Devil's Tour of Ponyville Part 2

Aka is walking with Twilight, Spike, Starlight, and now accompany by Rainbow Dash as they are showing the human-demon hunter around Ponyville as it has been great so far seeing different stores like a flower shop, toy store, the park, and some restaurants with good food though doesn't seem to have meet probably because most of the people here are ponies.

"Here is where Rarity lives, Carousel Boutique." Twilight gestured toward the building.

"Wow, it looks really fancy." Aka commented.

"That's how Rarity likes to roll, in case you haven't notice she's a totally fashion freak." Rainbow Dash pointed out.

"An amazing fashion freak, she makes the most beautiful dresses in all of Equestria that even Rainbow still has the dress she made for her." Spike said, smirking at Rainbow as she chuckles with tiny blushes on her cheeks.

"Not only that, she is also very generous to others always putting others before herself." Twilight said proudly of the Element of Generosity.

"Sweet." Aka said.

Twilight rings the doorbell as it goes off a little loud.

"Coming!" Rarity called out from inside.

A moment later, the door opens revealing Rarity now wearing red glasses and holding a measuring tape wrap in one arm.

"Hi Rarity, I hope we weren't disturbing you, we were just giving Aka the tour of Ponyville." Twilight explained.

"Oh, not to worry darling, I was just about to take a break anyway, work has been hard for me this season." Rarity exclaimed as she takes off the glasses and fan herself with her hand.

"I also think that being stylish is hard work." Aka smirked.

"I know the feeling, darling, the work of being fabulous never ends!" Rarity agreed brushing her hair and flatter her eyes. Everyone rolls their eyes knowing how Rarity likes to brag on about herself sometime.

Aka looks down to see a white cate coming out walking besides Rarity's leg as the cat rub itself against the lower leg.

"Nice cat." Aka complimented.

"Thank you, this here is Opalescence or Opal for short. She's the most fabulous and great a mare could ask for!" Rarity introduced her cat gently picking her up and cuddle her cheek against the furry cheek as Opal purrs.

"Although, sometimes Opal gets really cranny and ends up hissing at her." Rainbow whispered in Aka's ear and he chuckles.

Aka takes a peek inside of the fashion shop seeing some great dresses on display, he never been a fashion type of guy except when it comes to red like his coat, but he can definitely tell that these clothes are the Devil of awesome.

"Cool, you made all that?" Aka asked.

"Why yes, these are some of my finest work, if I do say so myself." Rarity said, Opal rolls her eyes and jump off Rarity's arms to go back inside.

"Yeah, they look great and I know full-well all your dresses are the best!" Spike commented.

"Oh, thank you, Spiky-wiky, your words of appreciation have always made me feel good!" Rarity hugged Spike between her cleavage making him blush and Twilight slightly puff of jealousy.

"Ahem, I believe we have a tour to get back on, so it was nice seeing you Rarity." Twilight said before pulling Spike out of the hug and drag on away.

"Y-yeah, you have a g-great day, Rarity." Spike stuttered with his face all red as he waves goodbye to Rarity.

"See you later, Rarity." Starlight said walking away too follow by Rainbow and Aka as they too said their goodbyes.

"Farewell friends, and Aka; if you want some new clothes to go with your style, let me know!" Rarity offered to make some new clothes for Aka.

"Thanks!" Aka responded.

Once gone, Rarity walks back in while closing the door and leans her back against it with a lustful sound sigh.

"Oh dear, I almost let myself get carried away with Spiky-wiky again in front of Twilight." Rarity said as Opal walks up to her and meow.

"I know Spike has feelings for me when we first met, to be honest I too have started to developed feelings for him, but I also knew that he has feelings for Twilight too." Rarity explained.

"Which is why I'm waiting for the right moment when Spike and Twilight finally confess their feeling to each other, so I can confess my feelings and we can start a herd together, and I hope it doesn't take too long because it's already been over a couple of years since they moved to Ponyville." Rarity preyed to the Princesses of the Sun and Moon that Spike and Twilight would confess soon.

Opal just simply rolls her eyes and walk away thinking of going to the bedroom to take a catnap.

(With the Tour Group)

"Thank you for your time to tell Aka some of the great things about being in Ponyville, Mayor Mare." Twilight thanked as she and the others walk out of City Hall with the mayor herself.

Mayor Mare, odd name if you ask me, is an older woman with pale, light grayish amber fur, moderate phthalo blue eyes, and Light cornflower bluish gray with a lighter streak hair color. She wears a white shirt with long sleeves and a blue-green puffer hanging from the fold-in collar, glasses, black long skirt that reach to the knees matching high-heels. Breasts sizes: E-cup.

"It's my pleasure, Princess Twilight, I'm just so surprises that we have a new creature in Ponyville from another world! And I am also sorry for your loss." Mayor Mare said in respect after hearing everything of what Aka had to go through in his old wold.

"It's no problem, there was nothing I could do about it consider the demon have made the world theirs now and I'm only guy, I feared that I couldn't cleanse a planet of demons by myself." Aka stated, knowing for the longest time that you can't do things that have become too impossible to handle.

"Well, I hope you find Ponyville a great home for a fresh new start and if there's anything I can to help, just let me know." Mayor Mare offered to help.

"Sure, I'll keep that in mind." Aka smiled as he and others continuing walking.

"So, anywhere to show me?" Aka asked.

"Just one more place to stop and that will conclude the tour of Ponyville!" Twilight answered.

"Speaking of which, are you hungry by any chance?" Spike asked sarcastically.

"I am actually, does this have something to do with that place we're going to?" Aka asked, catching on the sarcastic.

"Yep and trust me when I say this: the sweets there are gonna blow your so much almost as much as apple cider!" Rainbow excited.

"Man, the place must be pretty great for you to get all excited like this." Aka said.

"Oh, it is." Starlight concurred.

After a few more minutes of walking, the group arrived at the final place for the Ponyville tour and to Aka's surprise the building itself looks like a giant gingerbread house with decorations like white frosty on the roof and two stacks of pink cupcakes on top.

"In case you're wondering, no, you can't eat the house. I tried." Spike said, remembering how he react the first time he saw this place.

"Welcome to Sugarcube Corner! Where all the best sweets in town are made right here and nobody can go a day or week without having to try these bad boys!" Spike bragged exciting as he drools like how he likes to eat jewels and gems.

"Wow, the owner must've really put some thought into making the place." Aka commented.

"I wouldn't know about that, but I can tell that this is her passion since her cutie mark means that she's talent in making sweets like cake and other desserts." Twilight explained.

"This cupcake is indeed worthy of the taste of the Great and Powerful Trixie!" A woman's voice shouted that can be heard from the outside.

"What was that?" Aka asked.

"Oh, that would be my friend I told you about." Starlight sighed.

"You mean that performer girl?" Aka asked again.

"Yep, guess you'll get to meet her sooner than expected." Starlight said, hoping Aka would at least get comfortable a little longer in Ponyville.

"Cool." Aka said, looking forward to meeting her.

They walk inside through the double doors like people used to have back in the door western times and saw Pinkie Pie talking to a mare.

"This cupcake you just made is simply, what's the word… out of this world!" The mare complimented as she held the cupcake with the bitemark high in one hand.

"Aww, thanks Trixie, I've been working on a new recipe and Mrs. Cup Cake said they are good!" Pinkie said happy as always.

"Hey, Trixie!" Starlight called out, getting the mare known as Trixie's attention. She turns around showing the group her full appearance.

Trixie has brilliant azure fur color, pale cornflower blue with very pale cerulean stripes mane, and dark grayish violet. She wears a skintight-like sleeveless blue shirt with a silver zipper, and her top cleavage expose, purple skirt that's knee length with a yellow line at the bottom, and crimson-purple high-heels. She also wears a purple wizard hat with blue stars and a large matching cape. Breasts sizes: G-cup.

"Starlight, surprise to see you here, Trixie was actually planning on visiting you at the castle." Trixie surprised seeing her best friend here. And talking in third person.

"Well, you'll be more surprise when you meet the new citizen of Ponyville." Starlight gestured toward Aka.

"Hey there." Aka greeted.

"Sweet Celestia! You're the being in red I heard about!" Trixie gasped.

"Being in red?" Rainbow confused.

"Is what everypony is calling him." Trixie mentioned.

"Wow, words are spreading faster than I thought." Spike surprised.

"Anyway, I'm Aka Redgrave." Aka introduced himself.

"It is an honor to meet you, Aka, for you are in the present of the Great and Powerful Trixie Lulamoon!" Trixie introduced herself dramatic.

"Is she always this dramatic?" Aka asked.

"About her magic and everything else about herself, yes." Twilight answered as she sighs.

"Cool, I like that." Aka smirked, shocking Twilight and Spike.

"Oh, oh, oh, you guys have got to try these new cupcakes Pinkie just made. They are divine!" Trixie said.

"Well, in that case, we'll have the new cupcakes please." Aka ordered.

"Hehe, coming right up!" Pinkie excited as she zooms into the kitchen for a few seconds then comes back out with a trade full of freshly baked cupcakes.

"Whoa, that was fast!" Aka amazed that Pinkie could do it quicker than any old books he read.

"What can I say, I always love to bring smiles to all!" Pinkie said.

Everyone each took a cupcake except Trixie who already has hers and they took a bite of them then their eyes widen as their taste buds are like screaming in their heads saying that it's the most awesomeness and sweetest cupcake they ever tasted, there were no other words to describe how good these cupcakes are except for one, single word.

"SWEEET!" They all said at the same time.

"I know, right? Trixie believes that Pinkie has really outdid herself." Trixie commented.

"Thanks, so Aka, how are enjoying Ponyville so far?" Pinkie asked the human in red.

"Going great, everyone here is friendly though I think a few were a little skeptical about me but I'm sure I'll warm up to them." Aka answered as he ate his cupcake.

Before Pinkie could say anything else, there's a loud crashing noise coming from upstairs.

"Pinkie, help!" Pound Cake is on the loose!" A woman's voice alerted.

"Again?" Pinkie asked.

Then came flying down to the counter is a small baby Pegasus laughing as it flies around close to the ceiling then spotted the door thinking about going outside for some fun, but Aka simple jumps a little to catch the foal's leg forcing him down and into his arm.

"Now, where do you think you're going, little guy?" Aka asked sarcastically. The baby Pegasus looks at Aka confuse a bit then just giggles as he held out his tiny hands at him.

"Aww, I think he likes you!" Pinkie pointed out, seeing the scene as a cute moment.

"Please tell me Pound Cake didn't go outside!" The woman asked worry as she runs downstairs while carrying a baby unicorn girl with a blue bow tied on her hair.

The woman has very light cerulean, light crimson with pale, light grayish crimson stripes, and brilliant rose eyes. She wears a yellow shirt with a skirt that goes close to the knees, yellow boots with pink bottom and top, a white apron with pink lines and wing-like design on the side and three cupcakes on the left side, and a pink bubblegum-shaped earning. Breasts sizes: I-cup.

"Don't worry, Mrs. Cup Cake, Aka got him." Pinkie pointed at Aka as he walks towards Mrs. Cup Cake with the baby boy called Pound Cake.

"I believe this belongs to you." Aka handed Pound Cake to the mother.

"Oh, thank you so much, you don't know how hard it is watching these two and doing business in the shop can be tiring." Mrs. Cup Cake sighed in relief.

"No problem, I think the little guy is just trying to play." Aka smiled at Pound Cake as he giggles.

"I know, though it's been difficult raising two kids which is why I'm glad to have Pinkie helping out around the shop." Mrs. Cup Cake pleased to have a trustful employee.

"Anytime, Ma'am!" Pinkie saluted.

"And with that, the tour has come to an end!" Twilight announced.

"I'll admit, this town certainly has its charm." Aka said.

"If you think the tour was fun, wait until tonight and you're gonna be in for a real fun time!" Pinkie giggled.

"Tonight." Aka confused, what so special about tonight?

"You'll have to wait and find out." Spike winked.

"Trust, when it comes to Pinkie Pie and her surprises then you're going to enjoy it." Rainbow said, speaking of experience.

This made Aka smiles looking forward to whatever plan Pinkie has in stores and who knows, maybe there will be something exciting to show everyone, or everypony as they say it, just how awesome and stylish he is.

(Everfree Forest)

Deep in the dangerous forest of Everfree, something is lurking through the trees hiding in the shadows and look through some brushes as the shadowy creature seem to have… sense something powerful and it wants to go find that power source and kill it as two vicious, glowing red eyes glow from the darkness and growls hungrily thinking what it would taste like in its fangs when it chomps down on the flesh.

Then it sees a path thinking it appears to be leading somewhere and the power it senses it probably at the end.


KO a new chapter is done and hope you all enjoy it!

The tour of Ponyville has ended and, spoiler alert: Aka is gonna get a surprise party tonight at Twilight's castle to make him feel welcome to Equestria though it looks like they're about to get an unexpected party crasher from the Everfree forest, but that'll be extra fun for Aka as mostly the whole town will get a good look at Aka's strength in battle with his Devil Powers.

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