I don't know what the heck I just done. I saw a Russian comic in I decided to make this. So are their ages? On the comic they were kids so yeah, I'm not doing that. I would say they're 13. A great minimal aged. But I'm going to let the age be on the interpretation of the reader.
Also the Russian comic wasn't about Bluey. Also would you like this to be a fanfic or remaine as a one shot?
Also thanks for the criticism. It always helps improve my English writing skills. I also accept insults. They're just so fun to read. ;)
In the courtyard of the Heelers' house, a place usually filled with the games of Bluey and Bingo, Mackenzie joined them that day. He had decided to visit them because...
His parents were away. However, his mother and father allowed him to visit Bluey, which made the Border Collie very happy. The Heeler sisters and Mackenzie played various games: from hide-and-seek and tag to playing mom and dad...
In short, it was a very pleasant and fun time. So what happens now? Bluey, Bingo and Mackenzie were sitting on the grass watching the sunset, the sky painted in shades of orange and pink.
"What a beautiful sunset!" Mackenzie said.
"I agree," Bluey and Bingo said at the same time. They were very surprised and laughed, including Mackenzie.
"It's been a fun time with you two," the Border Collie said, looking at the healers, "if I hadn't come to you I would have died of boredom."
"Mackenzie, it's impossible to be bored with us," Bluey told him.
"Yes," Bingo confirmed as she moved closer to him. "If you get bored again, you can come back to us. It's always nice to have a pilot.
The Border Collie smiled and looked away at the sunset. "Oh, I have to go for a walk," Bingo said, and ran home with a little blush on her face.
Bluey and Mackenzie looked back and saw that Bingo had almost run over Bandit, who was passing by while eating a sandwich. He almost choked on it, by the way. The two laughed at what had happened and looked at each other.
"Bingo is funny," Mackenzie said, "it's a shame I don't have a sister or brother.
"At least you have your friends. Bluey replied with a smile. "And maybe children in the future.
"Oh, thank you! Bluey. Mackenzie replies with a bit of shame. "Although you know that I don't plan to have children".
"Just because you don't plan to have them now doesn't mean you won't have kids in the future. Respond the Blue Heeler getting close to her friend.
Suddenly, they heard a loud crash from inside the house, followed by Bandit's voice yelling, "Bingo! What are you doing in the kitchen with that flour?"
The two laughed a little, their giggles echoing through the backyard. Mackenzie walked over to Bluey, who was sitting up, and kissed her on the cheek.
The heeler blushed deeply, her cheeks turning a rosy pink.
"Mackenzie, why did you do that?" Bluey asked, her voice a mixture of curiosity and shyness.
"It's to thank you for having fun with me," Mackenzie replied with a shy smile.
"Why would you do that?" Bluey pressed, still puzzled.
"I thought it would be better to... to kiss than to say thank you," Mackenzie admitted, looking at the ground as he spoke.
"Oh, I see." Bluey was silent for a few moments, her mind processing what had just happened. Then she added, "Tell me, honestly, was it friendly?"
"Y-yes... It was," the border collie replied stammering, his eyes darting nervously. He hoped she understood.
A moment later, Bingo ran over to them, her energy infectious as she plopped down next to them with a big grin.
"Hey, what are you guys talking about?" Bingo asked, looking back and forth between Mackenzie and Bluey.
"Not much," Bluey said quickly, her cheeks still slightly pink. "Just having fun."
" I didn't know how much fun kissing could be". Bingo pressed, her tone teasing and mischievous.
"We were not kissing". both Bluey and Mackenzie exclaimed in unison, their faces turning red.
"Ha! I know, Bluey doesn't know how to kiss". Bingo teased with a smirk, enjoying the moment.
"Hey, I know how to give a kiss!" retorted Bluey defensively, crossing her arms and frowning at her sister.
"No, you don't. Let me show you how it's done". Bingo said confidently. She turned to Mackenzie with a playful grin.
Mackenzie, caught off guard but always up for a bit of fun, shrugged and leaned in. Bingo planted a quick, "innocent kiss" on Mackenzie's mouth, then pulled back with a triumphant look.
"See? That's how you do it!" Bingo declared, looking back at Bluey with a hint of pride.
Mackenzie was paralyzed with astonishment. Bluey went into shock. Neither of them could believe what Bingo had just done. They kept like that for a few seconds while Bingo was watching them.
"I think I'll go check on my mom. See you later alligators".
In that second Bluey came out of his state of shock and just shouted. Bingo! And started running after her.
"That was something I did not expect". Though Mackenzie touching his lips.
"So! Did I miss anything interesting?" asked Bandit as he walked into the yard, his eyes twinkling with curiosity.
"Uh, no, nothing's been going on. Y-yes, that's right, "confirmed" Mackenzie, his voice a little too quick and his smile a bit too wide.
Bandit raised an eyebrow but decided not to press the matter.
"Hey, Mackenzie, your dad's here for you!"
The young Border Collie, hearing this, sighed and stood up, shaking off some of the blades of grass that clung to his fur. He had been enjoying the time with his friends, but he knew it was time to go home.
"Well, tell the girls I gotta go! Bye! Bye!"Mackenzie said, waving energetically.
"Bye!"
Meanwhile Bluey was chasing Bingo all over the house. She wanted to know why she did it. Why she had kissed Mackenzie.
"I didn't do that to make you that jealous" Bingo shouted as he ran for his life.
"Then why did you do it?" Bluey asked ironically.
"I just wanted to give you a few nudges to tell him how you felt. I don't want anything to do with Mackenzie". Said Bingo.
Bluey stopped running and started breathing slowly to calm herself. "You wanted to make me jealous?" She asked as a shocked look appeared on her face.
"I thought that would be the only way you would finally tell him how you feel about him". replied the little orange dog.
Bluey stared at her sister, processing the revelation. Suddenly, she burst into laughter. Bingo, taken aback, stopped in her tracks.
"What's so funny?" Bingo demanded, crossing her arms.
"You!" Bluey giggled. "Your plan was to make me jealous so I'd tell Mackenzie I like him? That's so... so you, Bingo!"
Bingo puffed out her chest proudly. "Well, did it work? Are you going to tell him?"
Bluey paused, still smiling. "I guess I have to now, don't I?"
At that moment, Bandit walked into the room, holding a bowl of popcorn. —What's all the ruckus about? Why are you two running around like headless chickens?
Bluey and Bingo exchanged glances, trying not to giggle.
Meanwhile, in Mackenzie's car on the way home, her dad glanced at him with a smile.
"How did it go with Bluey and Bingo?" he asked, his voice filled with curiosity.
Mackenzie's mind raced back to the events of the day, particularly the two unexpected kisses. He felt his cheeks heat up slightly. "I had a lot of fun with them today" he replied, trying to keep his tone casual.
He had finally managed to talk deeply with Bluey, something he had been wanting to do for a while. The kiss on her cheek had been a bold move for him, but it felt right in the moment. What he hadn't anticipated was Bingo's sudden kiss on the mouth, which had caught him completely off guard. He knew it would be best not to mention that part to his father. Still, he couldn't shake the curiosity and confusion swirling in his mind. He decided to seek some advice.
"Dad, how do you kiss a girl?" Mackenzie asked, his voice a mix of innocence and genuine curiosity.
His father chuckled, clearly surprised by the question but taking it seriously. "Well, that's an interesting question, Mackenzie. Kissing someone is a way to show you care about them, but it's important that both people are comfortable and ready for it.
Mackenzie nodded, absorbing his father's words. "But how do you know if they're ready? How do you do it right?"
His father smiled warmly, taking a moment to think. "It's all about being respectful and paying attention to how the other person feels. You can often tell by looking at their body language and their eyes. If they seem comfortable and happy, that's a good sign. And always remember, it's okay to ask if they're okay with it."
Mackenzie considered this, feeling a bit more at ease. "So, you mean, someone like mom and you?"
"Yes. It shows that you care about their feelings and that you respect them. Just like I do with your mom". His father replied.
As they continued driving, Mackenzie felt a sense of relief. He looked out the window, watching the scenery pass by, and thought about Bluey.
"Thanks, Dad. That really helps". Mackenzie said sincerely.
"Anytime, kiddo. Remember, the most important thing is to be kind and respectful —his father said, reaching over to ruffle his hair affectionately.
As they pulled into the driveway of their home, Mackenzie felt a mixture of excitement and calm. He was looking forward to the next time he would see Bluey and Bingo, feeling more confident about navigating the complicated world of feelings and friendships.
The car came to a stop, and Mackenzie grabbed his bag, ready to head inside. He turned to his dad one last time before getting out.
"Bluey will want to kiss me? And why Bingo kiss me?
Although he wanted to heed more of his father's words simply some doubts were creeping into his head. Because it's surprise kiss from Bingo affected his mind more than he would have thought. And he simply couldn't forget it. And it was for one of the reasons he didn't want to think. He hated that there might be that possibility. Bingo did something to him.
Because his lips now tasted like oranges.
And to his surprise, he had liked the taste.