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Authors Note: Welcome to chapter 4 of "Tornado adopts a Unicorn".
If you think Tatsumaki is acting out of character, please tell me immidiately. In most FanFic's, after Eri gets adopted by someone, the character completely changes and it kind of turns me of (if you even say it like that). So I hope Tatsumaki feels right to you and I will do my best on keeping it that way.
And as always, if you have some tips for me on how to improve my writing, please tell me.
"Speaking" 'Thoughts' "SCREAMING" "Loud talking or All Might" "REALLY LOUD SCREAMING"
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Tornado adopts a Unicorn
Tatsumaki woke up completely refreshed and was ready to finally get some hero work done after she got the license from Nezu today. But she felt like she had forgotten something. Eh, whatever. Tatsumaki rolled on her left side and came face to face with a child standing beside her bed. Oh, right. She adopted a child yesterday.
"Uhhh, good morning? You woke up?" 'Great, you couldn't come up with something better?' Tatsumaki cringed internally after saying that.
The girl looked unsure, as if she wasn't brave enough to say what was on her mind. Tatsumaki didn't know what to do. Fubuki always told her what she wanted, so what should she do? But Tatsumaki was saved by a loud growl coming out of Eri's tummy.
'Oh, she's just hungry.' Tatsumaki thought relieved, and smiled at the girl.
Then her eyes widened and grew to the size of dinner plates.
'OH GOD SHE DIDN'T EAT ANYTHING YESTERDAY!'
Tatsumaki panicked and jumped out of her bed in a hurry. She picked up Eri and floated to the kitchen to prepare something to eat. "Hey Eri, what do you want for breakfast?" Tatsumaki prayed that the girl just wanted something simple because, by God, her cooking was bad. She never had to cook her entire life and just visited restaurants or ordered some takeout.
Eri looked at her in confusion. "I can choose?" May god have mercy on Overhaul after she gets her fingers on him.
The esper smiled down at Eri in her arms. "Of course you can. You can have anything you want, so just tell me, and I will prepare something for you. And if you're ever hungry again, just tell me, ok? You don't have to be afraid." Tatsumaki told her firmly.
It was strange for Eri to be told that you don't have to be afraid of telling someone when you're hungry. But it calmed the small child down. "I don't know what I want to eat. Please don't be mad." Eri pleaded in hopes of not upsetting Tatsumaki.
"Hey kid, what did I just tell you. You don't have to be afraid of me. Come on, how about some Omurice? I know you will like it." Tatsumaki tried to cheer Eri up again, placed Eri in a chair at the table, and began to prepare the food.
Thank God Nezu filled the fridge to its fullest, so Tatsumaki at least had some options on how to prepare the dish. While Tatsumaki was busy cooking, Eri looked at her with anticipation, wondering what Omurice was and how it would taste.
It didn't take long for Tatsumaki to prepare the food and place it on the table. One for herself and one for Eri of course. Tatsumaki waited for Eri to take the first bite because she wanted to see if she had done a good job.
Eri looked at the food, drool leaking out of her mouth, and then took the first bite. Instantly, she continued to devour the dish with stars in her eyes. It tasted amazing. A thousand times better than what Overhaul provided her.
Tatsumaki looked at the child eating like she was starving and was proud of herself. It looked like her cooking wasn't as bad as she thought. But it was strange that Eri doesn't smile at all, even after eating like she never had anything better in her life. Whatever, she can just ask about it later and began to eat herself.
It was the most disgusting thing she ate in a while. How the hell is the girl stomaching this shit? Tatsumaki looked at Eri carefully. "Does it taste good?"
The girl stopped eating and looked at Tatsumaki in awe. "Hhmmhh, it's delicious. Thank you." She immediately went back to eat. But then she stopped again and fidgeted nervously with her fork. "Umm, why are you doing this for me? I- I'm cursed and m- make people disappear." Her expression changed to a worried one, and she looked to the ground.
Ignoring the bad food, Tatsumaki tried to explain herself. "You see, when I was your age, well a bit older, I was held captive by bad people too. They did horrible things to me and told me how useless I am every day." Eri's eyes widened after hearing that. "I had the strength to escape whenever I wanted, but I was not brave enough. You on the other hand, escaped all on your own. You can be so proud of yourself for that." Tatsumaki told her seriously. "I helped you because I was freed by a hero when I was at my lowest point. And you deserved to be saved too, you know. I don't regret helping you, and that will never change."
After hearing that, Eri began to cry silently again. She sniffed, and tears ran down her face. "Thank you. I promise I will be good."
Tatsumaki smiled and patted her head again. "Just eat your food, and don't worry about anything else."
They continued eating and enjoyed each other's presence in silence.
After finishing their meal, they decided to relax on the couch in the living room and watch some TV. Eri was amazed by how many different things one could see on the screen, and her eyes were glued to it. She was watching a show about a bee named Maja or something like that, but Tatsumaki was just glad that the girl could enjoy herself a bit and just watched Eri with a fond expression.
It was around 10 in the morning when her doorbell rang. Eri didn't seem to notice and was still glued to the screen. So Tatsumaki walked to the door to see who dared to interrupt their time together. After opening the door, Tatsumaki was not surprised to see Nezu behind it.
"Good morning, Miss Tatsumaki. You will be pleased to hear that I have everything sorted out and that you will receive your license." He told her, pleased with himself.
"Hmph, don't try to flatter yourself. Just give it to me and get out of my sight." She was kind of rude right know. The reason for that is simple, Nezu interrupted her time with Eri. Not that she would ever admit it.
But Nezu didn't seem to care and just continued to smile. "Not so fast, miss Tatsumaki. I pulled a lot of strings and needed to call in a lot of favors from others to get your license. You will get your license, but only in 3 days after you give an interview to show the world who you are." The little shit explained smugly.
This annoyed Tatsumaki extremely, and smoke came out of her ears. "And what should I do the next three days? Do you really expect me to sit around the whole day doing jackshit?" She exclaimed furiously, her face getting dangerously close to Nezu.
"Fufufu, well you could spend the day to get to know your little companion a bit more, don't you think?"
He ... actually made a good point.
"Hmph, I would have done it regardless. Just bring me my license in 3 days, and don't bother me anymore." With that, Tatsumaki closed the door in his face and walked back to the living room. Eri was still watching her show, not knowing that Tatsumaki was away.
But now Tatsumaki had to think about what to do with Eri for the next 3 days. And what the hell will she do when she's doing hero work? She can't just leave her here all alone. 'Oh well, I can just bring her along. I can show her how a real hero operates, and at the same time, she will be protected by me, and I can watch over her the whole time.'
"Hey Eri, do you want to head out and do something more interesting than watching TV? We can't be stuck in the house the whole day." Tatsumaki asked Eri in hopes of getting out of the house. If there's one thing Tatsumaki hates, then it's sitting around uselessly and doing absolutely nothing. She needs to do something, and if it can't be hero work, then it should be something equally interesting. And that is training and testing out her powers.
Eri turned away from the TV and looked at Tatsumaki with question marks in her eyes. "Head out? But the bad people are outside." She told the esper fearfully as she fidgeted with her fingers.
After hearing that, Tatsumaki smiled confidentially at the child. "Heh, I'd like to see them try. Don't worry Eri, I'm the strongest. If anyone dares to lay their fingers on you, I will crush them to the ground."
"Really? Do you promise?"
Tatsumaki placed her hands on Eri's shoulder. "I promise." She said with finality.
With her fears slightly dampered, Eri nodded at Tatsumaki. "Great, let's grab some clothes first and fly to the nearest wasteland." Tatsumaki said with euphoria.
And after Tatsumaki picked out some clothes for Eri, they got outside and were ready for takeoff. The little girl was wearing a red dress with yellow buttons on her shoulder straps and a white shirt underneath. "Eri, I will show you how the world looks from above. Do you trust me?" Tatsumaki asked her carefully.
Eri nodded firmly at Tatsumaki, a small 'yes' escaping her lips. Tatsumaki smirked at that and picked up the girl. She could just let Eri float beside her, but she thought that this would be more comfortable for Eri. Then she took off with incredible speed and flew straight to the sky.
Eri closed her eyes in fear, she trusted Tatsumaki with all her life, but heights were still scary for a girl her age. "You can open them now. Don't worry, I got you." She heard softly from her guardian.
Then she opened them and couldn't believe her eyes. It looked so pretty. They were above the clouds, and it looked like they were floating through cotton candy, not as if she knew what that was. She tried to open her mouth to taste the clouds, but she couldn't bite anything out of it. Slightly pouting, she just continued to enjoy the view.
And what a view it was. She could see the city and landscape below her when the clouds were not as dense in some areas. She had never seen something like this in her entire life of six years.
But even now, in the safe arms of Tatsumaki and an amazingview of the world, she still didn't smile. It was as if something was clinging to her. Something disgusting.
To get her to finally smile, Tatsumaki flew around mountains and made loopings and other things a child would normally enjoy. But nothing, the only thing she got was a slightly twitching lip. She will get her to smile today, she swears. As if the number two hero couldn't bring a child to smile. Pathetic!
After two hours of flying, Tatsumaki found a wide-open area to train in. But before she started, she wanted to know something. So she let Eri down on the ground and asked her a question that had been on her mind since yesterday.
"Say Eri, what kind of power do you have? Or quirk, in your case."
Eri flinched at that and looked away to avert her gaze. "N- no, my curse is dangerous. I don't wa-" She was interrupted by Tatsumaki. "Calm down little one, I asked what your quirk is, not if it is dangerous." She told her calmly.
Eri still looked unsure, but she knew that Tatsumaki would not leave her alone. She promised after all. But it still was difficult to get it out, so she stood there, rooted on the ground, not getting anything out of her mouth.
Tatsumaki sighed and crouched down again. "Are you that afraid of your powers? Even if they're dangerous, you don't have to worry about hurting anyone. I told you already that I'm the strongest, right? So there's no way you can hurt me with it." Tatsumaki told her with a calm smile on her face. "And even if you hurt someone with them, if they're so weak that a 6-year-old can hurt them, then they shouldn't walk outside to begin with. I would actually be kind of impressed to be honest."
Ignoring the last part, Eri tried to be brave and looked into Tatsumaki's eyes with determination. This is it. Her whole body was shaking, and she was so nervous that it was difficult to get her voice out. "I- I let ... um ... I LET PEOPLE DISAPPEAR!" She finally got it out with her eyes closed and her fists tightened on her sides.
Make people disappear? What does she mean by that? Must she touch someone, and they vanish out of existence? Or does she need to look at them? But regardless, it seems like a really powerful ability. Tatsumaki was impressed, but she needed more information. "Can you tell me how exactly your powers work?" She asked carefully.
Totally surprised that Tatsumaki didn't abandon her, she opened her eyes again. "Um ... I don't know exactly. Overhaul said I rewind things. And that I could rewind someone out of exjist- excisd-" "Existence." Tatsumaki helped her. "Yes, that."
How the hell is that kind of power a curse? If Tatsumaki ever gets her fingers on Overhaul, she will do much worse things to him than just twisting his balls. Tatsumaki grabbed Eri's shoulder and squeezed them a bit. "Eri, look at me. Your quirk is definitely not a curse. An A-Class hero would say that your quirk is a blessing, actually. Because if you can rewind someone, you can cure any injury or illness and save many people. But if you want my opinion and not the opinion of some useless A-Class hero, I think your quirk is perfect for combat hero work. Because if you can vanish anyone out of existence, then you can defeat any monster you want with just a touch. You would be unstoppable." Tatsumaki told her with a dangerous smirk on her face.
Eri looked at Tatsumaki in awe. Is her curse really that amazing? No, she made her daddy disappear. But Tatsumaki said it was perfect for hero work. Urgh, it was so difficult. "But Overhaul said that-" Tatsumaki didn't let her finish that sentence. "Who do you believe more, me or Overhaul?" Well, that was simple. "You, I believe you more."
"But my daddy disappeared because of me." Eri said with teary eyes. But surprisingly, they were not just tears of fear. Because Tatsumaki was saying all these weird things to her, they were tears of joy as well. Eri just couldn't bring herself to see her curse as something good.
"So? It was probably an accident. It happens. Do you know how many times I accidentally killed someone with my powers? Does it mean I'm a bad person?" Tatsumaki tried to make a point. Any normal person would've phrased it a bit differently, but Eri doesn't seem to care.
"No, of course not. You are a good person." Eri defended Tatsumaki.
After hearing that, Tatsumaki smiled at Eri again. "See? And if I'm a good person, you're definitely one too. Your power may be strong, but it doesn't mean that it's something evil. Do you understand?" The esper looked directly into Eri's eyes. "Eri! You're not cursed."
The dam broke, and Eri cried openly as she hugged Tatsumaki. The word curse finally vanished from her mind. Tatsumaki let Eri cry for as long as she wanted. And after five minutes, the girl calmed down.
But now it was time to finally get some training done.
"Enough about your quirk. Do you want to see what I'm capable of?" Tatsumaki asked Eri excitedly. She could really let loose in this big open space with no one around.
Eri nodded excitedly. She wanted to see what her guardian was really capable of. She had only seen her move someone around the air or fly around herself, so she wanted to know what else she could do.
Tatsumaki smirked at Eri. "Heh, take a good look then, kid. Because now you will see what a true hero is capable of." A green aura surrounds Tatsumaki as she raises her right arm. Then the ground in front of them cracked, and a rock with the length and thickness of a hundred kilometers raised into the air. The smirk Tatsumaki had changed to a devilish-looking one as she squeezed her hand. After that, the rock cracked and split into thousands of different rocks of various sizes.
Tatsumaki flicked her finger, and the rocks flew in various directions at unmeasurable speed and crashed into the ground with such force that the earth rumbled. You could even feel the vibrations many kilometers away.
Of course, Eri was protected by a barrier this entire time. After the dust settled, the earth looked like multiple nukes had been detonated around here.
Eri looked at the scene in awe, now believing that no one on this earth could stand up to her. If she's around Tatsumaki, then not even Overhaul has a chance of hurting her anymore. Eri felt ... at ease and safe. It was a nice feeling. She liked how she felt all these different things around Tatsumaki, and she wanted to feel them every day from now on.
"WHO DARES TO DISTURB MY SLUMBER?" A strange voice so loud it was deafening called out to them.
Behind them emerged a giant. He looked like a living mountain and was bigger than most buildings. And his face was locked at the two of them. Tatsumaki glared at him.
He pointed a finger at them. "YOU! WHO ARE YOU AND HOW ARE YOU THIS STRONG? I NEED TO BRING YOU TO MASTER. MASTER NEEDS STRONG QUIRKS." The giant said as he got dangerously close to Tatsumaki. Dangerous for him.
Eri trembled in fear. This guy looks dangerous and much stronger than Overhaul. But Tatsumaki patted her head and reassured her that someone was protecting her. "Don't look away Eri, I will show you what happens to anyone who dares to cross us. This pathetic weakling is nothing compared to the monsters of my world. Barely a demon-level threat." She told the small girl confidently as she walked past her to stand her ground before the giant. The ancient King was much bigger and definitely way stronger than this wimp.
The giant was called Gigantomachia, and he was the bodyguard and strongest Nomu of All for One. And he charged straight at Tatsumaki after feeling she got ready for combat.
"RRRROOOOAAAAAARRRRRHHHH, YOU WILL NOT GET IN MY WA-"
Tatsumaki effortlessly immobilized him. A green aura surrounded him now as he floats in the air. Gigantomachia tried to struggle, but it was in vain. He couldn't get out of her grasp.
To make matters worse, it looked like Tatsumaki barely used any power at all. As if it was just another walk through the park. "Hehe, let's see how much you can handle. Let's start with 100 times earth's gravity and see at what point your body will get crushed." She smiled with madness in her voice.
Gigantomachia crashed face-first into the ground with no way of standing up again. He couldn't even speak or groan as his lungs were crushed completely.
Tatsumaki increased the pressure every second to see how long the giant would last. And after a couple of seconds, it looked like the bones of the body were shattering, and his skin began to peel off. Tatsumaki told Eri to look away and that she should cover her ears. The girl did as she was told.
But before the giant turned into a stain on the ground, grey ooze came out of his mouth, and he vanished without a trace.
Tatsumaki stared at the empty space where the giant stood just moments ago. She looked completely confused. 'Ok, what the hell was that?'
Ah, shit. She did it again. She must control herself, or she would have just killed another villain. Arrest villains, kill monsters. Easy.
But now was not the time to think about that. Eri needed her more at the moment.
She turned around to look if Eri was alright. And to her surprise, she looked at Tatsumaki with pure amazement. Yet again, Eri was blown away by how strong her guardian was and that she would be completely safe by her side.
Tatsumaki wasn't tired, not even close, but she had practiced enough for the day. Well, she told herself that, but what she actually wanted to do was to test Eri's powers. So she walked over to the small child to get down to business. "You've seen my powers now, and now it's your turn to show me yours." She told her seriously, with no room to argue.
Eri looked at her with hesitation. "But it's t- too da- dangerous. What if y-" Tatsumaki didn't let her finish yet again. "Eri, what did I just tell you mere minutes ago? You're not going to hurt me. But even so, you need to control your quirk. What if you lose control and hurt someone you care about? If you have control over your quirk, the accident with your dad will never happen again." Tatsumaki said softly to get Eri's spirit up.
And it kind of worked. Eri may be looking conflicted right now, but inside her, she was battling with herself. She knows that what Tatsumaki said was true and that she needed control, but she was still afraid of what had happened in the past. And can you blame her? She killed her own father, and her mother gave her away. The trauma was deep.
But Tatsumaki's words reached her, because what Tatsumaki said was the bitter truth. If she has control over cu- quirk, then she won't have to be afraid of it anymore. She wants to be as strong as Tatsumaki and make her proud.
She looked up again with determination. "Alright, I will do it and make you proud." She said adorably with her cute face.
Smirking, Tatsumaki lifted a small bush off the ground with her telekinesis and picked off the berries on it. Then she handled Eri the berries as practice material. "Good, then let's get started. You will be rewinding these berries back into seeds. Do you know how to activate your quirk?"
The girl nodded and began to work. She was still hesitating, but after a couple of minutes, her horn started to glow, and the berries vanished out of existence.
"Hmph, looks like you overshot it a little. Let's keep going an-" "AAAHHHH" Tatsumaki was interrupted by Eri's scream. Yellow sparks flew around Eri chaotically.
Worried, Tatsumaki tried to grab Eri to calm her down. "NOOO DON'T TOUCH ME! I DON'T WANT TO MAKE YOU DISAPPEAR." Eri screamed in pain as the power grew out of control and started to affect the surroundings. But Tatsumaki didn't panic and did something she had done a million times in the past. Fubuki lost control over her psychic energy as a kid so often that Tatsumaki knew what to do on instinct after a couple of times. Tatsumaki needs to cut off her power source.
The esper closed her eyes and searched through Eri's body to find her power source. And just after 3 seconds, she found it and cut it off completely. Immediately, the energy around Eri vanished, and she slumped to the ground in exhaustion.
"Well, that could have turned out better, but it was still progress in my book. And it just confirmed how powerful you could become in the future." She tried to encourage Eri, but the girl was petrified. "No, please stop. I will never control this. I'm bad." Eri said with a defeated look on her face.
But Tatsumaki was not done yet."Kid, look at me. If you quit now, things will only be more difficult for you in the future. You're not bad, just inexperienced. Do you really want to live your life in fear?" Her voice got a bit louder. "Stand up! And show your quirk who's in control. If you cry about every little setback, you will never grow as a person. I thought you wanted to make me proud?" Her tone was rougher now, and she stood before Eri with her arms crossed. This may look cruel, but Tatsumaki knew that if Eri doesn't overcome her fear now, she may never overcome it at all. So she needs to act tough to help Eri. And that is something Tatsumaki knows best. The gentle approach was over.
She couldn't treat Eri with care at the moment. She needs to be tough, or Eri will be stuck in the past forever. "Come on. Stand up and show me what you're made of. Do you really want to hide a part of yourself forever? That would be really disappointing if you ask me." Tatsumaki knew how Eri felt. Her situation may have been different, but Tatsumaki hid her powers too in the research facility. And it was the worst time of her life. She will never hide her true strength again.
Her words reached Eri, and she tried to stand up with teary eyes. "I- I don't want t- to be afraid." She whispered quietly.
It was not enough in Tatsumaki's book. "I couldn't hear you. Speak louder!" She told the girl sternly.
Eri clenched her fists and screamed with everything she had. "I DON'T WANT TO BE AFRAID ANYMORE!" Eri was panting now.
Tatsumaki dropped her tough act and smiled softly at the girl again. "Very good, Eri. You did well. Now let us continue." She patted her head with affection.
Eri tried to grab the berries but was stopped by Tatsumaki. "No, we will do it differently this time. After seeing your quirk in action, I now have a better understanding of it. So you will grab my hand and activate your quirk."
"But you will disappear." Eri said nervously.
After hearing that, Tatsumaki sighed. "Eri, I have already told you a million times that you will not hurt me. Please just trust me. I will not disappear." She tried to reassure the girl.
Eri tried to grab her hand but was stopped by Tatsumaki. She was not finished."Here's what we will do. I will create a thin barrier between our hands so you will technically not touch me. Your quirk will rewind my barrier out of existence, but I will just create a new one. With this method, you won't be able to hurt me. You can unleash the full power of your quirk, and after that, we will try everything to get it under control. You just need to focus on your quirk and try to drain the power gradually. And I will help you with it. By grabbing your hand, I can let my energy flow through your body and show you where the core of your quirk is. You just need to feel my energy." She finished explaining her plan.
Understanding the most of it, Eri nodded and grabbed Tatsumaki's hand. And like she said, she couldn't really grab her hand, only her barrier. "Good, now activate your quirk." Eri did as she was told and activated her quirk without hesitation this time.
Eri's energy was running wild and rampaging out of control. But Tatsumaki had a plan. "Now listen to me, Eri. Don't concentrate on your surroundings. Just focus on my energy." Tatsumaki started to share her energy with Eri and let it flow through her small body. Tatsumaki knew where to find the girl's core because she had found it earlier by cutting it off. "Can you feel it?" Tatsumaki asked quietly.
Eri concentrated hard, it was difficult to follow the energy, but she managed to get closer little by little. "Yes, I c- can feel it. Ahh, but it's ... it's hard, hah." She panted heavily.
But after a couple more seconds, Eri managed to find her power source. She widened her eyes in surprise. "I found it." She exclaimed exitedly.
Tatsumaki smiled proudly at her. "Very good Eri. Now try to decrease it. Even if it's just a little."
Eri did just that, and to the surprise of no one, the energy surrounding Eri decreased.
And it decreased again.
And again and again and again. Till nothing was left and it disappeared completely.
Eri couldn't believe her eyes. She managed to control her quirk all on her own? Did she really do it? The small girl was completely stunned.
And only centimeters away from the girl was Tatsumaki, with the proudest smile she has ever had on her face. "I'm so proud of you Eri. You did a great job. Never forget that feeling."
But the training was not over yet. "Now do it again. I'm not helping this time." Completely changing from her soft expression just moments ago, Tatsumaki ordered Eri to repeat it.
But would you look at that? Eri just looked back at Tatsumki with pure confidence. With no hesitation, Eri activated her quirk again. Her quirk still went out of control, but it was much calmer now. And after only 20 seconds, Eri managed to deactivate her quirk, completely alone and with no help from Tatsumaki.
Tatsumaki looked at her with a fond expression as she crouched down again to get on her eye level.. "I knew you could do it Eri. Now you don't have to be afraid anymore." Tatsumaki then stretched her arms outward to welcome Eri into a hug. "Come here, sweetie." She said softly to Eri.
Eri didn't know what this feeling was, but it was the best feeling she has ever felt. In her short life, she never felt that happy, proud of herself, and warm. It was so ... confusing. So ...
So ... liberating.
It felt like a giant weight was lifted from her form, and she could finally breathe normally again for the first time in a long time.
Eri's mouth twitched. The corners of her mouth moved upwards, and she flashed the brightest smile at Tatsumaki, which may have blinded her for a moment. Eri smiled. She smiled for the first time since she ran into Tatsumaki. Her smile got wider and wider, and at the same time, large tears ran down Eri's face. Tears of pure joy and happiness. She began to cry loudly and crashed into Tatsumaki, hugging her as tightly as she could, pressing her face into her chest.
Tatsumaki hugged her back and combed through her hair. Her chin rested on Eri's head, and they continued their hug for a long time.
After quite some time, they broke apart and decided to head somewhere else for now. The bond the two shared had never been stronger.
This may have been the most important day in Eri's life.
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Somewhere else.
"I would've never guessed to see the current head of the Yakuza before me. What do you want from me? Some coop quest?"
Shigaraki stood in an abandoned warehouse.
Before him was Overhaul.
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End of chapter 4.
I hope you enjoyed the chapter.
Was the ending too cringe? I wanted to show Tatsumaki's soft side but I feel like the last part was really out of character :/ Maybe it's different as a reader? Please tell me how you felt about the ending. I may change it a bit if it was too bad. XD
Was Eri getting over her fear too quickly? I think with Tatsumaki's rougher approach, Eri could get over them much faster than in canon. I mean, Tatsumaki knows it better than anyone else because of her past.
The meeting between Overhaul and Shigaraki is different here. His plans changed after Tatsumaki took Eri.
Well that's all folks. Please review. :)
Bye.
