I AM NOT DEAD!
Quick Notice: Rewrite for older chapters incoming. This means new chapters will be much slower. The rewritten chapters will fix the problems of the chapters and make the story better. I say this, but I haven't really gotten far into Chapter 1. This means the older chapters will be replaced, I'll keep them on my laptop and Google Docs, but don't know if I'll repost them again. And I have been thinking of deleting every comment that says 'Good Chapter' or 'Love this' Oh and for the late delay, I didn't like the first draft of this chapter. I wanted to post parts 1 and 2 together, but part 2 is taking too long and I'm taking a bit of a break to write Despair vs. Love Chapter 3, then return to finish part 2. Section 6 was meant to be in Part 2, but Part 2 would've been far too long. Also, please tell me you're honest thoughts about the new format.
Honest question for the To Love-Ru fans, who do you think has the most wasted potential? Out of the main cast. To me, it's Nana Deviluke. She's meant to be the Tsundere for Rito's harem, but she only does the Tsun part. All her Dere moments were in her head or stopped because of the plot or a joke. Seeing how she's a Deviluke, and with Momo and Lala being such huge roles inside To Love-Ru and Rito's harem, you would think Nana would be the same. Plus, she might have the least amount of fan service scenes out of all the girls, after becoming friends with Mea, Nana turned into a background character with only a minor role. It's even worst when Yami became a Tsundere after the Darkness Event, which pushed Nana more into the background, only serving as a person for Mea to talk to, it's a damn shame for the second oldest sister.
1:
Khoros was a rocky planet, far into the depths of space, the whole planet is a dusty, barbaric, world where only the strong survive. Tribes are ruled by bloodthirsty warlords that ceaselessly roam the landscape. The Species who inhabited Khoros are only a few, the first is Sandrippers. These are giant and vicious predators, these creatures are bulky olive green with a distinctive row of spines reaching from their head to the base of their necks. They swim through the sand, almost like how a Shark on Earth swims through water, even having the same fin as a Shark. Their jaws are strong enough to break through even the toughest of metals in the Universe.
The second and the race in charge of Khoros, Tetramands. These are ridiculous, massive aliens, reaching almost ten feet tall at the smallest. The Red Wind Kingdom is the most dominant force in all of Khoros, there are several Kingdoms. Some wished to overthrow the Red Wind Kingdom, but the might and strength of the Red Wind Kingdom, were too much and they swiftly got defeated by the Red Wing Princess, since the King, didn't see them as actual threats.
Tetramands are a Four-Armed Humanoid lifeform, the reason they have four arms is because of the Sandrippers. Tetramands are a buff and bulky species, because of the heat from the sun, and the fact that there's little moonlight, almost every single Tetramand that lives on Khoros is red, however, if taken away from the planet for a long enough time, their skin color would change to match the planet, like blue or brown. But, no one has seen a Tetramand living on Khoros that isn't red.
They have two front toes on each foot and have an additional set of smaller pectoral muscles below their primary set to help move their second set of arms. Each one of their four hands has three fingers and a thumb, they also have four eyes.
The Red Wind Kingdom is ruled by its king, Warlord Gar. Or Gar Red Wind has only lost one fight in his entire life, and that was against the King of Deviluke, Gid Deviluke. Gar, like most Tetramand is bulky and muscular, but unlike most, he is far bigger than even the average Tetramand, he has a full horn on the right side of his helmet and a broken one on the left. He's blind out of his lower left eye, covered by an eye patch. He's missing his lower left arm and has a scar on his upper left arm. Furthermore, he wears black pants and black fingerless gloves. Likewise, he has a golden shoulder pad on his upper-left arm and a golden arm shield on each of his hands, under his knees, he has golden leggings. Not only that, but he wears a white fur cape which comes out from a black-orange badge with a golden cover on his torso. His gloves' cuffs are made of the same white fur, he has dark olive bandages on his waist.
While, his only daughter, and next in line to the Red Wind Kingdom, Princess Looma Red Wind. She is between ten and fifteen feet tall, and she is considerably tall by Human standards. She has a noticeably more voluptuous and feminine body shape compared to most Tetramands. Likewise, she commonly wears the traditional Tetramand armor, complete with a battle helmet. In all of her time as Princess, she only lost to a single girl, Lala Deviluke. Rather than being Wed, the two became friends, strangely. Looma swears that once she defeats Lala, and then she will become the strongest in the Universe.
Normally, when a female Tetramand loses a fight, they must marry the winner, however, that's only when a female Tetramand loses against another male, not a female. Any male who has tried to fight against Looma has lost. They couldn't even last a single minute in the ring against her.
Looma sat on her throne, her father was out, visiting his lifelong rival, Gid Deviluke. Her mind was on Lala, it wasn't normal for that troublesome Princess to be this silent. The problem with Lala was her never-ending list of Suitors. King Gid wished for his daughter to be wed before her eighteenth birthday, and when a troublesome suitor did show up, Lala would normally visit Looma and then Looma would beat them up, and those suitors would never show their faces again.
But — now. It's been months and not a single word from Lala. Looma's thoughts betrayed her, wondering if her rival and friend didn't escape in time and got a worthless suitor. Then, the doors to the Red Wind Kingdom Throne room opened up, a Tetramand walked in, and he kneeled before his Princess.
"Her Highness," without Warlord Gar here, Looma was in charge. It wasn't uncommon for her subjects to call her such, even with her only being a Princess with no heir or husband. "A letter."
It was from Lala, Looma's hand tightened on her throne, even smashing the stone in her powerful grip. She readied over the letter, and Looma expected to find out about yet another suitor, one that she would soon defeat.
Yet…
Dear, Looma Red Wind.
I finally found a great Suitor on Earth, a Human called Rito Yuuki. He's the Omnitrix's wielder and is the Universe's strongest person. He even defeated Golden Darkness, (we call her Yami-Chan now. It's way cuter than Golden Darkness.) I love him, he defeated an entire army in less than five minutes to save me and promised to always protect me. It makes my heart flutter hearing it. Heh, I bet he could even defeat you, he has a Tetramand form in his Omnitrix. Rito says that the Omnitrix gives the best possible species, meaning his Tetramand could defeat you. Oh, well, see you soon, Looma.
From, Lala Satalin Deviluke.
The strongest person in the Universe. He could even defeat her. Impossible. If this Human wanted to marry Lala, he'd have to get through her first, "MEN!" Looma cried out, her voice echoing through the halls of her castle. "We're heading to Earth."
'Be prepared Rito Yuuki, I'm coming for you.' Looma thought since she would never give up her friend without a fight.
2:
Elsewhere, cursing through the depths of space, was a battleship, the Incursean Spaceship. One of the most dangerous armies in the entire Universe, their might, and numbers outweigh most planets, even without a Planet to call home, they have thousands of Spaceships, ready for war. It said that Incurseans could conquer a Planet in less than seventy-two hours.
Incurseans are a race of Toad-like Aliens, they hold dominion over a substantial portion of space. Hell, they are one of the few species that still rage war against the Deviluke Empire. Incurseans look like anthropomorphic toads that soften and make frog sounds, more from the males than the females. Male Incurseans have two types of bodies. They either have slim bodies with warty toad-like heads and yellow eyes, or they have larger forms with an even greater toad-like appearance. Genetically optional male Incurseans, such as the one inside the Omnitrix, Bullfrag is taller, muscular, and less warty.
Female Incurseans are a dime a dozen, the only one that most people have the "pleasure" of meeting is the daughter of Milleous, Attea. But, they looked very little like the males, they looked closer to Humans, aside from the wart-free green skin, yellow sclera-red pupils eyes, and a slightly large mouth.
Only Milleous and Attea have five fingers on each hand, due to their status as royalty, while all the other Incurseans have three fingers.
"NEXT!" By just the sound of her voice, one could tell she is completely bratty and spoiled. Empress Attea, a former Princess, after backstabbing her father Emperor Milleous. Most female Incurseans wouldn't be so picky… But, well, Attea desires perfection.
"NEXT," She rolled her eyes. Attea is a green-skinned Humanoid frog, she wears a purple flight suit with gray gloves, goggles, and a white scarf. She is around seventeen, has a dark green marking on her forehead, and wears long white tights.
The reason so many male Incurseans were lined up in a row only to were tossed to the side by Attea. It was simply put, she was looking for a husband. She grinded her teeth together, it didn't make any sense, why did she always have to chase after that Human.
Rito Yuuki.
But, he did hold her love, Bullfrag. 'No.' Attea shook her head, trying to get rid of those thoughts. It didn't help that that dreamy hunk of an Incursean plagued her dreams.
Each Incursean got dragged away, one glare from Attea was enough for all of them to stand frozen in place. Everyone knew that she wasn't one to be dealt with easily.
"I am the mighty Attea, conqueror of worlds, soon to be crowned high sovereign, grand empress, et cetera, et cetera of the whole Incursean empire! How am I supposed to make an iron-fisted impact at my coronation with one of these stringy weaklings by my side?!"
No one dared to answer her, almost like they were too afraid to answer her. They all knew how short her fuse was, and how she acted around the Human, Rito Yuuki. It was clear that she would get what she wanted. Attea even chased him around the entire Galaxy at one point, forcing him into fights, and taking over his home planet just to get his attention.
There's a human word for her, a word that Japan made, and Rito even heard her call her that word. Hearing it, caused Attea to be even angrier at him. Since Rito called her a "Tsundere." Attea didn't know what it meant, but she could tell he was mocking her.
"The only Incursean who was ever man enough turned out to be a human! Not to mention, he even kissed me. I can't believe my first kiss was that man." Attea spoke.
She would rather not admit it, but it goes without saying, that if she wanted a husband that met her ideals, there was only one choice in the entire Universe for her. No one else even came close.
"That's it! MEN! We're heading to Earth, no one will stop me." Attea ordered, and everyone knew that her orders couldn't be changed so simply.
"But, Lady Attea. Yuuki Rito, is engaged to Princess Lala Deviluke." Raff spoke up, he's a Sylonnoid commander in the Incursean Empire and was Emperor Milleous' right-hand man. His body was partially metallic, from his shoulders up to his forehead. He's almost entirely silver and made from metal. His lips and the outline of his eyes are a dark gray. His Sclear is black, and his pupils are pink. Likewise, his brain, which is completely visible from the outside, pokes out of his metal head and is protected by a thin, clear material.
"Enough, I won't hear anymore. Rito Yuuki will be mine. Is that clear? I don't care who's engaged with him, since by my word, Rito Yuuki will become my husband."
"MEN! We're heading to Earth!"
'Be prepared Rito Yuuki, for you will become mine.' Attea thought as she couldn't wait to see Rito Yuuki again… No, she shakes her head, she didn't want Rito. She wanted Bullfrag, only Bullfrag. Who would like that dirty Human, who's super nice, and caring, willing to listen to her? Plus, when they were stranded on a planet, he protected her and petted her.
NO.
She loves Bullfrag, that Human was just an idiotic, dummy. Who happens to be in the way of her love. 'I don't like him at all,'
3:
Back on Earth, the evening glow of the sun as it shines on Sainan Town. In the courtyard, this is the Town Square. Put in the center of Sainan Town, with a large clock, as it clicked past three PM. And sitting on some benches, underneath a tree, which is surrounded by brushes. A lot of high school students were out and about.
"Hey look, isn't that the girl we always see in the library?" One boy wondered he was a second-year at Sainan High School,
"You're right! And she's even reading here." His friend, another second-year at the same school.
The girl who caught their eye was none other than the most dangerous assassin in the entire Universe. Golden Darkness. Her long blonde hair and her knees pressed together as she was reading a magazine. With several more magazines next to her. From a passer-by, one would think she's a cute girl, with a slim build, and thick thighs. The reason Golden Darkness, or commonly known by her nickname, Yami, is still on Earth is because of one person.
Her target. Yuuki Rito. The Wielder of the Omnitrix.
"Good afternoon, Yami-Chan," A voice cried out, Yami's head lifted, as her crimson eyes moved to the person. Yuuki Mikan, her target little sister.
Mikan sat next to Yami, as she pressed her waist close to Yami's. "Yuuki Mikan," Yami responded,
"I'm telling you to call me Mikan, stop being so formal. I want to be your friend." Mikan replied,
Yami took a deep breath, "You know, you're older brother, Yuuki Rito is my target. I'm going to take his life. One shouldn't be friends with a killer like me," Yami replied.
Mikan rolled her eyes, "Nah, Rito can't die that easily, the Omnitrix won't let him," Mikan reported, Yami's eyes moved to Mikan as she had her hands behind her head as he knees together, protecting anyone from seeing up her skirt.
Mikan knew about the Omnitrix. Maybe she even knew why whenever Yami attacked Rito, he changed into a different form. Likes of Segmentasapien, Petrosapien, Polymorph, Crystalsapien, Galvan, or Prypiatosian-B to name a few. The Galvan was the worst, allowing Yuuki Rito to look up her short skirt to see her white panties.
Yami shook those thoughts out of her head, she would rather not win using someone else, Yuuki Rito is her target, and she would defeat him without the aid of Mikan.
"What are you reading?" Mikan wondered, as she pressed her body against Yami's arm, it seemed like the younger of the Yuuki siblings had no idea of personal space.
"Books on Earth's Fashion, it's much different than the ones on other planets," Yami replied,
Mikan picked up a few of them, Yami expected Rito to be nearby, yet, she couldn't see him anywhere, "Where's your kin?"
"My kin? Who the heck says that anymore," Mikan giggled, as she pushed against Yami's arm, her smile was wide as she finally was able to breathe. "He doesn't know I'm here, I snuck out to see you."
"Why?"
Yami's question was clear and simple, one that she wished to know about, Mikan put down the magazines as she looked up into the evening sky. It was a partly cloudy day, the days were turning a little chilly, as the cold air brushed against Mikan's skin and ruffled her skirt.
"We're similar. You kept saying you're a weapon, but if that's true, then what does that make me?" Mikan wondered,
Yami didn't respond, she didn't know how to respond to that, Mikan's eyes widened at her mistake. "I guess I should explain myself. There's a hidden planet, no one knows how to get there, that part is unimportant. But, on that planet, there's a river that contains every DNA in the known Universe, it's where the Omnitrix gets its DNA from and if Rito ever loses an alien, he could just replace it."
That last part sounded, off. Yami noticed it, "Rito's aliens are him, if they feel pain, so does he, and if they die… Then he would feel that same pain, that's why he doesn't replace any of them, not Ghostfreak or Feedback. Maybe he just wants the original back even if that's impossible." Mikan seemed to answer Yami's question without needing to even look at the assassin.
"And what about you?" Yami wondered,
"I fell into that river, and well," Mikan spoke as she took a deep breath and closed her eyes. Her breathing was slow and heavy, as she was deep in thought.
"Upgrade," Mikan's left arm changed, it was similar to Yami's powers rather than for one thing. Yami turns her body into any weapon in the Universe, if she hadn't seen a weapon it only took a glance to copy it and make it her own. However, Mikan's left arm turned into an alien; a Galvanic Mechamorph, her left arm is now a black exterior with green stripes that resemble circuitry all over him.
"See, I got silly once, and now I'm not even Human anymore," Mikan spoke as her arm turned back to normal again. "I don't have much control over it. I'm surprised I've even got Upgrade."
Upgrade? Yami tilted her head to the side, then she got it, that must be Rito's nickname for his Galvanic Mechamorph. "MIKAN!" The two girls looked up as Rito ran towards them.
He was exhausted, as the Omnitrix was in timeout mode, as he was sweating buckets. He really was just running around all over to try to find her. That's what makes Mikan and Yami different, 'I wonder if she was still alive, would she be like him, and care for me the same way?' Those types of thoughts should stay in the past where they belong.
It seemed like he had company… Yami couldn't remember every girl or person. The only face and name she has committed to memory was Yuuki Rito above all others. But with Rito were Lala Deviluke, Haruna Sairenji, Julie Yamamoto, Lucy Mann, and two others she didn't recognize. The first, Momikoa Risa. Yami already knew from a single glance she wouldn't like this rather flashy girl, in her magazine the words Gal. Her short shoulder-length dirty blond hair (which is clearly dyed.) And her dark brown eyes, she has a curvaceous figure; however, it wasn't close to Lala. Her collar was unbuttoned allowing the men to see the soft top of her cleavage, and her skirt was far too short, where a single bad brush of wind would show the world what color panties she was currently wearing.
She's wearing the standard school uniform. Her friend, Mio Sawada, has dark brown hair tied in two pigtails, and with light-brown eyes, covered by a pair of glasses.
"Geez, Rito found me," Mikan seemed disappointed, as her head hung rather low. Or maybe it was to hide the smile that was creeping on her face to see her older brother worked up into a daze looking for her.
"Aren't these moms clothing?" Rito wondered as he took notice of the messy pile of books.
Mikan blinked as she pushed against Rito, her chest pressing up against his arm. Rito's face began to warm, as he watched his little sister pressing her rather perky chest up against his body.
'She's your sister… No… That's not true, Alien X told me as such… Besides, my real sister… I couldn't protect her… I even killed her.'
"Huh, you are right, I guess there's a first time for everything," Mikan remarked, Rito could only smile, it was painful and empty, but he could only grin.
"Then, why don't we try on some things," Lucy suggested,
She needed a standpoint, somewhere to start on this weird idea of hers, to build Rito a harem of lovely ladies. The first step was to make a list of everyone who loves him or has any type of feelings for him and work on them one at a time.
Her eyes drifted to Lala and Haruna, would those two even help with her mission? Perhaps, if Lucy happens to find a kindred spirit, someone who loves Rito enjoys messing with him and wants to build him a harem.
But...
It's not like she's going to run into someone like that in the Galaxy.
Meanwhile, on Deviluke, the third Princess, Momo Belia Deviluke suddenly sneezed, rubbing her nose as her hand combed her plants. It was as if someone were talking about her. Maybe it was her older sister, "I hope you're okay, Lala."
4:
Indies Bland Cronos, "Welcome to Cronos!" The staff greeted them, as the streets were lined with students from schools, walking down the streets, chilling in cafés or just hanging out with friends. While inside the store, Yami felt the soft cotton of pink panties. Currently, Rito was completely out of his element here, as the clothing on the wall and the underwear was a female-only store, and he walked in with a group of girls. The men who looked at them must have the entirely wrong idea and consider this to be some weird real-life harem story.
Risa and Mio were the ones to push Yami into the changing room, it was just a small corner of the shop, covered by a curtain. The only thing to reach one's ears was the ruffling of clothes being taken off. Rito was already feeling uncomfortable in this area. Having an undressed Yami, right behind that curtain, was causing Rito's heart to beat.
Mainly because he was afraid of her. Terribly frightened of her. But, Rito knew that he had trouble, some force in the Universe hated him and wanted to put him into these peculiar pervert accidents. But, Rito had a plan, his fist clenched as his eyes were sparkling, if he didn't move from the spot he was standing, he couldn't trip on something and fall into the changing room while Yami was undressed.
Then, he wouldn't die.
Then again, he did forget about the girl who changes clothes in less than two seconds to be patient and wait for someone to get changed. "Yami-Chan, are you done yet?" Lala wondered as she cried out.
Lala's hand was reaching towards the curtain to pull it open to check the assassin. Rito stepped forward, trying to stop Lala from opening the curtain. But it was too late, it seemed like the others were somewhere else in the store and were looking for outfits for either themselves or for Yami to try on.
But, Rito and Lala were the ones to wait for Yami to finish changing. And now, Rito saw it all. Her pale soft skin, as her cheeks were warm. She pressed her battle dress against her soft breasts. Her legs were pressing against each other. Rito could see every part of her body, as her covering did little to protect her from Rito's daze. "I'm not done yet!" She cried out, punching him into the side.
'Why me?' He had to wonder, and also why didn't the Omnitrix protect him? But the force of Yami's punch was bad, but it was something Rito could walk away from without much of a scratch.
Yami came out, each time wearing a different set of clothes. The first was a black hat, with black shorts with a skull, and a sleeveless shirt. The next one looked close to her normal battle dress, with a pure black look, the only difference was the cross next to the collar and the long fingerless gloves that went past her elbows. The final dress caused Rito's face to heat up, and then, believe it or not, for a brief period he forgot about his fear of the girl. Her long golden hair was tied in two pigtails, a short mini-skirt that reached to her upper thighs, a belt wrapped around her waist, a necklace, and her top was a nice color.
"You look cute, it's very pretty on you," Rito commented.
"So, this type of clothing makes you lower your guard…" Yami spoke, and it sent a shiver down Rito's spine.
It wasn't something she could fight in or something she would ever wear. In her line of work, there were countless who wanted revenge for what she had done, the road Yami had decided to walk was soaked in a bath of blood and losses.
"It looks like we have countless cuties, boys, I want the Blondie." The voice came from the leader of the group.
Where they even come from, a small group of thugs, teenagers, around eighteen or so. They were swinging from side to side, and their breath reeked of alcohol and tobacco. The leader, a rather taller man, with flaming red hair, and deep blue eyes, grabbed onto Yami's arm. He was a weird one, even though he wanted Yami, his eyes never left Rito's body, with his star-shaped pupils. Rito felt like he had seen those pupils before, as the necklace of a star swung in the wind. He even had tattoos of stars on the back of his hand and his cheek.
Before Yami could do anything, a hand pressed on the man's shoulder, and a large red hand pushed him against the ground. Four Arms, Rito's Tetramand transformation, the man let out a somewhat dull and tired sigh. It was as if the man let himself be pushed to the ground.
Yami looked at Four Arms, when did he even transform or move in front of her? "I know you could've handled it, but I didn't want you to ruin your pretty new dress."
"Is that so," Yami replied, as the praise of her clothing. "I'm sorry... But my normal clothes seem to be the best."
Rito had to wonder why she suddenly changed her mind, as her red eyes moved to him. Yami could only look at her surroundings. Her target protected her, she was growing weaker, and she didn't know why. Could it be the town itself, it was peaceful most of the time, nothing like it anywhere in the Galaxy. Or it could be the Humans she had met, either way, the more she was sticking around, the more it felt like she could never complete her goal of her target of Yuuki Rito.
The man blinked as he looked at the sky, "Huh, seems like things won't be so dull now." He reported as he grinned, looking at Rito, "I better change," then he was gone, without anyone remembering he was even there in the first place.
The sun was getting blocked out, the once clear blue sky was getting clouded, as the sun that was warming their town was blocked by two invading ships, "The Incurseans?" Haruna wondered,
"And The Tetramands, I never thought I'd see two of the three greatest armies on one planet," Yami reported
Haruna and Mikan's attention was drawn to Rito, "Huh?" He looked to the left where Haruna stood. "Huh?" Then he whipped his head to the right where Mikan stood.
"What did you do this time?" Haruna and Mikan asked simultaneously.
"Why immediately blame it on me?" Rito asked, "It's only an invading warship of Bullfrags and Four Arms. It's not like they're after me, right…"
"Rito Yuuki!" There was a loud megaphone, coming from one of the ships. Yup, that's Attea, his Tsundere Frog Empresses.
"Rito Yuuki!" And there was another loud megaphone coming from the other ships. Lala nodded her head, yup, that's her childhood friend Looma.
This was, undoubtedly, Rito's fault.
5:
There were many times when Rito felt like he wasn't a man. He has been wanting to improve himself and wanting to make sure that he can protect the ones he cares for. Getting picked up by the towering Looma Red Wind, as she held the collar of his shirt between her fingers was one of those moments of shame and embarrassment.
"Are you Yuuki Rito?" Looma wondered, looking down at the puny, noodle-armed Human that stood before her.
"Of course he is, now back off, Rito Yuuki is mine!" Attea stomped her foot in a fit of frustration before her cheeks began to warm up, "... I mean, Bullfrag is mine, I don't care for the human part of him at all." Attea huffed as she folded her arms underneath her chest.
Rito tried to think back, what did he do? Take in a runaway space Princess, defeat the Kuro who's known as the Galaxy's Top Assassin, defeat Golden Darkness who's known as the Universe's Top Assassin, and stop countless attacks on Earth and other planets. Saved the Universe… Nope, the more he thought about it, the less it made any sense. There's no reason why this Princess Looma should even be here. And the more he thought about it, why are there two top-tier Assassins after his life, his life shouldn't be on Dark Souls levels of difficulty.
"Looma, why are you here?" Lala wondered, Rito wanted to cry, at least someone was asking a good question… Wait, these two know each other.
"It's because of your letter. I wouldn't allow my friend to be taken by a lower lifeforms, if he can't defeat me, then he can't marry you."
First, it was Lala's fault. Second, that whole 'Lower lifeforms' was a little racist. Wait, all he needed to do was beat her in a fight. "Deal, I stomp you like how Mario stomps Goombas."
"I don't understand, but it seems like you wish to accept my challenge," Looma spoke, the human didn't hold any fear in his eyes.
"Yuuki Rito, but you do know…" Yami spoke, but Lucy quickly covered her mouth, it was odd, Lala was close to doing so as well. The huffing and thoroughly ignored Attea grumbled as she started to stomp her foot against the ground.
"Listen here, Rito Yuuki! I didn't come halfway across the Galaxy to be ignored! If the big muscle head gets to challenge you, so do I! It's only my right as the Empress! If I win, then you become mine! I mean, Bullfrag becomes mine, only him, not a dunderhead like you!" Attea yelled,
Rito blinked, was this his life now? "Fine, then, what's both of your challenges, and what happens if I win?"
"That won't happen, I won't allow it to…" Attea started to shout as she pointed her finger at him.
"Both Attea and Looma have to get engaged to Rito." Lucy chimes in, a cold silence blows through as Lucy's words cut through the sound and the chaos.
…
A cold and dripping silence fell across the area. One could drop a single needle and it would make as much noise as a tree falling over. A deadly silence, one that could be cut through with a sharp knife.
Did Rito hear that correctly? He would get two new fiancées.
"It's not like I'll be losing to a stinky gross human, like Rito. Huff." She actually said the word huff and not huffed after she had finished talking. "He's stupid and plain. Not to mention idiotic, brainless, kind, caring, rather strong, and..." Attea stopped for a second, noticing what she was saying "And... He's a dirty smelly Human who's super gross and trips on any woman he sees!"
"Very well, I agree. Even if he defeats me, then I'll have to marry him. But no one can do that. Lala's my best friend and I won't give her to the likes of you." Looma's demanding voice rang strong.
Okay, this was happening. What's next Ren comes by and demands to steal Lala away from him. Or maybe Run gets jealous and wants into the challenge, so he'll be her fiancée.
Rito's eyes turned to the left, as he blinked once or twice. Run was here, when did she even appear? It was as if she were teleported right next to him. An unknown feat as a whistling girl sat on the rooftops, and a bucket of popcorn appeared in between her small hands. Small little Kami, giggling at the sight.
Run didn't know how she got here, the last thing she remembers is bribing the Principal to allow her to go to school when Ren wasn't in control. Then proof, suddenly she was here, next to her darling Rito. She quickly wrapped her arms around him, pressing his head against her chest.
'Right, I should make sure that Ren doesn't get in the way. It would ruin the fun.' Kami spoke, as she snapped her fingers. A simple command, one that wouldn't allow Run to sneeze for the following twenty-four hours. "I wonder if I should make Rito walk into the bathroom when Run's showering just to make her swap to Ren… Nah, that would scar him for life, and I can't make him mine alone if he's scared of me."
Everyone else seemed to notice the girl out of thin air, appearing like magic, Run placed her hands on her hips with a confident and rather smug grin on her face. "I want to be in the challenge as well. My father told me, I wasn't allowed one until I turned of age for some reason. But, I would like to spend the rest of my days with my Darling Rito, so I want in!" Run declared.
Lucy shook her head, this wasn't what she planned, but it'd work either way. "Then, declare your challenges for Rito, and let's get started. "
"Fight." Looma one was quick, she didn't even think about it.
"Race." Attea one was almost as quick, with a simple pause at the beginning.
"… A Scavenger Hunt!" Meanwhile, Run took the longest to decide on what she wanted.
"And the rules shall be, Rito is allowed to use the Omnitrix during these challenges, but he can only use it five times during each one."
Now, begins Lucy's plan as she grinned.
The time, was around four in the afternoon. Lucy huffed, as she folded her arms with a pout on her lips. Doing all three in a single day was possible. But with the day already nearing its end. And the time when students should be rushing home to watch an episode of anime or start cooking dinner for themselves or their families. Lucky enough, tomorrow is Saturday. The evening glow was warm as it hit her skin.
"Then, shall we try this tomorrow at eight? Looma, Attea, and then Run." Lucy reported that Kami, from her watching post, could only roll her eyes, people may notice if time suddenly decided to freeze for the following hours. So, her enjoyment of watching Rito will have to wait.
"Until then, Looma and Attea. You can stay with Rito."
Never mind, Kami just needs to make a mental note never kill Lucy or at least kill her last. Most likely the latter, "No, if those two are staying, so will I!" Run declared, with her hands on her hips sticking her chest out in pride.
"Then, sleepover at Rito's place." Lucy cheered,
As Rito placed his hand on her shoulder, Mikan could already feel the pressure of having to feed such a large crowd of people. "I know it's not much, but I can help."
Then, he leaned over to Lala, as he whispered into her ear, his soft warm breath sinking into her eardrum, made her spine shiver, "Would everyone even fit?" Rito whispered to Lala,
"Don't worry, I can use my room device on the entire house. It's how I sleep in the attic."
She says that, but she spends more time sleeping in his bed than her own. It's not like Rito was one to complain.
6:
Yuuki Rito.
Ever since that fateful day, five years ago, when he was ten. His life has never once been what one calls 'peaceful.' But, he was happy, he had a wonderful little sister, whom some people call him a Siscon, a loving Grandfather, and a rather cute childhood friend that he finally opened up to. If Rito's life were anything normal, one would expect him to finally confess to the girl of his dreams, as they would finally start dating. No matter how awkward they might be at the start. They still love each other, and might even marry in the future, only time will tell.
But, Yuuki Rito's life wasn't normal. Ever since he got the Omnitrix. He knows without it, he would've never become friends with Haruna as quickly as he did, hell, he might have never become friends with her. But, never did Rito expect that his home, his Sanctuary. It was filled with women.
Paradise for some, maybe even dreams, however. Rito knew the truth, there was a girl who wanted to kill him and could turn any part of her body into a weapon, if she wanted to she could slice off his… Rito's eyes moved to his lower regions as his gaze got caught by Yami, aka Golden Darkness. He swallowed the lump in his throat that he didn't even know he had until now. Then, he has a bloodthirsty spoiled brat of an Empress, as she was kicking her legs in the air, crying out her demands, claiming that Rito Yuuki should wait on her hand and feet until she wins, and he becomes hers tomorrow.
That's not counting the Tetramand warrior who was almost double his height she might be double his height, the Death by Snu-Shu, jokes would run into his head by the mini Saruyama Kenichi on his shoulder. Rito was sure she could snap him in half with her finger. Then, there was Run, the childhood 'friend?' of Lala, as she was cuddling up next to Rito, sitting on his lap, and her breasts were pressing up against his face. Now, he understands why Yami was glaring at him, and why she was sharpening a knife.
Wait, she has a normal kitchen knife, not even a knife she created, and Mikan was near Yami, both of them giving him the whole 'You're Dead' expression. Why he hasn't even done anything, no matter how much he wants to. When did he try to be so nice to this point where he was scared to act on girls?
Was it because of Haruna? It could be, that back when Rito was 10, he had more of a backbone for girls and didn't care much about them. But, once he became friends with Haruna. He started to be kinder, he was even nice to people like Frightwig and Charmcaster.
When he figured out he had a crush on Haruna, his viewpoint changed, a snot-nose brat or jerk wouldn't win a woman's heart, so he wanted to be kind and charming, but somewhere down the line, his kindness turned into a weird curse. Maybe, there was no right or wrong answer here.
Rito stood up, as he walked in a haze, the toilet was calling his name, and Lala made some unusual machine, she put on the side of the house, allowing it to grow. Rito felt like it wasn't even his home anymore, the hallway was longer, and the house was still two floors, but a single closet was now a fully made bedroom. Made to fit all the guests, and now the house and different rooms.
Which leads Rito to the biggest decision in his life.
To go to the left or go to the right.
Yuuki Rito stood at the end of the hall, as he looked at the two doors, in his old home, one would lead to the bathroom with the toilet, bath, shower, and all the other basic needs. The other leads to the back to his house and the laundry room, where Mikan would clean the clothes and then hang them outside to dry.
Now, however. Thanks to Lala, "I put in two bathrooms, they side by side, since we have so many people here." Why the hell would someone put a bathroom opposite another bathroom?
Rito shook his head, he needed to think about this, whatever his answer was, the one with a naked girl in the shower. That's how his luck normally goes. So, if he wants to go to the left, he goes to the right. A fifty-fifty chance, then, the sounds of rushing water drowned his ears, it echoed in the halls. Rito couldn't tell which direction it was coming from, whether it was left or right. He can't be overthinking about this, who was in the kitchen and living room again?
Yami said she was going to take a bath, and then Mikan and Lala joined. So, if he chooses wrong, then, he'll die. The sounds of humming, meet his ears when he takes a step to the left. That was coming from the left door, but he could hear it from the right.
Is he insane, has Rito lost his mind? There was a coin-flip chance he would run into a naked girl. No, he should stop thinking, and go with his gut, if the universe hates him, then he'll hate the universe back.
"Right!" Rito cried out, as he opened the right door with the biggest grin on his face,
It wasn't until after that Rito thought, 'Why didn't I knock first?'
He was greeted, by the smooth naked skin of Yami, as he could see every inch of her graceful naked body, from her modest breasts to her thick thighs, since she was standing in the bath, Rito was able to see all of her in one take. While his eyes moved to Mikan who was pressing her back against Lala's skin, Lala only smiled as she got up from the bath, splashing the water to show Rito her large chest. Pulling Mikan up with her, allowing Rito to see everything, his face was heating up.
"I… hate… Ecchi… People…"
Her hair formed into a gigantic fist as it slammed into Rito's face, causing him to crash through the other door, his body landed in water and his head hit something soft. A pair of pillows, his hand moved to something sturdy. His eyes moved up, as his face was pressed up against Attea's breasts, and his hands were gripping Looma's thigh, only one thought came to his head.
'Oh come on! It was rigged!'
To be continued in Part 2 of Galactic Love.
So, umm… Why did this take so long? Easy, the first draft sucked. Second, I got tired of all the complaining about the earlier chapters so I decided to start to rewrite them. Meaning, that newer chapters might take longer. I've been thinking about stopping writing My Hero Academia Stories, so my writing will be this and Despair vs. Love unless I want to write a one-shot.
I've also been thinking about changing up the order of events. Seeing how a lot of people are wanting Momo in the story.
The line up currently is Battle In Galaxic Love, I Put A Spell On You (Which is a super important Chapter), The Strongest in the Universe (This has Lala's dad), Haunted School Building (Oshizu), Valentine's Day (Might be cut), A Star Is Heatblast (Kyoko), The Hunter (Meant to be Kai), Best Harem in the Universe (Really, only a Joke Chapter), Side Story 3: Mikan 10, Beach Paradise? (This is taken from a couple of chapters from the manga), and Trouble Quest (Which is Momo and Nana)
Now, what could be changed is; Battle In Galaxic Love, I Put A Spell On You, Strongest In the Universe, Haunted School Building, A Star Is Heatblast, Trouble Quest, Side Story: Mikan 10 (Maybe, side stories might be held off until the end of the story.) Best Harem in the Universe, The Hunter, and Beach Paradise?
Titles are always changing. If you have a better idea for a chapter title, shoot it and I'll think about it.