DecimoKing, thank you very much for your constructive criticism! I am very glad to receive this feedback as it can only help me grow and improve. I have taken your feedback seriously and I completely agree. I have adjusted the first two chapters, hopefully they are a bit more readable. I also deleted the odd authors note, I'm honestly not sure why I tried to fit the descriptions of my OCs (Including one I accidentally mentioned before I officially revealed them) into one authors note post in the first place. Thank you again and I hope you continue to enjoy my story.