Alright, I haven't touched this story in a while. Rereading it makes me cringe because of how bad my writing was at this time as this was probably the second or third story I ever wrote.
So I'm giving this the White Core and Dark Age treatment of a rewrite. So stay tuned for the new and improved version of this with hopefully better writing.
It'd be kind of bad if I didn't grow as a writer at all in the past year.