Ok guys. I know you were hoping for a new chapter. And if thier is one thing I hate to do, it is to get your hopes up thinking this is a new chapter, Yahhoooo update! Well it isnt. I can explain though. I have another story out, The Huntress And The Spartan. I left it on a cliff hanger and I think people would really like to see the conclusion of the events from the last chapter in that story. So that is what I have been working on. The last chapter even has me wanting to lash out and I wrote the thing. I encourage you to check it out...just make sure you are mature enough to read it. It is rated M for a reason.
Since this is a AN and I dont have anything writen for the next chapter of A Noble Rose, I am instead going to put up here what I did in my other story. A poll. So...what story do you want me to work on. I got two...well two ready to go. I have pleny more but first thing is first. I got Oly Oly Oxen Free witch is a story of Blue Team going to Remnant and living a life they were mostly denied. How does that happen? Well a mission goes wrong and they are put on teh MIA ( KIA ) list. The Maidens manage to grab thier soles? Spirets? And bring them to a limbo state and give them a set of choices. Stay military, civilian, or take the middle road and go Hunters. At the time of me writing this AN, I have not sean a single John x Ruby parring. And that saddens me. My childhood and over all lifetime video game here and a girl the shares the number one spot in my Wifu spot and is just the cutest and most adorable creature on the face of the earth getting together and being a thing? Can you imagine it? I know a number of people have said that the Chief could easly be with all of team RWBY, and I can agree with that, and I do plan on doing a book of one shots that would give John a small harem. Again just imagine it. A small adorable girl who is thin and petite getting together with a man who is built like a brick shit house and has to learn how to be human. Oh man I can see many funny things happening due to thier size diffrence.
Ok I am going to leave a little bit of the first chapter for you guys to chew on. Keep in mind it is only in the alpha stage so expect changes.
Blue Team was in trouble. Well trouble would not be the corect term to use. They were fucked. Running low on ammo, shields going down faster than they can get back up, wounded and to top it all off, little to no cover and backed into a corner. What was supposed to be a in and out assassintation mission turned into a trap set for them. As if they new they were coming. A leak in inteagance perhaps? Or a mole or spy, ither way they were not going to make it out of this one. From what John could tell, it was a mix bag of old coveis and humans.
An Elite in camo took out Fred, however it was a stab though the right lung and shoulder. Kelly took a spike rifle stab to the gut plus the prick fired sevral rounds into her stoumach, paralizing her from that point down. Linda was either unconsios or dead, from a concusuion rifle. As for John, he had a broken ribs and both shoulders were dislocated, multipule stab wounds and probbly some internal bleeding.
" John, we are not going to make it, are we?" kelly asked. She was propped against the wall shooting lindas rifle.
" I am not sure Kelly. Why? Can you get a radio signal to any one?" John asked.
" Negitive. These basterd set up jammers. No signal in or out." She responded.
" John they are not lettting up. We are not going to be able to hold out. I hate to admit it but I think we are at out end sir." Fred spoke up.
" As much as I hate to admit it also, I think you are right." John said sighing. Brining up his roster he highlighted blue team and put the MIA list. He also checked team Bio. Each of them had falling blood presser dido body tempater. Lindas however was flatlining.
"John," It was Kelly, " It was an honor."
" Likewise. Fred set lindas failsafe on her armor, then help Kelly with hers. Fred, I will set yours, then help with mine. We will leave nothing for these bastards to make a mockery of or to salvage. Set the fusion packs in a pile for maxamum destruction." John orderd. Fred got to it. He set lindas detnation pack, helped Kelly with hers and then got Johns. John then returned the favor. With ten minits till detnation, they made their final stand. They would not go out quietly. They kept shooting, yelling and just letting lose hell.
It all ended so quickly. All that they saw was a white light, an intence heat, then nothing.
John felt nothing. Not even the wounds that he got fom the fight. He took a deep breath and...wait. The fusioun pack detnated, didnt it? He opend his eyes and found himself in a log cabin on some sort of bed..
" Well you were right spring, he is kind of cute." A femanin voice said.
" Yea he is. You see his friend over their? The one that is CQC? He is a looker as well." Another more chipper voice anserd.
He rolled looked to his right and saw two young females standing between him and Fred, four sets of armor set neatly on the floor on the other side.
They were definetly difrent. One was in shades of Orange, like if the season of fall descided to take a human form. She had a bandana on in her hair white long sleav shirt and an orange skirt with brown stockings and shoes. The other was Spring Green and more livly looking. A leaf green and style skirt and a reath in her green hair. Both however had freckles scatterd across their faces.
Looking to his right he saw two more tending to Kelly and Linda. One was in a winter blue in a snow themed dress and seemed more serine than the other, she had a purple huge to her. She had a short sleev white shirt and purple short farmer trousers and sneekers. She looked like a worker of sorts.
Rolling off the bed, he got into a crouch ready to spring into action.
"Relax Cheif. You are safe here." The one in blue said turning around.
"Who are you and where are we?" He questioned, finding his voice looked at himself and found that he was in a pair of sweats and T-shirt. He also found that he looked younger.
" Well to put it simmply, you and your team died, but with permision from the people who made us, we bought you here to a place that we can talk and inform you of some new developments." the one orange said.
" What developments, and more importantly, how are we not dead?" John rebuttled.
" What my sister Fall is trying to say is, we are wanting to give you a second chance at life. A life that you can choose what you want to do, not orderd. A life where you can be free to do what ever you want." The one in purple said.
John still not understanding asked " Are you asking me to defect and abbandon my post?"
At this point every single women face palmed and the one in green started swinging her arms around franticly.
"NO! YOU ARE DEAD AND WE WANT TO GIVE YOU A CHANCE TO LIVE A LIFE THAT YOU WERE DENIED FOR FUCKS SAKE! TO LIVE, LAUGH AND LOVE!" yelled the one in green.
" Why us?" He asked still tryng to figger out what is going on.
The one in blue spoke up at this," As was said, to let you live a life that you were denied. To be able to grow and be more than what ONI wants you to be. To be human and not a living weapon. We have watched you and your team go through so many hardships with very little to no joy that we would like to give you that option." She said.
By this point ( and from the shouting ) the others stired and started to wake up.
'" hhmmm, my head what hit me?" Linda asked. Sitting up, she reached for her helmet, only to find it was not on her head. Looking around she spotted John up and in sweats with Fred just getting to his feet.
" Oh your up good. Now we can get the explnations done at once." The one in purple said. " First intruductions are in order. I am Summer, the one in Green that looks like she cant sit still is Spring, the one in orange is Fall, and the one in blue is Winter."
" Wait, as in the seasons?" Kelly asked.
" Yes. What we are about to tell you is going to sound unbeliveable, but is completly true.
So lets begin." Winter said
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After a long explanation of what was going on, and why kelly has rabit ears and wolf ears on linda, they got settled in for the night to let it all sink in. Aparantly they got them for how they represented their respected animal. Kelly was fast on her feat and a quick thinker, hence a rabbit. Linda was keen and observent. She can work with a team or alone, hence the wolf. It also didnt help that each had painted said animal on their guns.
" So, what do you guys think about all of this?" Fred asked.
" Still prossesing what all has been said. And how the fuck am I going to wear my damn helment with these damn ears." Kelly answerd.
" I think I will have an easyer time getting mine on. But how will this affect us on the battlefield? And more over what are we going to do?" Linda asked.
" I don't know. From what I can tell, they are telling the truth. " John said.
" How can you be certin? I mean they bacicly are giving us a second life at the age of 16. And to top it off a world that we never herd of with substances we never herd of?" Kelly asked.
" Well the were sincer so that is somthing. They also said that we can think on it and to take our time making a desioun. I can only assume that they are telling the truth and want us to make a desion and not be orderd." John said.
"Cant fault you their chief." Linda said.
" Well before we do anything, we need to know what we are getting into. Until then get some sleep." John said.
" Roger that." Linda said yaning.
" Night" Kelly said.
-in a diffrent room-
Spring backed away from the door. She didnt want to intrude or anything like that, but couriosity got the best of her. They want more info on Remnant, that is resonable and expected. After all, who wants to drop into a situation with no intel. She walked back to the living room where Fall and Summer were sitting around a coffe table discussing on weather or not they made the right disishon.
" Did we make the right choice?" Fall asked, rubbing her arm. After Amber was attacked, she has been feeling sick. Brining Blue team to this limbo world took alot out of her, and right now it was hitting her.
" Of corse we did. You saw what they went they went through. All the pain and suffering and not to mention the lack of basic humanity was denied. I would say that we did. Why?" Summer asked.
" They would have been in a better place. A place of rest." Fall responded.
" You could be right but at least they can live a life they were denighed, for a time at least. Do you think we should tell them?"Summer asked.
" About the station? No. Let them discover it. That way we are not making them do it." Fall replied.
" Ok. How are you feeling? You look like you are going to pass out at any minete." Summer asked.
" I do. This split of Amber's power is really drainging. Bringing Blue team here really took a toll on me and to top it off, the explenation was tiring." Fall responded.
Summer looked up and saw Spring standing in the doorway.
" How was the recon missions Spring?" Summer asked with a hint of a smile.
" Well they really want to get some sleep, other than that, they want more infoe on remnant. You know to get an aliby set for the off chance they need it as well as getting the know so they dont go in blind and make a fool of them selfs." She relpied.
" Understandable. We can give them a bit more on what is going on in the world cuently. They then can put somthing togther."Winter replied.
" Well we will need to inform Oz. He can add somethings to even make more belivable. Plus an appropiate initation should they chose the huntsmen life style, hell even if they don't he can set tehm up for life." Spring added.
" That too." Witer said.
" So how do we tell ol ozy that he is going to have compony?" Spring asked.
" Oh oh oh! I know the perfect way!" Winter said animatedly and quiet possibley a little crazy.
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Ozpin was in his office looking over some of the recent stuf that has happend. Team RWBYs fight at the docks, test results from exams that week, Jaune and Pryhaa training on the roof of the dorms, Ruby sneeking out for a late night snack of somthing. Yang looking up bike helmants. Weiss studdying, and blake reading a book hidden behind another book. Cough cough ' SMUT' cough cough. All and all another night at the office. He turned to the window admiering the night sky when he got a notification of an unknown object heading towards the school. Looking at the monator he saw it was not heading for the school, but to HIS office. And it was coming straight down. He calmly turned twards his desk and waited. No more than a second later, the celing busted open and a black pod was sitting their. It looked like a steeming black coffen. The pod have a his and what he assumed to be the door droped open. Inside was enough coffe to last at least a coiuple decades. Also their was a note from the four maidens. It pretty much said enjoy the coffe from another univers and to expect 4 individulas who might or might not join the school, or just want to enjoy life and would need help to get started. Either way they would be 4 armored beings, Two human males and two fanus females. And enjoy the coffe.
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Lasky was puzzeld. The ships supply for the next 20 years of coffe was missing along with a ODST drop pod. All that was left was a note that said " barrowing pod and stole your coffe supply for the next twenty years. Lol! Buy. Madians."
"Who the fuck are the Madians?!"he ask shouted.
Ok a few curses were thown in. Again still in the alpha so I did no, I repeat, NO SPELL CHECK WAS DONE! And this is only part of the first chapter.
Now to the second story is a Male Reader X Ruby Rose story. A Male Gamma S-III Head Hunter reader. If you don't know what a gamma Spartan Three is, well ONI being ONI took volunteer three to six year old war orphans and turned them into Spartans. Alpah and Beta companies being the first two waves of Spartans that were sent on suicide missions. Trading lives for time. With Gamma Companie getting an illegal boost that needs a cocktail of drugs to keep them sane. If you havent read or listend to Ghosts Of Onyx, I recomend you do so. Also Last Light. Some great storyes and you can see what all a Gamma can do. I have listend to just about every book multiple times with one of my favorites being Ghosts of Onyx and Silent Storm, both of witch I have listend too around what now, six or seven times.
And this story was in a bit of develomantle hell. To give a bit of context to what I am wanting to do, I am planning on doing a Reader x RWBY Girl with a fifth story being a bit of an OP Reader X Team RWBY. But to what I am thinking is Opposites attract.
Weiss gets a more humble redneck kind of Spartan to be with. Blake gets a noble warrier that is also an outcast thanks to what he is and where he was raised.
But Yang and Ruby had me stumped for a bit. I wanted a S-III and an S-II but did not know who to give to who. At first it was going to be Ruby with Noble Six, but I scrapped it becasue it just felt like it would be over used. Then I thought about giving her the S-II. Hell yea you get to be friends with the Chief. But that got scrapped as well. Finnaly I got to relistining to Onyx and Gamma came up. That sealed it. So Ruby gets a Gamma S-III.
So lets put part of the Chapter up shall I?
Now we find our foucas ont onn a war, but a school. More specifly a dorm of four girls. The leader, who also who happens to be the youngest, Ruby Rose. She is a cute fifteen year old girl that got into this school two years early due to her impressing the headmaster enough. She weilds a scyth that is also a high caliber sniper rifle. With an impresive mind, she can come up with battle plans on the fly and has a sweet tooth. Her partner is none other than Weiss Schnee of the SDC. While the compony started out as a fair place to work, it recently turned into a faunas slave force. As such the compony has a target on its back as well as any member of the family. But Weiss is diffrent. She wants to bring honor back to the family name. All she has to do is survive her derp face of a father and inharate the place. She is can be aragant and stuck up, but she has learned to be humble. While she is cold, she does warm up to those she deams worthy.
Blake Beladana. The quiet ninja cat faunas. While her heratage is still a secret at this point in time, she has been getting closer to her team. She enjoys the antics of the other three. She is a quiet person but is very observant. While she may seem antisocial, she is just quiat by nater. She aslo feels like she needs to atone for her past as an EX- WHITE FANG member. Her partner Yang Xialong is an intresting person. She is the half sister to Ruby and loves hand to hand combat. With long blond hair, a toned body, a bubbbly peronality, and a brest size that would insure her man will be satisfed, she is not one to be taken lightly. Piss her off and you could be put in a hospita or six feet under.
Curently it was night time and a weekend, so the girls didnt do all that much just took some time to relax and enjoy the time off. Right now though they were changing into their PJs for bed. Everyone was changed, with the exception of Ruby. She was curently only in her botoms and was reaching for her black tanktop and sleeping mask, when the sound of faint fighting was herd. Automatic weapons fire and energy based weapons sining back and forth along with war crys and crys of pain.
" You guys hear that?" Yang asked.
" Yea. Who would be having a battle at this time of night?" Weiss asked.
Ruby was about to answer and give her thoughts, when an exposion of sound went off. A concusive wave shot out of nowhere and scatterd anything lose. A vortex of some sort opend up and a green [blood red] armored person came flying through tackling Ruby to the ground. She gave a yell of supprise as she hit the floor with this armored person righton top of her taking the wind out of her lungs. It got to a knee and grabbed an advanced looking rifle off of its back.
Spinning on your heel, you snapped your rifle up and opend fire. Unaware of the fact that their is a half dressed girl under you. The Brute shot foward and slamed its sholder into you, sending you into the wall. A pained "oooffff" came from your mouth as the air left your lungs. The Chiefton came at you again, grabing you by the helment and slamming you repeatedly into teh wall before throwing you behind it. You felt dizzy and disorianted and you knew you had or was going to have a cuncussion. But the damn thing wasnt done with you yet. It did a double handed strike to you chest, cracking most of your ribs while a couple were just broken and jabbing into your lungs.
It picked you up again by the neck and brought you to its face and rored at the top of its lungs. Spittle flying from its mouth and onto your visor. Their was the sound of small arms fire going on but it sounded distant.
Ruby had no ideas what was happening. First she was changing for bed, then she was taken to the floor, then said person opend fire the way he came, and now a giant ape like thing was on a rampage in their dorm. The door burst open and team JNPR was their. Looked is disbelife at the sight. The monster then threw the man to the floor and proseded to smash its chest in. Finaly getting their weapons out they opend fire. The thing seemed to absorb the damage but it didnt stop its assalt on the poor man in armor. It had him up to its face, blood running down his arms legs and chest. As if finnaly regerstering that it was being shot at, the alian ape threw the person at the assembeld team of humans.
" WHAT IS THAT THING!?'" Jaune yelled looking helpless as he held his sword and shield up while everyone else was unloading every round they had into teh thing.
" NO IDEA, DUCK!" Yang shouted.
Everyone ducked as the thing threw the armored human at them. It rored a challange and unslung a hammer. It swung and the force of the impact plus the puls it imited with the hit sent the team tumbling and dibres flying.
" Uhhh, what did it hit us with?" Wiess asked shaking her head.
" Nora! Shoot it!" Jaune yelled, Seeing a flash as if as if ones aura fades. Nodding she unlung magnhild and shot acouple grenades into the thing. As the smoke cleared they saw the thing still standing.
Their was a roar of pain and hatred from behind them and the armoerd figger ran across the room with a knife in hand.
You managed to clear your head enough to see and think straight. Or at least straith enough for a GAMMA S-III can when badly wonded. In a single swift move you got to you hands and knees and removed your helment. Then yelling and drawing your knife you sprinted at that soon to be dead fuck. Your chest was on fire with pain and your breathing labored but it just fuled you one. As it swung its hammer to sweep you off your feet you jumped over the head and to the side rolling under it. Spinning around yyou spran onto its back jamming your blade into its neck. You repeated this sevral times screaming with each strike. It tryied in vain to reach you or to shake you off to no avail. As it started to slow a wet ' Shink' was herd and the tip of a blade was seen out of the back of its skull. As it went dow you srambled to the front and rammend the blade into its throught. With the thing finally dead, you turned around, took a step, and calapsed.
The small group of eight watched in shock horror as they watched the sean unforld. Here was a person who just a momnet ago was getting the life pounded out of him, get up and start ruthlessly attacking this thing. Thinking quickly, jaune had pyhraa throw her javilin at the thing, hoping to not further inger the guy on the things back. It hit home right in the mouth. As the beast fell the warrier scrambled to the frount and slit its throte. He turned around and took just one step twords them and dropped like a ton of bricks.
Their was a tence silance in the room before Yang broke it.
" Well, that was a thing." she said.
Again only an alpha so no spell check and this is towards the end of the chapter unlike Oly Oly Oxen Free witch is more from the begining. Jarring, yes but you can get a bit of a taste to how my mind can work sometimes. Yes I am an odd little guy. But arnt we all?
Now so far it is
Oly Oly Oxen Free: 3
Red Like Spartans: 1
So please go ahead and vote. I dont have a pol set up on the site so just comment or Pm.
REVIEWS!
Mata Nui
Just wanna say I absolutely love this story. Its a really cool premise and the characters are well written. If I make an educated guess im guessing based on what you'v given us that Nat is the Summer clone. Anyway can't wait for the next chapter.
Why thank you man. The support is nice. If I am going to be honest, and maybe it is that you are your own worst critic, but I seem to be a bit hard on myself. So to hear that you think everyhting is well written is a little bit of a boost. Thank you. And I mean that with each living cell in me.
And to your gess...I wont confirm or deny. You are just going to need to wait and see.
markiparky123
This is a very good story i hope you keep on writing this :).
Oh, I am still writing this. But like I said up top, I got to get part two of my last chapter in my other book done.
Guest
Love the story I hope you continue it. Also there are also some halo series on Youtube that might help and give you some idea's with the story.
1. The Youtube channel is called Red vs. Blue with a halo series called Red vs Blue.
2. The Youtube channel is called Teh Spearhead with a halo series called The Lives Of: Halo.
3. The Youtube channel is called Edgeworks Entertainment with a two halo series called the The Heretic and The Codex
4. The Youtube channel is called Rise of the Spartans with a halo series called Rise of the Spartans.
I hope these will help with the story.
Thanks. And RVB is a no branner and when Shadow was telling the group about the jackles, he refranced Teh Spearhead. Now the Rise of The Spartans, I have watched that and did find it a good watch. Havent herd of the other ones however. But yes I do take somethings from what I watch and apply some of it. Most of it will be done in RWBYs world and episodes but I do plane on brining things in from other media as well as fan art.
IcyDoom
Sry forgot a layer
The mk 5 mjolnir undersuit also had a memory processor superconductor
Mjolnir bodysuit components:
Liquid metal crystal piezoelectric
Hydrostatic gel
Force multiplying circuits
Pressure seal
Titanium nanocomposite
And that is all the parts of the undersuit since you asked
Ok. I combined both your comments into one. Incase you are wondering.
And all I got to say is...holy shit. That is alot of stuff for a suit of armor. If we go off of Halo Canon's theory in BattleBorns review on Owens suit, the black under layer can be done in sections kind of like how the outer parts of the shell were done has diffrent parts in each layer with a skin suit housing more of the monitors and vital probes. Kind of like how when you get a check up or go to the hospital you have that thing that sits on your finger and it takes some reading that I cant be botherd to rember or look up at the moment. That kind of thing would be in the skin suit with the next being a sandwitch with the gell layer. Other wise we get a multi glove effect. But that is just me. Also, did you watch Installation 00 when you commented this? If so...you get a cookie. I only receantly decoverd him myself and holy hell does he do good.
Helljumper206
Ok two things.
One I was a little put off about Ace Combat music being in here. A bit random that seemed a little off topic for the story. But that's me.
Two, Red October. For some reason I'm getting a real Q vibe here. Enough said there.
Fair enough. I belive the term is Treat as your Own? I was listening and watching both the trailer and the song when writing that last section and find that the song is just to good to not want to share. I get what you are saying becasue I dont like when people just sing for no reason and its a full song is writtten in adding in more words. But I hope that at least this time I did it in a more and unique way for a song to come in. Again I see what you mean and wont dispell it.
And as for the Tech that showed up, that is just me wanting to be semi canon in the story. Why? Well I based the AI off of my best friend so why not join him. I dont know what you mean by a Q vibe, so if you can please explain what you mean by that, that would be nice if for no other reason then to have the knowledge. So I hope I responed to your coment with respect.
All right so it is about a qourter after one in the morning where I am at so I am tierd and going to bed. You all have a good day or night where ever you may be. So Fly fast, Check six. And I will see you guys on the virtual battlefield.