Author note
Hey, this is really just a quick overall of the chapters I've completed so far. As well as what I have to say on some things about the story. The first thing I'd like to point out is this is my first story. So that being said please, if you have any critiques, let me know in the comments. The second thing is one of the comments that I got on my story so far was whether or not Naruto is gonna be able to to use chakra and the force. a quick note that I have about that is yes he's going to be able to use both but his force potential is going to be very large. I'd say he'd be almost average with the force, compared to say like if he were to fight Mace Windu If it was just a straight force battle, he would never stand a chance, but that doesn't mean he's not gonna be strong in certain aspects of the force.
The last thing I had to say about this is that Naruto is mainly going to study sealing jujutsu and he's going to pretty much be a prodigy in that art.
and thank you to the one person so far, that's been commenting on the story it your questions that have been giving me some ideas. and I don't know if I'm allowed to put names in the author's note or story.
Chapter 2
It's been a week since the Kyubi attack and the hospital is constantly flooded with patients. Minato has not left Kushina's side for fear of losing her. Holding baby Mito in one hand he hears the door open. Tsunade Senju walks through the door and lets out a small sign seeing them like that.
" How are you feeling Minato"?
"As good as I can for the moment".
Hearing the two talking Kushina awoke and gave a smile.
"How are you doing Tsunade Bachan".
Getting an eye twitch Tsunade took a breath and sighed.
"I have some news and it's not good," she said with her head down.
"Kushina you will eventually be back to full health, but you will never be able to make another baby I'm truly sorry".
Both of them are shuck to the core. They just kept holding onto each other.
"I will give you to some time to your self".
" we will get through this kushina I promise". Kushina looked up at him and could see that he didn't believe it himself, that he was just saying it.
"Minato I love you we will just like what you said".
With that they just held each other in comfort.
"Now Minato you have been in here with us long enough go get some work done".
"Alright Kushina I will you and Mito rest" he said to her as he departs from the room. Minato then flashed to his office were someone is there waiting for him. When he realized that Donzo was there he froze.
"What are you doing here Shimura" he said with an icy tone of voice.
"I wish to know what is to be done with the boy",he said that and pointed to Naruto in the corner of the room. Minato was taken aback by that question, he had know idea of what to do. Taking a breath he said,
"he will keep the name Naruto and be given his mothers last name".
"He will also be placed into the village orphanage".
"And if he wants to be a shinobi of the village"?
Minato took a minute to think of an answer.
"He will never be a shinobi of this village and that is the last I want to hear of that". Little did he know someone overhead them, or something heard that.
"Foolish human your ignorance will be your down fall hahaha".
The Kyubi chuckled from his cage in the seal on Naruto.
For the next five years Naruto's life was a living nightmare. For the first year it was normal and he was well taken care of. That is until someone leaked the information that Naruto had the soul of the Kyubi. And for once it was not Donzo but the to elders on the council. After that he was barely given food, and whatever food he was given was old and mold on it. He was locked in the attic of the orphanage. But when he looked outside of the window he would see ninja jumping from ruftop to ruftop.
"Ninja are so cool I what to be one as well".
This was Narutos dream and he was going to make it happen. But before he could start to think about that the door swung open with a crash.
"Alright you little demon I've had enough of you in here and I want you out now" the maitron of the orphanage yelled at him. She then grabbed him by the arm and started pulling him.
"But why what did I do".
"You filthy Monster how dare you say that".
As she said that she throw him out of the door and locked it. With it being the start of winter and in the late afternoon it was beginning to get cold.
"Damn it's cold I got to go or ill freeze".
As he makes his way around the village the night is slowly approaching and it is getting colder and colder. As he comes around a corner many eyes are watching him.
"Damn fucking demon" a drunk and elderly man says.
"Why do you get to live but my wife a daughter don't".
As he said that more and more people start to say and yell the same thing. Out of know were a bottle flys across the way and hits him. Like a fluid gate the wrath of the people just takes over and they start t mob after him.
After the bottle hit him he stated to run as fast as he could. He starts to look back to see villagers after him.
"Oh god oh god what the hell".
" why are you chasing me" he yells but they don't answer.
As he turns another corner he is blocked by a wall.
"We got you now you Monster" one pink heired villager said as she and the others approach.
"Stop please what did I do"?
But this only in raged the people more and then the pain started. Bottles blanks of wood and even a kitchen knife were all smacked and smashed onto him. As they did this his screams of pain kept be drowned out by their sick laughter. As he was looking up at them all he could think was, "if they call me a Monster then what are they"?
With one last great hit to the head by a peace of lumber he blacks out. As they leave him there thinking that he is dead thay go off and celebrate. Inside of the seal Naruto wakes up in what he can only think is a sewer.
"What were am I"?
"Hello is anyone here"?
As he listens he can hear what seems to be a whisper that said " come here boy we need to talk". Following the sound of the voice he comes to a stop in front of a set of iron cage doors.
"What is this place" he said out loud not thinking that he would get an answer.
"We are in your mind" some thing said as a red eye opens and stares at him.
"What the hell"?!! Naruto yells out in shock for what he is seeing.
"What or who are you"?
"Hahaha I fullish human am the great and mighty Kyubi now bow down and bask in my immense power".
As the Kyubi stops talking he can see that his words had very little effect on the boy in front of him.
"Umm are you alright? I mean bragging to a five year old kind of lane if you ask me". The Kyubi was astounded here was a little kid not at all afraid of him and had the balls to mock him.
"You are talking this surprisingly well much better then my last container".
"Well I read somewhere that foxes are pranksters, and they are not evil right"?
"Wahahaha that is one of the funniest things that I have ever heard".
As the Fox laughed Naruto started to get angry with him.
"Hey you basturd Fox stop laughing and tell me what you want"?
Once the Kyubi stopped giggling he said,
"I brought you here to talk and to make a deal with you since most people want power you are probably no different".
"What kind of deal" he asks in hesitation.
"If you tear a piece of the seal on the cage and let me have access to your sense then I will train you in the basics of chakra and one other art of being a shinobi". Naruto stood there with a smile on his face and was about to say yes when he stopped.
" wait why does it sound like that I'm the only one really getting anything out of the deal"?
"You are not as dumb as you look kid, yes there is a catch".
"If I train you it means that you have to leave the village".
Naruto didn't know what to say to that all that he had was here, granted it was not much but still. His dream this to be a leaf shinobi was it not.
"If you are having trouble with the choice then think back to a few minutes ago and what they did to you".
"There must be more to this then what you are saying am I right"?
"Yes it is also a big Fuck you to this village".
Naruto thought long and hard about the importance of this conversation and the deal.
"Before I give you my answer you said that you had another container who was he"?
"I've had two containers before you, one was Named Mito uzumaki and the other was kushina uzumaki". Hearing that their were other Uzumaki made him happy to know that there are others.
"So that means that their are others right"?
"Yes and in fact, they had a hole clan".
Thinking quickly Naruto came up with a plan.
"If you also tell me about them then you have a deal".
End of Chapter.
