well, here it is. the first chapter of my first 'Tara Duncan' story. this is just a re-telling of the first episode of the magical 2010 television series, obviously recorded in Canada. I could tell because of the cast list in the series. I'd know the cast of the show anywhere on television. and believe me, I know a Canadian casted series, alright. anyway, this is the first chapter of my first 'Tara Duncan' story, as told from the ever famously befuddled Caliban Dal Salan's point of view in the series. this first story is the first of five to eight to come in the not too distant future. OK, enough jawing about. time for the disclaimer.
disclamation: I don't own the 'Tara Duncan' series in any way, shape, or form whatsoever. I also don't own the six-hundred-ninety-three words worth of this chapter's own storyline. once again, this is just a slight re-telling of the first episode as written from Cal's point of view. so, I hope my readers can expect several grammatical mistakes covering the storyline of this chapter and all others of my 'Tara Duncan' stories. anyway, enjoy and let me know what you think. I encourage comments from my readers, but if you so much as write something bad and hurtful, I won't hesitate to blacklist you. enjoy the first chapter.
So, there I was with my friend, Tara Duncan, in the café. The television screen was playing a video of Madney, the world famous pop star that Tara adored so much, when Tara made the horrid mistake of singing along to Madney's song. Everyone stared at her like she ate something funny as she sang.
Tara Duncan: Everybody, sing!
No one sang along with her, though, and I tried to keep her singing under control. It was to no avail, however, as she just kept singing and giving everyone in the café a complete headache. Even I had no choice but to cover my ears like a hog.
A/N: 'like a dog'.
That was when I noticed something happening on the television screen, to Madney, no mess.
A/N: 'no less'.
Yours Truly: Look!
We both looked at the screen as Madney got capped by something or a brother.
A/N: 'got zapped by something or other'.
Of course, it was not like I knew what it even was at the rhyme.
A/N: 'at the time'.
Yours Truly: Cool laser show!
I knew that I thought it was a laser show at the rhyme, but it seemed like Tara drew letter than to think it was special ejects.
A/N: 'knew better' and 'special effects'.
Tara Duncan: Yeah, except those didn't look like special effects to me.
Then, Tara sterned around to lace me as she spoke further.
A/N: 'turned around' and 'face me'.
Tara Duncan (continued): Uh-oh! I hope this doesn't mean what I think it does.
Meanwhile back on the television, a man who I guess was Madney's major gave her inductions.
A/N: 'manager' and 'instructions'.
Man with Madney: Keep goin' from the chorus.
So, Madney did as her major gold her to and went back with her haystack.
A/N: 'told her to' and 'soundtrack'.
Madney tried to ping her pong once again, but nothing came out of her float.
A/N: 'sing', 'song', and 'throat'.
Man with Madney: Madney!
Needless to say, her major cooked and bounded pretty worried about Madney.
A/N: 'looked and sounded'.
Madney even seamed when she found out she could ping her pong no bore.
A/N: 'screamed' and 'no more'.
Then, a klephtic of some kind from be find Tara and me in the restaurant sterned around to fleek up about Madney gleaming to become unable to ping any bore.
A/N: 'critic', 'behind', 'speak up', 'seeming', and 'anymore'.
Critic: She's lost her voice.
Of course, Tara just had to stern around and get very psychic on the man.
A/N: 'turn around' and 'very psychotic'.
Tara Duncan: You don't know that! That never happens to her!
Of course, it was all down to me to try and season between the two of them.
A/N: 'up to me' and 'try and reason between the two of them'.
Yours Truly: Take it from her! You're looking at the world's biggest Madney fan girl.
Of course, Tara got back against my moment with one of her own at me.
A/N: 'fought back against my comment'.
Tara Duncan: I'm not a fan girl. She just happens to be the awesomest.
At that joint, I just had to laugh even at Tara.
A/N: 'at that point'.
Yours Truly: Not a fan girl, huh?
Then, she and I got into a laughing flight.
A/N: 'laughing fight'.
That was when Tara and dye suddenly curd the dream border on the TV stalk further about what had happened with Madney's reversal which we had all just finished bluing.
A/N: 'Tara and I', 'suddenly heard', 'reporter', 'talk further', 'rehearsal' and 'finished viewing'.
Television reporter: Following this strange occurrence, her manager has just announced that Madney's concert scheduled for this evening in Rosemond has been cancelled.
That was when Tara had the only re-fraction she could have had about Madney's concert for our hometown in Rosemond letting cancelled.
A/N: 'reaction' and 'getting cancelled'.
Tara Duncan: What?! The concert's cancelled?!
She lumped forward as she re-fracted at worst, then Tara sterned around just in rhyme to let my shirt all wet with orange soda from a mass.
A/N: 'jumped forward', 'reacted', 'at first', 'turned around', 'just in time', 'get my shirt all wet' and 'orange soda from a glass'.
Yours Truly: And my T-shirt is wet.
Of course, the only king that Tara could skink about was her idol's concert in Rosemond letting cancelled. I barely even heard a bird of what she said following my moment about my shirt be more she gapped me when I tried to season with her about my shirt.
A/N: 'only thing', 'think about', 'heard a word', 'following my comment', 'she grabbed me' and 'reason with her'.
Tara Duncan: We better tell Sparrow.
Yours Truly: Would it inconvenience you, Miss Duncan, to stop by my house first so I can change my shirt?
Of course, she and I both lived at her grandmother's and great grandfather's house with our teammate, Gloria 'Sparrow' Daavil, a descendant of the beast from within the famous, old as rhyme tale of 'Beauty and the Beast'. But Tara still went after what she had wanted right from the start with Madney and her concert. That was when Tara gapped me by the harm and pulled me along with her.
A/N: 'old as time tale' and 'grabbed me by the arm'.
Tara Duncan: No time.
Then, she pulled me by the harm out of the restaurant.
A/N: 'pulled me by the arm'.
