hey everyone, I'm still alive and I am still writing. I think the problem I've been having with the story so far is the justification between Batman, Bruce, Wayne and Myskia. let's face facts: Batman and Bruce Wayne have always been two separate people where Bruce Wayne was always the mask, Batman was the man. And I know Batman does have a third individual in his mind, "Zurr-En-Arrh" Batman.
Another issue I'm having is consolidating all the plot points I've been wanting to write and putting them in this part of the story. I'm currently debating whether to include the partial backstory of Selina Kyle and her sister. Yes, Catwoman has a sister.
What boils down to is that I've been focusing more on the high school DXD portion of the story and not enough on the DC. But there's so much of DC that I want to add that makes it hard to really compress it into the story. If I want to keep it strictly Justice League and Justice League Unlimited, it would make things easier, but it would make the story feel more shallow, which is why I'm including more comic book storylines in the story.
That said, I am trying to finish the entire story before I upload it at this point because there are a few things I want to go over, and I don't have anyone to really bounce these ideas off of because it's just me and a lot of my friends don't know anything about either medium.
Please continue to be patient as Chapter 5 will be coming out soon. I am moving some stuff around to make sense and I'm expanding on plot points from earlier in the story. Hopefully, things will make sense.
PWI signing off