NOTE: This story has been sitting on my hard drive for close to a year and a half.
Hey, there party people! For the last few weeks I've been reading some Naruto fics that go into the neglectful family idea and I had an idea that delves into that same genre. Now I've decided to take a little creative freedom and decided to put the Elemental Countries in a rift inside of the Dragon's Triangle off the coast of Japan. Now, why? Because 1) I can, and 2) I haven't seen it done yet. Also, Naruto and Hinata will be the only two from the cannon genin class that will be the same age, the rest will be younger. If you don't like it, there's the door. Right back there. You might have to press the back button there. Still here? Fantastic! Alrighty then let's get this show on the row.
Rating: M. Currently T+ for implied sex scenarios.
Disclaimer: I own none of the recognizable characters, they belong to Kishi himself. Any original characters may be mine, but those that aren't will be noted. Any of the characters names used are fictional, any coincidence with any real people is in fact coincidence. This fic is not for profit, I won't be making a single penny off of this at all.
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Naruto Uzumaki-Namikaze looked back at the closed wooden gates to his village, the one that housed him for thirteen years. Just over the wall, he could see the Hokage Monument, the mountainside where the current and previous leaders' faces were carved into it. He took one look to the fourth face before hacking up a large spit wad before launching it towards the village he just left. Now, why would a young man dressed completely in black be spitting towards his former home in the middle of the night? Well, this deep-seated reason goes back close to nine years, the year of the Kyuubi attack.
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[Nine years ago, T-minus 12:30 to attack]
Four-year-old Naruto was in his room playing with his plush fox he got from his mother on his last birthday, and like any child with a plush toy he took it everywhere and loved it to death, regardless of the fact that it isn't alive in the first place. He ran into the kitchen where his mother Kushina was making breakfast and his father was lugging luggage to the front door.
"Tou-chan, what's with the luggage?" Naruto asked.
"Well your mother has to go someplace safe while she brings your new siblings into the world," Minato replied as he stacked another suitcase on top of a sealing scroll of his own design.
"But where?" he insisted.
"I'm sorry, I can't tell you," Minato replied. Naruto looked sadder than he had expected. "HOWEVER I can tell you that you'll be able to see your new siblings tomorrow," he said with a reassuring smile.
"OK!" Naruto said excitedly.
[T-minus twenty minutes to attack]
"ARRGH! MINATO!" Kushina screamed as another contraction took place. "I'M GOING TO MURDERLATE YOU FOR THIS!"
"Kushina, sweetheart, that isn't even a word," Minato said in an attempt to comfort his wife.
"DO YOU THINK I GIVE A FLYING FUCK!?" she rhetorically asked as Minato stabilized the seal again.
"I think I see the head," the elderly Biwako stated.
[T-minus twenty seconds to attack, with Naruto]
Naruto felt a shiver go down his spine, and his protector noticed. "Is there something wrong, Naruto-sama?"
"I don't know Neko-chan, I just feel like something bad is about to happen," Naruto replied to the female ANBU member in the room.
"I am sure that everything's fine, your parents wanted you in bed now," she said as she ushered the child towards his room. The ground shook as an explosion ripped through the village, followed by a roar and an oppressive aura. 'Either this boy is a natural born sensor or a psychic,' she thought to herself. "Come Naruto, quickly. We must get to the bunker."
The screams of thousands of civilians rushing to predetermined shelters in case of invasions by another village. Dozens of shinobi lectured their young genin children on their duties.
"But tou-san, I know how to fight!" one red eyed teen argued.
"I know you do, sweetheart. But this is something that the next generation of shinobi shouldn't be giving their lives for this soon. You JUST graduated from the Academy," the male, her father, said while ruffling her hair a bit. "Now listen up. As boring and glory less as it may sound, your job this night is to keep watch over all those in this bunker along with your fellow former classmates."
Hours passed as explosions ripped through the village. The shockwaves rumbled through the mountain as a beastly roar was heard constantly. A large gust of wind blew the doors of the bunker off as an explosion made the ground shake behind the mountain bunker. In that moment Naruto saw something, as well as everyone else in that bunker that night, that would be burned into his brain until the day he died. What he saw that day was a several dozen story tall orange-red feral nine tailed fox. Then a moment later it was gone in a yellow flash. However, Naruto wouldn't know the rest of the events that would happen that night as he passed out shortly after.
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[Four years later]
Naruto held in his nine-year-old hands a set of training kunai, blunted blades for training in close quarters combat and for throwing without fear of harming an ally. He threw one of his blades and it landed far from the target. He repeated the process several dozen times yet he never hit the bull's-eye. 'Perhaps I should ask mom or dad for some pointers,' he thought to himself.
He walked to another part of his family's compound and found his father and mother training his twin sisters, who were four years old chakra manipulation. Naruto was confused, his class had only just started talking about accessing their chakra via meditation later this week, assuming of course that everyone in the class was prepared. Why were those two already learning how to use their chakra already?
He walked slowly towards his parents, who looked proud of their daughters. Naruto knew that they held one-half each of the Kyuubi's chakra by the Sandime's sacrifice that night. Some theorized that he wanted to be with his newly deceased wife, others thought that it was his last hurrah. Regardless of what scuttlebutt was said about the Sandime's behavior that night, Naruto was cautious of his sisters for what they held at bay. The family were the first ones to be notified of what the twins contained. Naruto shortly after broke into his family's library and found his great-grandmother Mito's diary on being a host to the Kyuubi. Those that contain these beings of pure chakra might draw upon it unknowingly in times of high stress or emotional distress. He was always kind to the twins, but that didn't mean he wasn't careful.
"Good job Mito," his father shouted to the elder of the twins. While she was identical to her twin in every way, she had the trademark Uzumaki red hair but with pure white highlights. She contained the yin portion of the Kyuubi's chakra. When talking or interacting with others she was always has a friendly, bubbly personality. Naruto looked as she ran up the tree in their back yard a good five feet before falling to the ground.
His other sister, with his mother, was doing the same exercise. "Kasumi, watch how much chakra you are putting into your feet while climbing," his mother shouted in both encouragement and correction to the younger of the twins. Her hair is the same color as her sister and mother, but with deep black highlights, as if light itself couldn't escape from them. She held the yang portion of the Kyuubi's chakra. Her attitude was always cold and calculating. If one were to dye her hair completely black and leave her in the Uchiha compound they would assume she was one of theirs. Both of them loved their 'onii-chan' in their own way.
"Dad?" Naruto asked walking up to his father. He got a questioning hum in response. "I'm having a little problem with throwing my kunai, can you give me some pointers?"
His father stood there watching his sister, "Naruto, can't you see that I'm busy with your sister? Go ask your mother."
He walked over to his mother. "Mom, I've been having some issues with my kunai throwing. Could you give me a few tips on how to throw them more accurately?"
"Sorry Naruto, I'm busy with Kasumi. Why don't you ask your father?" she asked.
Naruto's shoulders slumped as he walked back inside his family's home, which with every passing day felt less like one to him.
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[Sixteen hours ago]
It was test day, or more precisely the morning of test day. Naruto had already failed the genin test twice already. The Academy usually wasn't this lenient as students only got two strikes before they got removed from the Shinobi Program as sometimes a student may blank out on the material on the written portion of the test or their nerves may get the better of them affecting their performance during the thrown weapons test.
As for Naruto, he wasn't stupid by any means. If one were to look at his records they would see that he had perfect marks on all written test material with an IQ that could rival a Nara clan member. While his throwing skills were not perfect, they were excellent for a genin soon-to-be graduate, well above any of the civilian born Academy student. The taijutsu exam he aced by mixing the Academy's style with the Uzumaki style he studied himself from his mother's notes. However, it was the ninjutsu portion of the exam that killed him every time. He would always nail the Substitution, using any of the objects in the exam room as well as the pre-provided log. The Henge he used was the perfect infiltration technique, the chakra used formed a physical shell that perfectly copied another's image down to the last acne scar on a person's face if they had it.
No, it was the Clone Jutsu that killed him. For some reason, he had yet to figure out why it wouldn't work for him. Every time he performed it his clones would always turn out messed up in ways ranging from them looking like brainless, drooling copies of himself to them dispersing just as soon as they appeared. This was his last attempt, his father even said so six months ago when he failed the second time.
Naruto walked into the kitchen to eat something before heading off to the Academy. He saw his father at the table and thought this would be a good a time as any to try and get some last minute tips from him.
"Dad," Naruto started and his dad turned towards him. "This is my last attempt at taking the exam, and I was wondering if you had any tips on how to do the clone Jutsu."
"Did you study the scrolls provided to you by the Academy?" he asked sounding distant.
"Yes, but-."
"You'll be fine then. You know what will happen if you fail again." Naruto didn't reply as he already knew. His dream was to be a ninja after all, and it's a little difficult when you're not in the program.
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[Two hours later]
The exam proceeded as it did the other two times for Naruto. He finished the written test in fifteen minutes and spent the rest of the time trying to figure out how to pass the final portion of the exam. During the taijutsu test, he countered all of Mizuki's attacks and knocked him out of the ring. The thrown weapons test went well enough, as usual, he got eighteen out of twenty targets dead center. Then came the ninjutsu exam.
Iruka opened the door as a civilian in the class left the exam room with her newly acquired headband. "Namikaze Naruto," he called.
"Wish me luck," Naruto muttered to no one in particular. If he were to have turned around he would have seen a pale eyed girl looking at him wishing him luck in her head.
He walked into the room and saw the two chunin instructors waiting. "Naruto, please perform the Substitution Jutsu," Iruka requested. Naruto switched himself with Mizuki's chair, causing said instructor to fall on his ass with Naruto standing behind him with a smirk on his face. "As impressive as that was, please use the provided log to get full points."
"If you say so," Naruto said as he substituted himself from where he stood with the provided log, said log landing on Mizuki.
Iruka marked a few things down on his clipboard. "Now please perform the Henge Jutsu." Naruto made the appropriate hand sign and a puff of smoke appeared, the smoke dispersed revealing a twenty-year-old female Naruto in a cocktail dress. Iruka hid his nosebleed behind his clipboard while writing down some more notes. "Impressive. Now perform the Clone Jutsu."
'Fuck,' Naruto thought to himself. 'Well, here goes nothing.' He prayed a small prayer to whatever god or goddess was listening in. He formed the appropriate signs and a puff of smoke appeared and three sickly looking clones appeared next to him.
Iruka sighed before marking a big x over the final check box. "I'm sorry Naruto, but you fail."
Naruto made his way back out into the classroom before walking straight out of the Academy without making eye contact with any of his classmates. The same pale eyed girl from before looking on in shock. Naruto walked back home, determination in his eyes. 'Do you know what? Fuck them. Has anyone helped me over these last few years? Fuck no. You don't owe them anything,' he thought. 'I'm not a shinobi so they can't mark me a nukenin. I should leave, I have the skills to protect myself so long as I avoid the skilled enemies.' One way or another, the next twelve hours were going to be spent planning. And avoiding his family completely.
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[Present]
Naruto walked towards the edge of the barrier that monitors all ingoing and outgoing chakra signatures. He reached into his backpack and pulled out a scroll, on it read 'Barrier Infiltration Seal'. From what he was able to gather, once chakra was added to the seal it would disrupt the barrier for ten seconds allowing a small team to infiltrate a village, or in this case for someone to leave undetected. It was then he felt the presence of another person behind him.
He grabbed one of the kunai he kept hidden on him. "Whoever you are, it would be wise for you to show yourself," he stated. A figure emerged from the bushes nearby. "Hinata?" he asked slightly surprised.
"Umm… Naruto-san, what are you doing?" she asked.
"What does it look like I'm doing? I'm leaving." He started to set down the disruptor seal.
"But why? Don't you wish to stay in your home anymore?"
"My former place of residence has felt like less of a home each year since my sisters were born. It doesn't help what my father was going to do to me."
"What do you mean?"
"Every time I asked for help I was pushed away, cast aside for my sisters for some unknown reason. A truly unknown reason. At least until I eavesdropped on my parents one night a few years ago. There was some sort of prophecy involving my sisters and my parents accelerated their training to master the chakra of the Kyuubi. When my mother asked about me and my training, my father said to let the Academy do its job. Did you know just before the twins were born I was supposed to start training, just like every other child of a clan does? I understood why they put it off for the first year, taking care of two infants is no small task, but after that? They just kept pushing me further and further away."
"But what about your father, what was he going to do to you?" she asked worriedly.
"From what I can guess I would have been married off to some daughter of another Kage or a Daimyo for political reasons. I'm not getting married off on his terms in some loveless marriage. It's my love life, not his!" he finished as he finished the setup.
"Let me come with you."
Naruto paused, thinking what she just said was the wind messing with her words. "What?"
"Let. Me. Come. With. You," she enunciated.
"And why, pray tell, would I do that?"
She paused, looking saddened. "I've heard what the Hyuuga elders intend to do once Hanabi reaches the age in which she can accept the mantle of heiress. They want to place the Caged Bird Seal on me and leave me with the Branch families."
Naruto was stunned. What father would allow this to happen to his daughter? "Won't your father do anything? Surely he can protect you from them."
"Yes, but not forever. All he has to do is leave on a business trip and they can perform the sealing without his knowledge. After it's placed, it can't be removed. He would have no choice but to leave me with the branch families regardless of how much it would pain him inside."
Naruto contemplated his options. Leave her and leave a loose end for his family to look into? No, they'd have me back in a heartbeat considering that she has some sort of crush on him. Kill her? Can he really kill a girl the same age as him that's pretty much defenseless, making him a murderer? No, that won't do. Take her with him? She'd be a traveling companion, able to watch his back. They'd be able to sleep in watches rather than him keeping one eye open; the downside is that he only packed for one person, not two, he'd have to stop somewhere and resupply.
He sighed, rubbing the back of his head. "Fine, you can come with. But you'd better pull your weight. I was expecting to do this by myself."
She hugged him suddenly, making him step dangerously close to the barrier. "Thank you! Thank you! Thank you! I won't let you down. I'll be right back with my supplies," she said as she stepped to leave.
"You can't, we don't have time. I had access to the watchers list for the night, we have a five-minute window, and we're currently in it. Any longer and we'll be discovered. We'll get supplies on the road. I may have raided my parents' personal safe in the house for what's rightfully mine by inheritance." She only nodded in reply. It was going to be a long road ahead.
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[Seven years later, global year 2014, Undisclosed mountain range]
A male and female figure climbed up a sheer ice wall dressed in warm white clothing using ice picks and claws on their steel-toe boots. They pulled themselves up and over the crest of the cliff before checking their weapons.
"All good," the woman stated. "You?"
"Copy, I'm five by five," the male stated before freezing up for no apparent reason.
"You ok?" she asked 'looking' concerned behind her balaclava.
"Yeah, I just feel like things are going to get a lot more complicated for some reason back home," the male stated raising his suppressed rifle. "Let's go."
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Meanwhile in Konoha…
A small gathering of people were inside of the Hokage's office. As the last person entered and the doors closed the security seals first placed by Uzumaki Mito activated. "Jairaya, why have you called us here?" Kushina asked. She never was the same when her 'baby boy' disappeared seven years ago. While she retained a semi-happy outlook for the public, she usually had bouts of depression in private.
"I think I have some news on his whereabouts," the perverted sennin replied.
"You mean-?"
Both her husband Minato and the Pervert nodded. "Yes, we may have a lead on Naruto."
"But how, didn't we lose all traces of them in Wave Country?" Kasumi asked with slight disinterest, as was her personality.
"We did. BUT there have been rumors floating around about a male-female mercenary duo that will do almost any job, so long as you have the money to pay it all the way out in the Outer Countries." Their eyes widened at the mention of the lands outside of the barrier supposedly erected by the Sage of the Six Paths eons ago. Only those with chakra could come and go as they pleased; those without, well, they were unlucky and were never seen from again. "It is said that the woman wields a weapon that throws slugs of metal at extreme distances and she had never been snuck up on."
"That sounds a lot like the Byakugan's abilities," Mito stated.
"It does. Those adept in using the Byakugan are able to see for kilometers ahead and near three hundred sixty degrees within a few dozen meters around them," Minato added.
The Pervert continued, "As for the man he is said to be just as skilled at ranged combat as his female counterpart, but his real expertise is in close quarters combat, primarily with a ninjato and another weapon that doesn't seem to translate over well, a handgun*. It is said that if you face him it would be better to start praying to whatever deity you believe in because you'll be facing them as soon as you finish. It is also stated that they excel in espionage and stealth missions."
"Where is he? Where's my baby boy?" Kushina asked while shaking the old sennin.
"'Baby boy' mother? He has to be at least twenty by now," Kasumi stated.
"That's where we hit a snag. He keeps moving. There are rumors of him being in a country called Iraq, another called Columbia, Brazil, the United States, Japan, the United Kingdom, and many more. As of this point, it is borderline impossible to pinpoint his location or where he lays his head," the old spymaster replied.
The room went dead silent. "If we can't find him, why not bring onii-chan to us?" Mito asked.
"What do you mean, sweetie?" Kushina asked.
"Well, you said that they'll do any job for the right payment, right?" The sennin nodded. "Then why not make them a contract with a hefty monetary incentive?"
"Why didn't I think of that?!" Jiraiya shouted.
"Probably because your nose is too deep inside your own smut to think clearly," Kasumi replied coldly.
"That settles it then. The first time we have an opportunity to make a job offer to these two, assuming they are Naruto and Hinata, then we'll present a job offer," Minato stated.
"I will have one of my contacts in the Outer Nations know to be ready to try to make contact with them. Once you have a job in mind, let me know," Jiraiya replied.
(Play "You Think I Ain't Worth A Dollar, But I'm a Millionaire")
"I just hope my baby boy is ok," Kushina prayed out loud.
"Onii-chan will be fine, what's the worst that could happen?" Mito asked. And everyone stared at the teen. "What?" Little did she know, she just jinxed a mission.
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Meanwhile with a certain man and woman…
Snow whipped around the man and woman as they sped along a snow and ice-filled valley. That and bullets.
"HOW THE FUCK DID THAT GO SIDEWAYS?" the male yelled over the wind and snowmobile engine.
"HOW THE FUCK SHOULD I KNOW?" the female yelled back as she fired a few rounds from her sidearm that hit three of their pursuers. "TREE!"
"I SEE IT." They swerved between trees as the mountain started to get steeper. "WE'VE GOT TWO COMING UP," he stated as one of the enemies chasing them smashed into a pine tree. "ECHO-419 WE ARE COMING IN HOT, YOU BETTER WARM UP THOSE ENGINES." A snowmobile pulled up along his right side and he pulled out his own sidearm and put a few rounds into the driver, causing both occupants to crash.
"Keep heading towards the current LZ, just be ready to do something insane," the woman on the other side replied.
They heard the trademark 'thump-thump' of rotors flying over them to see their Osprey heading towards the sheer cliff just ahead, the rear hatch starting to lower. "OH SHE IS NOT THINKING WHAT I THINK SHE'S THINKING!" the woman exclaimed.
"DO YOU REALLY WANT TO TAKE YOUR CHANCES WITH THEM?" the man asked aiming his gun at another enemy trying to get alongside them.
"IF WE DON'T MAKE THIS, WE'RE HAUNTING YOU FOR THE REST OF YOUR NATURAL BORN LIFE," the female shouted into the radio.
"Noted. Now hurry your asses up," came the reply. The VTOL set itself around a dozen yards away from the cliff face.
The duo raced down the hill, their pursuers still firing upon them. Soon the mountainside sloped into a steep incline. The man accelerated past the top speed the machine was originally intended for. He dodged rocks and more trees as he lined himself up with the cargo bay of the VTOL. "HANG ON TIGHT!" he yelled as the snow mobile launched off the cliff. As they moved closer the Osprey started moving further away to compensate for their speed. He stretched out his hand and yelled "Ninpo: Gurappurā wa kotchi ni Getto!*" A chain with a sharp spear point exited his hand, piercing the VTOL's hull. He then reeled in the chain pulling him and the woman inside of the cargo bay. He turned towards the cockpit, "Go!" The rear hatch closed. The duo breathed a sigh of relief as they removed their masks and goggles. "You alright, hime?" he asked.
"I'm fine Naruto, I just have a few bruises. You?" she asked.
"All good here, Hinata. You have the goods?" Naruto asked.
Hinata dug what looked to be a solid state drive out of her cargo pants pocket and showed it to him. "Yep. I think the American government will pay us quite handsomely for retrieving the hard drive of one of their satellites that landed in North Korean territory. Now I can finally get my hands on that Cheytec M-200 Intervention," she practically drooled just thinking about it.
Naruto snagged the drive from her hand, "OR the money could be used to pay off our mortgage."
"Tsch, such useless expenses."
"Well you love living in the house we're currently in, now don't you?" he asked teasingly. Placing his hand on her cheek he gave her a heated kiss, which after a few seconds had her wrapping her arms around her lover, keeping him in place.
They finally pulled away from each other, giving them a chance to breathe. Hinata's cheeks were blushing beet red. "Well I wouldn't miss the house as much as the nights we spend in it," she replied sultrily. "Nights that we can practically spend anywhere now that I think about it," she said as she placed her index finger over his lips while her other hand gripped her lover's 'package' softly. "Even here," she whispered into his ear before lightly nipping his earlobe.
Naruto had to fight against his hormonal urges to take the woman there and then inside the gunmetal gray interior of the Osprey and satisfy both of their urges. "While I would love to, hime," Naruto replied using Hinata's pet name. "I don't think our pilot would be too happy us doing the horizontal mambo in her plane."
"Damn straight I wouldn't!" a voice shouted from the cockpit. "While I don't mind you two getting it on without me, you're not doing it in my plane." The two lovers sweat dropped.
"Fine Fu, as soon as we land and get our payment we'll get a hotel room and we can all have a post-mission celebration. How does that sound?" Naruto asked.
"That sounds SO much better. Thank you," Fu replied with satisfaction. Her mind, on the other hand, was filling with all the perverted things that they could do in 'celebration' tonight.
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Many hours later at the US Embassy in Tokyo…
A Japanese man walked onto the Embassy's property. There were discretely armed guards patrolling and watching those walking past and those coming and going from the property. The man entered the embassy itself and walked up to the receptionist, a pretty young woman who could be an intern. "Can I help you, sir?" she asked in fluent, yet accented, Japanese.
"Yes, my name is Satoshi Sato and would it be possible to speak with the Ambassador?" the man replied.
The woman typed on her computer as she pulled up the visitor's log. "And the nature of your visit request?"
He leaned in after taking a quick look from side to side. "I have need of your government's assistance in finding a couple of individuals for a job."
She eyed the man with a suspicious gaze before finishing the submission. "I have inputted the request, please wait and I will call you when he becomes available."
An hour passed before the man was called into the Ambassador's office. He walked in and took a seat in front of the man's desk. The Ambassador reached forward and shook the man's hand before taking his own seat. "So Mr. Sato, how can I help you today?" the Ambassador asked.
"Mr. Ambassador, I am aware that in the past your government has hired a mercenary duo to do several jobs for them," Sato stated.
"I have no knowledge of these people," the ambassador replied honestly. "Even if I did, what would you want with them?"
"I would like to hire them on the behalf of an associate of mine."
"What for?"
"They did not specify their requirements of a task to me."
There was an uncomfortable silence that lofted in the room. The ambassador sighed, "I'll see what I can do, but I can't promise anything concrete."
Sato rose before shaking the man's hand again. "Thank you, Ambassador. My associates will be most pleased by this gesture."
To be continued?
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Translation notes:
Handgun – Now I do know that they do have firearms in the Naruto-verse, however, they are limited to rifles similarly used in the Renaissance period rather than our current auto-loading, self-contained munition firearms of today. Hence why "handgun" would be strange to them without actually looking at it. And the term "sniper" would probably only be recognized by the samurai in the Land of Iron as they do use bows.
Ninpo: Gurappurā wa kotchi ni Getto – Roughly translates over to "Ninja Art: Get Over Here Grappler." A technique that Naruto developed after seeing Mortal Kombat's Scorpion using a chain to pull his opponents towards him. He uses this technique with his Uzumaki bloodline's Chakra Chains. As they are adamantine they are harder than most metals and therefore slice through most metals and flesh of course.
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Well, that's all for this one. Now please note that the formatting is much different than what I've been doing in my more recent fics. This correlates to my initial note at the top of the chapter where this originally sat on my hard drive for close to a year and a half, that time was when I first really started using this site and contemplated writing fics for this site. This may not be my best work, but I did think that the plot idea was interesting enough to post.
If you'll notice there are a few references in the chapter itself. First is the mission that Naruto and Hinata are on, this references the mission "Cliffhanger" from Modern Warfare 2. The second is "Echo-419" which is a direct reference to the callsign used by a character in Red vs. Blue, one of my all-time favorite shows.
That being said, that pretty much wraps up this pilot idea. Let me know what you think about this one. I thought the plot idea was interesting, but again since this has been dormant for a long time I have no personal idea where I was going with this story.
Until next time!
