Chapter 1:
They Live In You/ Twilight's New Foal
Dinoman213's Rewritten Sequel Fanifc Present…
Background Chorus: ( X4 ) I-Alicorn nengw' I-Unicorn
Our rewritten sequel story begins in the land of Equestria, around pre-dawn, aka twilight, where a family of Dragons was resting peacefully in their cave until one Dragon was awakened as it felt a gentle breeze, carrying some milkweed floss, blowing past it and got up to follow it, knowing that the time has come. And he's not the only one…
A trio of Buffaloes heard and saw the hush of the blowing wind too, and they began to follow it as they mooed and left their hut.
Even the ponies from Earth Ponies to Pegasi and Unicorns began to wake and started leaving their homes as well. Every creature great and small was being summoned to the capital for a great occasion.
Then a male singer was heard in the background…
Male Singer: Night
And the spirit of life…
Calling…
Chorus: Oh ohiyo
Male Singer: Mamela
Chorus: Oh oh iyo
Some Pegasi and Birds and Hippogriffs began flying with the moonlight being silhouetted while below them, Dragons, Yaks, Griffons, Bisons, and Earth Ponies were walking along in a straight line. While they were walking, an Earth Pony foal was jumping in excitement while its mother watched it with amusement from her child's excitement as the foal bounded after its' mother.
By the time dawn arrived, everyone in the crowd moved their heads up and down to the music as they walked from one hill to another, marching across the land of Equestria in excitement.
Meanwhile, on the balcony of a castle, a familiar light gray unicorn mare with cyan eyes, a white swirling mane, and tail with bluish gray streaks, and noticeably she appeared to be wearing brilliant amber earrings and was making different gestures with her hooves. As if trying to guide every creature to their destination.
This Unicorn is known by all as Zecora, the most mysterious and wisest Unicorn mare in Equestria, and she appears to be telling everybody in the crowd below her to come while chanting these words…
Zecora { Chanting }: Ubukhosi bo khokho,
We ndodana ye sizwe sonke.
As the creatures of Equestria make their way to their destination, the sun begins to rise in the morning sky, silhouetting the marching group of Equestrians.
A flock of Hippogriffs was flying past a mountain of Equestria.
Male Singer: Wait ( Wait wait wait )
There's no mountain too great…
Hear these words and have faith…
Oh whoa whoa whoa
Chorus: ( Oh oh iyo )
Male Singer: Have Faith…
A family of Deer was grazing until they saw the other creatures heading somewhere and thinking it might be important, they decided to join them as they left their grazing ground and joined the line of marching Equestrians.
Soon all the lines of creatures of Equestria appeared to be marching to the City Of Harmony and to the one place and one place they'd been to before…
Several lines of Equestrian Creatures began marching to a massive yet magnificent crystalline and beautiful castle with walls and towers purple, pink, and white as snow, its tower tops and roofs were a royal purple with their rims and details gold and in front of its gates, two statues of the former rulers of the kingdom stood in front of it.
This was known by many as the Castle of Harmony, home of the land's rulers and their Council Of Harmony.
Chorus: ( x3 ) Hey Hey Mamela
Male Singer and Chorus: They Live In You
(Hey hela hey Mamelahela )
They Live In Me
( Hey hela hey Mamela, hela )
Zecora stands up on the balcony of the castle, lifting her hooves, and looking up to the skies where up above, the spirits of Aurora and her husband Cobalt are watching her down below them with smiles on their faces. They are feeling especially proud of their family today. As it had gotten just a bit bigger.
A gentle breeze then blew past Zecora as it stirred her mane and the Unicorn wizard smiled with her eyes closed. Then Zecora gestures to the crowd down below her as they all begin to gather around and below The Castle Of Harmony for a very special event as a Dragon lets out a roar.
Male Singer and Chorus: They're watching over
( Hey hela Mamela hela )
Everything We see
( Hela hey mamela, hela )
In Every Creature
( Hela hey mamela, hela )
In every star
( Hela hey mamela, hela )
In Your Reflection
( Hela hey mamela, hela )
They live in you
The breeze carries across a stream where some Alicorns began bowing down and so did some Earth Ponies, Pegasi, and Unicorns.
As a Dragon lifted its head, a tall pink alicorn mare with a pink, purple, and yellow mane, gold regalia, purple eyes, wings with faded purple endings, and a crystal heart cutie mark flies up to the balcony of the Castle Of Harmony, this Alicorn is known as Cadance for she finished surveying the crowd and landed on the balcony.
Zecora was then approached by the rulers of Equestria…
Queen Twilight Sparkle and her husband King Flash Sentry!
And Twilight appeared to be carrying a bundle in her hoof as Zecora walked over to them and hugged them, not only was she the most mysterious and wisest Unicorn mare in Equestria but also the royal Shaman and friend to the Alicorn royal family. Then Twilight gently passes Zecora the bundle.
Cadance and Shining Armor, a unicorn who had white fur, dark blue bare hooves, tri-blue colored mane, and sapphire eyes, and his cutie mark was a dark blue shield with a pink six-point star at the center and Captain Of The Guards, bowed.
Using her magic, Zecora lifts the bundle to reveal a foal, who inherited its mother's eyes and its father's mane style, and its father's coat and its mother's hair colors, the new heir to the throne. And a perfect blend of both parents.
This is where our sequel story begins, right at the part where our previous story left off…
When all the creatures of Equestria from Ponies to Dragons saw their new ruler they began to erupt in cheers for today is the presentation of Twilight's new foal.
Even Aurora and Cobalt were happy for this day as they watched the ceremony of their new grandfoal from above with warm proud smiles on their faces. And sending beams of light down on the young foal.
The foal looked down at the crowd and grins playfully.
Male Singer: They Live In You
Ooooooh…
Singer: Yeah!
Twilight smiled as she felt the gentle breeze blowing around stirring her mane as she closed her eyes and smiled, feeling greatly proud of herself. It was as if she could feel her parents nuzzling her in approval, just as they used to when she was a filly.
Flash felt the breeze too as he breathed gently and smiled.
Male Singer and Chorus: They Live In You! Woo!
( Hela hey mamela, hela )
They Live In Me
( Hela hey mamela, hela )
They're Watching Over
( Hela hey mamela, hela )
Everything We See
( Hela hey mamela, hela )
In Every Creature
( Hela hey mamela, hela )
The foal saw the breeze blowing in some milkweed floss around and decided to try to catch them as it swatted at them that are being carried away by the breeze. Zecora could sense a lot of adventure in this foal and closed her eyes and smiled as the breeze blew around her, stirring her mane again. The future looked grand.
Below them, Twilight and Flash looked down to see their subjects and allies start cheering out and going wild for their new ruler below them, including hooting and howling, and as they did for Twilight's Presentation, they all bowed down to the new heir.
An Earth Pony and Unicorn raised and splashed their hooves into a nearby pond.
Male Singer and Chorus: In Every Star
( Hela hey mamela, hela )
In Your Reflection
( Hela hey mamela, hela )
They Live In You
( Hela hey mamela, hela )
As the last lyrics were sung, two Dragons reared up and roared out as they breathed out fire into the air and stomped back down on the ground, causing the startled white birds to fly out of their tree and over the balcony of the castle where Queen Twilight and King Flash were standing watching Zecora holding up their foal.
After that, Zecora then pulled out a little crown, with a gem that resembled Twilight's Cutie Mark within a Shield that resembled Flash's, and placed it on the foals' head as Twilight and Flash nuzzled their new offspring.
Not too far away from them, Twilight's friends, Applejack, Rarity, Pinkie Pie, Fluttershy, and Rainbow Dash were watching them with happy smiles on their faces, feeling so proud of their best friend and her new family. Out of all of them, Rainbow Dash already had big plans going on in her head, now that she and her friends were now aunts of Twilight's new foal. She couldn't wait until the foal was old enough for adventures.
Letting out a happy sigh, Rainbow Dash turned to her friends and said with a smile,"Girls, look at that little filly. A chip around the old block and you have got to know who's going to raise her,".
"Oh-oh-oh! Is it her parents?" Pinkie guessed, raising and waving her hoof into the air. She thought Rainbow Dash was referring to Twilight and Flash since they are the parents of the foal.
"Well, yes, darling. But what Rainbow means is who's going to teach her the really important stuff," Rarity corrected her, knowing that Twilight and Flash aren't going to be the only ponies to raise the foal.
"Rarity's right. Like who'll teach her to properly gather fruit?" Applejack said, holding up an apple before popping it into her mouth and ate it.
"Or teach her to love animals?" Fluttershy went next with small birds and critters around her.
"I'm telling you girls, it's going to be just like old times. You girls, me, and that little filly." Rainbow assured her friends as she gestured to her friends, herself, and the foal in Zecora's arm.
The Unicorn Wizard chuckled for Rainbow Dash might have made a mistake about the foal…
"Your ideas are silly, for this is not a filly. Prepare to be jolt for It is a colt," Zecora corrected.
"A Colt," Rainbow said with a smile until her friends realized what the Unicorn Wizard just said about the foal.
"A COLT?! Oi!" The Mane 5 shouted in unison shock as they looked at each other in exaggerated shock and plopped to the ground, fainted, much to Twilight's amusement. Now they know that they have a nephew and not a niece…
THE
ALICORN QUEEN II:
TWILIGHT'S TRIUMPH
( Rewritten )
Author's Note: And here she is...the first chapter of THE ALICORN QUEEN II: TWILIGHT'S TRIUMPH ( Rewritten ), sequel to THE ALICORN QUEEN ( Rewritten ). That's right folks, Queen Twilight Sparkle and her friends and family are back in an all-new adventure.
Now we all know that THE ALICORN QUEEN ended with the Presentation of Twilight's new heir, and this chapter picks up where we left off. During the presentation, many of the citizens from Equestria arrived and gathered at the Castle Of Harmony, waiting to see the new ruler. And just like last time, Zecora presents the foal to the crowd as they cheered and bowed while Twilight and her husband, King Flash Sentry, watched with pride and proudness.
Even Twilight's friends were happy and proud since they have became the aunts of Twilight's new foal, and I have a feeling they're gonna be much better aunts than Chrysalis ever was to Twilight. Of course, Rainbow Dash thought since the foal is filly, it could mean that everything will be Deja Vu. But Zecora unfortunately told them that the foal is a colt, which means Twilight's new child is a...boy.
Eeyup, the Mane 5 are in to foalsitting their new nephew in this adventure.
This is Dinoman213, signing off.