesitantly asked.
"It's about embracing our basest urges." Hifumi declared.
"And this is one of the many reasons why you don't have a girlfriend dude." Mondo deadpanned. Hifumi sagged a little at that.
'I don't think I want to comprehend it.' Was Makoto's deadpanned thought.
"Smart thinking." Celeste instantly agreed with Makoto.
Makoto smiled uneasily while Hifumi sagged even more. "Sorry Hifumi." Makoto apologized.
Moving away from Hifumi, Makoto moved onto the next person. Aoi Asahina. "Heya! I'm Aio Asahina! But my friends just call me Hina. Sup?" Aoi introduced herself.
'Aoi Asahina.' Makoto thought. 'She's been breaking records in every competition she's been in since elementary school. She's even been chosen as an upcoming Olympic cadet. She is, without a doubt, the Ultimate Swimming Pro.'
Hina grinned bashfully and rubbed the back of his head. "Aww, you're making me blush Makoto." Hina said.
'The combination of her ability, appearance, and, um….proportions has been widely discussed online….' Makoto thought.
Hina looked confused at the 'proportions' part. "Um, what do you mean by proportions Makoto?" Makoto looked away, not sure how to answer that.
Unfortunately, Toko decided to answer. "H-He's talking about y-your b-big bimbo b-breasts."
Hina blinked once. Then she blushed heavily, and covered her chest. "Ehhhhh? Seriously? People talk about that?"
Sakura's head turned down, her face darkening. "Makoto….."
Makoto held his hands up in surrender. "I only meant that in the most neutral way possible!" He exclaimed in panic. "I promise, I never participated in those discussions! The only reason I know about it is because I was looking up you guys online and it just happened to be in one of the forums!"
Sakura stared at him, trying to find any lies that were hidden in his words. Finally, she nodded. "Alright. But you will give the name of the sites you found those comments, and I'll see what they've been saying about my friend." Makoto gulped, feeling pity for those unlucky perverts.
Hina's blush still remained on her face, though for a different reason. She wonders what Makoto thought of her looks, and if he agreed with the viewers online. Maybe she can ask him later.
Hina then adopted a thinking face. "So, uh, what's your name again? Sorry, totally forgot!"
"Makoto Naegi." The luckster answered easily.
She smiled. "Oh yeah, I knew it was something like that!"
"No, not 'something like that'. It is that…." Makoto said with slight exasperation.
"Sure, sure, got it!" Hina said cheerfully. "Here, I'll hammer it into my brain right now!" She then moved her finger on her palm, like she's writing something. "Makoto Naegi….Makoto Naegi…."
That confused Makoto a little. "Um, what are you doing?" He asked.
"You don't know?" Hina look a little surprise by this. "If you wanna remember someone's name, you gotta write it on your hand three times!"
"I've never heard that before in my life…." Makoto deadpanned.
"Neither did the majority of us." Byakuya stated. He sighed. "Honestly, where did such a ridiculous theory come from? And if you say Hiro, I'm going to laugh."
"No, of course not!" Hina quickly denied. "I didn't take anything he said seriously since day one of meeting him!"
"Hey!"
"But it seems to work for her." Makoto supported the swimmer. "So I don't think it's that big of a deal."
Byakuya tsked, but didn't argue. "Whatever you say."
Hina gave Makoto a grateful smile for the support. He's always looking out for everyone, one of the things she likes about him.
"Hey, by the way….how do you spell your last name?" Hina asked him.
"You spell it exactly like how it sounds." Makoto told her.
Hina put on another thinking face. "Umm…." She stayed silent for a moment, trying to figure out how to spell the name. After a couple seconds, she smiled sheepishly and rubbed the back of her head. "Well, I have no idea. Hahaha! I'll just figure it out later and write it down. Anyway, glad to meet ya!"
"S-Sure, same here." Makoto said, a bit surprised about the amount of energy she's got. 'Well, one thing I learned is that she's totally easy going and bursting with energy.'
"One of Hina's signature and best traits." Makoto continued, causing Hina to blush.
Sakura nodded. "I agree, it's what makes Hina so easy to befriend."
"Not to mention how nice she is." Chihiro added. Hina's blush growing bigger at the compliments.
"Come on you guys, you're giving me actual blushes." Hina said, looking away from them bashfully.
"Y-You're probably enjoying the a-attention, you b-bimbo." Toko retorted, ruining the moment and causing Hina's bashfulness to be replaced with embarrassment and anger.
"I-I do not! And stop calling me a bimbo!"
Before the argument could escalate anything further, Makoto stepped in. "Please, don't fight. We still need to finish watching this, remember?" The two glared at one another, but complied to Makoto's wishes.
After talking to Hina, he continued onto his next fellow classmate, Chihiro Fujisaki. "Hello, nice to meet you. I'm Chihiro Fujisaki." Chihiro greeted shyly, a blush on her face. "Sorry, I get kinda embarrassed whenever I introduce myself like this." She then gave a smile. "Anyway, I hope we can get along."
Sayaka squealed. "You are so cute Chihiro! So very cute!"
"Th-Thank you." Chihiro said, a blush on the programmer's face.
"Same here. Nice to meet you." Makoto greeted back, smiling.
"...Huh?" A glint suddenly hit Chihiro's eyes. "Maybe it's just my imagination, but….have we met before?"
Heads shot up at that.
"Wait, our memories were wiped, right?" Taka asked. "If so, how does Chihiro recognize Makoto? Did the two of you meet before Hope's Peak?"
The two of them shook their head. "No, we never met before Hope's Peak." Makoto answered.
"Um, I don't think so." Makoto responded back. "We just met for the first time. Which is why I said 'nice to meet you.'"
"See?" Makoto pointed out.
"So, our memories aren't completely wiped from our minds." Kyoko stated. "More like they were locked up instead."
"I wonder what it would take to get them back." Byakuya pondered.
"We'll just have to see." Sakura said, turning to Makoto. "On another topic, was that last sentence from your future self really necessary? There was no need to be smart about it."
Makoto winced. "I don't think my future self meant it like that." Makoto said. "But I'm sorry if I caused any misunderstandings Chihiro."
"It's alright." The programmer said, not bothered at all. "While my amnesiac future self might take it the wrong way, I know you aren't like that most of the time Makoto."
"Oh yeah. Good point." Chihiro agreed, looking a bit embarrassed. "Sorry."
"Y-You don't have to apologize for that." Makoto said to her.
"Oh, yeah."
'Chihiro Fujisaki is known for all the cutting edge programs she's created. She's the Ultimate Programmer.' Makoto thought. 'She's also got that timid little bunny thing going on, which has endeared her to her legion of fans.'
Chihiro shuffled uncomfortably at the mention of those fans and Leon's comment didn't help either. "Yeah, I can see why she's got so many fans."
"And not just guy fans either. There are many girls who find her demeanor cute." Celestia commented.
"She's just the sister girls would want to have!" Sayaka stated happily.
Makoto, seeing how uncomfortable Chihiro looked, spoke up. "How about we stop talking about this? There's still a lot to watch."
"The dude is right. Let's finish this so we can fucking go home." Mondo supported. With that, the group fell silent once again, with Chihiro giving them both a thankful smile.
"Hey, so l-listen," Chihiro hesitantly said, her eyes seemed like they would burst into tears any moment. "I-I'm really sorry."
"Huh?" Makoto was brought out of his thoughts at Chihiro's sudden apology. "What are you apologizing for?"
"Well, just cuz….you seem upset." Chihiro answered. "You must be mad at me, right?"
"No, not at all!" Makoto hastily reassured. "I was just lost in thought about something."
"Huh? Lost in thought?" Chihiro asked, a bit curious.
Makoto nodded. "Yeah! It had nothing to do with me being upset or anything." Chihiro sighed in relief at that.
"Oh, good. I was afraid that maybe you didn't like me." She said, her cute smile returning to her face. "Hehe….I'm glad!"
Makoto stayed silent, stunned by how cute Chihiro is acting. 'Okay, I'm starting to understand why her fans are so into her….'
Now it's Makoto turned to shuffle uncomfortably. He and Mondo are one of the few people who knew about Chihiro's true gender. The fact that he was a little attracted to a boy….bothered him a little, but not that much.
Chihiro played a very convincing girl. His performance even tricked Byakuya and Kyoko, the most observant people in the class. That made him feel better about it.
"Alright, so seven introductions down." Hina counted. "Seven more to go."
And that's the end. I hope you guys liked this long chapter. Usually, I don't make chapters this long, but I wanted to get through half of the introductions. Don't know if I'll continue making long chapters like these. I guess it'll depend on where would be a good stopping point for each chapter. Anyways, I also hope that none of the characters were being too OOC. I tried to keep them in character as much as possible. Review, favorite, and follow and I will later.