Hello guys!
So, I know I finished this story already and I have other stories to update, which I will update...soon.
I just wanted to re-write the story. I won't change the plot or anything. I'll just correct the spelling and grammar mistakes and maybe add more lines somewhere. But, knowing me, there will probably be more mistakes so I apologize for that and you can write it in review if there are still some mistakes.
Enjoy! :))
CHAPTER 1: Realizing their feelings
One sunny day Tyson, Kenny, Max, Ray and Kai stood in front of Tyson's dojo waiting for Hilary.
˝Where is she already? She's late.˝ Tyson was complaining. Ray looked at him suspiciously. And so did Kai.
˝Calm down Ty, she'll be here. She must be late because she has those girls things to do.˝ Max answered to Tyson's question just to calm him down.
˝And what are those girls things she might do Maxie?˝ Ray teased Max.
˝I don't know. Maybe make-up or she's picking clothes to wear or some other things that girls do.˝ Max answered smiling.
˝And what if something happened to her. Let's go look for her.˝
Tyson started running towards the doors when Kai pulled him back. ˝Dude, calm down. She'll be here. And stop worrying too much.˝
˝So, Ty, Buddy. Can I ask you a question?˝
˝Sure Maxi, what is it?˝ While Max was asking Tyson that question Kenny was on his laptop analyzing some data, Ray was drinking soda and Kai was just standing there thinking:
´Wonder what stupid question are you going to ask now Maxi.´ Kai thought. And when they heard what Max asked…
˝Are you in love with someone Tyson?˝
˝Whaaaat?˝ Kenny accidentally dropped his laptop, Ray almost choked on his soda and Kai just watched Max and Tyson thinking. ´Whoww. I didn't see that one coming.´
˝Wh…wha….whaa…..what? Wh…why are you a..a…asking m…me th….that?˝ Tyson asked nervously while Ray was looking at him.
˝Just wondering.˝ Max said cheerfully.
˝Hhahahhahhahhahhahah!˝ Kenny laughed.
˝What's so funny Chief?˝ Ray asked.
˝Nothing. Just, I can't imagine Tyson being in love and having a girlfriend.˝
˝And why's that? You think I can't win over a girl?˝ Tyson said crossing his arms and looking at Kenny.
˝No, it's not that. You just don't look like a guy that falls in love.˝
˝Oh, really?˝ Tyson moved his arms on his waist.
˝So you are in love with someone?˝ Kenny asked.
˝NO! I'm not in love!˝ Tyson snapped.
´Say what you want Ty but buddy you can't hide that from me.´ Ray thought as he smiled. Kai saw him and suspected that he realized it too. ˝Ty, come on just admit it. You're different now.˝ Max added.
˝What are you talking about Max? I'm the same guy I've always been.˝
˝No, you're not. Maxi is right.˝ Ray said.
˝Oh, Ray not you too!˝
˝Ty we can see you've been acting differently for a while now just admit it. You're in love.˝
˝Nooo, I'm not in love.˝
˝Yeah, you are. And I know who is it!˝
˝No, you don't because I'm not in love!˝
˝Of course who else would talk that loud, huh, Tyson?˝ Hilary entered the dojo. Everyone turned towards her.
˝HILARY!˝ Tyson jumped and smiled at Hilary.
˝Hil, where were you we were so worried!˝ Tyson asked worriedly.
˝Actually, he was the only one who was worried.˝ Ray said standing behind Tyson.
˝Really?˝ Hilary asked and blushed.
˝Hil, why are you blushing?˝ Max asked looking at her.
˝I..I'm not blushing.˝
˝Yeah, you are.˝ Kai said knowing the reason to why is she blushing.
˝Yeah, you must be in love too. And it's Tyson! And Hil must be the one Tyson's in love with!˝ Max said happily.
˝WHAAATT?!˝ Tyson and Hilary shouted at the same time and started blushing.
´Oh come on you guys, just admit it.´ Ray thought while watching Tyson and Hilary who were blushing.
˝Max please just stop with that nonsense.˝
˝Kay but I'm right and you and Hil and those three know it. You just don't wanna admit it.˝
´Oh my God. I can't belive, was it that obvious?´ Hilary thought. ˝Umm.. guys I have to go home. See you tomorrow. Bye.˝ Hilary ran towards the door waving at the boys and thinking about Tyson.
˝B..but Hil you just got here! Don't….. leave.˝ Tyson said sadly watching her run home.
´Uhh.. why do I feel so weird. Like… like… Oh my God…Am I really in love…with Hilary, but….but I can't, she's my best friend. She…I….no…no I can't. That could ruin our friendship.´ Tyson thought about Hilary with worried face on.
Kai was just standing there and watching everyone. ´Hn, Tyson you idiot, looks like you finally realized. Took you long enough´
Kenny was really confused. He never thought that Tyson and Hilary could have feelings for each other, that was probably because they fought all the time and he always saw them as a brother and sister. Max was looking at Tyson wondering ´I should probably apologize to Ty and Hil.´
Max walked over to Tyson. ˝Ty, bud, I'm really really sorry.˝
˝Why are you apologizing Maxi?˝
˝Well I pressured you and Hilary about whole being in love thing and I'm really sorry.˝ Max said nervously while Tyson patted his back.
˝Don't worry Maxie. It'll be fine. Actually I should be thanking you for helping me realize some things.˝ Tyson said it to Max smiling and Max smiled back at him. Ray, Kai and Kenny watched them. Ray thought ´I hope Hilary is ok.´ He looked worried. Kai noticed that.
˝Oh my. I don't know how will I ever be able to be near Tyson ever again. Is he feeling the same way? Hmm…? Maybe I could ask Ray, Max, Kai or Chief.˝ Hilary talked to herself.
