Avenging Force Chapter 3, a star wars fanfic

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(Third Person Point of View)

"The Dark Side, felt it I did." Said a short green troll-like alien, whose name was Yoda.

"Yes, we all sensed it." Said a female version of Yoda. Her name was Yaddle.

A male white, Zabrak, with blue eyes, said, "We should send the Jedi Shadows to investigate."

"Hasty we must not be." Said Yoda. He paused, then added, "Cautious we must be."

"If we wait too long, then it might disappear!" Exclaimed the Zabrak.

Yoda sighed but gave him a nod as he conceded his point, "True, that might be."

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(Galen Thor's Point of View)

The Bi-Frost struck land, and I landed on a nearly abandoned planet. I felt something calling me there.

I felt something calling me through the Force and calling me as though there was something on this planet that needed my attention.

I held my Shield out in front of me. I also held Storm Breaker in my other hand. I had my armor coat me in some armor. I asked my A.I. "G.A.I.M. Where am I?"

My A.I. said to me, "According to my data banks, we are on Earth, the original home world of Humans."

I frowned deeply and asked her as I walked through the desert, not seeing any signs of life. Then, finally, I asked, "What happened to it?"

"According to records that I have, people left the planet several thousands of years ago and simply never looked back. Earth was over populated, and food shortages and mass starvation. Desertification swallowed the entire Land Masses of; Africa, Australia, and much of the North America Continent. Global Warming melted much of the Ice Caps. That changed much of the Land Scape." She explained to me.

I frowned and muttered, "What in the Universe could be here that the Force brought me here for."

My A.I. said, "Unknown, sir."

I sighed and rolled my eyes, and said, "Well, we will find it or leave this planet behind."

"Of course, sir." She replied.

I attached the Shield to my back before I decided to fly using Storm Breaker. I flew high in the Sky, flying faster than I could hope to walk in the sand dunes.

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(Six Hours Later)
(Galen Thor's Point of View)

According to G.A.I.M. I had been flying for about Six Hours, and I could now smell the salty scent of the Sea.

A few minutes later, I could see the Sea in the distance. I flew even faster since I could feel the Force drawing me toward the Ocean.

Eventually, I made it to the sea shore.

I slowly lowered myself and landed on the beach.

I muttered to myself, "Okay… I really wish I knew what was so important that the Force led me here."

I walked into the surf and then shot off like a rocket under the water, thankful that I chose Percy Jackson because I had a feeling that this would not be a good idea without the son of Poseidon. I retracted the armor to allow me to come into contact with the ocean water.

Immediately I felt my strength increase an incredible amount. I could feel the salinity of the Ocean. It was too salty for most sea life unless the creatures evolved for it.

I swam even faster than before as I propelled myself forward.

I thought to myself, 'It seems like my powers are even more significant than what Percy told us… unless this is because there are no more deities in this world, combine that with me being a god by Thor… I think I ought to keep this detail secret to myself.'

G.A.I.M. said to my mind, 'Your deductions seem to be accurate.'

I forgot that my A.I. could read my mind, but it could come in handy during any one of the many battles that will happen.

All of a sudden, I stopped and looked around.

It was close. Whatever the Force wanted me to find.

I dove deeper into the Sea. Yet I could see and sense everything despite there being practically no light at this depth.

I froze as I saw a ruin under the Sea. I muttered to myself, "Atlantis… what happened to it?"

I slowly lowered myself to the floor of the Ocean, in the ruins of the lost city of Atlantis.

I walked among the ruins, looking around, as I allowed the Force to guide me.

I stopped mid-step as I rounded a corner. I saw a corroded, blemished Trident and a Xiphos.

It was in the hands of what looked like a corpse, well, Skeleton.

I walked toward it slowly, with my Shield between me and it, not sure what to expect.

The closer I got to the Trident, the more I felt something was off.

All of a sudden, the Skeleton lunged at me with a roar.

I brought the Shield up quickly and deflected the blow to the side as I counter-attacked with a clawed right hook.

"I am Neptune's Ghost!" It roared as I slashed at its throat.

The Skeleton stood up and slowly began to gather water around him, solidifying it.

I lashed out with a water lance, spearing it through where the heart would be, but it passed harmlessly through.

"A son of the Sea, fighting his own father? Why?" It asked me.

I growled and said, "You attacked me first." I paused and then said, trying to convince it of something else, "I was on a quest. I need the Trident. You are dead and have no need of it… give it to me, and I will try to restore the Parthenon." I lied smoothly.

"Aye." The Ghost of Neptune said. He then spoke, "My youngest brother and I fought shortly before he faded. As a result, I gained the domains of Storms, Sky, and Lighting."

I asked him, "Why are you telling me this?"

Neptune's Ghost said, "Everyone faded, even my siblings, to the Titans and Primordials."

I frowned slightly and asked him, "How are you still haunting this place?" As I spoke, I was trying to plan a way to take the Trident and Sword.

He was silent for what felt like hours before he struck out at me. I ducked under the attack and darted toward him, and Shield checked him in his torso using all of my strength.

The Skeleton was sent flying through the ruins of Atlantis.

I grabbed the Greek Xiphos and swam off to find the Ghost of Neptune.

I felt danger around me before I darted toward the surface.

Neptune's Ghost swam right behind me.

I swam even faster than before, then I rocketed out of the water.

I used the Shield to block a Trident Strike, and then I lashed out with a swing from Storm Breaker.

*KA-BOOM*

Lighting from the Sky, blue from mine hit the Ghost of Neptune, and Yellow Lighting Struck me.

"FOOL! I am a god of Lighting, Sky, and Storms!" Roard the Skeleton.

I stood on top of the water and smirked as I said, "Sure you are Pa."

I began to run on the water toward the land, dodging Lighting while throwing some Lightning back at him.

The Ghost of Nepture flew after me.

Within a couple of hours, I made it to the beach.

I then tackled Neptune's Ghost to the ground.

He stabbed me in the gut with his Trident.

I growled and began to use Force Drain on him because most of my other physical attacks did little to nothing to him.

The Ghost of Neptune cried out in pain as he asked me, "Wh-What are you doing to me?"

I could feel him getting weaker and weaker with every passing second. I said nothing as I kept draining him of his Divine Essence, Domains, and his Life Force.

"AAARG!" He screamed in pain, and I felt him growing weaker and weaker with every passing second while I grew stronger.

The holes in my gut began to heal more quickly now.

The Ghost of Neptune launched himself into the Sky, trying to shake me off, but I stuck to him like glue.

I was being careful not to use too much of the Dark Side since I did not want the Jedi after me too soon or draw the attention of the Rule of Two Sith… since I had no clue which two Siths were the ruling two.

Neptune's Ghost tried to fry me with Lightning, but I had a resistance to it as I channeled my own Lightning to try to counteract his.

All of a sudden, he began to free-fall down toward the Sea.

I used the Domains of Thor and the Force to guide us back to the beach.

I wrapped my legs around his pelvis, and then I brought Storm Breaker overhead for a massive power blow.

The Ghost of Neptune stabbed me in the chest, but it was too late as I smashed his skull and turned it to dust and a half mile around us to glass from the Lightning Bolt I summoned.

I continued to Force Drain him until the Skelton turned to dust.

I groaned in pain as I took the Trident in my hands, and I used it as a crutch as I walked to the water.

I felt the Force wrap around me in comfort as it sped up my Healing Factor.

I slowly allowed the Ocean's currents to drag me to where ever the Force wanted to lead me.

The Ocean gently pulled me back to where the fight began…

My eyes snapped open as I saw the Trident in my hands. It was glowing a Sea Green and a Navy Blue. The Trident was Silvery though it still looked tarnished. Still, it seemed to be resisting me slightly.

I muttered, "Was it all a dream or vision? Or did I actually fight?"

There was no answer either from the Force or from my A.I.

I sighed as I slowly lowered myself to the stone floor and sat down cross-legged with the Trident lying across my lap with my hands resting underneath it, cradling it. I closed my eyes and began to meditate.

I began to try to attune the Trident to me, so I could use it more efficiently.

At first, it seemed like it was fighting me and resisting me at every corner.

However, the more I opened myself to the Force and the more I allowed the Trident to get a 'read' on me, the less it seemed to fight me.

I dove deeper into a meditative trance-like state.

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(About Ten Years Later)
(Galen Thor's Point of View)

I opened up my eyes and looked down at my lap. I saw the Trident in my lap, and it was perfect, no cracks, no corrosion, no blemishes, and no tarnish. It looked brand new now.

I asked G.A.I.M., "What happened, and how long was I out of it?"

She replied, "You were in the trance for one decade, ten days, ten hours, and ten minutes."

I muttered, "That would be why I feel famished."

I looked through the new memories that I gained from tuning myself to the Trident and from Force Draining Neptune's Ghost.

I willed Neptune's Trident into a pendant, and then I used some Nanites to make a chain necklace. I then enchanted it to be like my Shield and Storm Breaker. Finally, I slowly stood up and walked to the Xipho, and it had a silvery glow to it.

I turned the Xipho into a Holo-Pen, that could draw a Holo-Gram, by writing in mid-air.

I chuckled softly and said, "Storm Rider…."

I placed the Holo-Pen in my pocket before looking around the ruins for anything.

I summoned Neptune's Trident, and asked my A.I., "What is it made out of?"

"It appears to be made out of Atlantian Silver," G.A.I.M. replied to me.

I frowned and asked her, "What IS Atlantian Silver?"

"Atlantian Silver, is the most rare of all Divine Metals and second strongest to only Stygian Iron. Like Stygian Iron, Atlantian Silver, is able to harm both Mortals and Divine Creatures." My A.i. replied to me.

I slowly nodded my head but said nothing.

After several minutes of silence, I got my Shield and placed it on my back before I propelled myself up to the surface.

Within a couple of minutes, I was at the surface of the Sea. I summoned the Bi-Frost to send me to a world where I could have some fun without revealing myself to the wider Galaxy.

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Well, here is Chapter Three.

I have not planned this story out very far yet.

What planet should I have Galen Thor go to next? I was thinking maybe:
1. Tatooine
2. Mandalore

3. Leave your own idea

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Death Fury Signing off for now.