Guys, I made the correction for chapters 1-46 ! Please could you tell me if you see any new flaws or if any sentences don't make sense.


Thanks to your suggestions, I was able to establish a broader plan of my story and here is what it will look like (for the moment) :

Luffy : Lucy Heartfilia ( Fairy tail ) / Raynare ( Highschool DxD ) / Bruno ( JoJo Adventure ) / Menma ( Anohana ) / Eevee ( Pokemon ) / ? / ? / ? / ? / ? / ?

Buggy : Megumin ( Konosuba ) / ? / ? / ? / ?

Coby : Sakura ( Zombieland saga ) / Jin ( MHA ) / ? / ?

Smoker : ? / ?

Teach : ? / ? / ? / ? / ?

Shanks : Nana Shimura ( MHA ) / Hiruzen Sarutobi ( Naruto ) / ? / ? / ? / ? / ? / ?

Big Mom : ? / ? / ? / ?

Kaido : ? / ? / ? / ? ( * 100 )

Whitebeard : ?

Dragon : ?

Sengoku : Shinichi Kudo

Moria : ? / ?

Doflamingo : ? / ?

Aokiji : ?

Law : ? / ? / ?

Kid : ? / ? / ?

Urouge : ? / ?

Hawkins : ? / ?

Apoo : ?

Drake : ?

Capone : ?

Bonney : ?

Magellan : ? / ? / ?/ ?

Caesar : ?

Ener : ?

Hody : ? / ?

CP9 : ? / ?

CP0 : Light Yagami ( Death note ) / Ryuk ( Death note )

Cavendish : ?

Rayleigh : ?

Jinbei : ?

Akainu : ?

Tesoro : ? / ?

Widos : ? / ? / ? / ? / ? / ? / ? / ? / ?


Gold D. Roger ( formerly ) : Igneel (Fairy Tail) / Acacia (Toriko) / Bardock (Dragon ball Z) / Hiruzen Sarutobi ( Naruto ) / Utsuro ( Gintama ) / Nana Shimura ( My hero Academia )


Here are the last two questions I'm going to ask you:

_After the Rainbow mist arc, do you want me to do a special arc (Buggy vs Gasper)?

_Is it a good idea to introduce Team Rocquet (Alola version)?