AN: more reviews. disclaimer: I don't own Danny Phantom.
danifan3000: you brought up a good question.
1. I always thought that Dani would be more of a daughter to Danny so that's going to be their relationship. I'm also going to deage her some.
2. Now that you got me thinking I'm probably going to have her have a mix of both Danny's and Star's DNA. mainly because you can't really make a clone with just one gender's DNA. it will always lead to death of the clone. yes I know dolly's clone lasted for a few weeks, but she did die in the end. kids are basically clones of both parents. though only dani will contain both DNA the other clones will just contain Danny's.
3. yes I'll have Dani stay with them mainly with Star because her place will be the safest place until Danny reveals himself to his parents.
SuperSonicBros123: you can't have someone who used to call another person awful names change without regrets from there past. and Kitty won't really know that Star was talking about Danny because I never really had her mention his name. so Kitty won't know who's close to Star or not yet.
Invader Johnny: technically Clockwork never interfered in the timeline since his letter was never read by Kitty, plus the letter was just a back up plan incase she didn't storm out after reading Johnny's letter.
Quillion9000: Yeah I think Johnny and Danny just started fighting for fun too. so I am planning for them to fight as a way to hang.
"normal speech"
'normal thought notes"
"YELLING"
[calls texts]
~locations/transitions~
flashbacks, memories, dreams
~Fenton Works~
Star was walking up to the door when Dash opened the door. He was confused as to why she was there. "Star? What are you doing at Fenturds house?" He asks.
Star scoffed, "I'm Fentons tutor remember!" She said in fake annoyance at having to be there.
"Oh, right. Mr. Felluca asked you to do that." Dash remembered hearing the conversation two weeks after school started.
~Casper High Mr. Felluca's class room~
Two weeks after the accident. Math class just ended and the students are leaving. Mr. Felluca saw Star and Danny. "Miss. Strong. Mr. Fenton. I'd like to speak with you both." They came to his desk. "Mr. Fenton I noticed that your math grades are far below the rest of the class. Now I know it's only been a few weeks, but I just want to make sure you pass my class. That's why Star I'd like you to tutor Mr. Fenton."
"WHAT?" Star shouted in fake indignation. Though she didn't really mind as she thought, 'Sweat a reason to hang with Danny. Maybe Tucker too.' She then exclaimed, "Why volunteer me without my permission?"
"Because I think it's easier for a fellow student in the same class would be a better tutor then a student that might be on a different section in math. Besides out of all the ninth graders you are the best in math." Mr. Felluca said.
Star gave a fake sigh that only Danny and the teacher noticed that it's fake. "Fine whatever." She said with a side smirk.
Danny and Star left, and Mr. Felluca thought, 'I wonder when they became friends?'
~Fenton Works present day~
"So you make the sessions terrible right?" Dash asked.
"As much as I don't like Fenton I still keep some professional dignity." Star said acting posh.
"Aw." Dash said disappointed.
"Now if you excuse me I have a tutoring session to get to." Star said passing Dash. 'Technically Danny doesn't need my help anymore. now it's just an excuse to hangout.' Star thought as she entered the house.
"Hey Star!" Jazz said cheerfully.
"Hey Jazz." Star said plopping onto one of the two couches. "Acting like a snob around the other A-listers is hard. The only upside is my acting skills improved, not that I'm going to be an actress."
"Well you could always stop." Jazz said.
"You know I can't. If I'm nice to nerds I'll lose my A-lister position, and if I lose that my dad will be upset." Star said.
"When did this need to please your dad start?" Jazz asked pulling out a note book.
Star just looked at her shocked. "Wow I thought Danny was exaggerating when he said you're already trying to be a therapist because he's your brother. Guess I was wrong." She commented.
"So that's a no to a session?" Jazz inquired.
"Maybe another time." Star said seeing Danny. "Hey Danny!" Star said going to him and they went upstairs. "So any ghosts that I should worry about?" She asked once upstairs and in Danny's room.
"Just a blabbermouth called Nicolai Technus, but I handled him." Danny said.
"Okay. We've been alot less busy since I told Kitty that it's okay to come out as long as the ghost doesn't cause trouble." Star commented.
"Yeah! Just a few days ago I raced with a ghost on a motorcycle. He was pretty cool. He even helped me stop some guys from robbing a store." Danny replied.
"That's cool. What was his name?" Star asked.
"His name was Johnny 13." Danny answered.
"Huh, where have I heard that name before?" Star asked herself. She just shook the thought away. "Anyway let's check our homework from today." Star said. Danny nodded and they began going over the homework.
Time passed and Maddie came into Danny's room. "Danny sweetie I need you to help your father move some junk to the shed." She said before seeing Star. "Hi Star!"
"Hi Mrs. Fenton. would you like me to help?" Star asked.
"If you want I don't see the harm in it." Maddie said. Both teens then followed the Fenton matriarch and began helping move boxes.
~Nasty Burger~
Star walked into the Burger joint the next day after school. When she entered she saw Dash near Danny and Tucker. 'Oh great he's going to beat on Danny again.' Star thought.
As she got to the counter though she heard Dash say, "Your sister made me invite you to my party on Saturday." He sees Tuckers hopeful expression. "Only you! So you better be there. Or else." Danny nodded not really excited even when Kwan and Paulina greeted him as Star ordered her food.
"Dude you don't seem to happy about going!" Tucker noticed.
"Eh, Star told me that Dash's parties aren't what there cracked up to be." Danny replied. "Their just," an A-lister walked by patting Danny's shoulder making him stop talking for a second, "normal parties like what we see on TV." He continued.
"Wow Star is really helping you mature." Tucker commented.
Star coughed letting them know she heard them. She then grabbed her food and walk to them. "I appreciate the compliment but keep it down when talking about me." Star whispered though wishing she could be friends without keeping it secret.
"Sorry Star." The boy's said in a whisper.
~Fenton Works Saturday~
Star heard that Danny was having a garage sell and thought that her mom needed a mixer so she went to check it out. She was looking for a mixer when she found one. "Hey Fenton! How much for the mixer?" Star asked using his last name cause Dash was there.
"Oh that's 15 dollars." Danny told her. Star paid then went home to give her mom the mixer.
~Strong residents~
After giving her mom the mixer Star went to her room to wait for the party time. Star was on her bed reading when she got a text. She looked at the text and saw it was from Dash. Dash sent, [Dress code changed to loser chic.] Star rolled her eye's.
She then sent a text to Danny. [Hey Danny!]
[What's up Star?] Danny texted back.
[You buy that dumb outfit Dash told you to buy?] Star asked.
[Yeah!? Why?] Danny replied.
[Return it. Dress code changed.] Star told him.
[Seriously!? To what?] Danny texted annoyed.
[Dash said Loser chic. So just wear what you normally wear or borrow Tuckers outfit.] Star answered.
[Alright. Thanks for the heads up.] Danny replied.
[No problem.] Star texted.
Star then put down her phone and went to her wardrobe. She opened it looking through it before finding her new outfit for the party. "I'll give Sam a point for one thing. She certainly has good taste in brands." Star said before putting on the all black clothes. She then looked in the mirror. "Huh, not half bad. Add some more color and I'd look good."
Star went downstairs. "Bye mom I'm heading to Dash's party." She called to her mom.
"Okay hun, be careful! Also thanks for the mixer sweetie" Mrs. Strong called back.
"You're welcome mom." Star said. Before she could leave her mother screamed. She turned around just in time to see a mixer coming at her. Star quickly ducked and blasted the thing with her purple ecto-ray. "Damn it Danny! He forgot to check if it was contaminated by ecto energy!" The mixer fell to the ground with a bit of damage.
Mrs. Strong ran to her daughter. "Are you alright Estella!?" She asked.
"Yeah sorry for blasting the mixer I bought you." Star said.
"It's fine dear. I can always fix it. So it came from the Fenton's place?" Her mom asked.
"Yeah. I thought Danny would check for contaminants before doing anything." Star explained.
"Well can't expect everyone to think ahead like we do. Cause we stay Strong," Mrs. Strong started.
"And think ahead!" Star finished. The two laughed. "Okay I need to get going. bye mom, and don't worry I'll talk to Danny about checkingfor contamination." Star said leaving then thought, 'I wonder if Tucker got that update for his PDA that I suggested now that I'm thinking of electronics.' Star got on her bicycle and rode to Dash's place, even though she had better things to do then attend.
~Baxter residents~
Star was pretending to enjoy the party by the door when a knock came. Dash answered it. "Fenton!? How'd you know the dress code changed?" He asked surprised.
"I told him." Star answered. "I thought you'd want me to tell him since I have his number for tutoring." Star said annoyed that Dash didn't even try to tell Danny of the change in dress code.
"Oh, thanks I guess." Dash said annoyed too. He walked away as Danny entered.
Danny saw that Star was wearing what Sam normally wears. "Wow, that doesn't look to bad on you Star." He compliments her.
Star blushed lightly, but got it under control before saying, "Thanks Fenton." She used his last name because the other A-listers were there so she didn't want them getting suspicious.
They went in different directions and Danny saw it was just a normal party that you'd have on special occasions. Star saw that he tried talking to Paulina but she brushed him off. She knew that the people here would ignore him even if the dress code didn't change and Danny wore that stupid outfit. Suddenly Star's ghost sense went off. She looked around incase it appeared. She then noticed Danny was gone before she made an excuse to leave the party. Star went outside and changed when Danny came crashing to the ground. She immediately flew to him. "Danny! Are you alright?" She asked concerned.
"I'm good Star." Danny says as he groans sitting up.
"HAHAHA! YOU CAN'T STOP ME GHOST CHILD. FOR I AM TECHNUS MASTER OF ALL THINGS ELECTRICAL AND BEEPING." A giant mech shouted landing in front of the two half ghosts. "Wait since when was there two ghost children?" Technus asked confused.
Star rolled her eyes. "You been living under a rock or something? The town always had two protectors." She said before turning to Danny. "You were right he is kinda a blabbermouth. You just forgot to mention loud and big."
"Didn't start out as big." Danny said as he got up ready to fight. Star got into her fighting stance then dodged an attack from Technus. Star shot an ecto-ray while Danny went for a punch.
When those didn't effect him Star pointed out, "We might need some techno help!" That's when they saw Tucker on his scooter with a bag from the tech shop.
"Tucker perfect timing. Think you can hack into the ghost?" Danny asked dodging another swipe.
"Yeah what's the program he running?" Tucker asked.
"An old Portals XL." Danny said as Star blasted cds away from him.
"Tucker did you upgrade you PDA? It might be helpful!" Star said dodging a kick.
"I just bought the latest Portals XL for my PDA." Tucker replied getting it from the bag he had and adding it to his PDA.
"Any time now Tuck!" Danny called. The washing machine on Technus' chest opened and a claw with a remote came out. It changed Danny to different characters from TV shows before stopping at Spock from Star trek. Star blasted the claw grabbing the remote and changed Danny back.
"Come on dude. it needs to download!" Tucker said. It finished downloading and he started to hack into technus' system.
Technus had both of the teens pinned to a wall. "THIS IS THE END FOR -BZZT- WHATS -BZZTS- GOING ON?" He asked in confusion before the mech shut down freeing the half ghosts.
Star used her Fenton thermos, that she keeps in her bag, and sucked Technus out of the suit. He had white hair that stuck up in a similar style to a boy Star saw while on vacation one year, black sunglasses, and green skin. He wore a light blue jacket with a green belt and green gloves.
As Technus was suck into it he screamed, "NOOOOOOOOO!"
Star capped the thermos. "Why did you buy lousy software?" She asked Tucker.
"It might be lousy software but it's the only one that my PDA runs." Tucker explained.
~Casper High halls Monday~
Star was walking when she saw Dash open his locker and cutsy teddy bears fell out. Everyone laughed at that along with Star. She looked and gave Danny a smile knowing he did that.
AN: well that was a hard chapter but it's done. yes I the teachers notice that Star is acting because well their teachers. they're supposed to notice differences in students. hope everyone enjoyed.