Scarlet Justice - ep. 149
"Lilith's Ascent"
[Ritual, Part 7: Conclusion]


The season has changed.

Leaves, rich with colour, fall from trees and are kicked up into the cool air. The days of summer heat have dwindled to nothing, with people taking advantage of their last few weeks on patios to properly enjoy the outdoors.

With the arrival of autumn comes another event. My departure from the Hidden Leaf.

Fio will be staying at the hotel until the end of the month, as I've arranged. Then she will be heading out herself, to parts unknown.

Naruto has left the village with Jiraiya. Sasuke will be spending somewhere between a few months and a year with Itachi, travelling the world on their own path. Itachi will tell him everything about the Uchiha Clan, all of their secrets, their origins, everything he knows. And then Sasuke will return to the village at an appointed time, to learn about the Hidden Leaf, and how it came to be from the Hokage. The hope is that with both of these stories in his mind, he will finally find closure, and his place within the Leaf at last. Sakura will be continuing her training under Tsunade and Shizune. She has already become a skilled medic and is praised for her fortitude and technical ability.

Shino will be training with his father and clansmen. Along with that, Futaba will be sharpening her trade with his help. Kurenai plans to take leave as Team Eight ceases their operations over the break, to spend some extra time with Asuma. Hina and Shino will on occasion lead genin teams into the field, and team up with some of our old classmates. Ino will be getting weekly lessons from Tsunade and practising on her own, while at the same time taking courses to improve her information gathering abilities. This is on top of training her clan techniques, and training with the other members of her team. Choji and Shikamaru will also be training in their clan arts with their families.

Lee will be doing his usual things, like intense training with his master. Neji and Tenten have taken to training together more often – apparently the former is being considered for jounin already, based on his formidable skill. Hiashi mentioned in passing that he would be training Neji properly in the clan's hidden arts, along with Hina and Hanabi.

Team Nine had its last mission for a while the other day. Kiba has had some sort of flame lit under him and will be training more with Tsume, who is very pleased by the news. Hana, less so. Tomoko Kosugi, the fat-chested jounin-sensei, will be splitting time between teaching at the Academy and handling code work – both encryption and decryption. She's also set to lead a newly formed team that will handle electronic intelligence data. Erika will be doing more intelligence work of her own, going on missions to help with village security, and helping out with overflow at the Hokage's Office. Naturally, she's a genius when it comes to paperwork, too.

And Koichi...the boy known as Phantom the Dark. Well, he has his own things to take care of now.

"I must thank you for this gift, Shadow Mistress."

"Think nothing of it. I should thank you and Miss Kyouko for being so accommodating. Though I didn't know you wanted a little sister."

"It has been on my mind for an age now. This way it is easier on Mother...she now has a true protege she can pass her sacred techniques down to."

The local vendors are still selling hot snacks this time of year. Fitting enough. We decide to go with a sausage, grilled and wrapped in a fluffy bun. Indulgent, but oh so juicy and delicious all the same. Momma got us these when we went out to see baseball games. She did love to get carried away by the atmosphere, even if she didn't understand all the rules.

"A truly powerful meal from the west," Dark says after taking a bite.

"Indeed." I finish off my snack and make sure nothing has dripped onto my jacket. A couple of napkins come out of my pockets so that I can wipe my hands and mouth a bit. "So. I take it things are going well."

"Yuno has been a very good addition to the family. An interesting person, as well...her soul glows brightly, even among others."

"You did take to her right away, so that only makes sense."

"This is true. Eddie suggests checking her compatibility with the crow kingdom...but I feel she may be suited to another sort of animal instead. I haven't discerned which one as of yet."

"Doting on her already?" I say with a smile.

Dark finishes his sausage and dusts off his hands. I hand him a napkin and he takes it.

"But of course. It is the power of bonds that carries us from strength to strength. That aside, I have seen the dark designs of fiends that roam this village. Unfortunate, but not insurmountable. I will support Yuno from the shadows, and respond to her summons with the greatest speed." He looks at me. "Many have suffered alone in their youth. To bring that torment to a swift end is among the least of things we can do."

I nod with understanding. "Yes."

"I also would like to learn about the world. About the different peoples that inhabit it. My feast of the world's dark essence will continue unabated, but alongside that, I will continually thirst for knowledge. Er...that said."

I look at him curiously. "Hm?"

He grimaces. "There are some things...better left to the unknown abyss."

I tilt my head to one side.

"The other day, Mother implored me to reevaluate my relationship with Kosugi-sensei."

"You told her?"

"Not...exactly." He scratches at his head. "Although I think she had her suspicions over the past few months. But I did properly consult with Rika. She gave me an unshackled opinion over tea."

"Ah." That would do it.

"After that, I had a long conversation with Kosugi-sensei, also over tea. She was upset at first, but...eventually came to an understanding. We remain on good terms, and she has decided to focus on her work. And she also...considered seeking professional help. I suspect she had parental issues in the past, and her...hm..."

"Guidance," I suggest.

"Yes. Continued guidance of me may have been a result of overcompensation. Suffice it to say, that has come to an end now."

"Good for you. Both of you, I mean."

"Thank you. Rika is happy as well."

"She would be, yes. What do you plan to do with your free time?"

"Yuno requests my assistance regarding various experiments. Along with my regular duties, I will make time for her."

"Have you thought about studying chakra yourself?" I ask.

He puts a hand under his chin. "Hmm...research into the dark arts? Secrets of life force, and the potential of the human spirit...yes. It does sound fascinating. Yuno received guidance from the White Queen, and we have met a few times before. I can ask for an audience with her in the future."

White Queen...right. That's Nami. Well, she finds the boy fascinating enough. It won't be an issue for her to help.

"I leave Yuno in your capable hands. You, along with Miss Kyouko and Sir Suneater will make a fine set of guardians. I look forward to seeing her blossom upon my return."

"Yes, of course. Your will shall be done, O Crimson Nightmare."

"Very good." We shake hands firmly.

"I did come upon something shocking the other day."

"Did you?"

"The Dark Hand has gained a bride," he says with wonder.

"Is it that surprising?"

"What's surprising is that he only has one woman by his side."

I blink. "Huh?"

"Perhaps that one is using a barrier or curse to keep the others at bay...for I have no idea how any woman can resist his mysterious aura. If only I could emulate such a thing."

"..."

The more I think I understand about this boy, the less I actually do understand.


And finally, the day arrives.


I wash up and get into that familiar outfit, the one that has served me so well and makes me recognizable through the Leaf. Black almost all the way over with striking red highlights, like the zipper teeth and the cuffs around my wrists. My fingers pull at the black socks on my thighs to make sure they sit right.

The diamond chain from my big sisters, and Hina's bracelet around my ankle. Along with the little essentials, I have practically everything that I need. I certainly won't be short of supplies while I'm with Midori and Luna, and so I don't need to pack anything. A few nostalgic pieces of clothing are being kept safe...but everything else in good condition has been given away.

"I'm not just leaving the nest this time, am I...this is my home. And I'll be back again one day soon," I say to my reflection.

I also know that if I stay too much longer, I'll never end up leaving...there's so much to do and adjust that I could spend years tending to it on my own. But right now, personal development has to come first. And the greatest gains will be made at my brilliant sister's side. A new level of being, one that I need to visit the sacred cave to reach.

"Time to go."

I fix my hair one last time and leave the hotel room, then the hotel altogether. Through the streets of the Leaf and towards the main gate.

Not just Luna and Midori, but a whole lot of people are waiting for me.

"We'll let everyone see you off. We do have one last stop to make after this," Midori says, smiling behind her fan.

"Yes. Thank you, Ane-ue."

"Ufufu...think little of it, my love. Take as much time as you need."

"Take care of yourself, kiddo." Tsunade gives me a big hug and pats my head. "You'll shoot up a couple of inches for sure. That'll put the world on notice, eh?"

"Thank you. Your guidance has been a great blessing."

She smiles and nods.

"I know you'll do great these next few years. You've always been a brilliant learner," Iruka says to me.

"Thank you, Iruka." I jump up and give him a hug.

"A little much, eh?" he says with a smile.

"A little. Thank you for everything...your kindness will not go to waste, just as I promised."

He nods and sets me down gently.

Imari and Tamaki both smother me in a hug soon after.

"Take care, Lili!"

"Yes, take care of yourself."

"Thank you for this, all of this. You've changed my life, and senpai's. We're honoured to have been able to work with you so closely," Imari says.

"And we're looking forward to doing so again in the future," Tamaki adds. "You just let us lay the groundwork here, and then you can race ahead at whatever speed you like."

"Thank you both. I'll be ready to go when I get back, so your hard work won't be wasted."

They both smile and give me a thumb up.

"Like everyone said, you take care now. You've done so much for us, Lili...come back safe and healthy." Ino hugs me tightly.

"I promise, Ino."

"And Lili always keeps her promises." She gives me a wink. "Do your thing like always. I'll be thinking of you."

"I wish you success in your endeavours, Lili. Our dream of revolution is not far away...for your formidable strength will be able to move mountains." Erika gives me a hug.

"Thank you, Erika."

"Of course. I will be working hard to match your pace. You will never have to face the darkness alone...that is what it means to be a friend. Just as you taught me," she says with a smile.

"Yes. Don't work too hard, now."

"This I promise."

"Nothing much to say that hasn't been said..." Kurenai hugs me and puts a hand on my head. "Be safe out there, Lili."

"Of course, nee-san. Thank you for looking out for me."

"Never a problem. I'll be here, no matter how much you grow."

"Boss. Good luck," Shino says.

"Thank you, Shino." I hug him tightly.

"I'll do what I can to advance your goals while you're away. Why? Because I believe in you, and I believe that you will change the world one day soon. My role is to help you get there."

"Yes. I'll be counting on you."

"Got it."

"Lili-nee, be safe!" Hanabi says to me.

"I will, Hanabi." I lift her up and hug her tightly.

"I'll work hard, just like you taught me to. Thanks so much for looking after me and onee-sama."

"It was my pleasure, love. I'm looking forward to the next time we meet. Make sure to eat and play well, okay?"

"Okay." I set her down and pat her head.

"Lili...good luck. Come back to us soon," Hina says with a smile.

"I will, Hina." We hug each other tightly, not wanting to let go. As we separate, we exchange kisses on the cheeks.

"I'll be working hard on this side...and I know that you'll rise to even greater heights where you are. Keep going for all of us. More than anything...I want to see you reach as high as you can, for everyone's sake."

"You'll be right by my side, of course."

"Always. You've given me too much for me to be anywhere else."

"I wish you well on your new journey, Miss Kobayashi," Hiruzen says, smoking on his pipe as usual.

"Thank you, my lord." I hug him, and his soft hand rests on my head.

"I await the day you ascend to this lofty throne in the sky...for you will have a much grander vision than I or my masters could ever dream of. I have raised many children to succeed me, but you by far are the most radiant."

"I swear I will not fail you, oyaji. It will take a while after this, but..."

"Yes. With you as my elegant blade, I will be more than safe until the promised time."

"I'm happy."

And last, but certainly not least.

Fio approaches me through the middle of our gathering. We raise our hands at the same time and press them together, fingers meshing with one another. My eyes look into hers, and hers into mine.

There aren't any words we need to say out loud.

Our eyes slide closed at the same time, and we bring ourselves closer. Our lips meet, in a soft, short, meaningful kiss. Every emotion and feeling, every longing...passed between us, in a single moment.

A peaceful, loving goodbye. Until the moment we meet again, as true adults in this world.

We separate, slowly. As our fingertips leave one another, I can still feel her warmth.

I cross the entrance to the Leaf, standing between Luna and Midori. A summoning circle forms beneath our feet.

"My precious family in the Leaf...thank you."

I smile for them, bright and proud.

"Thank you for believing in me. I love you all."


My eyes open in the next moment to a lush garden, the scent of flowers reaching my nose. So many complex, invigorating notes.

Instantly recognizable. The Kobayashi Mansion at Inaho.

One of the maids has already left to inform Emi and Touka that we are here.

This is the second last stop...because there is one person I hold as more precious than anyone else. More than anyone in the Leaf. In the same way that Itachi would tear the world asunder for Sasuke...I would bring ruin to the entire universe for Rose.

"How lovely. I get to see you one last time before you disappear for a few years."

Emi hikes up her dress to meet me, and we share a warm hug. Her hand gently strokes my head.

"I am very proud of you, Lili. You've grown so much, as a kunoichi and as a woman. I'm excited to see what heights you can reach next...so take care of yourself. Remember that your sisters are always there to help."

"I will, Mama. Thank you for loving me the way you do."

"You've earned that and so much more."

She gives me one last squeeze before letting go.

"Madam Emi and Lady Rose will be in the greatest care. I would perish of shame if I gave them anything less than my best," Touka says to me, hand over her heart. "I humbly ask for your faith, Lady Lilith."

"You have my blessing, Touka. Take care of them as only you can."

"Yes. You have my word, milady."

"And here...is the person you've been waiting to see most." Emi lifts Rose from the basket Touka his holding, and gives her to me. Wrapped up in a warm blanket, her tiny hand reaches for my finger as always. I feel her grab on, and also feel that the urgency from the nights we first were together is gone.

She knows and understands what I must do.

"You are the most important person in the universe," I say to her. "And so, you will be the last person I touch before leaving this realm...and the first person I will touch upon my return. So it shall be."

"Aa."

"Grow in wisdom and strength, my beloved. Just as I will on the other side of this world. I will be thinking of you, and praying for your health and safety. Reach towards greatness, Rosemary. Become the most splendid daughter of Kobayashi House."

I kiss her gently on the forehead, and she looks into my eyes with understanding. Her fingers release their grip from around mine. I return her to Mama, and then go back to my place between Luna and Midori once more. The summoning circle appears beneath our feet, glowing with white light.

"Ladies. Until the next," I say confidently.

"Until the next," they say in unison.


"The first part of your journey begins here."

I follow Midori through the dark caves, with Luna behind me. We move further and further from the light until there is nothing to see by.

Navigation in these places is trivial for us, however.

Only those with the necessary ability can find the sacred space within Ryuuchi Cave and travel through it. As for the other tests...

"Midori, are you sure this is okay?"

"The fossil can't say anything if I bring Lili directly to her. Those trials are just a waste of time," she says to Luna. "Lili would sniff this passage out either way."

"The signals are strong, yes," I say.

"So said, so done."

We enter a giant, seemingly empty room. But there is...a power of sorts, rippling through the air. An energy. It's not chakra...or at least, not normal chakra.

"I see. So this is also sage power," I conclude.

"Identifying it right away? Seems that we have another cheeky one..."

Torches light up on the walls, immediately illuminating the room. As my eyes adjust to the light, I see the being in front of me for the first time. They're just as big as I imagined.

An extremely large white snake many times the size of a human man, coiled upon an elegantly decorated throne. Her body far surpasses the length of Manda, with at least two gold bands around it at the top, and I can see that she has been in this cave for so long that parts of her body have merged with the ground as she grew. Her head has a black wrap on top of it, with two pointed edges and a red orb on the front, and an orange headdress on the back. A green orb attached to a chain hangs around her neck; it's hard to make out, but the character for venom is within it. And the smoke that lingers in this area comes from her massive cigarette, kept neatly in place by a fancy golden holder.

"This is the White Snake Sage, Lili. My ancestor, and the great leader of the serpent world who guides it from afar. The mother to all those in this great kingdom, and mistress of the great and powerful Sage Arts."

"Hoh. So you've learned to show some deference for once. Good for you, little one."

Midori sighs. "This is why I don't put up with your shit."

"M-Midori...?"

"Luna, relax. This old snake isn't going to do a goddamn thing to us. Isn't that right, baa-chan?"

"You really are an unruly child, Midoriko."

"Tch. I cleaned up your little issue with Manda, so don't you start sassing me, yeah?" She sighs. "You always throw me for a loop like this, baa-chan. Be nice for once. Please? My little sister wants to move up a level in the world."

"Hehehe. Come, now. You remember where you got your attitude from in the first place, don't you?"

Midori chuckles and shakes her head. "How could I forget? Well, I should have said this first off, but it's good seeing you again. How are the offerings recently? I see you're enjoying one right now."

"Hm. Passable, I suppose."

"Not what I like to hear."

"The blend has changed, somehow."

"Ooh, that's not right. I'll have something nicer made for you by next week."

"Lovely. Now...this was the imouto you were speaking of, yes? Certainly a fiery thing...I can feel her energy, and it is not only vast, but active. A flow that is certainly otherworldly," the Sage says.

"She has grasped a heavenly strength, baa-chan. The plains of heaven are visible to her," Midori explains.

"Is that so...it means that you have even surpassed the Namikaze child, a student of the toads. Well...I always did relish the chance to get one over on them. Now I should be able to boast of two superior students, hmhm."

"Baa-sama, do you think that I am worthy?" I ask.

"More than worthy, my child. With your strength alone, you can work miracles in this world we inhabit. And with the power that will come unto you...you will be able to reshape the world in your image. The Sage of Six Paths boasted power that shook the world to its core. His teachings and ideology were not truly absorbed by humans, and the peace he sought to maintain went to ruin. But if you merely focus your strength..."

"Baa-sama..."

"Yes. I do mean this, little one. Your existence can be one that surpasses the Sage of Six Paths. The man called Hagoromo Ootsutsuki."

"Hagoromo Ootsutsuki," I repeat.

"The endorsement of endorsements," Midori says with a bright smile. "But you are Lili, after all."

"Thank you, Midori-nee."

"But before I start the ritual...there is one thing that I need from you, little one."

"What is it, baa-sama?" I ask.

"I want you...to tell me your name," she says, lips curling into a playful smile.

I look up at her and smile back. My right hand lands with a thump over my heart.


"I am the World Serpent, who will crush this world within her jaws.

I am Bushin, the great goddess of war and battle.

I am an elite of the Hidden Leaf Village, their great hope, their sword of justice.

I am the most terrifying soldier, the avatar of destruction, the woman called the Crimson Nightmare.

I am the blessed child who has danced on the heavenly plain, a princess of the stars, a precious envoy of God.

I am a beloved daughter.

I am a precious sister.

I am a trusted friend.

I am, in all worlds, the Scarlet Viper of legend."


"My name is Lilith Caroline Kobayashi!"


Scarlet Justice, Phase 1: end.


a/n: So here we are, at the end. I can confidently say that there will be more, in the future.

I hope that this can be enjoyed as a complete book on its own, though. It's good that I could finish this much of the story in the first place. I'll make an attempt to go back over earlier parts and try to make sure that things are in line, but I don't know how far I'll get with that. I'll figure it out, and if I don't then I'm just writing a long fan work on the internet. It's fine, ultimately.

In order to keep this easy to read as a complete work, I will continue to use this thread for Phase 2, known normally as the Shippuden side. So if you're still interested in where this goes, you can keep your alerts on here. New content and characters will appear, surely. As for expectations on how things will read, the changes in front of your eyes won't be too drastic, but with the original plot threads moved around so much by now, the next phase will likely feel a lot looser as you read it. It's something you'll see as you read, I think. I'm glad that I've been able to write and have so many people enjoy it, and also that I've managed to surpass my own expectations of how things would come out since this is by far the biggest project I've done in a while. The commentary and support has been pretty cool, and I appreciate it. So that's all for the first part of Lili's story, an alternative take on the Naruto universe. I wouldn't do it if I didn't love it.

Thank you for all of your support, I hope you enjoyed the read, and I'll see you soon.


coming up: Scarlet Justice, Phase 2: Full Blossom