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Dear readers!
This is an approved translation.
The original story is one of my favorites. It was written by 'five-nine'.
I just found the author's idea of describing the eight and a half weeks from Bella's acceptance of the marriage proposal to the wedding interesting. It has always seemed a little strange to me that Edward was able to consummate the wedding night without first getting closer to Bella than he had been thus far.
So far he has carefully planned each of his approaches and analyzed his reactions to them very carefully. So you have to think that he will also prepare his wedding night to the smallest detail - and he will especially not disregard the sexual component. So ... as a consequence ... he has to get familiar with Bella's body and also allow her to get familiar with his. Otherwise the wedding night won't work, and he would never in his life break his promise.
Here is how this author imagined this approach.
And I want to bring to your attention that she describes them for what they effectively are and that something is lost on Meyer. Bella and Edward are two 18-year-old teenagers about to have their first experience with sex. After admitting to themselves that they need to get physically close, they both become the hormone-driven teenagers they are supposed to be (!). So it gets pretty down to business with some of the descriptions and thoughts. And also linguistically sometimes there is no mincing words.
The copyrighted characters do not belong to me, but to Stephenie Meyer.
Thoughts that are addressed directly to another person (also to oneself) or spoken to another person - such as between wolves - are written in italics. Also, thoughts that Edward hears are sometimes italicized, especially when he responds to them.
Since my native language is German, a friendly and nice author - just4fun37 - has read the chapters as a beta reader and corrected errors on my part. Many thanks for that!
Coming close
The time between Eclipse and Breaking Dawn
Short Description:
Sex for marriage.
Edward has agreed to the deal. He wouldn't be himself if he didn't do everything he could to keep this promise - as perfectly as possible. They have eight and a half weeks left for this experiment in bodily approach.
How difficult is it, in fact, for him to maintain his self-control, to get a handle on his surging desires?
Can he dispel his doubts, both theoretical and practical?
And what about Bella, her lack of self-esteem?
How does she react when the going gets tough?
Inexperienced as they both are.
What complications and inhibitions do the two have to overcome?
Are you interested yet? 😉
The first chapter will be published tomorrow.