You feel like this is a crossover between MLP and Rio it is but little, it's about when Rio civilization is exploring the ancient Equestrians on Rio planet.
I wanted to have mild language in this story, so can I? I would like you to give me a favor can you review my story, please? But, don't do hateful or bad things reviews or you'll be blocked!
Also, can I update this whole story with the Grammarly app I downloaded? Because I'm a terrible writer. Some scenes can be deleted and replaced with another idea, and some plans change.
This is the first chapter in which I used the Grammarly app.
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The Union of Takistan, they're not a military dictatorship but they are a fascist dictatorship, meanwhile, the Republican rebellions are pro-democracy and they wanted to restore democracy to Takistan and kick out the Union fascist dictatorship government.
And sorry for a long time because I had no idea what was next so I needed a co-writer just like Doc fossil a user who is my co-writer of one my other stories.
Chapter 10: Captured.
Back at Takistan, Union Territory, Boland.
2 days earlier.
It was now dark at night seeing two moons again but in front of them, the Union of Takistani flag flying was now similar to North Korea. It was the bright city, the largest city ever in Takistan, in the alleyway between poor Muslim humans sitting but one praying. They turned their head to the exit after hearing the sounds of marching hundreds of human soldiers, playing the drums, and singing.
The hundreds of human soldiers marching in the city on the road had a strange black uniform, had armbands on their left arms, carrying torches, banners, and flags, and they were not a military but an elite paramilitary. (Similar to a WW2 German paramilitary)
The civilian humans on the sidewalk looking at them with concern but some black uniform soldiers were there, giving a fascist salute, three of the civilians in one of the building apartments 2 were men and 1 familiar woman, 1 man had black skin, 1 man looked Asian-like with round glasses and a familiar woman, Farah Mina walked to the windows and looked down at the march with the stern.
"Black Sand Storm Division." said the man with black skin.
"Yes, Amir, what are they up to?" Farah replied.
"Looks like the Union is adding reinforcements," Amir said.
"Or maybe doing a parade." said the Asian-like man.
"Sami, the parade starts in months, the Fascist Revolution Day." said the Amir next to him.
"When I was in Takistan from Babylon," said an Asian-like man named Sami. "I'll feel sorry about people in Takistan, since my country, Babylon invaded them."
"That was a century ago, and yes thanks." said the Amir.
"Enough history, boys," said Farah.
The sound of the door knocking caught Farah, Amir, and Sami's attention, Farah opened the door revealing the Muslim man with a letter.
"ما هذا؟ (What is it?)" she asked.
"تدليك من الجنرال، سيدتي. (Massage from General, madam.)" He said as he put his hand close to her that had a letter, she grabbed the letter and let the man inside, she explored the hall of the apartment, she noticed when she looked up, she saw a camera turning, he closed the door before the camera turned to her door and others.
The man sat on the chair next to the round table. Farah opened the letter, and read the letters that were all Arabic.
"What is it, Lieutenant?" Amir asked.
Farah looked at the men after she read. "They're after Blu and Alex."
Minutes later.
Amir placed the map on the table and opened it.
"So, Lusban the place that we liberated and saved the last Blue Spix's macaw?" Sami asked.
"Yes," Farah answered. "we helped them escape to the Natural Zone Wall," she pointed at the black line on the map a border between the Union of Takistan and the United States of Rio. "we hope they'll survive but the General said, Union division is after them, lead by Senior Colonel Hassan Wickground, the same man that I tried to kill him, he's gone rogue into United States' territory, the General ordered us to follow them with our company lead by John Epps."
"بطل الحرب؟ (The war hero?)" asked the massager man.
"Yes, and my greatest partner," Farah answered. "So, we'll need to bring our men from the buildings in the city, to escape the city we have our vehicles hiding somewhere that I put, then we-" until she was by the door knocking loudly, Farah and 3 men looked at the door.
"ماذا يحدث هنا؟ افتح الباب وتحدث معي. (What's going on? Open the door and talk to me.)" shouted the man behind the door was a Black Sand Storm Division officer uniform black uniform with 3 men armed with similar AK-47s but covered black, and had strange glowing lights on the muzzle and mags.
"Well looks we're busted," Amir said as he, Farah, and 2 men went to the rooms, Amir opened the bag in the kitchen revealing an SVD sniper rifle, Sami went to the bedroom same with Farah, and opened the crate revealing a Degtyaryov machine gun, Farah opened the closet revealing compound Bow and Arrows bag, and men picked up the AK-47 from the crated at the window.
The BSSD officer became impatience as he pulled out the key card from his pocket, 3 men aimed their rifles at the door, and the door's handle scanned the officer's card light turned green in acceptance, once the door opened the officer stopped as Farah, Amir, Sami, and man aimed their weapons at him, Farah released the arrow toward the officer, 3 soldiers shocked as the arrowed went to the officer dead, Amir fired his rifle with a silencer at the soldier who's in front of the door, Farah suddenly went to the door aimed her bow at two soldiers with 2 arrows on her bow fired and killed 2 soldiers.
"Moved!" Farah ordered as she and 3 men left the room to the hallway.
(Present.)
It was now dark at night seeing two moons again but the Union of Takistani flag flying in front of them.
Hassan Wickground is walking through the camp with the female Muslim human unfamiliar with a black niqab, the same skin color as Hassan's, black armor, black uniform with the Takistani Union emblem patched on her arm, two scabbards with swords, and a familiar emblem and logo of Takistani Union's elite paramilitary force on her armor chest, Black Sand Storm Division. 12 Black Sand Storm Division human soldiers followed them were armed with similar AK-47s but covered black, and had strange glowing lights on the muzzle and mags.
"إذن أختي كيف كان الأمر؟ (So sister how was it?)" Hassan said looking at her, and then she suddenly looked back at him.
"أخي، سمعتك تصرخ بشأن رجلنا وتلك القلادة (Brother, I heard you shouting about our man and that necklace.)" She said.
"نعم، كانت تلك كذبة، لقد كان جبانًا لذا تم إعدامه (Yeah, that was a lie, he was a coward so he's executed.)" Hassan said as they both stopped.
"حسنًا، من هو الرجل الثاني الآن؟ (Well, who is the second-in-command now?)"
"حسنًا، يا باشيمة، أنت عقيد مبتدئ، أنت الرجل الثاني الجديد. (Well Baashima, scene you're a Junior Colonel, you're a new second-in-command.)" he said as he put the emblem on her arm.
"شكرا اخي (Thank you, brother.)"
Then suddenly the masked human soldier with the same uniform as the other 12 men with sunglasses covering his eye area ran toward them, stopped in front of them, and said. "سيد لقد قبضنا على أربعة هاربين، اثنان من الببغاوات، ورجل واحد، وواحد عنكبوتي (Sir! We got four fugitives captured, two macaws, one man, and one spiderlous!)"
Hassan smiled and looked at his sister while she looked at him. "ترى يا أخت؟ لقد حصلنا عليهم ولكن مع شخص جديد. (You see, sister? We got them but with a new person.)"
Before Baashima spoke to reply the soldier said. "لكن يا سيدي، الرجل مألوف جدًا، إنه متطوع كاريوكا الأجنبي الذي كنت تبحث عنه الأكثر نجاحًا. (But sir, the man is very familiar, it's the Carioca foreign volunteer who is most successful that you were... looking for.)"
Baashima looked at her brother again seeing his face in recognition and he said. "John."
Hassan walked fast while his sister followed him, Hassan and Baashima went to the tent after walking for 40 seconds while one masked soldier was in front of them blocking them.
"خارج طريقنا (Out of our way!)" Hassan said to the soldier as he grabbed his vest to pull him out.
Hassan opened the tent revealing Blu, Alex tied, and John Epps handcuffed.
"Again we meet," he said looking at them as he and his sister entered the tent.
"Hassan Wickground!" John growled. "You should be dead in Lusban!"
"Well, I survived," Hassan growled back, then looked at Blu. "and you, I always remember you."
"Recognized this one?" Baashima said as she pointed at Blu.
"Why are you doing this?" Blu asked.
"We have to!" Hassan shouted, scaring Blu, and then Hassan calmed. "Yep, we have to, to finish the long Cold War, and the proxy wars between the United States of Rio and the Union of Takistan, this will be a victory for our fascism of Takistan, and for our founder."
"You'll never win," John said.
"And why is that?" Hassan asked.
"Because we defeated 5 major wars like angels defeated demons and rebellion."
Hassan punched his face.
"And you know this bird? That you're looking for him?" Hassan said as he pointed at Blu. Blu was confused.
"Yes, from your dictator's fascist rule!"
"Isn't that right? Then tell him who you are." Hassan said as he moved away to let John talk to Blu.
"So, you know me before you met us?" Blu asked.
"Yes, for decades I was looking for you and Clara," John said bravely. "Because I'm your uncle."
Blu waited until he was shocked after remembering that was from years ago, "Uncle John?!"
"Yes." John said.
"But how-" Blu was interrupted by Hassan.
"So isn't that family reunion?" Hassan said. "Well, you must meet more, John and Blu!"
"What about Clara?" Alex asked.
Baashima and Hassan at each other, and then Baashina walked from the tent to the outside.
Hassan turned, smirked, and looked back at them.
"اصعدوهم من الخيمة (Get them up from the tent.)" Hassan ordered the 3 Black Sand Storm Division soldiers to enter the tent and grabbed Blu, Alex, and John taking them outside. Baashima meanwhile, is walking through the military soldiers while the 2 BSSD soldiers follow her, she and her soldiers stop in front of a huge cage where Clara is, and without hesitation, Baashima puts her hand on the bar bravely.
"Clara," she speaks making Clara's attention. "I know you, you're the one who bit my little brother, and we were talking about your brother who is not your kind but a macaw before the massive resistance raid to rescue you and others."
"Yeah, and?" Clara asked sternly at the woman.
"I send my brigade to look for you for years." answered the woman.
The BSSD soldiers and Hassan with Blu, Alex, and John, threw them at the cage and hit the bars.
"So," Hassan spoke as his men gathered including his figures commanders. "You four have become our greatest target." He said as he pointed at them behind his men. "One of you is the most endangered species in the world, and they'll extinct. Our Union of Takistan with our glories fascist created by our most honored and glories leader and founder who is our great-grandfather, we have our great goal; is to expand our nation with only humanity, our religion, our fascist, and one leader for Osama Wickground!"
"You'll never win." Clara said annoyed which raged inside Hassan seeing his angry face and his hands making fists.
"Well, I had 20,000 men." Hassan said while his sister walked next to him. "I can't tell you more. But I'm afraid blue." which made Blu worried. "I'm not going to spare your species."
"What?!" Blu, Alex, Clara, and John asked which made John mare angry while Blu was now worried as two BSSD soldiers grabbed him.
"NO, NO, NO!" Alex and Clara begged.
"Wait, wait!" Blu begged as he was just pushed against the tent as 4 soldiers raised their rifles at him making Blu close his eyes and cover himself with wings.
"انتظر! (Wait!)" Hassan ordered as he raised his left arm, the soldiers held their fire and still aimed at Blu. "Now, Major John Epps," he steps close to John as he stands up bravely. "I'm gonna ask an important, where's the crown?"
"We found it from the underground." John answered as Hassan held his arm.
"سيد! (Sir!)" shouted one of the soldiers as he raised the bag. "أعتقد أن هذا الشيء هو ما تبحث عنه! (I believe this thing is what you looking for!)"
The soldier handed the bag to Hassan's hand, when Hassan opened it he saw in surprise a crown shining he grabbed it and pulled it from the bag as he smiled in amazed. John Epps had no words but stared angrily at him.
"Well Mr. Epps," Hassan as he walked to him. "thank you for finding this for me."
"Then you gonna spare him?" John asked with an angry look at him.
"نار! (Fire!)" Hassan ordered as 4 soldiers ready to pull the trigger then gunfire.
Blu was not hit, Blu opened his eyes, the 4 soldiers were standing but all collapsed. The shock from everyone, questioning, and alarming then more gunfire bullets tracers came out from the trees inside the branch. The answer, inside one of the trees on the branch was a human soldier with a Republican emblem on their arm firing their weapon at the Union. Hassan took cover. One Republican soldier with a sniper rifle aimed at Clara's cage lock fired and the lock broke caught the attention of both Clara and Baashima who lay on the ground and saw the lock broke, Clara looked at Baashima who made a fist, bullets fired from the soldier from the trees, Baashima took her swords out and blocked the bullets and turned against their shooters, Clara pushed the door ready to fight with Baashima but Baashima jumped in super-jump and laned next to Hassan. John Epps who was standing near the cage bravely until the arrow hit his handcuff looked at his hands-free he then turned around and saw a familiar woman hiding in the tree wearing a mask she nodded, and he nodded back as he grabbed the dead soldier's AK-47.
"Take the cover of this one of ours!" John shouted as he fired the weapon at three incoming Union soldiers charging.
"What's happening?" Blu said as John looked at him.
"Our allies are here, Farah's here." John said.
"Farah?" Blu and Alex asked at the same time.
"Yep," John asked. "One of our generals, Nasir Burhan ordered Farah and three divisions to liberate the Lusban and rescue you. Now you have to move, I'll have to get the crown and necklace!"
John ran As Blu and Alex ran in a different direction where the Republicans were firing at the enemy troops.
John grabbed the bag where Hassan dropped it and went inside the camp, he was ambushed by a soldier who jumped yelling with a knife, he grounded John who grabbed the soldier's hand who trying to stab him, John was strong enough to beat him, he punches right to soldier's face, snatched the knife and stabbed him. John found the tent that belonged to Hassan, he entered and found the necklace. He grabbed it and threw it into the bag.
Meanwhile, Blu and Alex were running to the place where Republican soldiers occupied the trees, and one familiar soldier jumped next to them, Blu and Alex knew that this human soldier was friendly, but the familiar soldier that they didn't realize was Amir.
"You two alright?" Amir asked.
"Yeah!" Blu said.
"You're lucky we catch up." Amir said as a familiar woman jumped and landed behind him Blu realized she, was Farah Mina.
"Well, Blu and Alex, we meet again." Farah said.
"Yeah." Blu and Alex said.
"Let's get out of here." Farah ordered.
"What about Uncle John?" Blu asked.
As for John, he suddenly came and stopped at them.
"I'm fine." John said. "Let's go!"
"دعنا نذهب! (Let's go!)" Farah ordered on the radio what she grabbing and fired her arrows at 2 incoming Union soldiers, and then an entire company of Republican soldiers came to the vehicles of technical Pickup trucks, Ural-5323 trucks, BRDM-2s, BTR-70s, and 3 T-55 tanks on the back of the heavy trucks.
They hopped on, and John and Farah hopped on one of the Pickup trucks that the leader before Blu and Alex jumped on the back.
"Where are we heading?" Farah asked.
"To the nearby city where I came from." John said.
"Yes, sir, Major!" Farah said as John started the car.
Amir and Sami hopped on one of the Ural-5323 trucks where the back side was empty, but then after they hopped the sounds of metal hit and the truck rumbling, they were confused, they looked back and saw Cara was on the back.
"What? Let's get out of here." Clara said with confusion on her face.
Amir and Sami got back in the truck and looked at each other in confusion about Clara, Amir started the truck and drove as more vehicles of the company drove through the jungles. A few Union soldiers along with the officer ranked as captain with an eye patch on his left eye, and a sword ordered to fire at the convoy before they left and getting smaller and smaller, the captain grunted in defeat as the soldiers ceased fire.
Meanwhile, Senior Colonel Hassan Wickground was walking through the destroyed mess camp along with Baashima, his hands were up in defeat, and about to get outraged.
The captain ran to Hassan
"العقيد، لقد هربوا! (Colonel, they escaped!)" Reported the captain.
"إلى أين يتجهون؟ (Where are they heading?)" Hassan asked.
"غير معروف سيدي. (Unknown sir.)" The captain said as he and his officers got up. Hassan went to the nearby tree, luckily there was a ladder, he climbed, and reached the top. He watched the lights getting darker and the convoy was getting far away.
"I told you!" Hassan said raging as his cape flew, and his angry face. "I'll come for you!"
Hassan jumped and grabbed the vine to slide and landed on the floor.
"باشيمة، اتصل بالقسم بأكمله للتعبئة، سنلاحقهم جميعًا غدًا. (Baashima, call the entire division to mobilize, we're all going after them tomorrow.)" Hassan ordered as the fire started in the background.
To Be Continued...