Mondstadt Alter

by Lagif Sensei

What emotions does an individual experience when their world shatters before them? Is it grief, regret, or despair? One can envision and understand, yet true comprehension only arises when one undergoes it. But how adeptly can someone manage such intense emotions when they lack any external support? (About ten years prior to Mondstadt Arc.)

1. Author's Note

Disclaimer: Feel free to skip this note. I can assure you, there's nothing important relating the plot to this fic.

Author's Note:

Hello, I hope this note finds you well. There's a lot going on IRL, but I won't say anything regarding it. TLDR: I'm busy, as always.

Anyway, the main reason why I made this note is because I want to make this fic easier to manage on my end. If you have read my fic before, I thank you and apologize because I'll make some changes. Because I realized I made many mistakes and intend to fix them with this revamp, or should I say alter? But relax, while I changed some things, the main plot I'm trying to convey here should remain the same as the old one. I hope.

So, what changes have I made?

All chapters' content is and will be shorter and simpler. In the previous one, I felt like it suffered with too many words and felt bloated. The game has already given us too much text, so I don't want this to follow the same path. My idea was to create something easy to read, not some kind of light novel.

I added more interactions and scenes. While most would be the same as before, some would changed, and something more to flavor the characters. Simply because I prefer a process.

Lastly, some minor changes. Let's see if you'll notice them, but that's fine if you don't since they're probably too subtle or hard to catch.

I suppose that's all I want to say. I still won't guarantee regular updates, though. But I'll try my best. Also, I'll leave a note in every chapter to discuss the story, lore, and stuff. With that said,

I hope you enjoy the "Mondstadt Alter" Rewrite!