Hiii everyone, this one will be shorter than the other one because I don't have much to fix. The chapter was shit but there's nothing I can do. Like the previous one, this one will be an Ally Defender style fanfic. Enjoy reading.
The challenge had begun. Everyone except Jake had taken their first pieces to the other side. Ally was enjoying seeing Jake in his miserable state.
Ally: You haven't even made it there yet?
Jake: Did you come here to make fun of me?
Ally: Yes and it was totally worth it.
As Ally was climbing, Jake grabbed her by the foot and knocked her to the ground.
Ally: Hey! What's your problem?
Jake was holding his arms out to prevent Ally from passing.
Ally: Are you kidding me? Get out of here!
Jake: No. If I can't do it, then neither can you and I don't care if we lose.
Ally: Not fair! Kristal! Do something!
Kristal: There's no such rule as can't. Sorry Ally.
Ally growled angrily.
Ally: What kind of a host are you? You're always playing me when you're taking sides with everyone else! I know you're having a lot of fun with this!
Ally turns to Jake.
Ally: As for you Jake! Your sperm ducts will be completely closed now!
Ally starts to grab Jake's cock hard. Jake was moaning in pain and couldn't do anything. Ally was having a lot of fun. She kept squeezing.
Confessional
Ally: Kristal always favors me over others and she definitely doesn't mean it! She didn't win last season because I fell because of a tree in the challrngr Hunter won! When I came alone the other day, she said I couldn't do anything without Jake! And she's so determined to finish me off... I hate that little eel so much!...
Ally: Also, Hunter, you may not like this but this was my last and most effective solution and I don't regret it at all. Jake deserved it. Happy dickless.
Ally laughs.
Confessional End
The others separated Ally and Jake.
(Other parts are the same)
Ally was looking at Grett suspiciously.
Confessional
Ally: I didn't know Grett's position in the game was so good. I didn't like it. There's definitely something and I'm going to find out.
Confessional End
(Elimination and all are the same)
Confessional
Ally: What did Grett whisper to Jake? If Grett wants to play the traitorous chicken, I'm in. As long as Grett helps them, she'll fall a lot. I'm just saying that.
Confessional End
Note: There wasn't much, just that scene needed fixing. Grett was like a snake this episode. Pig bitch! Jake might be one of the worst bastards I've ever seen in my life. He's been really bad this season. Kristal is so complicated. I wonder why she hates Ally. If it was me, I'd hate Aiden. Anyway, see you in other fanfics :))