Lincoln Loud Take Him or Leave Him (Redone)

by Zelv-Dragar

After his big failure at the Ace Savvy Convention, Lincoln falls into a deep depression that makes him question his value as a person when compared to his sisters. He wonders if he is truly an important part of his family or just a mistake that should never have come into the world. Now, it's up to his sisters to help their brother out of his depression and save him.

3. Author's Message

Author's Message:

Hello everyone. I'm writing this message to ask for some new opinions about this story. I thought I could write a good emotional story about Lincoln's relationship with his family and how things have been bad for him in some episodes, but lately, I've been getting some bad reception from people because of this story. Some people are putting me under the impression that the second chapter was a mistake with how overly cruel, angsty and emotionally jarring it was for Lincoln, and I don't blame them for being mad about it.

Some people have told me that they think it's cliche since some of my plans for it involve Lincoln fighting his sisters or even running away from home. I can see how that's been overdone, and it seems like people are telling me to just throw this story away and be done with it. I'm really unsure of what to do with it, but I don't know if I want to delete it. If some of you think this story is too angsty, cruel and cliche to continue, let me know what you think. Thank you.