Hey guys :(
Sorry I this sad post but this is not a good night right now. I just received another guest review by Brandon Marquez and it really hurt me inside.
Brandon Marquez, please listen. I don't want to argue or fight over this. I just want to make things right. Please let me explain.
In your review you said, "You've some real nerve, don't you? Talking to me like that on your stupid little authors note. You oughta be ashamed of yourself, public ally humiliating me like that, and treating me like some annoying little shit."
That wasn't my intention; I swear. I wasn't humiliating you and that wasn't the point I was trying to make.
"Just who do you think you are? Just because you don't like someone else's opinions and/or constructive criticism, does not give you the right to treat one like garbage. All I was trying to do was get you to respect and take my opinion to consideration, whether you liked it or not. I was not trying to annoying, and excuse me for not understand how works, I don't write stories on there, I only view them or review them. I was not trying to boss you around or make you see things my way. I was just trying to give you my honest opinion and I also was just trying to help whether you wanted it or not."
That is not true. I do take criticism and I don't mind others giving out their opinions. And I wasn't treating you like garbage; I wasn't. I never do that to authors or reviewers.
"Now, I loved most of your story, and I kept up to date with it until the very end. But I just didn't belive in that kind of punishment that you gave Diamond. Yes, I watch the show myself and I was glad to see her get her comeuppance, but it just killed me seeing Filthy lay his own hooves on his own daughter no matter, how much she misbehaved, Filthy would never do such a thing, yes he can be stern with her sometimes, and he tends to disapprove of her actions from time to time whenever he tends to be present but he isn't that type of father, not even having the decency to say, "This hurts me more than it hurts you." And I was trying to give what I thought should've also happened to DT, like having Dashie push a rain cloud on her like she did with the CMC, and also what I did was give you some constructive criticism for grammar and rephrasing certain parts like the Apple family not using their countryisms and southern grammar, and you leaving some major yet small plot points out, like how Rarity was the one who gave Sweetie Belle the idea to write stories about Ponyville,mans how she and the others except for Twilight liked the stories until they were about them, and how Cheerilee put too much trust in Diamond. So basically it's everyone's fault and one of the major problems of the episode was how it constantly shifted the blame from one to another."
I understand but let me clear a couple things up:
1. I didn't actually show the punishment, other than the CMC hearing it, so he could've said it to her before it began.
2. This was my 2nd MLP story and I don't always get everyones characteristics or mannerisms down but I try my best and not every story is perfect.
"Was it really that hard to just say, "I respect your opinion, Mr. Marquez, but I'm sticking with my own vision and I hope you understand." But noooo, you have to go and say my opinion doesn't matter, outright and directly insult me on the Internet and tell me to screw off. What the fuck is wrong with you? You need to learn to accept constructive criticism and others opinions and learn not to publicly humiliate others no matter how much you think you are in the right? You can take those hurtful, demeaning comments in that note and shove them up your Celestia-damned ass, where they belong and not in my face. I respect others opinions and if you just mentioned me anonymously and were polite about the situation I would've been more than happy to respect your opinion too and leave you alone."
I did not insult you and technically, I did not say "screw off". There is nothing wrong with me! I really didn't mean to sound mean or grouchy; I was just trying to get my feelings out. Guess...that was my stupid idea.
"Now you are going to take down that hurtful, grouchy, hate filled post about me and apologize for your obnoxious, childish behavior and maybe, just maybe I will leave you alone but if you refuse and continue to treat me like the butthurt nag you think I am when really you are, every waking moment for you will be nothing but a swirling torrent of hatred and regret. Because you need to learn how to treat people with opinions opposite to yours, no matter how persistent they seem, with a little bit more respect. And in the words of Princess Celestia herself, "You have a lot to think about.""
"Have a nice day"
I did, okay? I'm really sorry that what I said hurt you but I didn't treat you like a nag. I was trying to say my own opinion too but I didn't mean for it to get like this and I don't want anymore conflict between me or anyone.
I feel like I'm being treated like a bully here. I am not obnoxious or childish in anyway. And I do treat others with respect; I really do.
Everyone, I'm really sorry if I was rude in my last authors note. Guess what I really meant was that I take some criticism, but not always and being constantly criticized with the same thing all the time just well...doesn't settle with me. I'll try to be more considerate in the future, okay?
Now I feel really hurt. Now I know how Twilight Sparkle felt at the wedding...or Fluttershy when she couldn't help her friends in "Hurricane Fluttershy"...or Rainbow Dash when she was was threatened to be kicked out of the Wonderbolts...or Applejack when her family reunion became a disaster...or Rarity when that critic dismissed her dresses...or when Pinkie Pie thought her friends didn't like her anymore.
I don't know when I'll update my next story but that's not important right now. I'm not in the mood. :( I need to take a break for a while.
Anitoonz out.