Hello everyone, here I bring you a new chapter in my story but before I start I suppose I have some things to clarify.
As you know, I always read the comments to see if you are liking the story, find any kind of errors or want to give me ideas. Today I saw a comment that really made me smile and made me happy to read it.
This user told me about errors in the past story and especially based on how I am narrating the story so I am going to start saying the errors and I will tell you the reasons why this happens to me.
Error 1: The kryptonite from the chapter I uploaded a few days ago.
The comment informed me that kryptonite does not have the ability to kill Kryptonians so easily, and that is true. I did a little research and could see that it only has the ability to severely weaken the powers of Kara and Clark.
The reason for what happened in the chapter is easy. Let's say I get carried away by my imagination and maybe it happens a bit because I take seriously what happened to Kara in the chapter where our girl Krypton faces Catwoman for the first time.
Now the most serious issue.
Error 2: My way of telling the story.
I am more than sure that all of you, my dear readers, have been very confused by the way I tell the story and I don't need to be a genius like Barbara to know that you on more than one occasion were confused and surprised by the way I narrate.
The user told me that he mixed two ways of telling my story and he is absolutely right, especially on one thing. I cannot mix two forms of narration.
He also mentioned that my character in the story (Me). He knows how the girls feel towards him and that ruins the story a bit, it's as if Sebastian the guardian angel will forget to tell him that he also has telekinesis and that could ruin future chapters in the future.
I think a better way to stop making these kinds of mistakes is to improve the narrative better and focus more on my character. Remind myself that I don't know how girls feel towards me and have the thought that they only see me as a friend, besides that I also have to be careful when choosing words and have to be careful with the details to don't ruin the chapters or the story.
The user told me that sometimes he gets confused because he does not know if what I am narrating is in my point of view in the story or as a narrator who tells the story and something tells me that many of you also had these kinds of problems when you read my chapters so I apologize for the confusion.
I heartily thank the user who told me all these problems, I really appreciate it a lot and let me tell you that everything you told me has all the best reasons and I really thank you from the bottom of my heart. With nothing more to say, let's get started.
It had been a few hours since the girls had gone to school, I decided to call the principal and tell him that I was not going to class today and neither did Kara, I had to tell the principal that the Kryptonian girl was very weak due to her being ill. It was a miracle that Mr. Chapin believed the lie, or else he would be in serious trouble.
Normally Kara and I would have gone to school as Jessica said that in an hour the Kryptonian girl will feel better. But what I didn't know was one thing, Kara was pretending.
Kara had the opportunity now for me to be with her, of course the Kryptonian girl was not going to miss her opportunity to have me by her side so she decided to pretend to be sick so that she would stay at my house. A plan that was working perfectly.
"I'm so sorry to keep you waiting Kara." I said as she entered the room with a tray. Kara had ordered me some waffles with ice cream and a small blueberry and strawberry shake to go with a lot of whipped cream.
"Don't worry Benja, but do you think you can feed me?" Kara asked with a smile.
"Are you sure Kara? Can you move your arm to take the remote control to change the channel, why can't you eat it by yourself?" I ask with curiosity and at the same time some embarrassment.
"Oww Benja, you told me you were going to take care of me. You are a bad friend." the Kryptonian girl said as she pretended to be sad, but inside her she had a mocking smile when she could see that I was completely embarrassed.
"I'm really sorry Kara. Don't worry, I'm going to feed you." I said as I sat on the bed and started feeding Kara, but what we both never noticed was that the girls were watching us from a tree in my backyard.
"Girls, I'm not sure if we should do this." Karen said as she was wearing her hero outfit to keep herself hidden behind a tree leaf.
"Karen is right, if Benja realizes that we are spying on him while he takes care of Kara he will think we are perverts." Jessica said as he was completely embarrassed.
"Diana, remind us why we are doing this." Zatanna said as she looked at the Amazon warrior.
"Kara is pretending to be sick to be with Benja, I called you sisters to help me catch Kara red-handed." Diana said as she looked at everything with narrowed eyes.
"Diana, don't you think that's crazy? I highly doubt that Kara is pretending to be sick to spend time with Benja." Jessica said as she was questioning the attitude of the Amazon warrior.
"I don't think so sister, and where is Barbara? I thought she would join our cause." Diana said, realizing the redhead's absence.
"Barbara said she was going to be at the base, she told me she was going to be making some new inventions." Jessica said as she looked at the rest of the team before turning her gaze back to where Kara and I were.
"I'm going to wash the dishes, let me know if you need anything else Kara." I said as I left the room to go to the kitchen.
Kara had a huge smile as she sighed with joy. After days of discomfort and annoyance from Diana, she was now having a day of relaxation thanks to me. However, the Kryptonian girl felt like she was being watched so she looked to the side only to freeze to see Diana, Zatanna, Jessica and Karen in the only tree in my backyard as they gazed at her intently.
'Shit, what are you doing here !?' Kara said in her mind as she began to sweat. Her plan was now in jeopardy, the best option would be to do something quickly before something happened.
"Oh, Benja. Can you come over for a minute?" Kara asked as she called out to me from the bed. When I heard that, I would go to the room to see what happened.
"Do you need something Kara?" I asked as she looked at the Kryptonian girl.
"Could you close the curtains? It bothers me a bit that much sun." Kara said as she pretended to cough. That made Diana, Zatanna, Jessica and Karen completely surprised while I on the other hand looked at this with concern.
"Yes Kara, no problem." I said as I approached the windows and then closed the curtains.
"Very good Diana, now I believe you." Jessica said annoyed.
"What will we do?." Karen asked as she looked at the rest of the team.
"Putting Kara in her place, I'm going to teach her not to use my assistant as her own servant." Zatanna said angrily. The magical girl really wanted to send Kara to some dimension right now.
"Patience sister, first we observe what happens. Then we will go to confront Kara." Diana said seriously.
"Do you need anything else Kara?" I asked as she looked at the Kryptonian girl.
"Well, could you give me a little massage? My arms hurt a little." Kara said as she looked at me.
"Sure, no problem." I said as I walked over to give Kara a massage. What we both didn't realize was that Karen was near the window.
"Girls, I don't know if I can do this." Karen said while she was completely scared.
"Don't worry Karen, you can do it. If something happens, we will help you." Diana said. The Amazon warrior had the idea of sending Karen into my house. The girl had given the rest of the team a tablet that was connected to Karen's viewers, so whatever she saw, the rest of the team would see as well.
"It's okay." Karen said before entering through an air conduit. The little girl would be flying through the vents until she got to my room.
"Ah, Benja. You're doing fine." Kara's voice made Karen freeze just as she was about to enter the room. But what made Karen completely freeze was not only her voice, Kara's tone was one of complete pleasure that made the little girl's imagination start to play a joke on her.
"Do you like it like that, Kara?"
"I love it, please don't stop."
Karen and the rest of the team listened carefully to what was going on and couldn't help but turn red due to embarrassment.
"Karen, could you check and see what happens?" Jessica asked as she looked at the tablet screen.
"I'll try." Karen said but the little girl couldn't move. Her fears and especially her shame prevented her from taking a step.
"Benja, make it stronger please. Don't stop." Kara said in a tone full of pleasure and relaxation.
"Okay Kara, just tell me if I'm being too harsh." I told her as she gave the Kryptonian girl a back rub.
"You're doing great Benja, it feels amazing." Kara said with a smile. Suddenly an idea came to the mind of the Kryptonian girl causing an evil smile to appear on her face without my noticing.
"Benja. Could you do it with my breasts?" the Kryptonian girl asked in a daring tone making my face turn tomato red.
"What !?. Kara, are you sure about this?" I asked while he was completely nervous and at the same time embarrassed.
"Come on Benja, after all. There's no one here and we're both alone in this, besides. You said if I needed something then I could ask you, well. Could you do this for me, finally?" Kara asked with a flirtatious smile making my body act like a steam engine which caused some smoke to come out under my clothes.
"It's o-okay Kara. I'll do it f-for you." I said while being completely embarrassed.
Karen and the rest of the team had listened to everything with surprise and embarrassment.
They couldn't help their imagination making them think that Kara and I were having a very intimate and daring moment making their hearts pound while Diana listened to all this with anger and surprise at the same time. She couldn't believe the things the Kryptonian girl was asking for.
Kara took off her shirt revealing a blue sports bra which she would also take off showing her breasts. When I saw Kara's breasts it made my face redder as steam poured from my ears. Kara's breasts were slightly larger than Diana's.
"Come on Benja, don't keep me waiting. You said you would help me." Kara said as she pretended to be sad.
"Sorry." I said as I slowly approached where Kara was and put my hands on the Krypton girl's breasts which caused Kara to let out a small moan causing my body to shudder a bit before starting to massage her breasts.
"Ah, Benja. You are doing very well, please continue." Kara said as she struggled not to moan, something that was impossible due to pleasure.
"Okay, I'll continue." I said embarrassed as I continued to massage the Kryptonian girl's breasts.
Karen was completely petrified. She felt her heart pound and her hero suit acted like a sauna due to the steam coming off the girl's body. She at that moment she looked at her body before becoming depressed when she saw her chest.
"Now. How am I going to get Benja's attention?" Karen asked as she looked at her chest.
Diana, Zatanna and Jessica were listening to this in disbelief as their faces were completely red upon hearing Kara's moans.
"Perhaps, Benja and Kara." Zatanna at that moment would start to think that the Kryptonian girl and I were in a very spicy moment but at that moment she and Jessica were a little scared to see that Diana had a murderous aura around her showing that the Amazon warrior was completely upset.
"Diana calm down, don't be mad." Jessica said worried but at the same time she was terrified by the murderous aura that Diana was emanating.
"Bumblebee, could you see what's going on?" Diana asked as she tried to stay calm and was doing her best to relax to avoid breaking the girl's tablet.
"I'll try." Karen stuttered as she tried her best to get closer but Kara's moans made the little bee more and more nervous.
"How are you feeling, Kara?" I asked sheepishly as she continued to massage the Kryptonian girl's breasts.
"I feel amazing, if you continue like this I think I could let you touch my breasts all the time." Kara said with a daring smile, that statement made my face redder than normal while some smoke came out of my ears.
Zatanna and Jessica were now slightly apart from Diana, the Amazon warrior was completely angry as the murderous aura grew higher and higher.
"Kara. Letting Benja touch her breasts? It's official, I swear to the gods this won't stay that way." Diana said as she tightened with some force the grip of the tablet getting the screen to break a little but she could still see what was happening.
"I think enough is enough, Snowball, I feel better now." Kara said with a smile. As much as she wanted him to continue, she didn't want to abuse. But who said she was going to stop her plan?
"God, how late is it? I'd better go make lunch, what do you want to eat, Kara?" I asked her as she looked at the Kryptonian girl.
"I would like a chicken soup." Kara said with a smile.
"Okay, I'll go make the soup." I said as I left the room.
Kara at that time would see my little bedside table and when opening the drawers she would see a manga which the Kryptonian girl would take and look at the little book with a smile.
"I'm not interested in these nerdy things, but right now. I'm loving this thing." Kara said with an evil smile as she looked at the manga.
"What should I try now?" Kara said in her mind but her super ear would hear something that left her very surprised.
"Girls, I don't know if I want to go through with this anymore. It's too much for me." Karen said as she looked at the communicator on her arm.
"Wait a bit Karen, remember your mission. You just have to keep an eye on Kara, don't worry we are seeing everything you do and you are doing well. Just hold on a little longer." Diana said from the communicator.
The Kryptonian girl was completely surprised and at the same time annoyed by Diana, but suddenly an idea crossed her mind and her smile would now be daring as she laughed a little.
"So Princess Diana is watching me. Well, I'll give her a show she'll never forget." Kara said with a smile as she thought about her next move.
Minutes passed, Kara was watching TV while Karen and the rest of the team continued to keep an eye on the Kryptonian girl until they heard the door open.
"Sorry if I made you wait so long Kara, here's your soup." I said as I entered the room with a tray and a plate full of soup.
"Oh okay Benja, don't worry." Kara said as I placed the tray on her lap.
"Hey snowball, can you go get me some water please?" Kara asked as she handed me an empty glass.
"Yes, I'll be right back." I said as I left the room.
Kara looked at the soup with a smile before using her icy breath to cool the soup a bit. The Kryptonian girl was ready to turn the intensity up a bit more, and give Diana something to look at.
I was going upstairs when suddenly I heard a plate break and Kara screamed, when I heard the Kryptonian girl screaming I used the air element to rush into the room.
"Kara, what happened!?." I said as I quickly entered the room and I would see Kara completely wet from the soup and the plate on the floor.
"I'm sorry Benja, I just saw a cockroach climb the bed and I got really scared." Kara said as she pretended to be scared.
"Oh Kara. Look at you, you're covered in soup. I'll go get the shower ready so you can take a bath, I'll be right back." I said as I left the room and went to the bathroom.
Karen, Diana, Jessica and Zatanna saw this with surprise and at the same time with anger, the Kryptonian girl was definitely wearing the patience of the rest of the team.
"It's official, I'm going to send Kara to another dimension after this." Zatanna said as she clenched her fists in annoyance.
Jessica was completely upset, right now the green lantern girl was more than willing to make a small exception and use the ring to give Kara a punishment.
Diana didn't say anything and just looked at everything while her hair covered her eyes.
"Kara, the bathtub is ready. Do you want me to help you walk?" I asked while looking at the Kryptonian girl.
"Benja, can't you take me? My legs are asleep." Kara said as she pretended to have difficulty lifting her legs.
"Yes that's fine." I said something embarrassed as I walked over and carried the Krypton girl like a princess.
"You are well?." I asked shyly
"Very good." Kara said as she hugged me making my face turn red as she led her to the bathroom.
"They are heading to the bathroom." Karen said as she looked at everything with jealousy.
"Follow them Karen, don't lose sight of them." Diana said but her tone was somewhat cold which scared the girl and also Jessica and Zatanna.
"Well Kara, I better give you some privacy." I said as I was about to leave but at that point the Kryptonian girl would grab my shirt.
"Benja. I know I've been bothering you a lot lately, but could you do me one last favor?" Kara asked with some embarrassment.
"Kara you haven't been bothering me, I'll do any favor you ask. I just want to do everything I can to help you recover." I said while looking at the Krypton girl.
"In that case. Could you take the shower with me?" Kara asked somewhat embarrassed.
Slowly the color of my entire body turned tomato red as I let out a large amount of smoke.
"Do you want. That I bathed with you?" I asked while he was completely flustered.
"My arms are heavy to move freely. Please do you think you can do this for me?" Kara asked as she stared into my eyes.
I was completely nervous especially since Kara was staring into my eyes, this was too much for me and I didn't know what to say but then I remembered that I told her that I would always help her so I just sighed while looking away.
"Okay. I'll go put on a bathing suit and come bathe with you." I said while playing with my fingers.
"OK I will wait for you." Kara said as she watched me leave the room. The Kryptonian girl was mentally celebrating that her plan was working.
"It's working, at this rate. Benja would rather be with me and leave Diana. I'm going to have a lot of fun with this now." Kara said with a cheeky smile.
Zatanna and Jessica were completely concerned as Diana was completely petrified and did not say anything due to astonishment at Kara's revelation, but they could sense that the Amazon warrior was completely angry.
"Kara, I hope you know what you do." Jessica and Zatanna said at the same time as they were now worried about the life of the Kryptonian girl.
After a few minutes I went back to the bathroom in a bathing suit while I was completely embarrassed.
"Kara, are you ready?" I asked while looking away.
"Yeah, but would you give me a hand in taking off my clothes? And don't even think about taking off my underwear, you pervert." Kara said with a teasing but flirtatious smile.
Hearing that statement made me completely tense as I helped the Kryptonian girl remove her clothes into her underwear. Kara was still wearing the blue sports bra and her underwear was the same color.
After this he would take Kara to the bathtub and start washing her back.
Kara had a smile while I was washing her body, the Krypton girl was ready to execute her plan.
"Benja, do you want me to wash your back?" Kara asked with a daring smile something that I didn't realize.
"I suppose." I said shyly as he turned me around.
At that moment Kara takes off her bra and put some soap on her breasts before hugging me from behind making my face turn red when I feel the breasts of the Kryptonian girl on my back.
"K-Kara?." my face was completely red as tomato as my ears let out a large amount of smoke.
"Easy Snowball, relax and let me do the work." Kara said as she moved up and down making her breasts caress my back.
Karen was looking at everything with surprise but also with a depressed aura as she looked at her chest, the little girl was completely depressed when she saw Kara's breasts as they were bigger than hers.
Jessica and Zatanna were watching this with their faces completely red while in their mind they imagined them in Kara's place being caressed while I worked their backs.
'As much as I'm mad at you, Kara. I have to admit it's a good idea.' Zatanna said in her mind as she wiped some of the blood that had come out of her nose as she did a mental reminder. The magical girl wanted to experience the same as Kara.
'Remember Jessica, you are not married to him yet. You have to be patient, you just have to wait.' Jessica said in her mind as she was completely red with embarrassment as she tried to relax.
Diana was still completely petrified like a statue as she glared at everything. The Amazon warrior didn't know if she could take what she was seeing any longer.
"Alright Benja, now. Your chest." Kara said with a cheeky smile.
"Are you sure Kara? I can do it myself." I said while I was completely nervous.
"You did a lot of things for me today, let me return the favor." the Kryptonian girl said as she put on more soap.
I slowly began to spin while I was completely tense. Kara wasted no time and would do something I did not expect, the Kryptonian girl would sit on my lap which made my heart pound as Kara put her breasts on my chest making the two of us very close to each other.
"Kara. Me." Before I could say a word, the Kryptonian girl would put a finger to my lips making me shut up.
"I said relax Benja. And let Supergirl help you." Kara said in a flirtatious tone as she slowly approached my face to kiss me.
Diana couldn't take it anymore and would break the tablet with her bare hands before rushing into my house.
"Diana, wait !!." yelled Jessica as she ran like Zatanna to stop the Amazon warrior from hurting someone.
Just when Kara and I were about to kiss we heard noises coming from outside the bathroom and suddenly the door would be opened by a very angry Diana Prince.
"Stay away from Benja!!." Diana yelled as she lunged at us.
Diana was about to hit Kara when she was suddenly stopped by chains thanks to Jessica's ring.
"Diana wait, you have to calm down !." Jessica said as Zatanna moved to the green lantern girl's side.
"Jessica!?. Zatanna!?." I yelled as I quickly covered myself with a towel. The two girls couldn't help but turn red due to embarrassment as they looked away.
"What are you doing here? I thought we would meet at Sweet Justice." I said as she looked at this in disbelief.
Diana froze completely realizing her mistake and her face slowly turned red with embarrassment.
"Benja, we can explain it !!." Diana yelled as she waved her arms frantically.
Minutes passed. Kara was now wearing her normal clothes while she was sitting on a couch and the rest of the team were on another couch as they told me what they did while I was sitting on a separate couch.
"So why were they watching me and Kara?" I asked while watching the girls.
Kara was completely nervous, if the girls tell the truth everything could get ugly but she was very surprised to hear the following.
"We asked Karen to come check on Kara." Diana said making everyone stare at her.
"I was walking with our sisters through the streets while we were thinking about Kara, so I asked Karen to go see what was going on. She gave me a tablet that was connected to her outfit so we can see what could happen since Barbara said she wanted to talk to us at Sweet Justice. Karen tried to knock on the door but you weren't responding so she came in wearing her suit. " said the Amazon warrior.
"But. Why did they enter my house in a very abrupt way and above all, why did Diana try to jump on Kara?" I asked with some curiosity but I was also very flushed when remembering the moment that Kara and I had spent inside.
"Karen's tablet acted in a very strange way and communication was cutting off, so we went in that way as we thought something bad had happened. Karen's camera failed in that room and you were not in the rest of the rooms, I was too concerned." Diana said as she shyly scratched her arm.
Kara was very surprised. She never expected to see Diana lie like this, but she was also happy that the Amazon warrior was kind enough not to tell the truth.
"Well, thanks for caring about us girls. You guys are amazing." I said while kissing Jessica, Zatanna, Karen and Diana on the cheek. The girls smile while blushing a bit.
After that, the girls and I decided to go to Sweet Justice to end the day. When sunset came, we all went to our houses but at that moment Kara approached Diana.
"Diana, can we talk?" Kara asked as she looked at the Amazon warrior.
"Yes, it's okay sister. Benja go home, I'll go soon." Diana said as she looked at me.
"Okay, I'll wait for you. I'll be making dinner." I said as I walked home.
A silence followed as Kara waited for me to be far enough away to speak.
"Why did you do it? Why did you lie to Benja?" Kara asked as she looked at the Amazon warrior.
"Benja would have been very angry, and I'm sure he would never speak to you again. That's why I lied, I did it so that Benja wouldn't get angry with you. I know how much he means to you, and I didn't want him to get angry with you.", Diana said as she looked at Kara.
"But. After everything I did, aren't you mad?" Kara asked in surprise.
"Although I have to admit that I was bothered by the fact that you were using Benja as a servant, still. I didn't want to ruin your friendship with him." Diana said with a smile.
"Thanks Diana, you are the best." Kara said as she hugged the Amazon warrior, a gesture Diana accepted with a smile.
"See you tomorrow Diana, rest." Kara said as she went to her house. However, the Kryptonian girl would show a daring smile as she remembered everything that happened today.
When Kara got home she would go to her room to relax a little while remembering everything she did today before looking in a mirror and lifting her breasts.
"You did a great job today, girls. Benja will never forget when I asked him for that massage, soon he will notice me and he will only love me. Thank you Diana for helping me, but. I will not give up so easily, love and Benja's heart already have an owner. And that girl is me. " Kara said with a smile as she lay down on her bed.
Kara slowly fell asleep with a smile. Today had been a day that she will never forget and that I enjoy to the fullest, she was completely impatient for her to repeat herself but not just one more time. The Kryptonian girl wanted this to repeat itself, every day. And she was willing to make that come true.
So far today's chapter, I hope you liked it and I also hope you like the story so far.
I remind you that I am going to do my best to improve the story even more, I know that possibly this chapter I was writing in the same way as the other previous chapters and I am already used to writing it this way, but I will try to improve.
One more time. I thank the user with all my heart who told me the mistakes I made in the previous chapter and especially my way of telling the story. I really appreciate it very much, I will try to improve the best I can to make the story better.
I hope you have a good day, a good afternoon or a good night. See you soon. Goodbye dattebayo.