Hello people, it's me. We're here with a short chapter, preview, cut content or omake. I'm still deciding on what to call these. Oh nvm, figured it out.
Omake are chapters that aren't typically connected to the story but are fun little projects. For example like I want to retell a scene from another show or franchise like Tai Lung's escape scene or Madara vs the Alliance. Although I would have to move that to LLB for it's mature content. Plus, I have to figure out what characters to use for said scenes.
Previews are a teaser to future chapters for all my main stories. Some scenes or moments, I won't get to for a long time especially since I'm navigating several stories. In fact, I have some already done months or a year prior. Yes, these are considered spoilers but these scenes are rough drafts as I don't have everything leading to up that. I'm getting them out of the way. These moments/scenes will happen in the story but in a different way or not at all once I've written those chapters leading up to it. Also, it'll be better for me since I can read your opinion on said scenes and have different onlook on it instead of being buried in my folders. Like I have one for Crystal Prison which is basically an entire chapter. Another time.
Cut Conent are scenes are moments that I wanted to do but didn't find time to write them. My recent chapter for Crystal Prison was an example of that. Some cut content for QTQ was Alexandria/Karate QT and Lincoln's date scene. I'll get to that eventually.
Mhmmm, I saw the new Puss in Boots movie. AND I LOVED IT! Check it out when you have the chance. Plus one of the scenes will be used for Crystal Prison when we get to the Camp Everfree movie. Oh shit, before I forget the winning songs were Hey Brother by Avicii and Girl Next Door by Massad. I'll use one or the other.
Get it? Got it? Great. Now for the reviews.
Mr. Haziq: RULES OF NATURE! When you do a deep dive, you find some new stuff.
Guest: I keep telling myself that this will be the final part of the Friendzy but something always happens that extends the arc. Hey, it's good for you guys and me because you have more chapters to read and it probably boosts my ratings. I'll speed/summarize the Cooked episode because there's only one scene that I'm Interested in. Plus, I need hurry up and finish or progress several plots/arcs
Pirohiko-Baltazar: Oh you mean she's going stupid or at least go crazy or something similar? I'm not going to touch on that topic because I've seen the debates
NiteOwl18: Oh Polly and Lincoln have more moments later now. Hopefully, I can get to that chapter
DaleJr.88: Hope that you enjoyed your break. I have several girls that can work for Valentine's Day chapter. Fleur De Lis, Sugarcoat, Sunny Flare, Sour Sweet, Lemon Zest, Indigo Zap and the Dazzlings. However, since I have other similar scenes in mind for these girls. I can technically swap them or do a mini-arc for that chapter. For example, Sour Sweet is the top one, it's practically in my notes. It can function as a way to reconnect. For Sunny Flare, it can function as you said, releasing sexual tension but I have something for her when it's Dusk Shine's birthday. I can swap the two. Fleur De Lis will have a 'seven minutes in heaven' scene. Lemon Zest's moment will be at a party, likely New Year's eve.
Fancy pants will appear as part of Cadance's crusade against Cinch. He's a former top student so he'll be an ally. Yep, Starlight Glimmer is going that route
Polly will be a key character for this arc and the last major one. Plus, she's fun to write, and she'll have her chapter in LLB. Polly's a free fighter or Jeet Kune Do, meaning she does whatever feels natural for her. I'm glad my fans enjoy the fighting or sparring scenes. Polly and Lincoln's relationship with the nexus for the last arc which will be in seasons 5 and 6 of the show. TLH will be here for years. That's already in the timeline and I don't want to further extend and give myself stress.
Samtastic 3.0: The grounded take was one of the core concepts when I wrote this story. Plus I watched a ton of harem anime and read many harem stories, especially Naruto. Most of the plots were a basic 'Catch them all' situation with minimal characterization from the dozen-plus harem members. Yes some will have more characterization than others like Stella and Haiku but I'm trying to give some personality to each girl. One of the largest complaints about TLH is that they don't use their minor characters. It took us 4 seasons to get a voice line for Paige and Christina but we only get a mention. At least season 6 is correcting that error with Stella, Myrtle, Flip (again yuck!), Rita, Patrica, The Gurdles, and the Mortician's club.
We got a while until we get to Bumper Jr. getting his heart broken. Each older sister has some charm about them. I do the Deadpool-style narration is so that I can give my voice/opinion during certain scenes
QOTD: How do you guys feel about these previews / Omakes chapters? I feel like I can bridge a gap between lengthy update times and satisfy my creative itch. Also, I can add some variety to my chapters. Tell me what you see either for an Omake or preview.
Ahh, finally. A typical uneventful day in the Loud House. Lincoln relaxed in his bed, crossing his feet leisurely, enjoying a David Steele comic in his hand. No arguments between Lori and Leni about clothes or whatever. Damn, Sister Fight Protocol. Luna wasn't creating a ruckus, nor was Luan cracking jokes or crafting her next major prank. The twins aren't squabbling about another random thing…again. Lynn went out with her sports team to practice for their next match. Lucy's writing a poem. Lily's asleep. For once, nothing from Lisa, which is oddly suspicious given her given track record. Lincoln's body tensed, waiting for an explosion, thunderous metallic noises, strange smells, or a strange creature to appear. Nothing. He exhaled, relaxing his body and leaning back into his soft mattress. Several minutes passed as Lincoln flipped through the pages when someone knocked on his door. He glanced up from his comic. The knocking was light, methodical, with steady polite gaps between. It's Lisa. The middle child went to his door, opened it, and revealed his prediction to be accurate.
"Greetings, elder brother," The home scientist spoke with a slight lisp. Strange that she hasn't invented a device to fix that. She fixed optical issues with laser surgery but kept the glasses to fit her clothing theme. "I require your assistance with a task," She announced.
"Depends on what it is," Lincoln narrowed his eyes, viewing his intelligent younger sister skeptically. "And why do you need my help?" He asked. There has to be a catch or something.
Lisa rolled her eyes. Nevertheless, she doesn't blame him for his hesitance. "Normally, I would conduct this myself, but," She paused, he arched his brow at her pause. "You simply have skills I don't possess," Lisa admitted truthfully.
"It must be serious then," Lincoln remarked, widening his door. She nodded. The two entered her room. His sapphire eyes widened at the control station near the corner. It's massive and advanced compared to Lisa's usual ones. Now, this is Professor Lisa's work. The framing was a glistening steel with an array of flashing lights, buttons, and switches. It appeared delicate but knowing his sister, the machine was likely made from a reinforced steel or titanium alloy with several redundancies to survive virtually anything and everything. They approached the machine. Her fingers typed rapidly on her keyboard, muttering words that someone would only see at a champion-level spelling bee. Lincoln analyzed the screen. She's talking to someone, and they're responding in real-time.
"Lincoln, do you recall the dimensional watch I gave you allowing you to have ten brothers?" Lisa asked,
"Yes, but wasn't that a dream or something?" Lincoln answered.
"No. That was a false memory implanted," Lisa corrected. A fake memory?! "Given everything you've endured, it would've been better to keep it a secret. The multiverse is like time travel. There are rules and countless dangers with the grave risk of destroying our home dimension or several others. It's happened before," She revealed to her shell-shocked brother. His blood ran cold from that statement. It's happened before?! "It's not happening now, but I have protocols in place for such an occasion," Lisa comforted with a smile, easing Lincoln's worries.
"What's my mission," He asked as she continued to type. Is it a simple test drive?
"It's a simple quest to a nearby branch universe. Virtually everything is the same, with a few key differences to separate it from ours," Lisa explained, pushing a few buttons, causing the machine to hum and buzz. Two pylons with a small staircase and pan appeared from the floor. That didn't surprise Lincoln.
"Oh, so like Family Guy," He predicated. Honestly one of the best episodes of the series.
"Precisely," Lisa confirmed, handing him an updated dimensional watch. It resembled an orange and green apple watch. He secured it on his wrist when it buzzed and zapped his body, cloaking his body in a pale humming light. "Woah," Lincoln muttered, observing his body.
"Calibration completed," The watch announced. A cyan portal hummed into existence between the pylons. "Home dimension locked on,"
"Everything is geared up and ready to go," Lisa declared, making a few final diagnostics. "You'll feel strange for a few moments because that universe's version of you is different. It'll take time to adjust," She explained as they marched to the gateway.
"Like when I turned into a girl?" Lincoln asked, standing a mere hop away from his … home.
"Yes, but it won't be as drastic," Lisa responded. He nodded before jumping into a new yet familiar new world.
Lincoln grumbled with shut eyes as he lay there. He motioned his body on the surface. Okay, he was on the living room couch. All the familiar smells floated into his nose, easing his worries. Lisa sent him to their 'home.' That simplifies things, but she reported a few critical differences between them. Several questions flooded his mind. What happened to his siblings? Their lives? His friends at school? Do they even still exist in this world? Everything could've changed, but everything could still be the same. That worried him. A small weight crawled on his body and lay on his chest.
"Wincoln," A tiny childish voice called to him, rubbing her hands on his face.
Lincoln couldn't help but smile at his baby sister. "Hey, Lily," He yawned, slowly opening his eyes. Her blurry image slowly cleared up, revealing … dark skin? Right, different universe. He quickly remembered before checking his hand. Is he black? No. Still of European descent. His blue eyes examined the dimensional watch as it updated and provided information about this world. "I'm adopted, and all my family is black," Lincoln muttered. He's still a part of the Loud House. Or the BLoud house, according to the watch.
"Lincoln, honey, can you take Lily upstairs for her nap?" His mother requested from the dining room. She's reading one of her novels at the table.
"Okay, mom. Come on, Lily, let's get you to bed," Lincoln obeyed, cradling Lily into his shoulder as he stood from the couch. His mother squeaked at the words. "Are you okay, mom?" He asked, peeking into the dining to catch on his 'mother.' Her body type is relatively the same, with more definition in her hips and lower body. Her hair was longer, reaching her shoulder, sleek black and curly at the end. She dressed more casually, wearing a dark purplish t-shirt and denim jeans.
"Of course, honey," Brita smiled with happy tears in her eyes. He nodded before marching up the stairs as Lily snored on his shoulder. She immediately texted her father and Lynn Sr. "He finally called me mom,"
Lincoln knocked on the door, waiting for this Lisa to answer. "Hello, elder brother," BLisa opened the door and greeted him. Same as Lily. Darker skin with thicker curly black hair.
"Hey, Lisa," Lincoln replied, entering the room and gently putting BLily in her crib.
"I have what your Lisa asked for in the works," BLisa said, gesturing to her workstation and bunker outside the window. "It'll take a few more days," She predicted.
"Days?" Lincoln arched his brow. This was supposed to be a simple in and out.
"Don't worry. Your temporal particles are locked in on your home dimension. It's like you've never left," Lisa clarified. It's a reverse Hyperbolic time chamber or Hekapoo's little dimension. That eased his worries slightly, but he still felt unsettled in his own home. "Everything will be alright. Our patriarchal figure will arrive within the hour to get dinner started," She grinned before heading to her workstation. He nodded. His eyes glanced at Lisa's form. Why the fuck was she so thick? Nope, not going down that route. He exited the door and approached his own. Lincoln wiped his face, discovering crumbs on the corners of his mouth. Did he eat before he woke up?
"DID SOMEONE EAT THE LAST CHICKEN BREAST?!" BLori roared, stomping up the stairs. BLuna and BLuan raised their hands in surrender, claiming innocence from the snarling oldest child. Lincoln lightly stepped towards the door. It's an excellent time to run. She glared at him; his greasy lips shone and highlighted the remains of the breaded poultry. "You," BLori growled, pointing at him. Uh oh. His eyes widened at the raging bull ready to charge.
"Ah fuck, she's taking the earrings!" BLuan muttered at the battle-ready girl.
"Dude, run!" BLuna warned, but it was too late. BLori charged at him with a roar. However, Lincoln didn't feel an ounce of fear in his body. He blankly observed his older sister charge at him. Out of all the threats and dangers he conquered, this was nothing. Lincoln's new body was lighter and somewhat weaker than his original one. Yet all his training should still be there. Lincoln exhaled as BLori closed the gap. His body tensed, ready to strike at the target. She didn't see it coming. Lincoln evaded her tackle, her eyes momentarily distracted as she followed him. His fist slammed against her chin with an uppercut, rocketing Lori across the hall, leading her on her back with a dazed expression. His other sisters were dumbfounded at the action. They stared at each other. When the hell did he learn how to do that?!
"You got knocked the fuck out!" BLuan exclaimed, not wanting to miss this opportunity. Her body chilled at the approaching. His face was blank, and his blue eyes were cold and lifeless. This wasn't the Lincoln that they knew. Lincoln scanned his sisters. BLuna still followed the rocker lifestyle. Her hair was styled in a fohawk fade with an L shaved on the side of her head. BLuan, the eternal jokester, is now rocking a large puffy ponytail.
"If she asked, it's Luan's fault," Lincoln crafted an excuse.
"Deal," BLuna agreed, raising her thumb and grabbing BLori's arms.
"Ayo!" BLuan complained as she grasped BLori's ankles as they carried her to her room. Lincoln ogled them. Why do they have bootylicious buttcheeks? Oh my god, he said that his sisters have bootylicious buttcheeks. Lincoln headed to his room before he slammed his head through the drywall. His room was emptier. He calculated that his adoption was recent, probably within the past year or so. The majority of his comics and video games were gone too. Damn. Those he did find were older ones. Crap, he must've traveled back in time too.
"It's only for a few days, Loud," Lincoln whispered. Wait, is his last name even Loud? He shook his head, deciding to worry about that later. The hour went by. All of his sisters were the same in terms of personality and interests. Why the hell is BLola so thick? Remember, different universe. At least he still had Charles and Bun-Bun.
BLynn Sr. got his groceries ready to make dinner for the week. He tied his apron when Lincoln entered the kitchen. "Hey, Lincoln, want to help out in the kitchen?" He asked with a charming smile.
"Sure, dad," Lincoln agreed, grabbing a spare apron from the rack. BLynn Sr. whimpered at the name. The frost-haired male gazed at his father. "Dad, are you crying again?" He asked, knowing how emotional his father was. Maybe he should've called him Mr. Loud, but that would've felt weird. "Oh boy," Lynn Sr. embraced him.
"Yes," The older man sobbed a river in the kitchen. Lisa entered, placing a wet floor sign on the floor.
Lincoln sighed, shooking his head. "I love you too, dad," He padded his back, glancing at the clock. "Come on, let's get dinner started. We don't want to get Lola angry," Lincoln announced, both men unable to resist a shudder. They washed their hands. BLynn Sr. saw the faint smile on Lincoln's face. BRita reported that Lincoln was acting strange, but they didn't care. He's finally getting comfortable with them after such a long time and enduring hell before this. It was tough but worth it. BLynn's smile widened as they dried their hands. Welcome to the BLoud, Lincoln.
Alright, let's go! All my stories have been updated in a single month. These short chapters make things a bit easier allowing me to get my stories done. Speaking of which, how do you guys think about theses previews and future Omakes?
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