Writer's Notes

This is the story of an original character named Neo,A Saiyan who is 25 percent human. He shares a mother with Prince Vegeta his father is a half Saiyan from the future who is an original character Named Gomen he has his own story that I'm working on but I needed a little break so I wrote this

there is one very important piece of information you should know General Blue and Colonel Violet no longer have their ranks Blue is a Private and Violet is a Corporal

if you wanna see what the characters look like check me out on DeviantArt I use the name same name I do here Reaper789S17 Neo has his own gallery/folder labeled "Neo's story" the one thing I missed was Neo black because I didn't know I wanted it when I did the edits and I did those in March of 2024 and now it's August of 2024 and it seems pointless to just randomly upload an edit almost six months late to me

this is my first story on this account and only exists as a test I used to write a lot but I let that account die and now I'm back the writing has only gotten slightly better but not by much it's still pretty bad

The writing sucks and is overly simplified for my own benefit I'm uneducated and dyslexic so this was the best way. I actually learned this way of writing from a buddy of mine he writes using the name JT735,check him out if you want

Rated M for Extreme Violence,Intense Swearing,Use Of Tobacco And Alcohol,And some Sexual Jokes and/or References

the last piece of information I'll give you is that I write all stories to completion before putting them up this way I can go back and edit it fully so it's as acceptable as I can possibly get it (There will most likely still be grammar and spelling errors) and so you don't have to wait for the full story if you're interested

DBZ: Neo

On Planet Vegeta a one eyed man named Gomen wakes up in a bed next to the queen of Saiyans,he gets dressed and flies to a field in the woods and uses a Time Machine to go back to his time period over fifty years in the future.

five or six years go by Gomen returns and sees a young boy holding a wound of the left half of his face. Gomen sees that the boy's left eye is severely damaged,the white of the eye is crimson red and the eye color itself is bright green.

[Gomen] "Who did this to you,kid?"

[Neo] "The King."

[Gomen] "Why!?"

[Queen Cressa] "He found out that the boy wasn't his,he went crazy and branded his face with the Royal Saiyan Crest."

[King Vegeta] "There you are,you have no right to run from me. You're my property,stupid whore!!"

King Vegeta fires a blast killing Queen Cressa instantly,Gomen punches the Saiyan king in the face and then grabs him by the throat.

[Gomen] "What the fuck is wrong with you!?"

[King Vegeta] "She betrayed me for you…she claimed that you were a hundred times the man I am."

[Gomen] "That doesn't give you the right to kill her,you piece of shit!!"

Gomen's one eye shifts from red to neon blue and his hair and tail shift to a golden yellow.

[King Vegeta] "You're a…Super Saiyan?"

[Gomen] "I told you that I was from the future."

[King Vegeta] "How the hell…?"

Gomen kills King Vegeta and then hugs Neo.

[Gomen] "I'd take you home with me but I'm not allowed,but I can bring you to a safe place on Earth."

[Neo] "Why can't you take me?"

[Gomen] "The creator of everything won't let me,he wants you to be here to protect this timeline."

[Bardock] "So it's true,you're from the future."

[Gomen] "Yes I am."

[Bardock] "If you're going to Earth please take Kakarot,I have a bad feeling about Frieza."

[Gomen] "You're right to worry,in twenty-seven hours this planet will be reduced to rubble. Don't worry about Kakarot he'll have a great life on Earth,he'll get married and have a family."

[Bardock] "Are you his son?"

[Gomen] "Technically yes but not in this timeline."

Roughly ten years pass Kakarot is now called Goku,he and Neo have been raised by an old martial arts master named Gohan.

Goku fishes while Neo hunts,while hunting Neo sees a car swerve off of a cliff he files towards it,catches it,and puts it back of the road. A blue haired women steps out of the car and shots Neo three times in the chest but the bullets bounce off of him.

[Neo] "I saved your life and you try to kill me!?"

[Bulma] "I'm sorry you but scared me."

[Neo] "That's not a good excuse,but whatever. What brings you all the way out here?"

[Bulma] "Magical orbs called the Dragon Balls,they're supposed to grant any wish."

[Neo] "Oh that's today? Some guy from the future told me that this day would come. You wanna use the Dragon Balls to get a boyfriend,but you'll end up with a prince in like fifteen years."

[Bulma] "That long? Are you available?"

[Neo] "Already taken,but trust me you're apparently very happy the man you end up with."

[Bulma] "How do you know all of this anyway?"

[Neo] "A few of people told me including your daughter,my father also told me."

[Bulma] "I end up with a daughter?"

[Neo] "And a son but he gets his mind corrupted by a demon,kills my father's wife and makes his firstborn son disappear,he then got cut in half and a hole punched through his head."

[Bulma] "How can I be sure that you're telling the truth?"

Neo reaches into his pocket and hands Bulma a picture of Goku's family along with hers.

[Neo] "This picture is taken thirty years from now after a massive tournament that almost annihilated the multiverse."

[Bulma] "He definitely is handsome."

[Neo] "That's my douchebag older half brother,he's probably just as batshit insane as his father."

[Bulma] "What do you mean?"

[Neo] "Look at what his father did to my face when he found out I was the product of an affair."

[Bulma] "Yikes."

[Neo] "I don't blame Vegeta for his father's actions he's still my brother and I'm willing to have a relationship with him if he wants it. Anyway the four star ball is in a house just down this road,I'll take you but I'm not sure Goku's gonna give it up."

[Bulma] "Why not?"

[Neo] "He seems to think that it contains the soul of the man who raised us,so he won't part with it but he'd probably be willing to travel with you and watch over it."

[Bulma] "Would you be willing to come with too?"

[Neo] "Nah,I gotta work. I'm a low level grunt for the military."

[Bulma] "Wait,how old are you?"

[Neo] "Technically like sixteen but I used something called the Hyperbolic Time Chamber to get my body up to nineteen."

[Bulma] "How?"

[Neo] "One day out here is one year in there. A few years back some green dude came and asked me if I wanted to use the Time Chamber I don't know why he randomly came to me but I accepted the offer almost instantly."

[Bulma] "Oh."

[Neo] "Anyway let's go I'll show you the way and then I'll get going."

Neo and Bulma walk to a single home on the edge of the mountain. Neo gets dressed in olive green cargo pants,black combat boots,a dark blue tank top,black fingerless gloves and a black and olive green Saiyan chestplate with a white trim.

Neo then flies toward a field surrounded by trees with a small military outpost in the center.

[Silver] "Your late,Sargent."

[Neo] "Some girl swerved her car off the mountain so I helped her."

[Silver] "I don't want to hear your excuses. You have a mission,I suggest you gather some men and head out to Ginger Town."

[Neo] "What's the job,Colonel?"

[Silver] "One of our men killed his squad mates and thirteen bystanders before stealing important documents,your mission is to bring him back alive."

[Neo] "Alright I'll get Violet and Blue,the three of us is all we need."

[Silver] "They're at outpost delta,I'll get on the radio and let them know you're coming."

Neo heads to outpost delta and then to Ginger Town with his team.

[Violet] "Where exactly is this guy?"

[Blue] "Our Intel points to an abandoned apartment complex in the center of the city."

[Neo] "Let's get this done with ASAP,I got shit to do tonight."

[Blue] "What could you possibly have to do tonight?"

[Violet] "It's date night,dumbass."

[Blue] "I forgot you two were together,I still think it's wrong to date your coworkers but it's not my business."

After a half hour Neo,Violet,and Blue arrive at the apartment complex. Neo draws his silver plated Jericho 941 pistol and then kicks the door off of its hinges.

Three armed goons shoot at Neo,he fires back and hits them all in the head. Neo,Violet,and Blue shoot their way through the complex until they reach their target. Neo shoots the traitor in both knees,picks him up,and then flies him back to Colonel Silver.

[Silver] "Excellent work,Sargent."

[Neo] "Want the bodycam footage?"

[Silver] "Perhaps later,right now I need to Interrogate this worm."

A week or two later Neo is sleeping when he senses Goku's energy grow ten times stronger,he puts his pants,boots,and tank top on,and then flies off towards Goku's energy signature.

Neo sees a massive ape,he then glances at the full moon before seeing a long haired man draw a sword.

Neo appears next to the man,grabs the sword and then cuts the ape's tail off allowing it to revert back to Goku.

[Yamcha] "Who the hell are you?"

[Neo] "It's Neo,and you are?"

[Yamcha] "Yamcha. Why did you step in like that?"

[Neo] "I couldn't let you hurt the kid,I'm supposed to watch over him."

[Yamcha] "Are you his older brother?"

[Neo] "Technically we were raised by the same man but the truth is his son from the future came back and knocked up my mother."

[Yamcha] "I'm not sure I believe that."

[Neo] "It's the truth,ain't my fault if you don't believe me."

[Yamcha] "Why would your father go back in time?"

[Neo] "The Time Patrol sent him on a mission to kill some demons. After he was done he went to a bar,got drunk,and hooked up with my mother."

[Yamcha] "I guess that explains the tail,must be some kinda mutation that runs in the family."

[Neo] "No it's a part of our race,we're part of a nearly extinct species known as the Saiyans. My father was half human but my mother was a full Saiyan making me seventy-five percent Saiyan."

[Yamcha] "Do all Saiyans turn into monkeys?"

[Neo] "Only if they have a tail and only if they look at the full moon,I've personally trained myself to withstand the effects of the blutz waves so I only turn if I absolutely want to."

[Bulma] "It's getting late,we should set up camp for the night."

[Neo] "Good idea,I'll get us some dinner."

Neo flies off and comes back twenty minutes later with three deer.

[Oolong] "That was quick."

[Neo] "I'm a professional."

[Puar] "How did you move that fast?"

[Neo] "I can literally fly across the entire planet in less than three hours."

[Yamcha] "How strong are you?"

[Neo] "I'm not sure about the actual statistics but I haven't fought anyone even close to my level,and I've won a martial arts tournament."

[Yamcha] "I bet I could kick your ass."

[Neo] "Then let's go over to that rock."

Neo and Yamcha walk to a nearby rock and drop into their battle stances,Yamcha sprints full speed towards Neo.

[Yamcha] "WOLF FANG……!!"

Neo kicks Yamcha square in the chest with his right leg,kicks him in the right thigh with his left leg,spin kicks him in the left arm with his right leg,creates a small energy ball in his right hand,and then slams it into Yamcha's face.

Yamcha falls to the ground,unconscious. Neo grabs Yamcha and places him on a cot.

[Bulma] "What happened to him?"

[Neo] "He thought he could take me but I knocked his ass out with my Apocalyptic Burst."

The next morning Goku heads out to train with Gohan's old martial arts teacher,Master Roshi. Neo heads back home,Yamcha tags along to start his training.

Over the next four months Neo trains Yamcha for the upcoming world tournament. About a week before the tournament Yamcha leaves and Neo returns to work.

During a routine mission Neo witnesses one of his superiors murder an innocent woman.

[Neo] "What the fuck!?"

[Silver] "Stand down,Sargent. He's just following Commander Red's orders."

[Violet] "Why would he order us to kill innocent civilians!?"

[Silver] "It's all for the benefit of the Red Ribbon Army. Once we gather the Dragon Balls we'll rule the world."

[Neo] "I didn't sign up for that,I thought we were the good guys."

[Violet] "What do we do now?"

[Neo] "We bring down this corrupt military."

[Blue] "The three of us against an entire military?"

Neo smiles,draws his pistol and shoots Colonel Silver point blank in the stomach,he then slaughters the rest of the soldiers in the village.

[Blue] "You're insane."

[Neo] "I didn't want this but I'm not gonna be apart of an organization that murders innocent people for no reason."

[Violet] "Do we just go from base to base wiping out every one in sight?"

[Neo] "I'll do the fighting and killing you guys can either go into hiding or work with me,either way we need to gear up."

[Blue] "We need a base of operations,men and weapons."

[Neo] "There's a huge open field near my house we can use for a base,we can steal some guns from one of the Red Ribbon's convoys,and we could probably get some men by either recruiting some of our old comrades or by hiring mercenaries."

[Violet] "We need a name."

[Neo] "The Wolves."

[Violet] "It ain't the most creative name but it'll do."

[Blue] "This is really happening,isn't it?"

[Neo] "No one's forcing you to stay."

[Blue] "You're my best friend,I'm not just gonna ditch you."

[Neo] "And I'm your best chance of survival."

Within the next two and a half years The Wolves have managed to grow massively and wipe out most of the Red Ribbon Army.

Neo sits in his home office reviewing some recent operation reports,he takes a sip of some whiskey and finishes up for the night. He sits in silence for an hour or so before he wonders his way to his bedroom,he takes his clothes off and gets in bed next to Violet.

[Violet] "I was starting to think you would be working all night."

[Neo] "Sorry to wake you"

[Violet] "Since we're both up should we get back to trying?"

[Neo] "Sure,let's have some fun."

Six months later Neo and Violet head to the world tournament arena to cheer Goku on in the finals.

[Goku] "You made it!!"

[Neo] "Sorry we missed the beginning,Violet was a little sick."

[Goku] "Are you okay,Violet?"

[Violet] "I'm fine but being pregnant is complicated."

[Bulma] "How far along are you?"

[Violet] "Four months."

[Neo] "I can't wait to welcome my daughter into the world."

[Yamcha] "Have you thought about names?"

[Neo] "Cressa,after my mother."

[Bulma] "That's sweet."

[Neo] "Thanks."

Neo and Violet watch the tournament Goku ends up in second place,the person in first place is a three eyed man named Tien.

Neo takes Goku and his friends to a nearby restaurant. Goku forgot his four star Dragon Ball in the arena,his best friend Krillin goes to grab it but doesn't return.

Neo senses some evil energy signatures he flies off towards them,he finds and kills Demon King Piccolo. Before landing the final blow Neo forces King Piccolo to spit out an egg,he ignores it and then sees the Dragon Balls so he takes them and flies to Goku.

[Goku] "Someone killed Krillin."

[Neo] "And I killed that someone,we got the Dragon Balls so we can bring him back."

Goku stops crying and hugs Neo. Neo summons the Dragon and revives everyone killed by King Piccolo and his goons.

The guardian of Earth Kami shows up asking Neo to once again train with him. Neo declines and sends Goku instead,Neo also asks Kami to not touch Goku's tail.

Three years pass,Neo and Violet's daughter was born and shortly after they got married.

Neo steps into the tournament ring,his first opponent is Yamcha.

[Neo] "Ready for round two,brother?"

[Yamcha] "I've been training for this for six years."

Yamcha attacks but Neo dodges,Yamcha attempts to use his Wolf Fang Fist but Neo blocks.

[Neo] "My turn."

Neo performs his own Wolf Fang Fist but he ends the attack with a spin kick to Yamcha's head,leaving him unconscious.

The next match starts it's Krillin against Junior,unfortunately Krillin doesn't have the strength to win.

Match three is Goku and a woman named Chi-Chi who wishes to remain anonymous.

Goku and Chi-Chi start talking when Neo walks over to them.

[Neo] "You look familiar……are you the Ox king's daughter?"

[Chi-Chi] "How'd you know?"

[Neo] "We met a few years ago and you told me about what Goku promised you."

[Goku] "Promise? Oh yeah marriage. Sorry I forgot about that I've been through a lot in the past few years."

[Neo] "Right now you need to figure out if you want to keep your promise,and Chi-Chi you need to figure out if you truly want to marry Goku."

[Chi-Chi] "Why wouldn't I?"

[Neo] "You don't know him as well as you think. I'd love to see you get together because if you don't than you won't have your three sons and the youngest one won't come back in time and hook up with my mother."

[Chi-Chi] "This nonsense again?"

Neo pulls out the same picture he showed Bulma and hands it to Chi-Chi. He then pulls out a picture of his father and uncles.

[Neo] "That is the future I'm supposed to help create. You two are supposed to be very happy but from what I've heard you never truly accept Goku for the warrior that he is."

[Chi-Chi] "He's the only one for me."

[Goku] "I made a promise to an amazing girl and now it's time to keep it and marry a beautiful woman."

[Neo] "That was cheesy as fuck,anyway congratulations."

[Goku] "Wanna go fight now?"

[Chi-Chi] "Think you can beat me?"

[Neo] "This'll be over in less than forty-five seconds."

Goku and Chi-Chi enter the ring,Goku is only dodging.

[Chi-Chi] "Fight back,damnit!"

Goku punches the air creating a small shockwave that knocks Chi-Chi out of the ring.

[Neo] "Called it."

The next match begins Mercenary Tao and Tien begin their fight a few minutes into the battle Tao pulls out a blade and attempts to kill Tien disqualifying him from the tournament making Tien the winner by default.

The next day the first fight of the semifinals begins it's Neo and Junior.

[Neo] "I thought I killed you."

[Junior] "You killed my father King Piccolo,I am Piccolo Junior and my father will be avenged!"

[Neo] "Alright Piccolo let's get this over with."

Piccolo punches Neo directly in the face,Neo smiles and then punches Piccolo in the gut repeatedly and finishes the combo with an Apocalyptic Burst. Piccolo is sent out of the ring,Neo stands over him.

[Piccolo] "Just kill me,you've earned it."

[Neo] "Nah,why don't you come train with me? I can sense your potential and it makes no sense to just let it go to waste."

[Piccolo] "I…I'll think about it."

The next match is Goku and Tien Goku removes his weighted shirt and wristbands and demonstrates his superior speed and strength allowing him to win the match.

The final match is Goku against Neo,the two Saiyans enter the ring. Neo removes his weighted tank top and then cracks his neck and knuckles.

[Goku] "Don't hold back,do the thing."

[Neo] "Be careful what you wish for."

Neo powers up,he is coated in a divine fiery aura,allowing is his natural divine energy to take over,this is a semi and/or false god form. Neo throws some of his energy towards Goku temporarily powering him up. The two of them start trading punches,Goku gets his face slightly split open on the right side,he smiles through the pain and punches Neo in the face. They both jump back to opposite ends of the ring.

[Goku] "You thinking what I'm thinking?"

[Neo] "Let's do it,no holding back!"

[Goku and Neo] "KA…ME…HA…ME……HAAA!!!"

The two Kamehameha beams clash,Goku and Neo put more and more power into their beams until they explode. Goku and Neo both stand outside of the ring,Goku falls backwards onto the ground and loses his power up. Neo reverts to his natural state and then drops to his knee and coughs up some blood.

[Neo] "Guess that means I win."

[Goku] "I'll get you next time,that is if I live through today."

[Neo] "No pain no gain."

Neo helps Goku up and they both start laughing.

[Violet] "Smile,boys!"

Violet holds up a camera and takes a picture of Goku and Neo.