So I'm figuring this out along the way. Has a similar feel right now, but trying to throw in a twist.

Chapter 2

The receptionist just missed the elevator. "I'm sorry Mr. Grey, she left her coat. She trembled, almost afraid of what he might say or do. Christian gripped her coat and hit the elevator button. When he got down she was gone.

Ana didn't even miss her coat, she was so hot, she welcomed the cold air. Christian returned quickly. He smiled and said thanks for trying. He went back to his office and called Taylor to find her information. He saw she was a student in English Lit as she said. She worked at a hardware store. Her dad lived in the country and her mother remarried for the third time. "Why did you cancel the meeting?" What happened with Elena?"

Christian looked up at Ros. "It was fine. Listen, I have to go to WSUV. I have to check on some things for graduation. Can you take care of things here?" Ros looked a little suspicious. "I also need some time away. I need to think." Ros agreed. Christian left for the day and Ros made a phone call.

Christian walked into his penthouse at Escala. It was just one of his many investments. He owned the building. "Taylor, we're going to WSUV tonight." Taylor nodded.

Christian turned to go to his office. "What's up Chris? Where did you say we were going?" Christian sat and looked at his big brother. Elliot was adopted too, just like their younger sister Mia. Carrick and Grace couldn't have their own children. Elliot was different from Christian but they shared one common thing. "Ros told me you handed Elena her ass finally."

Christian shook his head, he should have known Ros called him. Christian was weaker than Elliot. Elena fucked him to, but she never beat him. "It was time. Are we wrong for keeping this from mom?" He looked at Elliot, they both knew the answer. "I'm going to the university to check on some things." Elliot held up his bag and Christian rolled his eyes. "Fine, come along."

Christian heard his phone on the way out. "Christian Grey." He listened to a familiar voice. It was Ana asking about her jacket. He had meant to call her. "Actually, I'll be in town, going over some business. I was bringing it to you." He could hear a voice in the background asking about a photo. "Who wants a photo of me?" Ana's voice was so cute. Kate was wanting one for the article. "Of course." He gave her a hotel name and time. "I'll see then."

They got into the car and Christian confided in his big brother. "What's going on?" Elliot hit his arm. "Chris, you've never spoken to a woman like that." He knew of his women and he wanted more for his brother. "My baby bro is in love."

Christian shrugged. "Well, when she finds out that all I want to do is beat her and fuck her, we'll see about love." Elliot sighed. He should have protected him, but he was wild and couldn't see past the women.

They checked into the hotel. Christian found the perfect gray suit that matched his eyes. He walked out and met his brother. Elliot saw a man with a camera and two beautiful girls, a brunette and a strawberry blonde. "So I know who you're looking at." Christian never took his eyes off of her.

Christian walked forward. "Miss Steele, your coat." He turned to Kate. "Miss Kavanagh, pleasure. They introduced Jose. He would take the pictures. Christian remembered he wasn't alone. "This is my brother, Elliot." Elliot shook Jose's hand, then Ana, and finally Kate. "Let's take the shots. Where should I stand?"

Ana and Kate huddled in the corner. "So, what happened when you cut that recorder off?" Ana sighed. She didn't have a chance with a man like Christian Grey. "Ana, will you stop? He's just a guy. A guy who's totally into you. I know that." Kate walked over and thanked him for the opportunity. "Look, we're going to a bar tonight to celebrate our finishing finals. You two should come along." Kate pulled Ana out to head home.

Kate looked at Ana's shirt, jeans, and blue converse. "What?" Ana caught her look and held her shirt unsure. "I told you I don't have a chance anyway. I'm not like you Kate. I don't have what you do. Christian Grey seems more like your type." Kate hugged her and handed her her jean jacket. She was more interested in Elliot.

When they arrived Christian and Elliot were already there. Kate ordered shots and cheers to moving on. Kate pulled Elliot to dance. Ana stood up to follow and felt dizzy. Christian held her up. "Did you eat today?" Christian's eyes burned into hers.

Ana felt like she was in trouble. "I didn't. I was rushing with Kate to get to the shoot and I didn't, that's all." Christian gave her some water and told her to drink and wait.

Christian walked over to Kate. Ana watched from the bar holding her water. "Kate, Ana didn't eat. She doesn't feel well. I'm going to take her and get her something to eat." Elliot and Kate were quite comfortable.

Kate looked at Ana. She was her protector. "Ok, but she's my best friend. If you hurt her, I'll hurt you. Your name doesn't mean shit to me over her. Do we have an understanding Mr. Grey?" Christian just smiled and walked towards Ana.

He grabbed her glass. "What did she say to you?"

Christian looked back. "She threatened me. She loves you." Ana waved at Kate. "Come on."

They went back to his hotel and ordered room service. "Here, you need to eat." Ana was hungry. She ate with him and they talked. Christian wondered if this is what a normal relationship was like. He started to get scared. Elena was right he couldn't be normal. "Ana, you should stay clear of me. I don't think I can be what you expect or need. I have secrets."

Ana wiped her mouth and ran out. Christian didn't chase her. She saw Kate and Elliot in the doorway of his room. "Fuck Elliot, wait until we get inside." Elliot laughed because he was ready buried inside of her. "Ahhhhh El!"

Ana felt a hand on her shoulder. "You left your coat again." Ana grabbed it and walked away. "Hey, I'm sorry. I'm sorry I'm not like Elliot." Christian knew he would break her. He walked away but Ana followed.

Christian had his hands on his head. Ana sat beside him. She placed her hand on his leg. "Why do you think any of this?" Ana wanted him and she had never wanted anyone. She had never had anyone. "I'm glad you're not like Elliot."

Christian kissed her. He had wanted to ever since they met in the office. He ran his hand over her shirt. He felt her petite breasts. Ana pulled away. "I need to tell you something." Christian didn't think he did anything wrong. It was just a touch. "I'm a virgin."

Christian pulled back. All the things he wanted to do. "What?" Ana dropped her head. Christian realized he messed up. "I'm shocked, I'm sorry. I didn't mean that. I just don't understand how someone like you can be a virgin. You're beautiful. Guys must fall at your feet." Christian caressed her face. This is why Kate was so protective. "I have an idea." Ana looked at him. Christian pulled her into his arms and fell on the bed. He held her and they fell asleep.