Note: Man, I'm actually speedrunning. I plan on making another chapter today, so, maybe the 1 chapter a week won't work, as i want to write more lol
So, as I'm writing this, there isn't any review on chapter 1 yet, which probably means noone read it yet! So, I maybe just talk to a wall here lol
But: I. DON'T. CARE.
It's fun to me, so why should I? Yes, the motivation would get a high boost by reviews, but it's still fun. And maybe people will read this in 10 chapters.
Maybe they will read it in 10 years ( like i do at some stories lol)
So, here is chapter 2 of my own story :)
Chapter 2: Creeps x and x Fools
Leorio: "Wow... The air is so tense here"
Yuri: "Yeah, but what would you expect from a test that only the best of the best can beat..."
Gon: "True. We should stay together, there are some people that look very strong."
Suddenly a small guy jumps in front of them.
Stranger: "Hello! My name is Tonpa! You could say I'm a veteran to the Hunter exam. You are new here, right?"
Gon: "Yes, but how did you know?"
Tonpa: "Well, as i said im a veteran. This is my 34th exam!"
'I don't think that's something to brag with...'
Gon: "Wow, cool! Are there other veterans like you?"
Tonpa: "Well, noone like me. But some people aren't here for the first time aswell. Look: "
He shows them some people and explains who they are.
-Scream-
Suddenly a man screams at the top of his voice. Everyone looks towards him and sees, how his arms transform into thousands of little blossoms.
Weird clown with a smile: "You should excuse yourself if you run against other people."
Tonpa: "So that guy is here again aswell..."
Leorio: "Aswell?"
Tonpa: "Number #44 Hisoka. Last year, he would've easily passed the exam, but got disqualified for nearly killing an examiner. He's dangerous..."
Kurapika: "We should keep away from him then."
Yuri: "Yeah, agreed."
Tonpa: "What do you think about a sign for our friendship! Here, take this lemonade!"
He gives each of them a can of lemonade. We all take a sip, but before we can swallow, Gon says:
"Uagh, Tonpa, I believe your lemonade is expired... I live in nature so my smelling ability is pretty advanced"
They all spit it out directly.
Tonpa: "Oh, I'm so sorry!"
Yuri: "It's fine!"
'I can literally feel how he plans something bad behind his back...'
-Ring-
"Hello and welcome to the Hunter exam. Before we begin i want to warn you: If your skills aren't enough for this exam you might get hurt badly or die. If you want to leave the exam, then please take the elevator up."
Noone leaves.
"Okay, so everyone partipates. Then the first test is to follow me. The Hunter exam begins now."
Suddenly the examiner begins walking along a tunnel at a fast pace. The crowd starts following him.
Crowd: "How does he walk like that? Who is he?"
Examiner: "Oh yes, i forgot to introduce myself. I'm Satotz, and I'm your examiner for the first phase."
Yuri is running besides Gon and Leorio is also there. A few minutes after the start of the exam Leorio notices a white-haired boy on a skateboard
Leorio: "Hey kid, thats against the rules!"
Boy: "What?"
Leorio: "Your skateboard! This is a test about stamina!"
Gon: "No, It's not!"
Leorio: "Hey Gon, you're supposed to be on my side!"
Then the boy slows down to go to Gon.
'Who is that boy? Does he have such an annoying ability like my sister? I feel weird...'
Boy: "What's your name? How old are you?"
Gon: "I'm Gon! And that's Yuri! I'm 12 years old!"
Boy: "I'm Killua. I changed my mind, I'm gonna run aswell."
Then Killua does a cool move to jump off his skateboard and hold it in the air.
Gon: "Wow, cool!!!"
While all of that happens, Yuri can't stop staring at him...
Killua: "Hey, shut up!"
Yuri: "With what?"
Killua: "You're staring at me!"
Yuri: "I'm not!"
[1 minute later]
'Woah, what was that? I felt so dizzy right now! And somehow... happy? Man, what is this boys' ability?'
Gon: "Hey Yuri! Me and Killua are doing a race to the end of the tunnel! You wanna join?"
The tunnel stopped going straight forward and seems like an endless staircase now.
Yuri: "Why not!"
So they run up the stairs as fast as they can. As soon as they see a light, all 3 of them push themselves to be the first at the end. As soon as they reach it though -
Gon: "I was the first! I get a meal!"
Killua: "What?! I was first!"
Yuri: "What are you two talking about? I clearly was faster than you!"
Gon: "Satotz-san, Who of us was the first?"
Satotz: "You reached the end of the tunnel at the same time, i guess."
Gon: "Aw man! Wait, I've got an idea! We all buy each other a meal!"
Killua and Yuri: "Agreed."
'What is happening with me? I feel so weird!!! And just because of that boy! I can't even stop looking at him!'
Note: So, I'm improving! I can almost write without any pauses now! Also, 870 words, that's 100 more than last chapter! So I'm getting better! I also tried to detail the story a bit more! You might notice the lines of the characters are different, so maybe a bit OOC, but that's actually intended, as this is my own story, and I don't want to just copy-paste from the anime, and also I don't really know the english lines, as i watched HxH mostly in german (German dub solos imo). But I hope that doesn't make the story worse! Also I can't stop writing anymore so I'm basically uploading this chapter ASAP and then continue writing. So, just like last chapter, if here's anyone reading this, review please! Thank youuu!
