im sorry about the delay, i started to edit the first chapter and just couldn't stop myself from extending it. I actually wanted to extend it further but felt that since the chapter had already doubled in length, i forced myself to stop at a cliffhanger. Please reread the first chapter, follow if you liked and leave a review, I would love some feedback and hope one of you may volunteer to be a proofreader for future chapters to help me spot and fix errors before officially released to the site.