I've been thinking lately about the previous Sage of Kris stories. I'm sure many of you enjoyed reading them, but I can't but wonder if my writing was any good. The only reason for this would by the third story, Ragnarök Forthcoming. I have the feeling that perhaps it wasn't that good story-wise. To be fair, the main plot with Kris and the kids being chosen to train to be warriors to save the world from the apocalypse may have a been a bit forced, rushed, unimaginative and got a bit flakey. I had way too many characters to count, a pretty meaningless subplot that served no purpose other than to include Mei and the girls into the story in some way and overall, the main message was to have Kris learn to forgive Ming, and yet they've been most of the story apart from one scene in the beginning and at the end and I think a better execution could've been maybe have Ming (and perhaps Jin, too) going Kris's adventure or something.
On my part, I was barely given enough time to have chapters written down, especially given the deadline I was giving myself for each week, which in hindsight, may not have been the best course of action. I mean, it did help in terms of motivation to get me working on the stories. However, I was pretty much forcing myself to continue writing, simply just putting down whatever I came up with on the spot. It's not exactly the most helpful idea. Can you guys tell me your thoughts? Do you think it could've been written better with more time?