Trapking007: Thanks for the feedback I will try my best to add more to the rest of the story.
Once again as always any suggestions are appreciated greatly and once again I'm not by any means the best at this stuff, I like it alot though.
Ps. I still don't own the nagatoro franchise, nor will I ever I doubt.
Senpai stumbles backwards, blushing pure red down to his chest. "k-k-kiss you!?" he blurts out, sounding unexpectedly defiant. "d-do you not want to... Naoto..." his Kohai complains, sounding oddly disappointed.
Naoto thinks for a second, looking at the first year sitting in front of him, close to tears. He somehow musters up the bit of confidence he has left, and walks over to her, prompting a," huh?" before he uses all of the confidence he built up over the years to hold her chin up and kiss her.
Silence persists for a while as they hold that pose. Our spineless MC, Naoto, has just grown a pair and kissed the girl he loves. A moment passes before senpai noticed what he had done and quickly looked away, embarrassed. "I-I'm sorry," he muttered to Nagatoro, who looks at him with beaming eyes.
"She's gonna taunt me about that, probably like' oh, creepy senpai what made you think you could kiss me? Pervy senpai!'... Or something like that. Naoto looked Nagatoro in the eyes as he awaited her reaction, while still blushing.
Nagatoro sits in a daze for a few minutes, before finally being able to muster, "S-senpai!" in a high pitched voice and nearly crying in happiness. The fun didn't last very long though, as a couple seconds of them staying in that position the 'friends' burst into the club room.
"Hayacchi!" Gamo yells as she looks around the room for nagatoro. "ohwahh gamo! H-hey heh heh," Nagatoro nervously half-shouts, quickly moving away from senpai. "oh? Your here with paisen?" Gamo questions. "what were you guys doing eh?" sakura asks suspiciously, with squinting eyes. "N-nuthin... W-we were practicing judo throws!" Nagatoro grabs senpai by the side and coller of his shirt and over shoulder throws him onto the couch.
"whoaah!" Senpai yells as he gets launched onto the soft feel of the cushions, soon relaxing. Gamo laughs and exclaims, "woah yea Hayacchi, nothings totally going on, that explains why you threw paisen onto the couch instead of the floor like normal!" and without more word she flicks her hair, turn around, and walks out of the club room with the friends.
"n-no it's a misunderstanding w-wait!" Nagatoro yells to them, but they were gone. "n-nagatoro? Are you okay?" senpai says, worryingly. Nagatoro quickly responds in her normal tone, "o-oh senpai's worrying about me! So creepy!" but Naoto can tell something is wrong as she still looks nervous and embarrassed so he replies, "Y-your still keeping things from me. I know you don't hate me anymore and I know somethings going on so please, please don't toy with me, Hayase."
Nagatoro looks up at senpai, prompting a smile from the latter, and she began crying, hugging him."S-senpai... No, Naoto. I... I love you..." she burst into tears in his arms, and Senpai replies with, "I-I love you to, Hayase..." He understands how hard it was for her to admit that. After all, it goes against all of her morals and pride, so he respected it and knew something may come after to make up for the lost pride.
"y-yknow, Naoto, your not such a creep anymore..." nagatoro sniffles and wipes her eyes, then with a mischievous smile exclaims, "ohh senpai! I've been calling you by your first name but there's one more thing before we can do that!" prompting a, "w-What is it?" from Senpai, and with a grin nagatoro shouts, "Senpai! Let's go shopping!"
Okay so I know this one wasn't the longest but its leading into a more wide story than just the clubroom, as you saw at the end they are going shopping in the next chapter. I'm taking inspiration from another ff I saw on here so we are going to a mall. I'll shout out the user unless they are anonymous next chapter.
BTW I'm still completely open for suggestions and feedback and so I'll be back with another chapter soon!
