A Note From the Author -
This story has been removed for reconstruction.
Originally I had planned to leave it up, but the more people came to read it, the more I myself was horrified every time I went back and re-read through it to line up the reviews.
It's just a grossly unfinished piece of work, and I do not want that to be the representation of who I am as an author. I thought so very little out, and focused far too much on the wrong things, and neglected key factors - plus many more, far too many things to list out.
When the re-written project is complete it will be posting under a new story, so no need to follow this one. I want a fresh start for it that can hopefully stand on its own a little brighter and feels more complete as a whole.
- Hollenheist