This is my first fanfiction so bear with my mistakes please! Hope you enjoy and that I don't end up abandoning this :)
Feel free to provide constructive criticism.
Disclaimer: I do not own any Divergent characters.
Tris POV:
"Christina are we done yet?" I say. We've been shopping for the past three hours nonstop.
"One last store!" she yells, dragging me by the arm behind her. Glancing up, I suddenly stop.
"No way. You want me to go in there?!" I point at the store in front of us. It reads Dauntless Secrets and there's a clear row of undergarments hanging inside.
"Come on you need it for Zeke's party Tris!"
"Ughh"
She dragged me inside knowing she won our short argument.
"Look at this!" Christina held up a dark red lacy set of matching undergarments. I widened my eyes but figured it could be worse.
"Yes, now let's leave. Please!" I beg her.
"Fine."
We leave and I take a quick glance around making sure no one saw us. I took a breath of relief when the area seemed empty.
Walking for what seemed like forever, we finally reached mine and Tobias' apartment. I told Christina I'll meet her in ten minutes after putting down all the bags.
"Why hello there beautiful, did you have fun?" Tobias was laying on the couch, feet on the coffee table.
"Yeah totally. Shopping with Christina is SO much fun," I said sarcastically, placing the bags in our bedroom.
Tobias got up wrapping his hands around my waist from behind. He turned me around and kissed me passionately. I put my hands around his face as he picked me up. Suddenly he pulled back and threw me over his shoulder. We both laughed.
Bringing me into the living room, he placed me on the sofa as I pulled on the hem of his shirt. Just as he took it off the door barged open.
"I knew I'd have to come get you," Christina said. Sometimes giving her a spare key wasn't a great idea. "If you two lovebirds don't hurry up we'll miss the party!"
"Okay fine. Bye Four!" I yelled back as Christina grabbed some shopping bags with tonight's clothes and dragged me out.
"Love you!" Four yelled back.
Reaching Christina's apartment, we opened the door to a full parlor set up. Marlene was getting her hair done by Shauna, who was painting her nails red.
"Well hello!" They said in unison.
I waved back.
Christina did her magic with makeup, powdering my face and applying things with her fluffy brushes. She wouldn't let me see till she finished though. At one point she was curling my hair.
"Ta daa!" She spines my chair around so I faced her vanity.
My short blond hair fell in loose curls just past my shoulder. My face has a soft glow with soft pink cheeks. The golden eyeshadow and winged eyeliner made my eyes sparkle with a feminine touch. I stood up allowing my dress to fall too my knees. The dark blue dress stuck to my waist, and flowed outwards stopping just at my knees. My small golden hoops and simple gold chain contrasted well with the outfit.
"I love it! Thank you Christina! Your skills really pay off." I hugged her and we all finished our final touches as I put on the three inch golden heels Christina made me wear. Finally, we could head out the door, just five minutes before seven. We went up the stairs and stopped in front of apartment B17.
"Alright let's make these guys drool over our beauty," Christina flipped her hair back. We rolled our eyes laughing at her antics.
She knocked the door and Uriah opened it. His eyes widened at the sight of us, especially Marlene who was blushing under his stare.
"Well hello ladies! Come on in!" He grabbed Marlene's arm and led her inside while we followed behind.