Hello my dear readers. This will be the new chapter rewritten. It has 40% differences from the original and add some arguments. Leave the comments if you agree to continue the rewriting. Enjoy chapter two.
In Buenos Aires
2018.
6:47 AM.
The drops of coffee fell on the glass of the coffee pot. Marcos's eyes were fixed on the coffee pot in slowly filled it.
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Each drop slowly produced worry and fear and he felt something behind in his back.
a pair of eyes stared at back's Marcos. .when he turns his head a little to look sideways and finds her eyes red with hostile gaze and attempted murder. This is Chloe Kuroe.
"Why are you looking at me like that?" Marcos asks about that look's Chloe.
"I'm watching you ..." Chloe said with a fixed gaze and had her personal weapon at her waist.
"Sister. That look of yours is bothering me a lot ..." Marcos said somewhat uncomfortable at the hostile and bloodthirsty look.
"Im not your sister human..."Chloe said with anger.
Chloe is a dark elf. .but it is not completely, since her blood that runs through her veins is from a dark elf and a corrupt human who sold her to the other nobles. Her hatred for humans is high up to the top of the obelisk, no more than yet.
"If you want to look at me so much. Why don't you watch your arch enemies ..."Marcos ask to Chloe
"I only watch male humans. Not female. You are capable of doing this .." Chloe said.
"Ahhh Olga!" Yells Marcos angrily.
"Why are you yelling my name. Just tell me Olga-sama .." Olga said sitting on the chair.
"Olga. What do I see you now ..." Marcos said without looking at Olga. "Why aren't you dressed in the clothes that I gave you?"Marcos remembered that he gave women's clothes from his world to women from another world.
A T-shirt for Alicia to cover her upper torso. Three pants for Prim, Maia and Kaguya to cover the bottoms. .A complete white gown for Claudia, A medium green gown for Ruu-Ruu to those who were too exposed to the skins and especially to Celestine that if she is in a white jumpsuit
"Ah that. .Those clothes are from a human commoner, I threw it on the ground when you gave it to me. Why should I change my clothes, it is my high class clothes. I see no problem "Said Olga.
"YOU ARE SEMI-NAKED IS VERY UNCOMFORTABLE FOR ME AND YOU ARE DISRESPECTING ME AND THE MORALS OF MY HOUSE!" .yells Marcos angrily and his face is flushed avoiding not looking at Olga dressed in her standard clothes that she thinks are normal clothes but in this world. If people see Olga dressed this way, one would say.
How much does the service cost? sweet heart
no no no. Marcos shakes his head imagining that and looks at Chloe who is still dressed in her standard clothes.
"And you are wearing indecent clothes!"
NA: Intro (I don't have it yet. Recommend songs other than Shounen or Action. Make it some comedy and minimal drama for the entrance)
In another part of Argentina.
A short-haired dark-haired young man in country clothes stood in front of the phone. His face was worried because of the call from 50 minutes ago. .Marcos advised that if he did not get to call him within an hour, he would immediately call the police sending the address of the telephone that was located in one of the neighborhoods of the capital of Argentina.
"Well I'll call the police ..." .The young man was going to start calling the police. He began to write 9-1-1 when he pressed the green button.
Suddenly the phone began to vibrate showing Marcos's avatar photo. And then he answers it.
"Marcos?" Said the young man.
"Hey Stiven. .I just wanted to call you that it was a false alarm, there is nothing wrong ... "Marcos said with a calm tone.
"What the hell happened. Why did you ask me to call you the police after an hour?" Known as Stiven asks almost worried "Did something wrong happen?"
"That were just exaggerations of me. You know how I am, I'm almost exaggerated and almost paranoid and ..."
"Hey, how do you wear those long clothes!" Yells a girl's voice.
"Hey, don't go naked in my house!"
.Stiven's eyes widen when he heard the term * Naked *. "Marcos?"
"Nothing Stiven. I just yell at a furry animal that is an ordinary ugly parrot..I yell when I'm in a bad mood ..." Marcos said in a calm tone.
."I'm Halflin-
SPLASH (Water spray)
"Miaaaaah !" the voice squeaks.
"Did you kidnap a girl?" Stiven asks suspicious of Marcos.
"I'll talk to you later and I'll explain it to you well ..." Marcos hangs up the phone.
DING DING DING.
Stiven fell silent after hearing that strange conversation from Marcos "What the hell happened?" Stiven was confused by what he just heard "Half ... hmm is that voice from a person?" she was kidnapped by a pervert. .Stiven was going to dial 9-1-1 but Marcos sends a message.
[Please don't call the police. I'll tell you everything ...]
Stiven was suspicious of his friend but ...
"If he is not going to explain to me until the evening. Police Will appear ..." .Stiven puts the cell phone on the table. "Shit I feel like I'm an accomplice ..."
Marcos was in the kitchen preparing the coffee pot full of coffee and he takes out 9 cups of what was stored in the cupboard. ."Okay ... if this is a dream wake me up now ..." He whispered and closed his eyes for a moment. "Well ... when i open my eyes, those women never existed ..." he keeps his eyes closed believing that is dream..
"Hey Human you have some alcohol!" Shouts the familiar Voice where Marcos looks back where Ruu-Ruu is dressed in a white coat hiding her private parts. "Why do I have to dress like that?" She said looking at her strange outfit. ."And why the hell did you throw water at me wetting my combat clothes!"
Marcos hits his fronthead in the furniture. "Shit ... this is not a dream .." he said in shock. Ruu-Ruu is Eostia's fourth ally, the Halfing (Half dwarf and half beast). .She does not know about her history but she came with the giant axe and had the hentai outfit where she was 90% naked hiding her private parts with the respective patches.
"I purposely threw water at you to put on your robe. .I don't want you to be naked in my house ... I don't want the FBI and the UN to appear suddenly for kidnapping a brat girl ... ".Marcos said annoyed and puts the nine cups served on the tray and takes them to the dining room where the guests are gathered.
Olga and Chloe are sitting in the corner of the table looking at the seven women in another corner.
.Alicia, Claudia, Maia had her armed swords along with the others who have no swords to defend themselves with.
"Why does you make us wear strange clothes?" Claudia said looking at her dress.
"Hmm ... those clothes are quite uncomfortable ..."Olga said looking at her clothes that are wearing a purple jumpsuit.
"Everyone stop complaining about the clothes" said Marcos, putting down the tray and passing out the coffee cups. ."Well as we are in a situation that is very confusing and shocking for you. Olga and Chloe where did you come from ..." He said looking at Olga and Chloe.
"We were attacked by the black dogs" Chloe said in a hateful tone.
."We were defeated, but that older man took away all my magic" Said Olga closing her eyes.
"Older man?" Said Marcos looking at Olga. "Weren't you in the dungeon?"
."I remember we were in the dungeon after the black dogs will conquer my Garan kingdom ..." Olga replied seriously. "I closed my eyes and that man did something that forced us to lose our conscience and then i dont remenber good.."
"That happened the same ..." .Chloe answers the same answer from her queen.
"What strangers?" Said Marcos looking at the ground. "They are supposed to be in the story. But an older man did something with Olga" said in a low voice so that the women would not hear his comment. "Alicia Arcturus, right?"
"How do you know my name?" Alicia said surprised.
"I know who you are ... but I don't know completely your background of your personality ..."Marcos said little serious and they maintained his composure.
"Wait a minute ..." Claudia interposed. "Do you know about me, what is my name?" She said seriously.
"Claudia Levantine ..." Marcos answers her question. ."You are in charge of being the bodyguard of your reincarnated goddess: Celestine Lucross ..."
"Impossible ... an outsider knows our name ... but how do you know ..." Alicia said seriously.
."Before I start to explain them, I need to know how you got ... Alicia and Prim, what was the last time you remember ..." Marcos said trying to find an answer.
."I remember that I was in my office together with my younger cousin, I was reading the letter that was the declaration of war of the black dogs where they decided to rebel against us .." .Alicia said trying to remember what happened and opens her eyes. "And the messenger attacked us off my guard .." Prim opens her blue eyes and looks at Olga
"Olga-sama?" Prim catches the dark elf's attention.
"What?" Olga frowns.
."The man you mentioned. Had black cloth?" Prim commented causing Chloe and Olga to widen their eyes upon hearing the man's appearance. "He was also in the same place as Onne-sama ..." .Prim said and looks at Marcos "The Messenger brought someone who was a blonde woman and we lost consciousness ..."
"That's where before the attack started ...M"arcos said in a low voice but he was somewhat thoughtful about what Prim and Alicia said about the same person who identifies himself as a hooded man along with a blonde woman. Marcos looks at Kaguya. "Kaguya, do you remember the last time?"
."I was meditating ... when I wanted to open the door to meet Claudia's messenger. The messenger told me something shocking that Feoh lost .." Kaguya replies where Alicia and Prim look at Kaguya.
"How did we lose ?!" Alicia yells in shock.
."I'm sorry Alicia" Kaguya is sorry for Alicia and Prim "But your kingdom has fallen ..."
"But how did what happen?" Alicia slams the table "If my walls were impenetrable to penetrate!"
"Someone blew up the wall from the inside ..."Marcos and Kaguya say at the same time causing the priestess to look at Marcos.
"Do you know about that?" Kaguya said seriously.
"Well ... but before I answer his questions. I want to know where you just came from ..." .Marcos clasps his hands trying to maintain his composure.
"Then tell us the truth or else-" Ruu-Ruu was going to threaten Marcos
"Ruu-Ruu!" Celestine yells, Ruu-Ruu sits down again. "Marcos. .He promises us that he will tell us everything but that it is all true ... "
"I swear ..." Marcos nods his head and looks at Kaguya "What happened to you Kaguya?" Said Marcos "Did someone attack you like the same thing happened to Olga and Alicia?"
"Yes...".kaguya nods his head "But it was more, but. Two young men and a brown-haired woman along with the hooded man." Olga looks at everyone reacting with different expressions. 'my body guards attacked. .The man spoke something strange with an unknown language and then ... I lost my consciousness when he took something out ... "Kaguya said worried. Marcos takes a sip of coffee and looks at Kaguya.
"Hey ... I know this is an offensive question ..." Marcos said little concerned. ."Do you have the seal of god in your indentation?" He said with a blush.
"Yes I do ..." Kaguya said seriously. Alicia, Maia and Claudia glare at the Author.
"Don't get me wrong!" Yells little Marcos angrily and breathes to relax. ."Maia, what was the last time you remembered ..."
"I ... I was fighting black dogs. But the same man helped me along with his companions and took me to a place that said safe zone but he hit me on the back." .Maia said remembering .. "It's the only thing I remember ..."
"Oh god ..." Marcos knew where in the scene in chapter 3 where Maia was hit from behind but it was different. "Were you hit?"
"Yes" Maia said and rubs her head.
"I see ... now your little Ruu-Ruu, what do you remember the last time?" Said Marcos smiling.
"I'm not little. I'm older than you!" Yells Ruu-Ruu being the brat like anime.
."I need you to calm down and answer the question" Marcos answers maintaining his composure.
"Why should I answer your question ?!" Ruu-Ruu yells angrily. ."Hey, it wouldn't be better to make him open his mouth so you can tell us everything what is happening" Ruu-Ruu tells the others to turn against Marcos
"Yes. Why we make cases with the human!" Chloe yells against Marcos.
."I don't want to answer your questions about this commoner!" Alicia shouts, who is also against it. "I want you to tell us what's going on ?!"
"Wait a minute, I don't want to make a fuss ..." Marcos said trying to calm them down.
."Enough of the mysteries, we want the truth now!" Claudia yells angrily. Ruu-Ruu, Maia, Claudia, Chloe and Alicia begin to insist on the answers, making Marcos freak out and clench his teeth.
"Shut up your exhibitionist bitches!"yells Marcos angrily. "Do you want the truth ?! Well I'll tell you the crude truth ..." Marcos stops and looks at the others that they was waiting for the answer.
But Marcos did not want to say anything about the cruel fate that happened in Eostia. .Marcos promised the goddess Celestine to tell the whole truth. But if he tells the truth, everyone will take it badly and affect something in the psychology of the girls, seeing where they themselves become slaves to black dogs.
.Marcos had to cross his finger breaking Celestine's promise. 'Forgive me Celestine. It's for sake ... '
"I've seen the future!" Marcos lies.
"What ?!" yells the women.
"You're lying like a man like you has visions!Claudia yells angrily.
"Only the only one who has the gift of seeing the future is Celestine-sama!" Alicia yells angrily.
"You're telling lies. If you saw the future ... show us ..." Olga said with a frown.
"The what?" Said Marcos.
."Show your proof ..." Olga said.
"You want proof. So?" Marcos takes a deep breath. "I know who you are, Chloe daughter of a corrupt nobleman from Thorne. Sold by her own father" the dark elf slave reacts surprised.
"Olga Discordia queen of the dark elves, 800 years purpose is to conquer everything in Eostia and you hates the human race, you were betrayed by the legion of ogres, orcs, monsters and etc and you have an old friendship with Celestine ... "Marcos explains about Olga. .causing the aforementioned to slightly open her eyes.
"Alicia Acturus successor to Feoh's throne. Prim Fiorire princess of the Ur kingdom. Kaguya, the high priestess of Ken and devoted to her god. .Maia ex-commander of the black dogs and leader of Rad's fortress. Ruu-Ruu the leader of the armies of the Halfings dwarves, 400 years old taking care of the Geofu kingdom. .Claudia Levantine married to Klaus Levantine, son of your sword mentor Grave Levantine. "Marcos looked at the reactions that were disbelief and surprises.
."Are all members of the holy alliance of Eostia led by the reincarnated goddess, Celestine Lucross. She is the queen or empress of Thorne and period!"Marcos explains them shouting their names and purposes with frustration and anger. .after finished explaining, he ended gasped, catching his breath. "I know your future ... and how you end up ..."
"It's a lie for sure you're lying!" Ruu-Ruu shouts accusing Marcos.
"Ruu-Ruu. He tells the truth ..." Cellestine said seriously. ."Excuse me ... could you tell us your name ..."
"Well ... you can call me Author or Marcos ..." said Marcos, who has just calmed down. "Thank you for believing me. But give me an hour to calm down ... by the way, I'll be back ..." .Marcos said, getting up from his chair and putting on his leather jacket. "Please don't destroy my house ..." he said before heading out the door.
The nine women remained seated. Alicia grunts annoyed and gets up. "Come on Prim ..."
"Where you go?".Prim said worriedly.
"To our kingdom Feoh ..." she said seriously.
"Hey Alicia, don't you realize we're in a different place" Maia said slightly annoyed.
"I don't believe in that Author or Marcos. Whatever you call ..." Alicia distrusts Marcos.
."You better look out the window ..." Kaguya said looking at the window where they see the wide unknown place. There were many structures. It is the avenue nine de july
The 9 women were shocked to see the large structures. ."Wow ... who the architect who made such great places ..." Ruu-Ruu said in surprise.
"So Alicia, it is better if we stay at home than Marcos explains to us ..." Claudia said, shocked.
"Okay ..." Alicia said dryly.
.outside your home.
Marcos walks to the bakery. "Good morning ..." Marcos said speaking with the baker. "I want a dozen crossaits and a 20 ham and cheese crumbs sandwich ..." he orders the order.
"Okay young man ..."said the baker, Marcos was a little nervous while biting his nails.
"Hey ... I ask you a stupid question?" Said Marcos nervously.
"Hmm?" Said the baker.
"What if you lived with the nine foreign women?He said a stupid question leaving the baker confused.
"What?" Said the baker confused. "Hmm foreign women ... I'd say look for work if me and the girls are in a rental ..but if they are immigrants without documents, I would call the police ... "I answer honestly.
"That won't work ... sorry it was crazy questions ... hahahaha ..." Marcos laughs nervously.
"I certainly keep them ..." he said another voice. .Marcos looks at the person in a sports uniform who is drinking coffee and has black hair. "I just have to have a steady job and then for these women to settle down in our Argentine culture for them to adjust to ..." .he said sincerely.
"Hmmm that might work ..." Marcos said in a whisper. The baker packs the sweet bills and also the 20 crumb sandwiches.
"Here you go ..." Said The Baker. .Marcos takes out his billfold and pays the price of the meals.
"Thanks, see you ..." Marcos said carrying two bags and walking back home.
10 minutes later.
"Well first let's eat something and then we'll talk quietly ..." .Marcos said reflecting. "But who do I have to trust?" Said Marcos hesitating. "I don't have any friends in real life. Shit ... wait a minute I don't know what ..." Marcos took out his cell phone showing the three possible Discord contacts.
ilidankseng
.SPARTAN-626.
Night-Road891.
"Possibly they will take me as crazy. But between those two users from other countries But I know little English to speak. So obviously I have to send a message to Stiven ..." Marcos said hesitating. .Marcos texts the message.
[Hi Stiven]
Stiven is writing ...
[Marcos explain to me what is happening?]
[Do you remember that we spoke yesterday ...]
Stiven is writing ...
[On the ideas that women in Kuroinu would be in your house?]
.[If that...]
Stiven is writing ...
[Enough crazy. You just admit that you kidnapped someone. I'm not asshole listen to the female screams. ]
Marcos swallows his saliva and closes his eyes to confess to his network friend.
[That voice. .It's Ruu-Ruu's ...]
[What?]
[Stiven, we are friends right?]
Sitven is writing ...
[Friend are you scaring me why you say it is from Ruu-Ruu?]
[All the women of Kuroinu fell in my house ... and I had some complicated conversations ... but you said you won a lottery for a ticket to Buenos Aires. I would invite you to live in my house and see with your own eyes or else I'll send you the image. .I know it's crazy I'm saying but they are real you have to believe me .. I need you to trust me and not tell anyone. Not your mother or the rest of your families ...]
Sitven is writing ...
[What are you talking about?]
.[I want you to promise me ... it's pretty serious ...]
Sitven is writing ...
Marcos was a little nervous about the answer he was going to give between confiding to his friend of discord that it would be his Wattpad reader. "Give me a sign sir ..." .he said looking up at the sky.
CLACK
Marcos looks back at the door and runs to the door entering the house to see that they broke into his house.
Thanks for reading the rewritten second chapter. .leave me the comments if you liked the new chapter.
