Hey everyone, I thought for a moment, and read SAOs fan story 16.5 'I don't own that story'. So I decided to write about it again, but with my own version. Hope you enjoy

Kirito X Asuna

Kirito P.O.V

"I'm sorry, it was, it was my fault, was it?" Asuna asked behind my back after I killed Laughing Coffins assassin who was pretending that he was Asuna's bodyguard. I was on my knees, and breathing heavily. Then I heard that Asuna was crying, her tears were falling on her hand on the ground.

I turned to her, confused. "A-Asuna?" I called her, she looked at me while crying. "I'm sorry." she began. "I will, N-Never, Bother you. A-Anymore." she said, keep crying. I held her left arm, she looked at me. I closed my eyes and kissed on her lips for my first time. It was our first kiss at the Aincrad.

After I ended the kiss, I looked down and bow myself to her. "My life belongs to you Asuna." I began. "So I will use it only for you. Let's stay together, until the end" I said while looking down. "And I, I will promise you too. I will protect you no matter what" Asuna said in smile, while her cheeks were red. I smiled, looked at her eyes.

"One day I'll see you, in the real world. I promise" I said. "And, I want to stay with you, tonight." when I ended my words, she blushed, smiled at me, then nodded that meant 'Yes'.

~That night, 61th floor, 9 PM~

Me and Asuna were eating the dinner at Asuna's house. Asuna put down her tea glass and got up from her chair." Well..." she said, walked to the light then turned it off. The house was lighting by the light of moon, I could see Asuna opened her menu, customize, and removed her clothes.

She only equipped while bras and a while panties. I blushed so hard, and stared to her. She was so beautiful while standing there, in front of the window, and the moonlight was shining on her. "D-Don't look. P-Please" she said in blush before cover her breasts with her arms, she looked at me. "W-why are you looking at me like that T-take your clothes off. I-it's embarrassing!" she said, then looked away in blush and red cheeks.

"N-no wait!" I began, looking around. "I was, I was thinking to s-sleep together. Just uuum, Just tonight." I said in blush. She widen her eyes then turned to me while covering her breasts with her arms. After a few seconds of looking, she got mad. "Y, Yo, You" she began whispering, I scared so much. She fisted her right hand, and ran to me.

"YOU DUMMY!" She screaming while running at me to punch. I scared, covered my face immediately before she punch me, but, I looked at her and I saw she didn't punch me. She took a deep breath then looked at me. "Fine, only tonight." she said, I took a deep breath to remove my fear of Asuna.

"Ooof, thanks Asuna." I said.

It passed a few minutes, and I got full naked, just only left my black underwear on. I saw Asuna with her bras and panties, blushed so hard, looking away, but her beautiful eyes were targeting me. I blushed, sat next to her on the bed." A-Asuna?" I called her, rubbed her hairs behind her left ear. "Y-You're so beautiful." I said. She turned to her and her cheeks were red.

I could see her face and whole body because of moon's light through the windows. She blushed, them she touched my chest with her left hand. "Y-You too. N-not lying" she said. Her hot and soft hand was making me shake a little bit, but I decided to do as she was.

I raised my left hand on her left breast and squeezed it on her bras. "Ahhh~" I heard Asuna let out a soft moan. I look at her, and realized that she was enjoying it. I held her face with my both hands, looking at her innocent face. "Kirito, I-I want you." she said.

We both closed our eyes and began to kiss each others on our lips. Our tongues were dancing with each others. During our kiss, I unlocked her bras from her back, and taking them off. "A-Asuna, L-let me see your body" I said, eyeing her big tits.

"W-What?" she asked innocently and blush. I held her right breast and touching it. "I want to make you feel good Asuna~" I told her. Asuna was moaning in pleasure. I closed my eyes and began to bite and suck on her right nipple. "Ahh, K-Kirito! D-Don't suck on them." she said, but her moans were making me do on her boobs more.

After 2 minutes while I was licking and sucking her nipples, she screamed in pleasure, then she hugged me tight. I accidentally eyed her panties and saw that it was wet." Asuna? Are you..?"

" Y-Yes. I am, it was a-amazing." she said while bre heavily of moan. "I-It feels so good more than to do it alone!" she said it accidentally, widen her eyes and looked away. "Better more than doing it alone? What do you mean by that?" I asked, hugged her from her back. "N-Nothing. I-it's not important to know." she said while her face was red.

I held her both breasts and squeezed them from her back, heard her moans. "Tell me" I said while she was moaning. "Ahhh, okey I'll tell" she began.

Asuna: When I joined to K-O-B group, I was often M-masturbating while thinking about you. I learned that there's an ethic code off, and you can do sexual things while it turns off. I was imagining you, touching my boobs, and...'

Before she say it, I move my right hand on her wet panties, that were covering her wet pussy. "Here, right?" I asked before I begin to move my hand on her panties up and down. "Aaaah! Kirito! N-Not there~" she began to moan. While I was rubbing her panties, I was licking and kissing her right ear, making her moan louder of pleasure.

After a few seconds, I pushed her to the bed, I got in front of her panties, held it and about to pull them down. Asuna held her panties and blushing hard. "Kirito Please, I-it's embarrassing. D-don't" she said, but I didn't care. So I pulled her panties down.

"NOOOOO!" Asuna screamed. I stared at her pussy, saw how wet she was, realized that it was so looking so real and reality even at the Aincrad. Asuna blushed, covering her face with her hands. "Wow Asuna, It's so, C-cute." I said while moving my pointing finger on her clit. She could feel the sensitivity of my touching.

"S-shut up. T-they made it so real. E-even in SAO!" she said while still covering her face with her hands. I closed my eyes and began to lick on her wet pussy. "I want to learn about this code" I said during licking her pussy. It tasted so good and salty. She was dropping cum from her pussy, and she was letting out moans of pleasure.

"Ahhh, Ahhh, F-fuck Kirito. S-Stop, Y-you're making me cum!" she held my head with her left hand, trying to stop me, but I didn't care. "Please do~" I told her and lick and suck on her pussy harder and deeper.

"FUUUUUUUCK!" Asuna rolled her eyes and head, taking out her tongue and began to squirt in my mouth. I drank them all. She was breathing heavily, and moaning. I got top of her, pulled down my underwear, showing her my hard big dick.

II rubbed my dick with my right hand against her pussy while I was top of her, looking at her innocent eyes. "Asuna, it's time. Are you ready?" I told her, she looked at me. "Y-Yes Kirito. P-put it inside me. M-make me yours forever" she replied.

I shoved my dick into her pussy very deep and slow. She was so tight and wet inside, squeezing my cock hard from the inside. I could feel her tightness. "AAAAAH!" She let out a loudest moan, as I began to go back and forth into her pussy slowly and gently.

"D-does it, H-hurts?" I asked her innocently, she looked at me then she wrapped her arms around my neck. "N-no. It feels so good~" she said. I began to go in and out of her pussy a little bit faster and harder. "Ahhh, Kirito! F-fuck!" she was moaning in pleasure. Her boobs were bounching every time I went into her.

"Ahhh, K-Kirito! I'm gonna cum again!" she moaned then began to squirt again on my dick. "Ffff, Fuck!" she moaned in pleasure. I held her hand, picked her up, and I laid down on the bed. She was on top of me while I was still inside of her.

"Now it's your turn Asuna. P-please. Make me cum this time" I said with smile and innocently. She put her hands on my stomach and moving her hips up and down, stroking my cock with her pussy from the inside of her. "L-like this?" she asked, I smiled. "Y-yes... Just like that."

Asuna couldn't hold back, she got to much horny. Began to rid on me faster and harder, making my dick got into her pussy deeper. "Ahhh yeah Kirito! Ahhh, it feels so good! Fuck!" she was moaning in pleasure, as I held her boobs and squeezing them during her rid.

~5 minutes later~

"Asuna, I'm gonna cum!" I told her. We held each others left hand, and she was keep riding on me, moaning. "Inside Kirito! Release it inside me! Fill me up with your semen!" she was going super hard.

"AAAAAH" We both let out a loudent moan, before I began to shoot my cum inside her. My cum was pouring out from her pussy, and they were coming down on my dick while I was still inside of her. Me and Asuna were breathing heavily.

Then she looked at me, smiled." I'm so happy Kirito. We're finally did it!" she said, leaned herself to me and then kissed on my lips. I kissed her back as well. "I love you, Asuna." I said. "I love you too. Kirito!" she replied.

It passed an hour, we were sleeping. I just woke up for a moment, looking at Asuna who was sleeping naked on the bed. I raised my left hand to her face and touched her cheek with my finger. She woke up by my touch, looking at me." W-What is it?" she asked sleepy, got up, covering her body with blanket.

"N-nothing. It's just, you're so beautiful." I answered. "T-thank you." she blushed at me. I looked at the window, thinking about a new life with Asuna at the Aincrad. "Listen, I had a dream. There was a man, with a woman. At a village near the lake. They were so happy and..." I hesitated, looking down.

"A-and?" she asked me. I looked at her eyes very serious. "Let's get marry" I told her very serious. She was tearing, crying of happiness. Smiling at me, closed her eyes and said ~ "Okay" ~

Aaaaaaand that's it for my own version of SAO, 16.5 fiction and famous story. Hope you enjoyed it, and I'll see you guys ASAP. Goodbye everyone.