Some1call4MR-E chapter 1 . Apr 7
The problem with MOST Gamer stories, is the gamer Mind and Body. These two buff's pretty much, make the insert, (using Naruto wording) a rip-off Kaguya Otsusuki… In laymen terminology, the gamer mind and body are God-Mode in a -Mind: Imagine every Debuff in, any MMORPG and now, with the mind, you are immune to everything, no matter the TYPE of Mental debuff that exists, you can never be effected by it. Say for instance, using (naruto wording again) the Infinite Tsukuyomi, can never even be applied to you, like at all! Seriously, that's how powerful the gamer mind is. Now as for the body, it's more or less the same, but literally worded, as Physical immunity. One could say that, even a measly papercut of all thing's is utterly impossible. Once again, Gamer-mind-and-body are just God Mode for the insert. If there IS, any downside to these god-mod buff's then, The first one would be, the emotional inhibitor of gamer mind. The officially recognized Gamer-Mind, in the, all-fandom, provides one passive trait, that erases, all form's of emotion...well...you can still DEMONSTRATE that you are positive, but not quite, behave positively, like a normal person. You can SHOW that your happy and just positively 'youthful' (sorry) but at the end of the day, why would you want to be emotional at all? Possessing emotion's of any kind is considered a debuff, in-and-of-itself, so the passive skill, Calm-Mind (That's the proper name) removes those feeling's to allow more LOGICAL thinking. Why be emotional, when you can be LOGICAL...thus the Gamer-Mind passive trait, Calm-Mind. Now as for the body...the passive is the removal of exhaustion and sleep. In most modern role-playing game's nowadays, the player avatar goes gets put to sleep,and awakens fully healed. The basic's of it is, even WHEN the body gets hit by an ACTUAL debuff, if at all, the player just puts them down for a nap, that lasts for a mere instant, but the internal game-clock itself, goes for a full eight hour's regularly. In the effect, the-gamer has no need for TRUE sleep, they don't need to dream or anything like that, as the body just fully heals itself and eight hour's pass, (snaps finger's) just like that. The Gamer, surpasses the very world they get inserted to and for all intents and purposes, these player insert's don't even have to play by the rule's of said world at all. Their playing in God-Mode after all, so not even, (using naruto wording) Not Even Kaguya Otsusuki can beat them, even if she were to use every power she has. NOTHING in existence, can stop, any gamer-insert, from making the entire world they get into, and making it their playground. The Gamer-mind-and-body, are just THAT powerful. Why play by the rule's of the world, when your very existence does not do the same? There IS, a much more, milder version of the Gamer-Mind and Gamer-Body, that allows one to bleed, be emotional, and APPEAR as humanely normal, to the rest of the world as plausible, but it's still God-Mode. Also now, why would your body even NEED food, or something like, if it never gets hungry?
Well first of all thank you so much for writing that much about my fic. If you read chapter 2 or chapter 3 you will see that this gamer system is nerfed. The gamers body skill in this fic just allows stats and system stuff to affect her physical body that's it. The gamer's mind just lets her become hyper focused and able to train for hours on end without getting bored. Like a person playing a game. Also I view gamer systems as a book talking about ways to build a nuke. Just owning that book doesn't give you a nuke. You have to put in a bunch of work to get that nuke.
Guest chapter 2 . Apr 2
will be keeping my eye on this one, please have the system be a proper system and not a wish fulfilment system where he/she will get a kekkei genkai for finishing homework lol
Thank you and I will try to not make her more powerful than she realistically should be
Darkjaden chapter 2 . Apr 2
Nice can't wait to see what you you show next.
Thank you for reading and I have a lot in store.
Deep1dark1blue4 chapter 2 . Apr 2
well make it 13 from 2nd chapeter
Thank you
Chapter 3: Rebuilding (Arc 0)
[ACHIEVEMENT UNLOCKED: RISE AND SHINE]
(REWARDS: NOTHING)
Congratulations you have completed the bare minimum of living, being born
[ACHIEVEMENT UNLOCKED: I HAVE THE POWER]
(REWARDS: SKILL "BASIC CHAKRA MANIPULATION")
You felt your chakra, now use it
[ACHIEVEMENT UNLOCKED: AND THE BIG BAD FOX HUFFED AND PUFFED]
(REWARDS: SKILL "KILLING INTENT DETECTION")
Not exactly a blond kid saying "dattebayo"
[ACHIEVEMENT UNLOCKED: TRAGIC BACKSTORY]
(REWARDS: SHONEN CHARACTER MODE (OPTIONAL) )
I'm going to be the next hokage-soul-reaper-pirate
[ACHIEVEMENT UNLOCKED: LAST TIME TOUCHING GRASS]
(REWARDS: GAMER SYSTEM)
Sure you lost your parents but at least you have me
[ACHIEVEMENT UNLOCKED: A HUMAN HAS FALLEN]
(REWARDS: NOTHING)
Do you want an award or something, all you did was complete the tutorial
[ACHIEVEMENT UNLOCKED: A DIFFERENT KIND OF TASKMASTER]
(REWARDS: QUEST WINDOW UNLOCKED)
Well aren't you quite the people pleaser
[ACHIEVEMENT UNLOCKED: IT GROWS]
(REWARDS: NOTHING)
At this rate you would be level 61 at age 10
[ACHIEVEMENT UNLOCKED: THIS COUNTS AS TRAINING RIGHT]
(REWARDS: NOTHING)
I mean you put in all the effort of clicking the button to raise your stats
'Well that was a lot of achievements' I mused. 'Well now that I can walk this is no time to be idle' I thought with determination. I stood up, my legs wobbling slightly as I was still unused to walking. The panicked caretakers and shinobi still spread too thin to notice. I slowly took a step forward and then another until I got into a rhythm. I would raise a leg and move it forward, place it down and then drag my other foot forward. Not exactly the most graceful but it's a start.
After 5 steps I fell down while raising my leg. Now while before this might bruise or cut me, now due to my higher endurance it felt more like a pinch. After that I went back to training. At one point I think the shinobi guards caught on that I was walking but they didn't do anything. Now you might be thinking, "hey shouldn't you be hiding your skills from Danzo,' and fair point however unlike how some members of the fandom might think, Danzo isn't stupid. He managed to keep the ROOT hidden from the civilians and almost all of the shinobi. Most of the people he kidnaps are no-name orphans who show promise. As the daughter of an affluent jonin it wouldn't make sense to kidnap me. And I don't think he's pure evil, at the end of the day the safety of Konoha is more important than the safety of one clan.
Tangents aside, it feels great to be able to walk again after all this time. My "Gamer's Mind" allowed me to focus completely on walking and not on any traumatic events that might have occured recently.
The evacuation center was dirty and filled to the brim with new orphans, widows, and homeless people. There were overworked caretakers taking care of the young children. After 30 minutes of bated breath, it was announced that it was safe to go outside again. The citizens of Konoha wanted to cheer but the air was solemn and quiet as the weight of the previous events hung over everyone like an umbrella.
(TIME SKIP: 1 DAY LATER)
Konoha was a hell of a lot more efficient in rebuilding then cities in my world were. Although that's not really a good comparison because this world has chakra and my world doesn't. One of the first things they rebuilt was an orphanage due to all the newly orphaned children lying around, such as me. I was lying down in an unmarked crib with multiple children in it. On my left was a boy who was smaller than me with tomato-red hair, on my right was a black haired girl who looked to be the same age as me. All in all, after the flurry of events that was yesterday, today has been pretty uneventful, not that I'm complaining or anything.
Last night I found out that training can improve your stats. I was practicing the vertical punch (my favorite punch) albeit poorly due to my body, when I got a notification.
[1 VIT HAS BEEN GAINED]
And then 2 hours ago, this morning.
[1 VIT HAS BEEN GAINED]
Obviously it wouldn't be that easy to grow my stats in the future, but it still was an incredibly large advantage over everyone else. This would make my goal of becoming strong enough to stop tragedies more feasible. Some people might think "well everything turned out well in the end in canon" however first, everything turned out well for the IMPORTANT CHARACTERS. It's not a stretch to believe, most of the events in Naruto ended with a lot of nameless characters dying. Second, Boruto exists and I never read or watched it, but from the spoilers I got there are a lot of bad things that happen in it. I guess the "Gamer's Mind" skill also makes me go on internal tangents when I'm not doing anything important.
My thoughts were interrupted when I heard footsteps coming close to me. Oh it was one of the matrons of the orphanage. She was an older woman with grayish-black hair and a smaller stature. She put on a tired smile as she started doing baby talk to me and my cribmates. "Hello little ones you're hungry aren't you" she said in an annoyingly slow and high pitched tone as she took off her shirt to breastfeed us. If I didn't have "Gamer's Mind" this would have been extremely embarrassing, but the skill allowed me to focus on my chakra instead of anything currently happening.
I noticed I had a high amount of yang compared to yin, I wonder why that would be. Maybe it's because my soul is from a world without chakra so it is weaker. Another on my growing list of questions that probably would never be answered. After finishing being "fed" I was put back in the crib with the boy and girl next to me. I closed my eyes as I drift gently to the land of dreams.
AN: don't have alot to put here. Sorry for making all of you wait 8 days I was busy irl.