Hey everyone.. Normally I don't do a big huge update like this in a middle of a series like this, but I have a lot to talk about and honestly, I'm even debating publishing something like this, but I need to explain some things that are important. One involving why I haven't been typing up much Chapters for my stories and something in evolving a review that was posted on here that I wanted to talk about it.

For starters, I discussed why I haven't been typing up many chapters of my continuing series.

Honestly, it's mostly because I've been going through alot in my life. My mother has been in the hospital for 5 months now, with a tube in her throat and I've been outta the Job for awhile; causing money troubles for me.

Note, it's doesn't just effect my work on Fanfiction Net. My Webcomic has been on hold due to not only because of a certain war, but also my mind is drained by sorrow and worried. My YouTube channels, FloxCat, Candy CatGirl and Gear They, are effective with the two of them on pause from content and one of them becoming kinda a 'Content Farm Auto Mode' channel. Even my Deavtinart has been deeply effected.

Point being, I'm deeply thankful and grateful for you all waiting for me and I deeply promise to figure out how to continue some of these series. I'm trying to balance my mental health and art work as much as I can.

Thankfully, I'm probably going to get a job soon and it seems pretty good. So, wish me luck.

Now, on to something that I feel like I need to respond to, but I don't want to do to fear.

You see, I kinda learned that when it comes to options and critique, people would make up to become a cock size debates with cursing and just nonsense. I don't often respond to online criticism that much because most of it isn't great criticism and I'm afraid to jump in warzone with that.

However, thankfully this critique, despite having a bunch of cursing and.. not just focusing on this series, is in fact a good critique that isn't God awful.

So, I'll talk about it and explain something about this story.

First off, I'm sorry if my dark writing about sexual assault, rape and anything else bother you. I make sure that anything evolving these subjects are taking seriously and I try to make sure to portray the seriousness involving them. If it's not for you, I totally understand as I've seen even WORSE in hentia that what I type up and trust me, I get it.

For how the plot is actually going, I'm surprised I wasn't clear enough with my points involving the story.

Leaf is weak physically and somewhat sexually, however his straight isn't punching nor lifting weights. His strength is his mind and golden heart. He's not a true fighter, he's a lover and a smart boy who tries his hardest to find peace.

Also, while I do see the point of his Pokemon protecting him more, I don't want them to cut the story in half because they defeat bad guys in a snap. That's why they're often cut off from time to time. Plus, he doesn't want to fight a Legendary or Mythical Pokemon unless they have to.

Also, He's NOT, and I want to clarify, NOT, a chosen one.

In the very beginning, in the third chapter, Mew told him if he wants to learn more about his mother, he needs to meet the other Legendaries and Myths. He was never a chosen one to my knowledge. He's just a trainer who helps Professor Violin with jobs involving Legendaries and Mythicals. Every transition to each arc just in evolved an even or a mission from a client. Here's those transitions:

Aloha Arc: A request by Ather Paradise to help out with the UBs.

Paldea Arc: A request by the Chair Lady to look into Area Zero and stoping the Treasure Ruins

Unova Arc: A member of Team Rainbow, now known a Martel, crash the plane Leaf was on as they been now keeping track on him as he was trying to look into Galar.

Hoenn Arc: Professor Violin makes a plan to explore Galar by entering in a Tournament that gets interrupted by Team Rainbow.

All story short, no, Leaf isn't a chosen one. He was just a young man who was born do to an experience by Team Flair to impregnate a Shaymin and he has power because he's part Pokemon. I don't know were he was a 'chosen one' and if it's something to do with the Tapus or the Birds, that's incorrect. The birds are just helping him and Tapus just predicted a person coming to help out with the UBs.

On to the Legendaries and Myths themselves... I have to be honest.. I'm completely puzzled with this one.

First of, not to be like Dorky's PokeDex were l

Literal Series here, but have you even seen the NORMAL Pokemon descriptions? I mean, yeah they're not truly dangerous in my opinion and because of 'Cartoon Ex Mecha Bull Shit Logic', but they do have powers that rivals even Shin Megami Tensei's demon here. Granted, most Pokemon aren't completely evil, but there's a bunch who would cross that line.

This implies to the Legendary and Mythical Pokemon as well and that's not the ONLY reason why they're a neural group towards Leaf.

For the evil Pokemon so far, it makes sense if you look at who's been after him so far. The Treasure Ruins are loyal to Hoopa and Mewtwo hates him for that challenge thing with the bonus of hating humans in general.

Necrozma wanted his pieces back, The Lousy Three are actually evil and for Hoopa, Melmetal and Meloetta has their own reasons which I won't go into yet because that would spoil the story.

Even then, as for the others, Jirachi herself kinda shown why they're sometimes dicks towards the people, it's cause because most people were also dicks to them. Remember, this is mostly talking place in the Video Game version of the series, and even then, most of the time there's actually been assholes who use these Pokemon for there own gain and there's has to be a point were these Pokemon will put their foot down. Not to mention, they have their own personal life and there personal things going on. For example, The Swords of Justice are protecting Unova and Kyogre hasn't been captured, so he rests in the sea.

Finally, even in the normal series these Pokemon would be dicks in general and honestly, it makes sense. You even pointed out Greek Gods and honestly, these Pokemon are WAY more calmer than the Greek Gods. Zeus basically kill his first wife and even then fuck any woman in existence, Hades actually RAPED his only love and took her away from her mom. Cupid make a person fall in love with themselves to death and I could go on and on, but you get my point.

Also, where's a religion that doesn't evolves any crazy God. Of course there are some, but that my point. Most religions have a God or Goddess that are not great. Heck, even Christian God flooded people and causes chaos until his ego death and this is ACTUALLY coming from a Christian... who admittedly question his from time to time.

As for Team Rainbow, well they're made to be dangerous. They're tired of failing and are upset about their original leaders for failing. I can't go into to making details, do to spoilers, but I will say point is there's reasons for Team Rainbow's actions.

Plus, it's supposed to be commentary on how Evil Teams in Pokemon are degrading from actual threats to just being annoying. Not to say it's bad as Team Star's backstory is perfect and actually love Team Yell, but still.

Finally, I actually have a few nick picks I want in dress myself about this review that... honestly I'm just doing it to help out because if was any other person, they'll definitely won't take a chitique seriously.

For one, please don't go of track at all. Just focus on what you're actually critiquing. Like, bring my other Fanfics and even my Webcomic Jolly is pretty dumb. I mean, I get the point, but... A) It accidentally disproven your point because not EVER one of my work involved rape. For example, my recent Pokemon OneShots are literally horny stories. B) It's looks like your connecting my stuff without context. Jolly, for example, isn't a fanfic. It's my own original work and It's definitely night and day compared to this.

Also, censoring yourself is kinda weak. Even those people who make trash reviews are much braver for that. Seriously, you can say rape normally and say what 'this' is, which is sexual assault and abuse. (And even if that wasn't the case, that proves my point of not even KNOWING what you're talking about). Also, you're going to bring up Russia the Mouse, say her name. This is a review, not a foreshadowing in a story.

Then of course there the fact you're mentioning my YouTube channel and 'If I would of written it' makes you look bad. I'm not trying to be rude, but it's true because someone going to say 'then do it' and really, saying you'll unsubscribe to me is.. honestly childish. I can get more subscriptions anytime and it's my work. Heck, I don't mind at all when people leave me. It's their choice. That's why I don't do that dump 'Like and Subscribed' stuff because again, it's there choice.

Also, when did even my actual channel got involved with this?

Also, you shouldn't be like, 'I would like to see these next in a sonic fanfic', when you're doing critique because you're GIVING a review, not a request. I do commission sure, but I truly haven't had one in a long time and even then, when people request something, they make sure to request something. I don't want to drag him into this, but UltimateCCC is a perfect example. When they give a review, they do and they don't even try to pushed they're requestes on me like "PLEASE DO THIS" kind thing. Infact, they're really great with ideas and I would often put it in, but unless someone actually pay me through my account, it my work. I will take ideas, but in the end, it's MY work.

That's not to say I'll wouldn't try to improve, I'm saying I'm not taking requests, especially in a Critique.

Also, don't even bring up that 'Pokemon is a Kid Show' trash. I'm sorry, but it is trashy excuse and I'm NOT the only one who make adult content of this series. I literally seen stuff on Twitter that honestly better than this, it's also for adults. Heck, I even seen the YouTuber Pedro Araujo's awesome Pokemon series and let me tell you, he great with fan service.

It's a pour excuse that's really makes people look like Karens and I'm not calling you one, but jeez it's weird. Even then, Pokemon isn't a just a "Kid Show". It's an Video Game series and even it also have a manga counter part and to be honest, I question if you read the manga as it as even GORE DEATH in it. Yes, it's kinda tame then something like a R-Rated film, but manga still have blood, some cleavage showing, darker tones and actual death.

Finally, don't even bring up a series that a person you're reviewing doesn't know. I literally like "WHAT?" when read about that 'Hammer' thing. That's nothing against you love for that series, it's just, I don't even want to know what you're talking about because my God, you lost me literally at 'Hammer'.

Anyways, I'll see what I can do, but honestly I don't know if can do it. I wanted to clarify that this is adult series that will get dark. I don't want to just make X-Rated stuff for porn. You can make series in has even Sexaul Intercourse as long if has a plot. I'm sorry if my writing is bad and if it's getting to dark. If you want to stop reading, that fine. It's your choice and I'm not going to stop you.

One last thing I will say though is thank you for your honest review and while I truly may not be able to adjust much, I'm glad to at least see some people at least have an general idea of how to critique something without being a J.A.

Anyways, that's all I have to say now. I'll promise to continue to bring content to you all when I can. I hope some of you Pokemon enjoy the new DLC that came out. Until then, take care

-Flox Cat