2013 Carrie Part Zero
To the first scene of the 2013 Carrie.
Disclaimers: I own nothing
"Okay then let's begin, plus Yang Xiao Long is our protagonist and plus a victim that was then turn into a monster or just pushed into being one, you'll see what I mean", Hakaze said to them as the scene opens
The scene opens to the house of Raven Branwen that's located in the town of Patch and the month is August. Well the house is white, wooden house at the end of the a country lane with tress in the yard that look like New England trees back on Earth, Wind in the trees' leaves, the branches swaying, a sense of the Natural World and the Eternal. Up in the sky is a passing Acclamator-Class Assault Ship with some V-Wing Starfighters as escort while flying alongside some Pelta-Class Medical Frigates.
"Wait Patch is a town a in this movie?" Taiyang ask after seeing that Patch isn't like how he and his Family knows it
"Yeah, plus the town is controlled by my Republic Clone Troopers from the 501st Legion who are garrison there, but it use to be like how you all knew it until I ordered it to be a town", Hakaze explained the background for this version of Patch.
"Also I take it that I live with my biological mother Raven Branwen", Yang said thinking this.
"Yes, plus your name is Yang Branwen, not Xiao Long", well that surprise on what Hakaze said.
"What happened to dad?"
"To be determine for the next scenes", Hakaze isn't going spoiled it.
"Also other question, why is the house looks so old?" Qrow wonders why does the house of Raven looks so old and nothing like they know it.
"Raven isn't like how you all know her, she is pretty much something that Yang doesn't and never likes, but you'll see it all in the next scene."
Next scene is singing, the voices are talking religion, at the stand it revealed to be Raven Branwen stands in front of a makeshift altar leading them.
"The Brothers of Light and Darkness made all life on Remnant which are Humans and Faunus alike, and now they are gone, but we all choose to live on with our lives without the here", Raven says her speech alongside her followers.
"Really Raven, your speaking religion", Qrow teases his sister about that, but both Ozpin and Salem are a bit uncomfortable after hearing the Brothers of Light and Darkness since they are responsible for making them go to war that's going into an endless one.
"I'm not even a religious woman Qrow", Raven responded while glaring at him.
"But believe me that your going to not like the kind of religion belief that Raven has for the next few scenes", Hakaze warned them about that and they are so not going to like it.
In the backyard is Raven's 5 year old shy daughter, Yang Branwen, she is creeping towards the fence that separates the Branwen Household from the next door neighbor's yard. On the other side of the fence is 18 year old Faunus girl Velvet Scarlatina who is sunbathing on a towel in a dark brown bikini dozing.
"Oh it's you Yang as a 5 year old!" Ruby said happily cooing remembering the old days which made Yang blushed.
"Ruby!" Yang said in embarrassment.
"Ah the old days when Yang was 5 years old", even Taiyang, Qrow and Summer remember those old days, all except for Raven because was never there to see Yang's time as a 5 year old anyway due to her running off after Yang was born.
"Hey Bun-Bun", Coco said to Velvet who has both her eyes covered by her Rabbit ears due to her being seen wearing a bikini on screen. Perhaps Velvet did wear bikini sometime ago but she was all alone with nobody watching her.
"I think you look good in a bikini Velvet", Fox said and yet Velvet keeps her eyes covered with her Rabbit Ears not wanting to look.
In the present day in a conference room, Velvet who is now in her 30s is sitting in front of a microphone being interview by someone off screen.
"I live next to the Branwens until I was 20, the incident happened when I was 18 and Yang was 4 or five years old", Velvet tells her interviewers about the day she met Yang.
"Oh and most of scenes can flash to the conference room that's from the present day", Hakaze tells them.
"Really, so the interview is everyone who knew about Yang and her mother Raven", Ozpin said and Hakaze nodded her head as a yes.
"But it's there point of view of what they know about the incident."
The scene flashback to the backyard again as Velvet wakes up and sees Yang staring at her. "Yang you scared me, hi", Velvet felt startled by Yang but stills says hi to her.
"Hi Velvet", Yang says greeted Velvet before pointing at one spot on her.
"You have some dirty pillows on you", Yang said but the audiences can tell what she is talking about much to Velvet's embarrassment.
"Oh you mean my breast?"
"I wish I had some too", Yang in the audiences already has them for a very long time after growing up.
"Oh I so have them alright!" Yang muttered to herself.
"Oh you will when your older Yang", Velvet speaks about Yang's high hopes for them while laughing.
"No I won't because my momma says only bad girls have dirty pillows", what young Yang said made the audiences mouth to drop.
"Well I'm a good girl and your mom has breast too right?"
"My mama is wicked when she made me with my daddy, she says and that's how come she has them."
"What the heck is Yang talking about?!" Taiyang ask Hakaze on getting a bad feeling on what Raven did to Yang and what she made his eldest daughter believe.
"Let's just say Raven isn't the kind mother that she is even though you never saw her mother when Yang after she was born", Hakaze said while tapping her head, "it's because Raven is mentally ill", Hakaze said while some including the family glare at Raven who just looks away, but some believe that her counterparts needs a doctor to fix the mental illness.
"But the next scene will show what I mean on how Raven views things due to her mental illness."
"But none of you are really going to like it do we Hakaze?" Ruby ask and Hakaze is true on what she is saying.
"Believe me Ruby you won't like it at all."
Back at the conference room, Velvet shakes her head at the memory before continue on what she remembers.
"I was in shock about what I just heard, I wanted to grab Yang up in my arms and just run away with her and to get her", but the scene cuts back to the backyard on what happens next.
"YAAANNNNGGG!" Raven Branwen called out to her daughter screaming like a banshee from her backdoor much to the audiences shock on how loud she is and what is about to come next.
Young Yang freeze when she her mentally ill mother and Velvet tries to cover herself as Raven stomps her way toward them, pretty much the audiences but some only aren't going to like how Raven is going talk to Velvet.
"Mrs Branwen", Velvet tries to say something to Raven but she doesn't give her a chance to speak.
"You strumpet Faunus whore!" Most of the audiences ended up dropping their drinks after hearing what Raven just called Velvet.
"We are just talking!" And yet Raven won't listen to Velvet as some of the members of the sect have gathered in the doorway and the windows after hearing the commotion.
Lastly Raven roughly grabs Yang by the arm and yanks her away from Velvet toward the house, "And you, I already warn you didn't I Yang? I warned you about Velvet!" Raven starts yelling at Yang which frightens her.
"I'm sorry momma I just forgot", but Raven retorts by shaking Yang violently which angers Taiyang, Qrow, Summer, Ruby and the rest Team RWBY, some of Ozpin's inner circle do not appreciated on how Raven is treating Yang.
"Why you!" Taiyang glared at his Raven who doesn't even look at him.
"Other Tai!" Raven response to him saying it's the other her, but even her brother is glaring at his sister.
"If I was there, I would have arrested Raven and sent her to a mental hospital while I sent Yang somewhere safe away from her, because that's no way on treating her own daughter", James Ironwood said his opinion on what would he would do to the mentally ill Raven Branwen.
"I know you would James", Ozpin agrees while Salem covers her 4 daughters on not trying to look at this.
"Raven is so mentally ill and her religion is fanatic", Glynda said glaring at the Raven on the screen.
"Velvet?" Coco and the rest of Team CFVY gives Velvet some comfort after she started to have tears after seeing what Raven's counterpart just called her counterpart.
"Velvet is a Faunus whore of the God of Darkness, Yang, it's a sin on consorting with her!"
"Mama please I'm sorry", but Yang can't do anything to reason with her mentally ill mother and her fanatic religion.
Next Velvet's mother Villa steps out of their house after hearing the noise and approaches her daughter Velvet.
"Velvet? What happen and what's going on?" Villa ask Velvet until Raven interrupts with an accusation.
"Your daughter Velvet is a slut and you revel in it!" Raven accused which angers Villa.
"Excuse me?! What did you say?!"
"Velvet exposing herself to the world and showing her flesh and you allow it!" Raven's mental illness makes her think that when in reality there is nothing wrong with that at all, everyone in the audiences knows that.
"Mom, Raven is hurting Yang!" Velvet tells her mother after seeing how rough Raven is toward Yang.
"You let Yang go Raven, or I'll call the Republic Clone Shock Troopers to come and arrest you for child abuse!" Unfortunately the mentally ill Raven Branwen is unfazed by those threats.
"Her mental illness makes her unfazed by any of those threats", Winter said although she and the others are surprise to hear the world Clone.
"I can explained the Armed Forces of the Galactic Republic when we are done with the Film", Hakaze said to them, so they will lay off on asking her about it.
"How dare she talk about Velvet like that?" Coco said glaring at Raven.
"Like I said before, my counterpart is mentally ill."
"You see Yang? You see how they are? How they threaten?" Raven's words are wrong because Velvet and her mother Villa was coming to Yang's defense.
"Momma!" Said a sobbing Yang as the worshippers are staring at the commotions that's going on with Raven, Velvet and Villa all yelling, then Yang wailing as Raven drags her back towards the house.
The scene goes back to the conference room. "The matter of facts, that's when they started falling out the sky."
"What's falling out of the sky?" Ciel wonders what's that mean.
"The next scene will show us friend Ciel", Penny said but this next part can be dangerous.
Going back to the backyard, rocks of pebbles starts falling from the sky and hits the Branwen roof bouncing off it. More starts coming down as Raven starts shaking Yang as the falling rocks gets her attention, even the audiences are shock to see rocks falling from the sky and are wondering how are those rocks falling from the sky.
"Velvet get over now!" Velvet runs to her mother as more rocks that's in the size hail ice pellets continue to fall all over the Branwen backyard. Raven kneels in front of her sobbing and hysterical daughter Yang realizing that the falling rocks is her doing.
"Yang you have to stop!" Unfortunately Yang is unable to stop as more rocks continues to fall at their own house while Velvet and her mother are safely in cover.
"Wait Yang is doing the falling rocks?!" Ruby said after watching the scene where Raven is trying to calm Yang down.
"Must be because Yang was having a breakdown that was caused by Raven which made her summon those falling rocks to begin with", Ozpin said theory.
"Could be a Aura or Semblance", James said next.
"Unfortunately this is no Aura or Semblance, it's only something supernatural", Hakaze corrected them on what it is.
In the end Raven was able to calm Yang down by stroking her hair while in cover behind a oak tree that was in their backyard and the rocks stops falling or just settles itself. "Yang's it's alright, the God of Light forgives you", Raven said to her, but most in the audiences wonder if this rock storm will return if Yang gets another breakdown.
"Something tells me Yang's breakdown will happen again and the rock storm will return", Marrow suspects this.
"What makes you say that Marrow?" Harriet ask why would he say that.
"Because I assume the her mother's mental illness will continues, Yang might get pushed into having breakdown."
Meanwhile up in the sky where the Acclamator-Class Assault Ship is hovering, even they are getting pelted by the falling rocks while the Pelta-Class Frigate and V-Wings Fighters move out of the way.
"What is that falling on top of the ship?!" Clone Troopers from the bridge are wondered as the look outside the bridge.
"They look like rocks!"
"Pull the ship to a safe position!"
"Aye!"
Thankfully the Acclamator-Class Assault Ship was able to get to a safe position and away from the rock storm preventing any more damage from the rocks.
"For the record, every Capital Ship that my Republic Navy have a deflector shield but it's meant to block laser fire, the shield is useless against non-lasers."
"2 things have happened after that day, I never sunbathed in the backyard again and 2, those church people have stopped coming over to pray and sing and whatever it is they do there. It's just Raven and Yang in their house doing whatever it is they are doing."
"Is that so Velvet" The interviewer revealed to be Clone ARC Trooper Captain Rex.
"Sure but I've wondered over the years on what happened to Yang Branwen and her mentally ill mother. I supposes the whole Remnant and the Galactic Republic already knows about.
"But everyone has different views about the incident", Captain Rex said.
"I guess that we still need to see what happened to Yang and her mom before we see the end", Ruby said and yes they do.
"That's Captain Rex of the 501st Legion and he is doing the interview
End
Well that did it, I wanted to start off short starting with the prologue or beginning. Like I said before, with the Galactic Republic present here things get customize.
Anyway Yang Xiao Long is Carrie White
Raven Branwen: Margaret White
Sue Snell: Pyrrha Nikos
Tommy Ross: Jaune Arc
Christine Hargensen: Cinder Fall
Billy Nolan: Mercury Black
Rita Desjardin: Glynda Goodwitch
Henry Morton: Ozpin
Nicki and Lizzy Watson: Melanie and Miltia Malachite
Tina Blake: Emerald Sustrai
Guy with the camera killed by a table: Cardin Winchester
There are plenty of more I need to choose for the cast.