AHOLA GUYS!
FIRST OF ALL LET ME INTRODUCE MYSELF...I M SNOWY SECRET SISTER MS FLORA ...
DUE TO SOME REASON SNOWY SECRET ACCOUNT HAS BEEN HACKED...SO SHE CAN'T CONTINUE HER STORY "JUDAIYAN" BUT SHE IS WORKING ON JUDAIYAN SEQUEL 2 WHICH WILL BE UPDATED FROM MY ACCOUNT "MS FLORA"
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Mumbai...
4 am...
Where the whole mumbai is in deep sleep she was awake... starring at the sealing... Tears are continuously sheded from her eyes...Not Only Today...its her daily routine to face this fight alone ...She was in her deep thoughts... When she hear thunderstorm...which is warning for rain..She went to balcony and sigh heavily she look up to sky...a drop of rains start falling on her face ...her tears also get mixed in rain...so no one can say she is crying...
she start drenching in rain...She again get lost in her thoughts...
Purvi...kiya kr Rahi ho under ajao barish bohat tez horahi hai...beemar parh jao gi yrr... tumhein thand lag jaye gi...
she turn and look at him ...he is in front of her... she can't believe on her eyes...
she start moving toward him in rain when her foot slip and she was about to fall but Nakul hold her from her waist... they both look into each other eyes...
Galat kya, sahi kya, mujhe na pata hai
Tumhe 'gar pata ho, bataa dena
Main arse se khud se zara lapata hoon
Tumhe 'gar milu toh bataa dena
Kho na jaana mujhe dekhtedekhte
Tu hi zariya tu hi manzil hai
Ya ke dil hai itna bataa
Tune chhua zakhamo ko mere
Marham marham dil pe laga
Paagal pagal hain thode
Baadal pagal hain bheege
Barse barse bheegein aa zara
Pehle bhi main tumse mila hoon
Pehli dafa hi milke laga
Tune chhua zakhamo ko mere
Marham marham dil pe laga...
A sound of thunderstorm bring her back and with this she start searching him...
and then she realized he is no where... it's just his illusion...she get broken... and she started crying...
kash nakul kash yeh sach hota...ap yahan hote mere pas...ap ki kami mujhe roz mar deti hai Nakul...ap mujhe chor k kiyo chale gaye ap k bina ek ek pal guzarna mere liye khatan hota hai...main kitni bhi acting kr loon viraj or papa k samne strong banne ki
pr Raat main ap ki kami bohat khalti hai Nakul...meri tanhai batne wala koi nhi hai Nakul...main bohat akeli hogai hn...4 saal se apne ap ko yeh baat samjha rahi hn k ab ap is duniya main nhi hain...pr sach toh yeh hai k mujhe khud yaqeen nahi ata...ap ki bohat yaad ati hai nakul...
she saw rain has been stopped...so she also wipes her tears and went inside her room...
Morning...
8 am...
she was making Viraj ready for his school.. who was doing drama for not going to School...
Mumma meko school nhi jana...viraj said..
kiyo nahi jana mumma k champ ko...
she tie his shoe laces...
Kal raat kitni barish hoi thi...school bhi doob gaya hoga na...aur mujhe toh swimming bhi nahi ati...viraj continue his drama...
purvi smile at his cute antics...
Koi dramebazi nahi chale gi mere bete ki... jaldi se taiyar hojao or school jao...main ne aj ap k tiffin main ap ka favorite aloo ka paratha banaya hai...
Viraj make faces ...
Kiya hua... aloo ka paratha toh ap ka fav hai na... she asked...
roz roz aloo ka paratha banao ge toh kaise favorite rahe ga...viraj said...
Purvi look at viraj surprisingly...
She get lost in her thought...
Flashbacks...
She was serving dinner to nakul... after looking at Bhindi he start making faces... purvi look at him confusingly...
nakul: Purvi...aj phir bhindi...he asked...
Purvi: kiya hua bhindi toh tumhari favorite hai na...
nakul: purvi roz roz meri fav sabzi banao gi toh woh favorite kaise rahe gi...
Purvi(tease him): toh is ka Matlab yeh hai k main janaab ki favorite nhi hn...
Nakul: woh kiyo...
purvi: kiyo k abhi ap ne hi toh kaha k roz roz ek cheez ko dekho ge toh favorite kaise rahe gi...
Nakul: aisa kuch nhi hai...tum humesha se Meri favorite thi or humesha raho gi... because I love you so much...
Flashback end..
Daduuuuu... before she could said anything Viraj see his grandfather and Ran to him...And hug him
Ary mera bacha...Acp pick up Viraj in his arms...and kissed him on his cheeks...
Kaisa hai Mera bacha... he asked lovingly
Main theek hn ap batao ap ka mission kaisa Raha..ap ne gande uncle ko punishment diya na...or ap ko kahin chot toh nhi ayi na...he asked rapidly questions
ACP smile at this...
Ary Ary...Bs bs kitne sawal pucho ge... acha baba main theek hn... mujhe koi chot nhi ayi or main ne gande uncle ko punish bhi kr diya...
they hear a bus horn...
purvi: Chalo viraj ab school ki bus bhi agai ab jaldi Chalo...she make him wear his school bag..
okay bye bye dadu...main school se ajaonga jldi ap kahin jana mat... main ne ap se bohat sari baatein krni hain...okay bye bye...he kissed on his cheeks and ran with Purvi...
Bilkul nakul ki tarhan hai mera Viraj...jb nakul chota tha woh bhi aise hi mujhe pyar krta tha ...Acp smile tearly..
Ok mumma ap apna khayal rakhna or bilkul gussa mat krna...or han main jb school se wapis aaonga toh Meri favorite Aloo matar khaonga pleshhhhhhhhh...bye bye love u... he kissed on her cheeks and sat inside the bus...and wave his hand from window...
purvi smilingly wave back and give flying kiss to her son...
After viraj bus left... she came back to her home and look at acp who was smiling while looking at the scenerio...
Purvi: papa ap kiyo muskara rahe hain...
Acp: Kuch nhi bs Aj tumhein or viraj ko dekh k mujhe Nakul or Vanita(acp wife) ki yaad agai...woh bhi tumhari tarhan roz subah subha bhaga dori krne lag jati thi...or Nakul use pareshan krte nhi thakta tha...kabhi kehta maa laces bandh do maa tie bandh do ...or vanita kitchen main khare khare nakul ko taiyar krti rehti thi
she just smile lightly... She knows acp never talk about nakul because he thinks she might be hurt...but he never knows she love to listen about Nakul...
When acp realized...he look at her... and said sorry...
Purvi: papa ap humesha nakul k bare main baatein krne se kiyo kutrate (hesitate) hain...
Acp: kutrata nhi hn beta...bs yeh sochta hn k shayad mere is tarhan nakul k bare main baat krne se tujhe takleef na phunche... tumhein Zara bhi hurt na ho ...
Purvi: ap se kis ne keh diya k mujhe nakul ki baatein krna hurt krta hai... papa mujhe acha lagta hai jb ap nakul k bare main baatein krte hain...use yaad krte hain... Nakul agar mere pati the toh ap k bhi toh bete the...ap ka jb dil kre ap mujh se Nakul ki dheer sari baatein kr liya kijiye...waise bhi ab humare pas nakul nahi hai pr us ki yaadein or baatein humesha humare sath hain...
acp look at her surprisingly...
Purvi: acha ab bohat hogai baatein...yeh bataiye ap ka mission Kaisa raha ...
acp: hn kafi acha raha...daya ko goli lagi thi...pr ab woh theek hai ... Shreya hai us k pas...woh gang bhi pakra gaya...or tumhara woh payal Wala case kaisa raha
Purvi: filhal toh kuch nhi ho paraha...adalat hr bar Payal k pati ko nayi date deti hai pr woh hr baar faraar hojata hai... pata nhi kb tk yeh case chalta rahe ga...
Acp: hmmm...acha beta woh kal Raat mere dost ka beta araha hai dehli se...us ka bhi yahin Mumbai main transfer hua hai...tum kanta bai se keh k guest room ready krwa dena jb tk us k ghr ka bandobast nhi hojata woh yahin Rahe ga humare sath...
purvi nods...
purvi: papa woh ishu ki call ayi thi...ek hafte bad woh aur dush arahe hain...
ACP (happily): ishu arahi hai...meri beti arahi hai...
Purvi: hn papa woh dushyant bata raha tha k DCP sir ne 2 mahino k liye us ka transfer Mumbai main kr diya hai ...is Liye Dush or ishu arahe hain 2 mahine k liye
ACP: Chalo yeh toh bohat achi Baat hogai isi bahane ghr main ronaq lagi rahe gi...
Purvi smile...
Afternoon...
Viraj came back from school and start calling his mother...he find her in the kitchen making his favorite aloo matar... the aroma of aloo matar make him crazy...
Viraj (inhale the food aroma): ummmmmm mumma...ap ne mera fav aloo matar banaya na...
Purvi nods smilingly...
Viraj: bohat bhook lagi hai jldi se khana do na...she rub his tummy...
purvi: pehle jaldi se ja k fresh ho k aao phir main ap or dadu sath mil k khana khayein gain...
viraj nodded and ran to get change his uniform...purvi hurriedly sat the dining table...call acp and viraj for lunch...
viraj: good afternoon dadu...he hug acp from back ...acp kissed on his cheeks
acp: good afternoon bache toh Kaisa raha aj ka din...
viraj: bohat acha...aj mere dost rohan ki birthday bhi thi...teacher ne class main cake cut karwaya phir us k papa agaye or hum sb ko bohat sare gifts bhi mile...
Acp: acha toh matlab Mere bete ne aj bohat enjoy Kiya na...
viraj nodded...purvi put morsel in his mouth
Viraj: dadu mujhe adi bhaiya se milne jana hai...ap plz mujhe le chale gain...
Before acp could say anything...
Adi bhaiya se milne kiyo jana hai jb adi bhaiya khud yahan hain... Abhijeet came with adi and tarika... Viraj ran to Abhijeet.. he pick up him in his arms and kissed on his cheeks...
Acp: ary Abhijeet tarika aao...
Adi: good afternoon dadu...he touch his feets for blessing...
Acp: jeete raho khush raho...aao bheto khana khao...
all sat and start lunch...
Abhijeet: kaisi ho purvi...he asked..
purvi: theek hn bhai ap kaise hain or daya bhai ki tabiyat kaisi hai...
Tarika: woh bhi theek hai bs thodi weakness hai but jald hi theek hojaye ga..
Acp: Chalo acha hai...waise tum log Yahan kaise...
Abhijeet: woh kiya hai na sir adi bohat dino se Viraj se milne ki zid kr Raha tha or mujhe bhi ap se case k silsilay main thoda kaam tha is liye chale aye...
Tarika: or isi bahane abhijeet ko purvi k hath ka bana khana khane ko mila...
everyone chuckle...
Delhi...
He was packing his luggage when his father came in the room...
Kb tk apni packing khud kare ga...main toh kehta hn ab koi tera saman pack krne wali ajani chahiye...apna nahi toh kam kam se kam apne baap hi khayal kr le beta...tu shadi kr le beta...
papa kiya hogaya hai ap ko ...jb ap k pas koi topic nhi hota toh ap shadi ki BAAT krne lag jate hain...jb k ap ko pata hai main shadi nhi krne wala...or ap wajah bhi bohat ache se jante hain ...he said sternly
Jo guzar gaya use bhool ja ...tu Meri Baat ko samajh beta...mujhe khud nhi pata main kb tk zinda hn...mujhe hr waqt yeh khaye jati hai k mere bad tera kiya hoga...
filhal toh ap ko main kuch hone nahi doon ga kiyo k jab tk Ap ka Yeh Rajat zinda hai ap ko Kuch nhi hoga...acha ab main packing complete kar loon Kal subah mujhe nikalna bhi hai...or hn wahan ghr milte hi ap ko wahan bula loon ga...
Rajat father sigh...
R Father: theek hai phir jaisi teri marzi... acha sun yeh kuch gifts hai praduman k liye...use de Dena...or hn meri us se Baat,
zaroor karwa dena...chal ab main sone jaraha hn good night
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after his father went to his room...he pack his bags... and went to slept...as next Day he has a flight for Mumbai...
Mumbai...
After making Viraj sleep she went to the garden looking at the sea...which was throwing a cold breeze on her face ... she sigh...
Dekho Nakul ...aj phir ap ki purvi akeli hai or us ki tanhaiyan...she cried...Yeh ap ki fav jagah thi na...ap kehte the purvi yahan bohat sukoon hai...pr mujhe itni ghutan kiyo horahi hai...she look at his pic on his mobile...Ap toh chale gaye...par main kaise jiyongi...
Purvi beta...yahan Kiya kar rahi ho... she turn and look at acp who was came to fill the water bottle...
Purvi: kuch nahi papa...bs aj aise hi man udaas horaha tha is Liye yahan chali ayi
Acp: hmm toh Meri beti aj udaas hai or main us udaasi ki wajah bhi janta hn...
Purvi look at him ...
Acp: beta ...yeh zindagi bohat lambi hai akele nahi kati ja sakti...main janta hn k nakul k bad tum apni Zindagi main Kisi ko shamil nahi Karna chaho gi...pr beta tum khud socho Kiya Nakul ki atma tumhein is Tarah dekh shanti se reh sake gi...or nakul ka nahi toh Viraj k bare main socho kiya woh bechara sari Zindagi baap k pyar k liye tarasta Rahe ga...woh tum se kehta nhi hai lekin kabhi us ki ankhoon main dekhna jb Abhijeet or Adi ko sath dekhta ya daya or Shiv ko sath dekta hai tb us k man pr kiya guzarti hogi..kabhi soch k dekhna...tum ne khud apne papa ka pyaar nahi paya hai is liye Tum is baat ko bohat ache se samjh sakti ho or mehsoos bhi kr sakti ho k viraj ko baap k pyar ki kitni zaroorat hai... Koshish krna apne man ko samjha sako... Raat bohat hogai hai ab tumhein bhi araam krna chahiye...he patted on her head and went to his bedroom... while she was in her thoughts...
Purvi (pov): papa theek hi toh keh rahe hain viraj kab tk ek baap k pyar k liye tarse ga... nakul ki kismat main nahi tha Viraj ko ek baap ka pyar dena...jis tarhan meri Kismat main nhi tha ...baauji ka pyaar...nhi main apne viraj ko ek baap ka pyar zaroor doon gi... Lekin kaise...
while thinking about this...she slept on the sofa...
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