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custody sequal and result is
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Bapi - purvi kaha sahi ha kaha galat usse kya saza mile gi sab story mein hoga
Aish5 - i will be doing this in next update (but purab will have priority towards abhi)
Guest - climax will be in few chapter don't worry i know lamba kheechliya mene but i want to show ki purvi care karti ha abhi ki bus galati yeh ha ki priority bacho ki hoti ha.
Abhi was siting he closed his eyes and remember
In way
Daya - dcp sir itni raat gaye hum teeno ko kyu bulaya
Abhi - pakka naya tension laya hoga
Acp - sahi kaha mujhe bhi yehi lagya ha uska koi bharosa nahi kab ek unatural bomb fenk de
Daya - sahi mein last time purvi ka blast kiya tha na esse boom !!
(daya and acp started laughing )
Acp - jiski keemat 10 saal se abhi chuka raha ha
Abhi - daya !! or sir kya app iske sath milgaye
Daya - hogaya purvi bhagat shuru
Abhi - purvi bhagat hu mein ? toh tum kya karte ho ?
Daya - mein kaha shreya se darta hu jitna tum darte ho vese abhi tum na pagal ho biwi se datte ho
Abhi - acha
Daya - ha biwiyo ka kaam ha ghar akar dinner banana pati ki seva karna shreya toh mere sonne se pehle soti nahi
Voice - vo toh stumhare sonne ke baad bhi nahi sotti mein
Daya realized and saw
abhi had shreya call with a naughty smile daya looked at acp who was controlling by looking outside
Shreya - daya meri peeth peeche kya tarif kar rahe the or kya tum mujhse darte nahi ho...
Daya - b..b..baby mein toh bus mazak kar raha tha or darta kaha hu mein vo tumhari respect karta hu
Shreya - raat ko panni khud garam karlena bartan dhone ke liye
(and she cut the call )
Abhi started laughing
Daya - yeh galat tha
soon he stop the car stop trio got down and went
on otherside
Acp - sir itni der gaye hum bulane ka maksad kya ha
Dcp - ek badi warning
Daya - warning kesi warning ?
Dcp - khabar mili ha ki tumhari team mein se Koi essa insan shamil ha jo child trafflicking kar raha ha bacho ko videsh behj kar unhe bech dete ha slaving ke liye
Acp - sorry sir but humare department mein koi nahi ha
Daya - ha sir humare yaha pechle 10 saal se staff same ha hume pata ha unka ache se
Dcp - mene CID department ki baat ki ha Cid delhi se bhi kuch Log nikale ha isi kiye satark rahi samjhe or ha yeh baat charo ke beech se nikal na nahi (to abhi) or CIB ko bhi batane ki koshish maat karna... kyuki abhi recent complain mili ha bachi ke gayab hone ki esse shak haa ki hum mein se koi mila hua ha
At present
Abhi came out with thought
Voice - abhi
Abhi looked at purvi who came and gave him a glass he saw the turmeric milk
Purvi - mana ki dil par lagge zakham nahi theek karsakta lekin thoda relax feel karo ge bhook lagi ha toh bata do mein mangwa deti hu
Abhi - bacho ne dinner kiya kua
Purvi - iss hal mein kisne kiya honga
Abhi - aisha dikhi nahi
Purvi - bhaiya bhabhi ke ghar chodh ai hu mein
Abhi - atleast usse toh ghar rakho
Purvi came sit near him
Purvi - divorce ki baat ki thi kya tumne ?
Abhi - shaadi bacho ke karan hui thi ansha ke karan uski custody ke karan ab ansha hi chale hae gi uski custody chale jae gi toh shaadi kaha rahe gi
Purvi - ansha se rishta tute ga toh kya hun sabke sath rishta todh do ge abhi..
Abhi looked
Purvi - biwi hu mein tumhari pyar ka rishta ha ha ek bachi ha humari
Abhi took a deep breath and hold head
Purvi - tum aisha ke karan ruke hue ho kabhi tumne mujhe agge kiya ha kya priorities mein...humesha bache yeh bache vo ha
Abhi - toh kya chahti ho tum purvi ... mujhe pareshan ho chuka hu puri tarha se jis tarhaa se insult hui haina meri
purab and ansha entered and saw
Abhi - (angrily) humesha insult , areh baacho ka nokar bana kar lai ho ki baap...or priorities dekar tumhare bache ko konsa meri izzat badh gayi unki nazro mein
Purvi - abhi dekho tum jo kar rahe ho vo duty hai tumhari or bacho se kya return chahiye tumhe parents duty haa humari
Abhi - parents duty ... parents ki yeh bhi duty ha ki apne bacho ko sahi raste par lae puri mein sabashi dene waqt hath uthata hu tab kyu nahi mujhe andar karwaya
(purab looked at ansha who down her head)
Abhi - ajj ek baap ke hakk se mene hath uthaya...kyuki hadd par hogayi. purvi meri bato ka kya matlab nahi ha ghar par koi value nahi kya mere words ka mere oppinion ka
Purvi - essa nahi ha abhi aisha decision lette ho tum
Abhi - or purab or ansha kya mere bache nahi ?
Purvi - abhi unhe mein tumse zayada janti hu..
Abhi - lekin purab toh humesha vikram ke sath raha ha
Purvi - (irritate ) maa hu unki rag se rag se wakfit hu mein
Abhi - toh custody papers par sign mere bhi the purvi baap mein bhi hu mujhe bhi hakk do decision ka
Purvi - (irritate ) had karte ho tum decision lena ha bache ho kya jo chocolate ki zid kar rahe ho decision decision ek hi batt ki rat lagae hue ho .. areh independent ha ab vo purab is above 18 tumhari custody ka impact nahi ek sal ki baat ha ansha bhi custody ke rules se bahar hojae gi...bache ha life enjoy karne do bediya thodi na bandh de ge ..
(purab looked at ansha with tears ansha was just seeing the fight purab notice no emotion ansha just left place )
Abhi - toh mein bhi bacha nahi hu purvi mere kapde tak decision tum leti ho
Purvi - thats an indicator of love and affection abhi mujhe pata ha shaadi se pehle sapne kese the mere kesa husband chahiye kessi family ho mene family sambhali ha mein family grow kar chuki hu i know how to run a family how to understand the members how to talk how to intract how to deal
Abhi - (angrily) i am also the part of the same family ms.purvi and as a member i am a proof that you are not a right person to run a family. tumhe kya hi bolu mein second hand lady ( purvi and purab shock to hear that) tumhari toh adat ban chuki ha areh ek bar galati ki ha tab bhi akal thikane nahi ai kya...and what family yeh family bolti ho tumhari beti baap ko jail karwa rahi ha...ek pati nokar ki kami puri karta ha or ek patni jo bus aram se malikin tarha order deti ha na karo toh gussa jhagde nakhre or kya mere sapne nahi the shaadi se pehle mera bhi sapna fresh love ka honne ka kisi first priority banne ka samjhi. tum jessi second hand divorced jhagdalu selfish aurat se nahi acha ha jo vikram tumhe chodh gaya kyuki tum layak hi ho (he joined his hand) and please now mujhe bhi mukti do galati hogi ki mein ansha se attract hokar apni beti mann betha na hi mein sari zindagi is bewakoof family third class character and heart less aurat ke sari zindagi bandh tha acha ha ansha agar vikram ko chunne gi atleast tumhe divorce dene bhi mein bhi asani hogi
Purvi - abhi
Voice - maa papa
Abhivi looked purab arrived
Purab - app log jhagda matt kariye aram karlijiye kal mera first day ha mein kushi se chahta hu app logo ke sath please papa please mumma..
Abhi became silent
Abhi - bolo toh chup raho fir kehte ha kuch bolte nahi mein jaa raha hu ansha mera matlab aisha ke room kamse kam waha toh apna pan mile ga
And he left
Purvi - (low tine ) purab jao tumhara first day haina
Purab - maa vo matlab vo papa kafi gusse mein
Purvi - (cutting) beta jao so jao
Purab down head and ..purvi remembered
tum jesi second hand jhagdalu aurat
acha ha tumhe vikram chodh gaya
mere bhi sapne the fresh love and first priority ka purvi
purvi clear the tears from eyes corner and took a deep breath
on otherside
Abhi was sitting and remembering
Second hand jhagdalu aurat
third class
suddenly he started snezzing
Abhi - mana apni baat rakhni thi lekin usse yeh (he sneezed again) sab
he rubbed his nose with tissue and lied taking quilt
Abhi - uff thand lag rahi ha
he slept down peacefully
Next day
Voice - papa ... papa kaha ho papa jaldi aoo bhook lagi ha
purab in hall and sat on dinning table
Purab - uff ajj toh jam kar khau ga (he join hand) hey bhagwaan please naya din ha or mere liye special bhi..
Purab saw purvi coming down wearing top and coat and ready for beuro
Purab - good morning mom
Purvi - morning
suddenly door bell rang Purab went and open the door
Lady - ansha ka ghar ha kya yeh
Purab - ji
Lady - women association seema name ha mujhe nigrani ke liye bola ha jab tak custody ka matter solve na hojae
Purab took a deep breath
Purab - aiye
Seema entered and saw purvi
Purab - maa ansha ke mehman ae ha ..
Purvi understood
Purvi - usse utha do or abhijeet ko kehdo ki nashta ready ha toh le ae beuro ke liye der ho raha ha
Purab nodded and went in kitchen
In kitchen
Purab - enter papa maaa bol rahi ha ki
but he saw kitchen empty yeh kya kitchen mein toh kuch nahi ha
And he went out
in hall
Purab - maa papa kitchen mein nahi ha
Purvi shock
Purvi - wahi toh hota abhi or kaha jata ha
Purab - maa nahi ha sachme
Purvi - toh gaya kya
Seema - aksar jab ese ilzam lagte ha toh log chale jatte ha
Purvi - app please shant rahi ha (to purab ) shayad aisha ke room mein hoga raat ko wahi tha
purab and purvi went
in room
Abhi was sleeping purvi entered
Purvi - dekha janab so rahr ha beuro ka time ho raha ha yeh bhi nahi pata
purab went near abhi and waked up
Purab - papa uthiye papa
Abhi waked up and saw purab
Abhi - kya hua
Purvi - abhi manna ki naraz ho lekin zimedari toh nibhao majboor hum bhi ha agar ghar mein maid hoti toh nahi utha te
Abhi sneezed again he got up holding head
Abhi - ab kya kiya ha mene
he sneezed again purvi shocked she went near abhi and checked
Purvi - tum toh kanp rahe ho (to purab ) foren thermometer lao
purab went
Purvi - (tensed) theek ho tum
Abhi - thand lag rahi ha
Purvi - tumhari tabiyat sahi nahi ha tum aram karo mein sir se baat karlu gi
abhi was about to fall when purvi hold and made him lied she took his hand and rubbed
Purvi - (tensed) abhi dhyan se
Abhi - sar ghum raha ha yarr
seema entered in room and saw purab arrived
Purab - maa yeh lijiye
Purvi - purab pani lao abhi ka bukhar sachme tez ha. ..
Purab nodded and went purvi put thermometer in mouth ansha entered
Seema - kya mein check kar sakti hu
Purvi - app kyu kare gi
Seema - dekhiye meri duty ha kahi yeh drama na kar rahe ho
Purvi - (angrily) shonk nahi ha usse drama karne ka samjhe (looking at ansha) jinko shonk
ha unki natak mandli mein duniya shamil hojati ha
Ansha made irritate face