Patch Notes for Chapters 4-6
CHAPTER 4:
* Reworked the first paragraph of the chapter
* Added "Kratos' gaze dropped down, no longer staring at the buildings peak,"
* Changed "years of not fighting" to "years of inactivity"
* Fixed "afterall" to "after all"
* Added "He stopped and"
* Changed "but he did notice" to " However, off in the distance he noticed a soft orange glow from a park in the direction"
* Deleted " Kratos raised Mimir up as"
* Changed "Best to ask later" to "was he another god?"
* Changed "it would do the same with her too." to "she obviously could feel his domain as well."
* Fixed "All of them sat in a circle that burned." to "All of them sat in a semi-circle that burned bright."
* Added "Ares snapped his fingers"
* Changed "Ares laughed and clapped" to "He laughed and clapped"
* Changed "Greek children" to "children"
* Fixed "no the size of a building" to "no longer the size of a building"
Chapter 5:
* Added "Perhaps that is how Father felt right now."
* Deleted "and aren't supposed to feel too comfortable in bed"
* Reworked the breakfast scene where Atreus lore dumps on Annabeth to be more vague
* Changes "Anytime she tried" to "Anytime she tries"
* Fixed syntax errors for Midgard
* Fixed the spell of Hazels name
* Removed "before Frank" for better sentence flow
Chapter 6:
* Added chapter setting "Camp Half-Blood"
* Fixed the plural term of Pegasus to Pegasi.
* Added "he did not feel the need to hide himself" for better sentence flow
* Changed "The end of the year is unfortunately busy for me" to "The end of the year is approaching and makes it busy for me"
* Changed "end of the week" to "end of the month"
* Changed "last part out loud" to "last part considerably louder"
Hope you enjoyed the changes and made the reading experience much better, new chapter will come next week.