Hi everyone, this isn't a new chapter but rather a change of perspective. So, as a fanfic writer and seeing that I've topped over 100k words on this story, I do a lot of rereading and I have to say... I'm not impressed with how I wrote out this grad reunion arc.
I might be downplaying myself or expecting too much, but I'm starting to run into old habits of my poor pacing and sloppy writing. I know I've gone in really far already but I feel like I've neglected a lot of key points and have failed to elaborate on the plot.
I don't know... Because the whole issue with how much I've bent Hawkins out of shape is kinda getting cringy for me too...
Anyhow, let me know what you guys think, and if you can please offer some criticism. I'll also be going on a short hiatus just to get my thoughts together and probably return within the next week or so.
With that, cheers everyone, and have a great day.
Searoar.