heres chapter 2, here we see the "dark side" if you will of our mando.
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Qui-gon was confused more than anything. How did this supposedly "son of the greatest mandalorian in history" know he was a Jedi and more importantly the young man in front of him had a remarkable presence in the force. But qui-gon was a Jedi. And the Jedi sought peace first. "Toro, was it? You may think I'm a Jedi, but I am not so. I am a simple man who is looking to buy some parts for my crashed ship, now if we could-" he never got the chance to finish as the mandalorian rushed him with his jetpack ignited and spear forward. Qui-gon acted quickly and ignited his green blade, directing the spear and the man to the side, much to the amazement of the gathering crowd. Qui gon then noticed a droid restraining padme and jar jar. He was about to intervene when.
I turned around and angrily faced the man, I proceeded to twirl my spear and jump up landing the spear on him, forcing him to block with his blade. "Give up, Jedi! Your kind will all die to mandalore!" He pushed his blade up forcing me back and asked "Who are you, and what do you mean!? Mandalore has been a pacifist peaceful people for nearly 20 years" I stopped then snarled "How dare you insult my people and my father! I don't know how long I was frozen, but I know my father! He would never turn pacifist or peaceful!" The man paused but still kept his guard up "Frozen? Who did you say you were again?" "Were you not listening? I am Toro Vizsla, son of Mandalore the Ultimate!" The man deignited his lightsaber confusing me "My name is Qui gon Jinn, Jedi master. And we have much to discuss young one. Or, should I say old one"
When he finished talking I had no words, I sensed no lie or deceit from the Jedi….my people had lost. My father had lost. I had lost. I got on my knees "Master Jedi, kill me. I failed my father, I failed my people….I failed myself, kill me so I may die with honor" the Jedi walked over to me and bent down "Young vizsla, your father may have passed, your era may have passed. But your people remain. They may be different, but they remain. Your clan remains. You could still have a purpose in this world, you could help your people. The clans are currently divided. You could unite them and bring peace to your people. You still have so much more to live for" yes, yes. He was right. My people still remain, I will remind them what it means to be mandalorian. I will honor my father and become mandalore. I remember what he said
*Flashback*
I was kneeling in front of my father "Rise my son" I rose and looked at him in the visor. "Do you know why I called you?" I shook my head "No father"
"I called you here to inform you of your legacy" he took his dark saber "I sense a great destiny for my blade, I see it leading our people through the generations. But only in the right hands will we be led to greatness"
he put it back on his waist and continued "I hope that one day you will inherit this blade, when you have defeated me in combat. Only then will you claim the title of mandalore from me." He put his hands on my shoulders "There is no one I want to see become mandalore after me more than you. My son"
*Flashback end*
I looked up at the Jedi and nodded. I stood up and spoke "Your right, thank you master Jedi….I, I don't know what came over me. I have much to live for, I guess losing my father and my people, it was…." Qui-gon smiled "I understand" suddenly a female voice spoke up "Hello!? It's nice that you're having a heart to heart, but I still have a blaster to my back" I turned to the voice and stopped. What I saw was the most beautiful girl I'd have ever seen. I waved off M4 and he released her and that monstrosity of a Creature they called jar jar. I walked over to her, took off my helmet. Revealing my defined jawline, black hair and dark brown eyes
"Hello there" I spoke in a sultry voice "my name is Toro, can I have the pleasure of knowing the name of the most beautiful woman I've seen in over a thousand years" she looked down and laughed nervously. Good, I'm having an effect on her. She looked back up "I'm, I'm Padme" I smiled, picked up her hand and kissed the back of it "That's a lovely name" she blushed. Oh I'm having fun with her. I was about to continue when suddenly *cough* me and padme looked over to Qui gon "May we get going, I may have been lying about being a Jedi, but I was not about our ship. We need parts to repair it" I nodded "of course" I looked at Padme and winked, then put my helmet back on and went to collect my robe.
We walked with Qui gon towards a shop, I spared a glance towards jar jar, he was shaking in fear at M4, huh. At least it kept him quiet. We entered a small shop, when we entered I immediately felt something. The most powerful presence I have ever felt, stronger than my fathers. Which shocked me. I looked over trying to find the source when suddenly a little boy rushed in. And got to work on something at the counter. I had long stopped listening to the Jedi and the flying womp-rat and just stared at the boy….it was like staring into the heart of the force itself.
"Are you a droid?" I am shocked "What? of course not!" I say indignantly as I remove my helmet. He's surprised "Oh sorry, it's just that I saw that droid that looked similar to you….but I wasn't sure if you were" I sighed I guessed that made sense "I'm Anakin Skywalker" I looked at him "that's a strong name, I'm Toro Vizsla of house Vizsla" he smiled "your a mandalorian aren't you" I looked at my armor as I had put my robe on padme, as a way to "protect" her from the sun
"what gave it away?" I asked sarcastically. He laughed a bit, I looked around the shop, then at the boy. It was then I realized something "you're a slave aren't you" he looked pissed "I'm a person and my name is Anakin, remember that" I nodded and spoke "you have a fire in you, don't lose that" Qui-gon then came back in "we're leaving" he said. I stopped "what why?" He looked at me "he has the only parts in town, and he won't take my Republic credits *quietly* and he's immune to mind tricks" I looked at the bug as he flew in. I cracked my neck and put on my helmet on "well maybe he needs a different kind of persuasion"
I took out my 2 blasters "hey bug, you're gonna give us the parts we need or I'm going to blast off your eyeballs, rip off your arms. AND SHOVE THEM UP YOUR BUTT!" boy did he fall apart after that, he was more than willing to give us the parts. Though qui-gon was very reluctant and decided to go outside. And I noticed that during the whole thing Anakin had a smile on his face, it was then I remembered his potential. And as we were about to leave I turned around and pointed to Anakin
"You know what, I want the boy too" he immediately grew a spine "WHAT! no you can't, take my parts, but not the boy. He is worth to much" oh is he now I took out my spear then stabbed him in the wings, dropping him to the ground "AAHHHH" he yelled. I proceeded to step on his stabbed wing "You gonna give up now" he was crying by this point "yes, yes of course here's his codes for implant" he was about to hand me them when Anakin yelled "Wait! Mom. I have a mom too!" I looked at Anakin and nodded. I then pointed the spear at his neck drawing a little blood "well?" "OF COURSE" he gave me her codes too. I let him go "Pleasure doing business with you" I turned to Anakin only to find myself being hugged by him "Thank you" he said.
I bent down "You are free now, but before you leave, before you start your new life. You need to face your past. Conquer your demons" I gave him one of my blasters and pointed at Watto. Watto started squirming "No, No. I did what you asked" I said nothing, just looked at Anakin and nodded. Anakin became resolute and was about to pull the trigger when Qui gon re-entered the shop "That's enough! I stood by for your dirty work because it got us the parts and freed this boy and his mother, but I will not stand by while you take an innocent life!" I gawked "Innocent!? That….thing is a slaver, they are the scum of the scum, he needs to die, and Anakin needs closure for his pain, now you're going to-" a blaster shot echoed through the shop and Watto dropped to the floor dead. Anakin sighed and gave me my blaster. Qui-gon looked at Anakin disappointedly. I holstered my blaster and left with M4. When I exited the shop I saw Padme looking at me, in shock "Why did you do that?" She asked quietly "I'll tell you the same thing I told the Jedi, he was scum. A slaver, and Anakin needs closure for his pain" she looked down "I know but…he should've stood trial in the Republic-" "Screw the Republic! Back in my time the Republic was corrupt and I bet it hasn't changed since. Plus if anyone has the right to execute that piece of filth it was Anakin" I walked away annoyed
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