DISCLAIMER: I DO NOT OWN NARUTO OR ALMOST EVERY OTHER THING IN THIS STORY THE ONLY CHARACTER I OWN IS CRYSTAL
thought: ()
normal speech: ""
Tailed Beast: just big text
mind link:
jutsu: 'KATON'
Narrator Crystal: you will know when I talk
Narrator Crystal here I will mention some very important stuff in chapter 5 there will be mentions of the 4th Hokage aka Minato from the Nine-Tails so get ready for a buff to Minato's character and Sasuke will also make an appearance in that chapter and to anyone that wants to know about the ships Naruto and Hinata are gonna stay together same for Sasuke and Sakura as the reason why it very simple I want to introduce some elements from BORUTO way later in the series
again thank you Aura Lupis for mentioning the quotation marks
alright let's get this show started shall we if anyone else has criticism they want to throw here you can do it I will read the comments and take them into account
CHAPTER 4 dungeons and a new pal?
POV: Crystal
"Ugh, where am I?" I look around the building I'm at and look at an empty desk and see that Naruto is still sleeping I walk around and see a large scroll and I pick it up and open it looking through it I see a pop-up appear
WOULD YOU LIKE TO LEARN A KINJUTSU FROM THE FORBIDDEN SCROLL
YES/NO
(what? wait… this is the forbidden scroll! Of course, this is the perfect time to learn the shadow clone jutsu if I learn this now while I'm 3 Hiruzen won't be able to argue about me knowing this jutsu since I will argue that I didn't know better at the time… alright let try this)
'SHADOW CLONE JUTSU'
before the anbu could realize I could actually use chakra I activated the Jutsu
creating a clone that looked identical and when I did the ANBU all fell from their spots
15 MINS LATER
Hiruzen walked in only to see his anbu having trouble dealing with 25 Naruto and 25 Crystal who were jumping around
"EVERYONE STAND DOWN" said Hiruzen as he got all clones and ANBU to stop moving
"Alright, Crystal what happened here?" said Hiruzen as he looked at Crystal with annoyance
"I was reading a scroll and did what it asked me to do and then those guys jumped at me and I fought back but it woke up Naruto and while we were fighting he also did what the scroll asked him to do and he helped me fight off those weirdoes"
Hiruzen looked at his ANBU with disappointment as if telling them how are you guys not able to deal with children
"so, Crystal what was that scroll you were talking about?"
"that one" said Crystal while pointing to the forbidden scroll
Hiruzen then realized that the clones in front of him were actually shadow clones and not the illusionary clones of the academy 3
(what a pain this is gonna be a long day huh) thought Hiruzen
he was right as when me and naruto made it out of the tower we used the clones to spread out and troll a bunch of people only for all of them to get caught, this is how we found out that the clones kept our memories and Hiruzen asked us to behave a bit since and he showed us how to meditate thinking it would help us calm down
we ended up in the mindscape
POV: naruto and Crystal's Mindscape
"WHERE ARE WE"
"Naruto please stop screaming i am trying to sleep… why are my clothes wet? And wait why are we in a pond i thought we were at… konoha" (huh those trees are taller than the ones in the Forest of Death)
I look around and notice the pond is connected to a river and figure out we are in the mindscape but this one doesn't look like Naruto's and it shouldn't be mine but then i then realize something and pull up the system and press on perks
PERKS:
PERFECT KYUUBI JINCHURIKI
give the insane amounts of chakra by making them gain 9000 chakra points instead of 10 per point put in the stat INT, it gives you 9000 VIT and also gives you 10x hp
this perk becomes the KYUUBI JINCHURIKI if the owner of it is the twin of the other half and all bonuses double, gain plus 20 all stats except VIT
CHAKRA MASTER
each stats point in INT gives the user 10 chakra control, and as long as the player keeps both their chakra point and chakra control the same they will have perfect chakra control but if they have too little they will have trouble controlling it, and if they have more chakra control then chakra points, their chakra will increase to catch back up. this perk is power is multiplied by 10 if the user has the perk KYUUBI JINCHURIKI but if they have the perk KYUUBI JINCHURIKI YIN HALF or KYUUBI JINCHURIKI YANG HALF they will get a time 5 multiplier, if the user is a Senju they will get a 100 times multiplier and if the user is an Uzumaki they will get a 5 times multiplier ects ects… these multipliers stacks
stacks: 5000
ONE WITH NATURE
this perk makes the owner of the perk more attuned to nature and makes them capable of understanding animals and talking with them they can also feel the emotions and feelings of living beings and they can also release an aura that appeases other living beings of their choice making it a great ability for making friends with a tailed beast
TWIN MINDS
this perk makes it so that both you and your twin share a mindscape and can meet each other in said mindscape from anywhere without restriction making it so the twins can communicate from anywhere without hindrance, it also makes it so the twins always know where the other one is
TWIN BODY
both twins have a secondary body in another plane of existence so if one body is destroyed the other twin can use 5000 chakra points to recreate a body for their other twin using the data and that twin will respawn next to their twin
TWIN SOUL
the twin's souls are connected so it is impossible to interact or damage one of their souls if the other is not being affected at the same time meaning that no resurrection ability that takes over or replaces someone's soul will work on them and no soul-destroying ability either
TWIN LINK
the twins will gain telepathy and will be able to communicate from anywhere at any time without having to enter the mindscape to do so
"ah HA" (twin minds right if what I am reading is the case that means both of our mindscapes probably fused and this is the result)
"Sis, do you know where we are?"
"yes, this is our mindscape bro."
"what is that."
"We are inside our head."
"oh… wait why are we in the same mindscape then?"
"perk twin minds."
"ah."
they both follow the stream until they find a cave that goes down into a sewer which Crystal recognizes as Naruto's mindscape, they then go further down and make it to where a giant cage door with a seal in the middle
"SO MY WARDENS FINALLY COME WHAT BRINGS YOU HERE?"
says a booming voice
I look at Naruto he seems to be shaking a bit but I turn to him with a calm look and then smile saying
"Hello, my name is Crystal what is yours?"
the fox seems to stop for a second
"hey, brat didn't your old man tell you to not trust strangers?"
"yeah but he also said that I should make friends"
"Also you aren't a stranger you are in our minds after all"
"so wanna be friends?"
the fox looks at me and tries to see if I am playing him
and then says
"fine we can be friends just don't tell anyone okay little Vix"
"Also my name is Kurama remember it vixen"
"And you kit"
naruto perked up at being called out "Yes… um, can we also be friends?"
"fine just neither of you tell anyone we are friends or that we met and don't tell anyone my name either unless I permit for any of those okay?"
"OKAY" both said in unison as they were sent out of the mindscape
I look around a realize we are back in the tower it feels like we have been gone for hours but in only been a minute
I then look outside and I notice both me and Naruto got a pop-up it a new perk
NEW SKILL:
NINE TAILS'S JINCHURIKI CLOAK:
the user can summon a cloak that makes them much stronger at the cost of stamina,
while active the cloak multiplies all of the user's stats by 5 to the power of the amounts of tails so for example one tail is 5, two tails is 25, 3 the tails is 125 ects ects
when using this skill the user loses 100 stamina per second
(huh interesting, this is way better than the one in the story i wonder why)
NEW MODE UNLOCKED
MODE SYSTEM UNLOCKED
"huh, this is!"
NINE-TAILS CHAKRA MODE
this mode is achieved by getting access to the nine tail's chakra without the side effects of being hurt or it affecting your well being this mode multiplies the already existing multiplier of any ability mode or skills by 90 this boost stacks with supreme rank modes
"tiers?"
TIERS SYSTEM UNLOCKED
The tier system is basically the rarity and ranking system used to depict how rare and how strong an item is
RARITY:
TRASH:
this item is trash not more to it
SCRAP
scraps are pieces of stuff that hold basically no value it would normally scraps material
COMMON:
common is your common item like a kunai and a shuriken
UNCOMMON:
uncommon are things like basic explosive tags and sealing scrolls
RARE:
rare are things like jutsu scrolls and the average barrier seals
UNIQUE
unique on the other hand is much harder than all of the above to find as it is something that is made out of chakra metal or is a level 4 sealing tag or other sealing related items
EPIC
Epic is a rarity that is for things like bloodline scrolls, kin jutsu scrolls, seven mist swords and sealing related things of level 6 or higher
LEGENDARY
Legendary are things that relate to legends such as the gunbai of reflection the the sword of Totsuka, the yatta mirror and the summoning contracts
MYTHICAL
mythical items are very different compared to to other things as they are items that come from myths like the REAL blade of kusanagi and the REAL murasame
OMEGA:
omega items are artifacts that come from places outside of this world such as the planetary buster and moon cannon
ULTIMATE:
ultimate are items that can affect reality such as the 4th's kunais and level 8 sealing related items and above
DIVINE:
divine items are items made by the sage of six paths himself making them god-like items capable of creating insane feats those items have been lost to time
?:
ERROR
(huh I wonder what that last one is about)
(All right what about ranks, oh there are a lot more of those)
RANKS:
F
E
D
C
B
A
S
SS
SSS
SUPREME
GODLY
?
(no description for those huh)
"hey sis what does godly mean"
"bro… i don't know to be honest i just know it related to gods"
"ah"
"can I activate this?"
REQUIRES SEAL UNLOCKED
"I guess not, I am gonna have to get jiraya to open the seal one way or the other"
POV: Hiruzen and the twins
Hiruzen walks in to see Naruto and Crystal talking about stuff like levels and tiers and ranks and rarity and he seems to notice they are reading stuff in the air but he also knows there's no chakra in the air so when he makes his presence known both Naruto and Crystal jump
"ah, gramps what… are you doing here?"
"I came to check on how you guys were doing while meditating but I found you guys seemingly talking about and reading nothing may I ask what that is all about?"
Crystal gulps when she realizes they have been caught red-handed and tries to think of something that will not make Hiruzen think they are insane but then a glowing orange box pops up in front of Crystal that says
WOULD YOU LIKE TO ADD HIRUZEN TO THE PARTY SYSTEM?
YES/NO
(Well that is convenient)
sis should we really do this can we trust him?
yes naru we can after all he did tell us about Mom and he never had to
"okay let's do this"
Hiruzen was about to question what they were doing until a glowing orange box appeared in front of him he tried to release the genjutsu and even stabbed himself but not no avail he was about to do more but Crystal stopped him and told him to just accept it
Hiruzen slowly pushed the yes button, this activated a bunch of things first he saw his stats
STR: 857 STR is how much base dmg you do and what the hp multiplier of the user is, example: 1 STR gives + 0.1X hp and 10 dmg
DUR:854 DUR depicts how much base HP and base RES you are gonna have, example: 1 DUR gives + 100 HP and 0.001% dmg reduction
DEX:456 DEX depicts how fast and how agile you are, example 1 speed is 2 meters a second for when you run and 5 meters a second for punching and moving your body, your total meter per second gives a dmg multiplier if you transfer the kinetic energy into a punch for example 1 DEX = 7 meters per seconds and 7 meters per seconds equals: 0.7% dmg multiplied dmg of the kinetic energy gets multiplied by chakra enhancement
AGI: 452 AGI depicts what your reaction speed and agility multiplier is, example: 1 AGI is 5 thoughts per second, and a 0.5 speed multiplier
VIT: 80 VIT determines how much stamina you have and how fast you heal, example: 1 VIT gives + 100 stamina per VIT and 0.001% hp regen per second
INT: 150 INT is what determines your chakra points and how much your mind can handle, example: 1 INT gives 10 chakra points and 10 MIND RESISTANCE POINTS
WIS: 250 WIS is what makes you smarter and gives you the ability to think on your feats better this stat gives you 10 iq per point in it
LUK: 23 LUK determines how lucky you are and how often you are gonna win against someone or what loot you get, for example, if you have twice someone is LUK you will win against them 9 out of 10 times and if you have more then five times their luck you will win all the time, LUK is capped at 99 unlike other stats unless you have a blessing or title that sets your LUK
he looked at Crystal and Naruto and then back at his screen he looked at his clan
BLOODLINE:
SARUTOBI
The Sarutobi clan are strong fire users who all gain a 50% increase in all stats related to fire jutsu and with their increased firepower they gained a lot of fame in Konohagakure as such they are one of the more prominent clan
"hmm is there anything about weaknesses?"
NEW SYSTEM UNLOCKED: WEAKNESSES
"well there is now old man" says Naruto smirking
"hmm let's see"
WEAKNESSES
OLD AGE
-20 % all physical stats, can be fixed by increasing your VIT to 100 one of the many ways to do so is by transplanting Hashirama cells into yourself or using the system to increase your VIT stat, ps you can also fix your weakened metabolism weakness and it will get rid of this too
RUSTY
-50% all stats except VIT, can be fixed by sparing and training again
WEAK BACK
-50% DEX and AGI, can be fixed by getting to a good doctor, go get Tsunade she can fix it
WEAKENED METABOLISM
-50% VIT and double damage from all poisons, can be fixed by also getting Tsunade
(these are very bad being rusty is one thing but i did not even realize that i had a weak back which is why i felt uncomfortable in my chair, also it keeps mentioning Tsunade i guess i got to call her back huh)
"geez this is bad, thankfully i know what i can do to fix this"
"what about you guys, do you have any weaknesses?"
"hmm it says that we have the very young weakness -50% focus"
"All right, you two may I ask to see your stats?"
"Sure" said the twins
STATS:
STR: 40 STR is how much base dmg you do and what the hp multiplier of the user is, example: 1 STR gives + 0.1X hp and 10 dmg
DUR:60 DUR depicts how much base HP and base RES you are gonna have, example: 1 DUR gives + 100 HP and 0.001% dmg reduction
DEX:70 DEX depicts how fast and how agile you are, example 1 speed is 2 meters a second for when you run and 5 meters a second for punching and moving your body, your total meter per second gives a dmg multiplier if you transfer the kinetic energy into a punch for example 1 DEX = 7 meters per seconds and 7 meters per seconds equals: 0.7% dmg multiplied dmg of the kinetic energy gets multiplied by chakra enhancement
AGI: 60: AGI depicts what your reaction speed and agility multiplier is, example: 1 AGI is 5 thoughts per second, and a 0.5 speed multiplier
VIT: 10000 VIT determines how much stamina you have and how fast you heal, example: 1 VIT gives + 100 stamina per VIT and 0.001% hp regen per second
INT: 50 INT is what determines your chakra points and how much your mind can handle, example: 1 INT gives 10 chakra points and 10 MIND RESISTANCE POINTS
WIS: 50 WIS is what makes you smarter and gives you the ability to think on your feats better this stat gives you 10 iq per point in it
LUK: 999 LUK determines how lucky you are and how often you are going to win against someone or what loot you get, for example, if you have twice someone is LUK you will win against them 9 out of 10 times and if you have more then five times their luck you will win all the time, LUK is capped at 99 unlike other stats unless you have a blessing or title that sets your LUK
"I'm jealous of all the VIT you two have, Also what was that level thing you guys were talking about?"
"hmm it's this"
CRYSTAL, LV 26 TITLE: CHILD OF PROPHECY
Hiruzen's eyes instantly widen at the title, he was going to call back both Jiraya and Tsunade
he then looked at Naruto his level was the same and so was his title with and so with a sigh Hiruzen made a decision until his students made it back he would train both of them,
Narrator Crystal here did you all miss me? well maybe who knows i am here to mention a time skip of 2 weeks and that Hiruzen will only call back his students after the twin actually gets hurt badly in the second dungeons alright back to the story… also i am the reason there are multiple mentions of Tsunade i thought it would be funny to troll Hiruzen
2 WEEK TIME SKIP
POV: 3rd person
both Crystal and Naruto looked at each other as they found them selfs in front of a glowing portal they both looked at each other
"so should we tell the old man sis?"
"yeah probably… hey what is that sound?"
Two Kunai hit Crystal and Naruto in the leg as a Root ANBU fell from the tree and onto the floor
thinking fast Crystal drags Naruto into the portal with her and they fall down into a cave with a kunai in both of their legs
"damn it now where stuck here" naruto points to the know gone portal
"well what is this place"
NEW SYSTEM UNLOCKED: DUNGEONS
dungeons go by the same tier system as rank the higher the rank to more dangerous it is
F: level 10 to 25
F+: level 25 to 50
E: level 50 to 75
E+: level 75 to 100
D: level 100 to 150
D+: level 150 to 200
C: level 200 to 250
C+: 250 to 300
B: level 300 to 400
B+: level 400 to 500
A: level 500 to 600
A+: level 600 to 800
S: level 800 to 1000
S+: level 1000 to 1250
SS: level 1250 to 1500
SS+: level 1500 to 2000
SSS: level 2000 to 2500
SSS+: level 2500 to 5000
SUPREME: level 5000 to 10000
GODLY: level 10000 to 99999
"geez no need to make something capable of destroying the world right?"
"hey sis i don't think we are as strong as we think we are"
"yeah this hit me right in the ego"
"you guys think this hit your egos hard but mine was shattered and I thought my level 1280 was big"
you can see your level Kurama?
"yeah i can see it fine since i am considered a familiar or summon by this system"
oh yeah forgot that was a thing wait we can summon you?
FAMILIAR:
Kurama
summoning requirement: 100000 chakra
Kurma is the Kyuubi no kitsune or the nine tails fox he is a being made of pure natural energy and can destroy entire mountains and cause catastrophe with ease, you can select how big he is when you summon him, and summoning him will not affect the seal and will not kill you.
huh nice i guess we can summon you huh big guy
"you two focus there are things coming this way"
level 15 goblin
level 16 goblin
level 13 goblin
level 20 hobgoblin
'WOODSTYLE IMPALING SPEAR TREE'
Naruto summons a large tree with no leaves that comes out of the ground impaling the three goblins with its many branches but the hobgoblin doges to the side and snarls at us throwing a wooden club which we both dodge and we do hand sings for another jutsu
'wood style dual spiking trap roots'
'WOOD STYLE DUAL SPIKING TRAP ROOTS'
Crystal and Naruto use a combination jutsu which creates multiple roots that come out of the ground and grab the hobgoblin and cover him up in a ball that suddenly grows many spikes and a lot of blood comes out of the cracks in the ball
Killed goblin 50 xp
killed goblin 50 xp
killed goblin 50 xp
killed hobgoblin 500 xp
"all right first kill, hey naruto are you okay" Crystal looks at Naruto who looks a bit white at the sight of the wooden ball that is oozing blood
"it was probably too much for him"
"HEY KIT CALM DOWN OR I'M GONNA CRUSH YOU"
"hehehe… hahaha thanks kurama you brought me out of my shock, thanks"
"are you sure we can take a break if you want naru"
"hey! i told you not to call me that it's not cool"
"PFFT"
"HEY!"
"hey you two there's a path up ahead you should check it out"
"hey Kurama-nii is right"
"..."
"I'm not falling for that vix"
"okay let's go now before Naruto has another episode"
"HEY!"
we both walk through the dungeon killing the goblins with wood style until we make it to a large double door we then look at the door and there is a keyhole, Naruto pulls out a key and puts it in only for it to not fit, he was gonna try another key but Crystal just uses wood release to slam a wooden pillar into the doors breaking them open, they look through the doorway to see a large fat goblin 8 meters in size is sleeping on a stone throne with a gold crown on it head
LEVEL 30 GOBLIN KING
HP: 50000
huh, hey naruto wants to sneak attack him with wood style?
sure
'(wood style 8 pillars of connection, sphere formation)'
Crystal slams her hand as 8 large wooden pillars come out of the ground that goes around the goblin king and connects to each other around the goblin king in a sort of sphere-like structure with a large hole on the top
'(WOOD STYLE WOOD DRAGON TECHNIQUE)'
Naruto slams his hand into the ground releasing a large wooden dragon that flies through the air and then slams down into the hole and breaks the goblin king's skull killing it instantly
WEAK POINT CRITICAL HIT 10X DMG
"ouch would not want to be on the receiving end of that for sure that"
Crystal looks at the now smashed body of the goblin king as she goes and picks up the crown and notices a small shine inside the goblin king's neck, she uses a kunai from her pouch she was given to train with by Hiruzen and opens up the stomach and pulls out a chest that she opens,
REQUIREMENTS MET: INVENTORY UNLOCKED
"oh nice"
"what is it sis… oh an inventory"
Crystal open the chest to find a sort of weird book she touches it and a screen appears
WOULD YOU LIKE TO LEARN THE SKILL MACE ART?
YES/NO
"Hey Naruto come here"
"Okay coming"
they both look at the large mace and back at the book
"it was gonna use a mace wasn't it?" said Naruto
"yeah" said the blond girl
"you should learn it crystal"
"uh sure why not"
Crystal has learned the skill mace art
SKILL:
MACE ART
gain a 5X strength attack boost while using a mace
"neet"
"I'm guessing i am getting the mace since i got the skill for it?"
"yeah and i get the crown"
"Sure"
Crystal picks up the mace and looks at its stats
GIGA MACE
a mace that changes size it was used by the goblin king in combat
RARITY: UNIQUE
REQUIRES:
20 STR
20 DEX
10 INT
ABILITY:
can change in size from 1 meter to 25 meters in size
STATS:
+250 dmg per meter
DURABILITY:
10000/10000
(very nice)
"naruto what do you have"
"GOLDEN CROWN OF AVARICE"
a piece of the artifact of avarice the god of greed and fortune
RARITY: EPIC
ABILITY: DOUBLES DROPPED MONEY AND MATERIALS FROM LOOTING
REQUIREMENTS:
20 DUR
20 DEX
20 INT
20 WIS
STATS:
+2500 chakra dmg
+500 spiritual dmg
DURABILITY:
indestructible
"wow now that is a nice item bro"
"sis, what is spiritual dmg?"
"i don't know to be honest"
"SPIRITUAL DMG MEANS YOU HURT THE SOUL IS WHAT I AM GUESSING"
"oh thanks Kurama-nii"
"no problem vix"
"Crystal we should probably put this in our inventory and leave"
"All right get ready to fight since that guy might still be outside"
"Okay"
they both walk through the portal to see that Hiruzen is standing in front of them
"so why were the two of you inside of a dungeon?"
HEY EVERYONE NARRATOR CRYSTAL HERE, this is the end of the chapter next chapter will go through a time skip to Naruto and Crystal being 5 and will introduce Sasuke into the mix just before the massacre happens, this was Crystal's idea since she knew she and naruto would probably be thrown in the same team no matter what and that Kakashi would want them plus she also knew that the council would want Sasuke to be put on Kakashi's team so yes Naruto, Sasuke, and Crystal on the same thing will be a thing and before anyone says anything sakura will also be on team seven so yes she will be there I also have very big ideas for her, also I would like to mention that crystal did not in fact learn the shadow clone from the scroll of seals it actually the first jutsu she ever learned before any wood style one's this is gonna come into play latter and as for the fight scene's the mobs where weak compared to naruto and crystal so yea no super big fight scene but in chapter 6 things will get very interesting